四级作文讲评(mobilephones)

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From the picture, we can see many people on the street are looking at their cell phones, while some pedestrians are using walking sticks in order to see. In fact, since cell phone has become more and more popular, more and more people depend on it especially smart phone. • However, overusing cell phones will cause some consequences…… • In conclusion,….. •
• With the rapid development of the socience and technology, it can’t be denied that our living standard had been improving and the wide use of smart phones is one of the reflections of it. Undoubtedly , mobile phones is playing an increasing important role in our daily life.
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Mobile Phone in People’s Life
From the cartoon given above, we can observe that there are many people crossing the street. Instead of looking at the way, they are staring at their cell phones and using walking sticks to see. It is obvious that they are fascinated with cell phones while even ignoring their security. • Cell phones are of great benefit to all of us. However, it is mobile-phones’ advantages that lead some people to overuse or be addicted to them, which tends to exert a negative impact on our life. For example, overusing cell phones will reduce face-to-face communication among people. It seems that most of us enjoy the convenience of contact at the expense of interpersonal relationships. Moreover, entertaining electronic games, magnanimous (海量的）information and a bewildering variety of social networking tools in mobile phones have occupied much of our time. Information distribution tools and social networking tools, in particular, have attracted all of our attention, which tempts us to keep our eyes on the screen around the corner of every second. This, has resulted in a phenomenon of “alienation between acquaintances and familiarity between strangers”.
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As is vividly depicted in the picture, modern people can hardly surrive without cell phones in their daily life. Even when they cross the road, they use waling sticks as eyes. Apparently, the picture reveals the fact that we tend to spend an increasingly large amout of time in using mobile phone whereare we are.
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With the development of science and technology, mobile phone becomes more and more popular in our life. As the picture shows, people pay close attention to their mobile phones, even if they are walking across the street. And what even more ridiculous is that they use crutches like a blind.
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With more and more functions, the mobile phone has gained its popularity among people knowing no age. Besides, people are using phones to keep pace with such an updating world. • However, we can not deny that the overusing of mobile phones do bring us some side-effects. • Firstly,….Secondly,….Last but not least,….. • In conclusion,….. •
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In the picture, those people who are crossing the street are devoting themