英语作文 记叙文
英语作文记叙文范文
英语作文记叙文范文1. 叙事的英语作文范文I was very happy during the National Day holiday. I spenta lot of time to play with my friends because I had little homework,I had finished it very soon. Although sometimes I feel bored, happiness was the mainstream. I liked to visit interesting places most. It was very nice. I like the National Day holiday. Yesterday I went to the shop to buy some fruit.I bought some apples bananas and many other fruit.when I got to pay for them ,I found that I forgot to take some money with me.So I have to went back home to bring the money and pay for the things.How unlucky the day was! Yesterday was a best day in my live. I went to the cinema to watch the movie call "Fantatic Four" with my classmate.Then we went to the supermarket to bought some meat and some vagetables. My mum was the best cooker in my family, and she cooked my favorite food for me.。
高考英语作文范文记叙文
高考英语作文范文记叙文Once, I found myself standing at the threshold of a new journey, facing the all-important Gaokao, the college entrance examination. My heart was beating rapidly, a mix of excitement and nervousness coursing through my veins.Days turned into weeks, and the exams drew nearer. I immersed myself in books and notes, trying to soak up every bit of knowledge. Nights were filled with the quiet whispers of my pen scratching paper, accompanied by the ticking of the clock, counting down the seconds to the unknown.On the day of the exam, I woke up early, feeling a strange sense of calm. As I walked to the exam hall, the sun was shining brightly, its warmth a comforting reminder that no matter the outcome, the world would still go on. Inside the hall, the atmosphere was tense, but I found my seat and took a deep breath, trying to center myself.The papers were passed around, and the exams began. I focused on each question, one by one, blocking out the rest of the world. The hours passed, and when the final bell rang, I felt a sense of accomplishment, regardless of how well I had done.After the exams, there was。
英语作文素材记叙文
英语作文素材记叙文Narrative Essay: A Transformative Journey。
In the vast expanse of our lives, there are momentsthat stand out, shaping our perspectives and guiding us towards personal growth. One such pivotal experience in my life was a transformative journey that not only challenged me physically, but also left an indelible mark on my mind and spirit.It began as a simple idea, a yearning to explore the unknown and push the boundaries of my comfort zone. The destination was a remote, rugged mountain range, a place where the whispers of nature echoed with a captivating allure. As I prepared for the expedition, the anticipation grew, fueled by a sense of adventure and a desire to discover something profound within myself.The journey itself was a testament to the resilience of the human spirit. The first few days were marked by arduoustreks through dense forests, navigating treacherous terrain and facing the unpredictable whims of the weather. Eachstep forward felt like a battle against the elements,testing my physical endurance and mental fortitude. Yet,with each obstacle overcome, a newfound sense of determination and self-belief began to take root.As we ascended higher into the mountains, the landscape transformed, revealing a breathtaking tapestry of snow-capped peaks, cascading waterfalls, and serene alpine meadows. The sheer grandeur of the natural world humbled me, reminding me of my insignificance in the grand scheme of things. It was in these moments of awe and contemplationthat I began to shed the layers of my preconceived notions and embrace a deeper understanding of my place in the universe.One particular moment stands out in my memory, apivotal turning point in my journey. As I stood atop a towering ridge, gazing out at the vast expanse of the mountain range, I was struck by a profound sense of clarity. The challenges I had faced, the obstacles I had overcome,all seemed to converge in that single moment, revealing a deeper truth about myself.I realized that the true test of this journey was not about conquering the physical terrain, but about conquering the limitations I had imposed on myself. The mountain had become a metaphor for the barriers I had erected, both tangible and intangible, that had held me back from reaching my full potential.In that moment of realization, a transformation occurred. I felt a surge of empowerment, a newfound belief in my own capabilities, and a deep appreciation for the resilience of the human spirit. The journey had not only challenged me physically, but had also stripped away the layers of self-doubt and fear that had once constrained me.As I descended the mountain, I carried with me a renewed sense of purpose and a deeper understanding of myself. The lessons I had learned on this transformative journey would continue to guide me long after the expedition had ended, shaping my decisions, myrelationships, and my approach to life.In the end, this narrative essay is not just a recounting of a physical journey, but a testament to the power of self-discovery and the transformative potential of embracing the unknown. It is a reminder that the most profound journeys we undertake are often the ones that take place within our own hearts and minds, where the true challenges and triumphs of life are found.。
英语记叙文400字作文
英语作文记叙文篇1My holiday life will be busy but interesting.I am going to do my homework every day so that I can finish my homework on time.I am going to the library to borrow some books and go to the shops to buy some books so that I can read some interesting books.I am going to play sports such as playing basketball,table tennis,swimming and so on .Of course I am going to help my parents do some housework because they are busy with their work every day.I am going to spend a week in Shanghai with my parents so that we can see the expo.I am sure I am going to have an interesting and happy summer vacation.英语作文记叙文篇2Today is Saturday. I stay at home with my parents.My mother said that today we should do some cleanings. I agreed and I would like to help.I cleaned the windows. It was really a tough job. Now matter how hard I tried, they seemed dirty all the same.Therefore, I asked for help. My mother teached me a method to clean the windows. It realy worked.And then I cleaned the floor. It was much easier than cleaning the windows. I did it in a short time.My parents praised me.英语作文记叙文篇3My hometown is in the southeast of Shandong，a seaside village.It is a small village. There are about 600 people. Most of them are peasants. They mainly plant wheat，corn and cotton. Some of them often go fishing in the sea.Great changes have taken place in the past ten years. Now the peasants here use tractors in their work. A lot of new buildings have appeared. Many families own fridges and some even haveair-conditioners. In the evening they watch TV as the people in cities do.There is a primary school in the village. Most of the peasants’children are studying in college now.I love my home town. I believe she will become more and more beautiful in the future.英语作文记叙文篇4One day three men got a bottle of wine. But the wine was not enough for them three and each of them wanted to drink the wine alone. Then they all agreed that they each would draw a snake on the ground and the one who first finished drawing would be given the wine. So they began to draw on the ground with sticks.It was not long before one of the three finished drawing his snake. He found the other two were still busy with their drawings. How slow you are ！said he，I can even add feet to my snake before you finish yours.He put down the bottle and began to add feet to his snake. But before he finished，another man took hold of the bottle and said，I’ve finished. Snakes have no feet，so yours is not a snake. With these words he drank up the wine.英语作文记叙文篇5Miss Li is our English teacher. She always impresses us deeply with her lively English class.One day when the first bell rang，the monitor stood up and said，Our English teacher is going to have an operation today. It has not been decided yet who will give us the lesson. The class turned silent at his words. It seemed that no one would believe him. In fact，all of us were afraid that Miss Li would no longer be with us. At this moment，Miss Li appeared at the door. She looked tired and pale.I’ll be missing you badly，she said in a low voice，I have asked the doctor to put off the operation till tomorrow because I don’t want you to miss a single class. She went on，A new teacher will take my place and I hope you’ll get on well with him. I’ll come back as soon as I’m better.Hearing this，all of us were moved to tears. What a good teacher we have.英语作文记叙文篇6My sister got married two years ago and now her daughter is one year old. Last week, my sister was busy and she asked me to take care of her child for half a day. I said yes without hesitation, because I thought it would be very easy, but later it turned out to be wrong. My niece was moving all the time. As she was too young to walk, so she crawled everywhere, then I needed to focus my attention all the time. Once she was out of my sight, then something bad would happen. Though I sat at the table, I could do nothing, it was so tired. When my sister was back, I felt relieved, raising a child is never a easy work.英语作文记叙文篇7The story of an ugly swan becomes beautiful as it grows up telling people not to judge others by appearance. Most kids especially girls look homely but they turn to be beauties as they become adults. But some people are exceptions, because they look beautiful all the time. For the celebrities, they like to show the audience with their pictures as they are small, which proves that they are naturally beautiful, instead of doing the plastic surgery. Like Natalie Portman, the famous actress and winning the Oscar Award for Black Swan, became famous in her 13. The audience grew up with her and watched her became more and more beautiful. But what makes people surprised is that Portman studied at the top university. She is a smart girl with beautiful face. Only the talent can help a person shinning all the time.As the Autumn Festival came, my family decided to asked my uncle and his families to come to my house and spent this day together. I was so happy. Early in the morning, my cousins came, then we played around the house. Our parents were busy in the kitchen. There must be delicious food for us to share. When it got dark, all the people stood in the balcony. We talked and played the game, waiting for the biggest moon. It was such a beautiful moment. We did not do this often, because the parents were busy with their work all the time. At about eight o’clock, the moon became very clean, and it lighted up the whole world. I ate the moon-cake and saw people celebrated in their ways. Some people made a wish by lighting a Kongming lantern, making the sky look wonderful.英语作文记叙文篇9A Good Example of Laid -off WorkersLiu Yaru，a woman worker，had worked in a weaving mill in Jinan for 14 years. In 1992 when she was 34，Mrs Liu was out of work. At the beginning，she stayed at home. She was worried and was not sure about finding another job. Some time later，she was no longer afraid of being looked down upon. She managed to find a job as a waitress at a teahouse. She does well in her job，and now many customers like to call at this teahouse. She makes a lot of money through her hard work. She has set a good example for the laid-off workers.My mother is always the one I respect most. She is the first guide of my life, and the pillar of our family.Once in my childhood, I desired so much to look beautiful. Mother told me," Vanity is a crime. Beauty is only skin-deep." She then bought me lots of interesting books, from fairy tales to collections of essays. From time to time, she took me to travel with her in the country and open my eyes to so many new things, which I would not have otherwise seen.Mother devotes most of her time and energy to our family. Immediately after coming back from work every work，she keeps herself busy around the apartment, cleaning, washing and cooking. Our happiness is her greatest joy; our achievements are her greatest pride. We can never forget how bravely she acted the day Grandma passed away.My respect for Mother grows with time. She is my most beloved person in the world.。
英语记叙文(精彩5篇)
英语记叙文（精彩5篇）英语作文记叙文篇一My mother is always the one I respect most. She is the first guide of my life, and the pillar of our family.Once in my childhood, I desired so much to look beautiful. Mother told me," Vanity is a crime. Beauty is only skin-deep." She then bought me lots of interesting books, from fairy tales to collections of essays. From time to time, she took me to travel with her in the country and open my eyes to so many new things, which I would not have otherwise seen.Mother devotes most of her time and energy to our family. Immediately after coming back from work every work，she keeps herself busy around the apartment, cleaning, washing and cooking. Our happiness is her greatest joy; our achievements are her greatest pride. We can never forget how bravely she acted the day Grandma passed away.My respect for Mother grows with time. She is my most beloved person in the world.英语作文记叙文篇二As the Autumn Festival came, my family decided to asked my uncle and his families to come to my house and spent this day together. I was so happy. Early in the morning, my cousins came, then we played around the house. Our parents were busy in the kitchen. There must be delicious food for us to share. When it got dark, all the people stood in the balcony. We talked and played the game, waiting for the biggest moon. It was such a beautiful moment. We did not do this often, because the parents were busy with their work all the time. At about eight o’clock, the moon became very clean, and it lighted up the whole world. I ate the moon-cake and saw people celebrated in their ways. Some people made a wish by lighting a Kongming lantern, making the sky look wonderful.英语作文记叙文篇三I had a streak of tough luck yesterday. Everything, it seemed to me, went wrong. And I simply couldn’t understand why all the bad things happened to me in one single day.In the morning, as luck would have it, my alarm clock didn’t ring, and with an aching head I woke up half an hour later than usual. I was in such a hurry that, when making an omelet, I got my fingers burnt and splashed the omelet all over the floor of the kitchen.Having no time for my breakfast at that point, I rushed out of my house with an empty stomach and hurting fingers. I had intended to catch the 7:30 subway, but somehow I couldn’t make it. I became verynervous at the mere thought of being late for my English class, because my English teacher is very strict and demanding, and he gets angry whenever any student is late for his class.After getting off the 7:40 subway, I raced all the way from the station to my school, thinking it would be impossible for me to flag a taxi at this hour of the day. At the corner of the street near my school, I abruptly bumped into a man and, worse luck, broke the glasses I had bought for 500 yuan just last week. With scarcely any time to receive or offer an apology, I just kept on running and running. At long last, I arrived at the school only to find, with great sadness mixed with some relief, that the school was empty and the classrooms were all locked. It was Saturday.My ill luck showed no sign of coming to an end. When I returned home greatly frustrated, I found myself locked out. In my hurry I had forgotten to bring the key with me. Just my luck!英语记叙文篇四Last week, the cat that our family raised for two years had lost. All of us searched every corner of the house and even walked down the whole street block to ask others, but just got no information of it. At last, we had to give up, though I was sad, I had to get used to it.But last night, the cat showed up in our balcony. When I saw her, I just couldn’t believe, how she could walk home after missing for almosta week. This is miracle, for the first time I believe in miracle. My parents were so surprised and happy to see our member return.英语记叙文篇五Many of my classmates have a puter, I have one too.My father bought it for me as a present when my first year in middle school.He said I can study English with puter.Most of the time, I use puter to search study materials on the internet.I also have some foreign friends on the internet, we can talk in English.Sometimes I play video game with puter after I finish my homework.My puter helps me a lot, it is a good friend to me.。
记叙文英语作文带翻译
Title:A Memorable Day at the Beach记叙文英语作文：Last summer,my family and I had an unforgettable experience at the beach.It was a day filled with laughter,fun,and the soothing sound of the waves crashing against the shore.翻译：去年夏天，我和我的家人在海滩上度过了一个难忘的经历。
那是一个充满笑声、乐趣和海浪拍打岸边的舒缓声音的日子。
正文：We woke up early that morning,excited for the day ahead.The sun was just beginning to rise,casting a warm golden glow over everything.After a quick breakfast,we packed our beach essentials:sunscreen,towels,beach umbrellas,and of course,plenty of snacks.翻译：那天早上，我们早早醒来，对即将到来的一天充满期待。
太阳刚刚开始升起，给一切披上了温暖的金色光芒。
快速吃过早餐后，我们打包了海滩必需品：防晒霜、毛巾、沙滩伞，当然还有大量的零食。
Upon arriving at the beach,we were greeted by the sight of the vast ocean stretching out before us.The sand was warm and soft under our feet,and the salty air was invigorating. We found a perfect spot to set up our beach umbrella and laid out our towels.翻译：一到海滩，我们就被眼前广阔的海洋所吸引。
英语作文驰而不息 记叙文
英语作文驰而不息记叙文Perseverance: An Unwavering Force.In the tapestry of life, perseverance stands as an unyielding thread that weaves together the intricate patterns of our accomplishments. It is the relentless pursuit of our goals, despite the obstacles that inevitably arise along the path. As the poet William Blake wrote, "The path of excess leads to the palace of wisdom." It is through the arduous journey of perseverance that we truly unlock the depths of our potential.Throughout history, countless individuals have exemplified the indomitable spirit of perseverance. From the Wright brothers' relentless pursuit of flight to Marie Curie's unwavering dedication to uncovering the secrets of radioactivity, the annals of human achievement are replete with tales of those who refused to surrender to adversity.Like a raging river, perseverance surges forward,eroding the barriers that seek to confine it. It whispersin the ears of those who falter, urging them to rise above their doubts and press onward. It ignites the fire within us, propelling us towards the realization of our aspirations.The path paved with perseverance is not without its thorns. Along the way, we encounter setbacks, disappointments, and moments of despair. It is during these trying times that the true mettle of our resolve is tested. When the weight of adversity threatens to crush our spirits, perseverance becomes our beacon of hope, guiding us towards brighter horizons.As the ancient philosopher Seneca once said, "Difficulties strengthen the mind, as labor does the body." Through the crucible of perseverance, we forge anunyielding spirit, capable of withstanding the storms of life. We learn the invaluable lesson that setbacks are not defeats but opportunities for growth and resilience.Perseverance is not simply a virtue reserved for theextraordinary. It is a quality that resides within each of us, waiting to be awakened by the spark of determination. It is the common thread that unites achievers from all walks of life, from the humble student to the visionary entrepreneur.By cultivating perseverance, we unlock the boundless possibilities within ourselves. We become architects of our own destiny, capable of shaping the future we desire. It empowers us to embrace challenges with renewed vigor, knowing that success lies not in the absence of obstacles but in the unwavering belief that we can overcome them.In the pursuit of our dreams, perseverance is our steadfast companion. It is the invisible force that propels us forward, even when the path ahead seems shrouded in doubt. It whispers words of encouragement in our darkest moments, reminding us that setbacks are temporary and that the fruits of victory await those who endure.As the sun rises each morning, casting its warm rays upon the earth, let us embrace the spirit of perseverance.Let it guide our steps, ignite our ambitions, and propel us towards the realization of our fullest potential. For in the relentless pursuit of our goals, we not only shape our own destinies but also leave an enduring legacy for generations to come.In the words of the poet Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, "The heights by great men reached and kept were not attained by sudden flight, but they, while their companions slept, were toiling upward in the night." Let us rise to the challenge and become the masters of our fate, guided by the unwavering force of perseverance.。
四级英语作文范文记叙文
四级英语作文范文记叙文A Memorable Trip。
Last summer, I went on a trip with my family to a small town in the countryside. It was a memorable experience that I will never forget.We arrived at the town early in the morning and checked into a cozy bed and breakfast. The owner of the place was a friendly old lady who greeted us with a warm smile. She showed us to our room, which had a beautiful view of the surrounding hills and fields.After settling in, we decided to explore the town. It was a quaint little place with narrow streets and old-fashioned houses. We visited the local market, where we bought fresh fruits and vegetables. We also stopped by a small bakery and bought some delicious pastries.In the afternoon, we went for a hike in the hills. Thescenery was breathtaking, with rolling hills and green meadows stretching as far as the eye could see. We walked for hours, taking in the fresh air and enjoying the peaceful surroundings.In the evening, we returned to our bed and breakfast and had a delicious dinner. The old lady who owned the place cooked us a traditional meal, which included roasted chicken, mashed potatoes, and steamed vegetables. It was one of the best meals I had ever had.The next day, we visited a nearby waterfall. The water was crystal clear and the sound of the rushing water was soothing. We spent the day swimming and picnicking by the waterfall.On our last day in the town, we visited a local farm. We saw cows, sheep, and horses grazing in the fields. We also picked fresh strawberries and raspberries from the farm.Overall, it was a wonderful trip that I will alwayscherish. The beauty of the countryside, the warmth of the people, and the delicious food made it a truly unforgettable experience.。
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英语作文记叙文写好记叙文的基本要领1.头绪分明，脉络清楚写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。
要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。
这些素材都应该跟上述五个w”和一个h”有关。
尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些w”和h”，但动笔之前，围绕五个w”和h”进行构思是必不可少的。
2.突出中心，详略得当在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。
选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。
要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。
面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。
这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。
如：onenightamancametoourhouseandtoldme,thereisafamilywitheightchildre n.theyhavenoteatenfordays.itooksomefoodwithmeandwent.whenifinallyca metothatfamily,isawthefacesofthoselittlechildrendisfigured（破坏外貌）byhunger.therewasnosorroworsadnessintheirfaces,justthedeeppainofhung er.igavethericetothemother.shedividedthericeintwo,andwentout,carryingh alftherice.whenshecameback,iaskedher,wheredidyougo?shegavemethissi mpleanswer,tomyneighbors—theyarehungryalso!3.用活语言，准确生动记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。
一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。
试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
onedayxiaoqiangwaswanderingaway.hewassoonlostamongpeopleandtraffi c.hecouldnotfindthewaybackhomeandstartedcrying.justthen,twoyoungstu dentswhowerepassingbyfoundhimstandingaloneinfrontofashopandcrying.t heywentuptoxiaoqiangandaskedhimwhathadhappened.xiaoqiangtoldthem howhegotlostandwherehelived.thetwostudentsdecidedtotakehimhome.m otherwaspleasedtoseexiaoqiangcomebacksafeandsound.sheinvitedthetwo studentsintothehouseandgavethemsomemoney,buttheydidn'ttakeit.sheser vedthemwithteabuttheyleft.修改后：theotherday,five-year-oldxiaoqianglefthomealoneandwanderedhappilyinthestreet.aftersometim e,hefelthungrysohewantedtogobackhome.buthefoundhewaslostamongthe crowdedpeopleandheavytraffic.whenhecouldnotfindthewayhome,hestarte dandcrying.justthen,twoyoungstudentswhowerepassingbyfromschoolfoundhimsandingcryinginfrontofashop.theyimmediatelywentuptohim.littleboy, whyareyoustandingherecrying?theyasked.iwantmom,igohome.saidtheboy, stillcrying.don'tworry,we'llsendyouhome.andtheyspentthenexttwohourslo okingfortheboy'shouse.withthehelpofapoliceman,theyfinallyfoundit.whent heworriedmothersawhersoncomebacksafeandsound,shewassothankfulan dsheinvitedthestudentsintoherhouse.gratefully,sheofferedthemsomemone y,sayingitwasawaytoexpressherthanks,buttheyoungstudentsfirmlyrefusedit andleftwithoutevenacupoftea.记叙文是记人叙事的文章，它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说的五个w”（what,who,when,where,why）和一个h”（how）。
记叙文的重点在于述说”和描写”，因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚，描写生动形象。
下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。
一、记叙文的特点1.叙述的人称英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。
用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。
它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过我”来传达给读者，使人读后感到真实可信，如身临其境。
如：theotherday,iwasdrivingalongthestreet.suddenly,acarlostitscontrolandrand irectlytowardsmefast.iwassofrightenedthatiquicklyturnedtotheleftside.butitwastoolate.thecarhitmybikeandifelloffit.用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。
如：littletomwasgoingtoschoolwithanumbrella,foritwasraininghard.ontheway,h esawanoldwomanwalkingintherainwithnothingtocover.tomwentuptotheol dwomanandwantedtosharetheumbrellawithher,buthewastooshort.whatco uldhedo?thenhehadagoodidea.2.动词的时态在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。
所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。
记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。
英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3.叙述的顺序记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。
无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。
顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。
但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。
倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。
但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4.叙述的过渡过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。
过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。
如：inmysummerholidays,ididalotofthings.apartformdoingmyhomework,readin ganenglishnovel,watchingtvanddoingsomehousework,iwentonatriptoqingd ao.itisreallyabeautifulcity.therearemanyplacesofinteresttosee.butwhatimpr essedmemostwasthesunrise.thenextmorningigotupearly.iwasveryhappybe causeitwasafineday.bythetimeigottothebeach,thecloudsonthehorizonwere turningred.inalittlewhile,asmallpartofthesunwasgraduallyappearing.thesun wasveryred,notshining.itroseslowly.atlastitbrokethroughtheredcloudsandj umpedabovethesea,justlikeadeep-redball.atthesametimethecloudsandtheseawaterbecameredandbright.wha tamovingandunforgettablescene!5.叙述与对话引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。
适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。
试比较下面两段的叙述效果：iwasinthekitchen,andiwascookingsomething.suddenlyiheardaloudnoisefro mthefront.ithoughtmaybesomeonewasknockingthedoor.iaskedwhoitwasb utiheardnoreply.afterawhileisawmycatrunningacrosstheparlor.irealizeditwa sthecat.ifeltreleased.这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。
原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把悬念”给冲淡了。
可作如下调整：iwasinthekitchencookingsomething.crash!aloudnoisecamefromthefront.thi nkingsomeonewasknockingatthedoor,iasked,who?noreply.afterawhile,isaw mycatrunningacrosstheparlor.it'syou.isaid,quitereleased.。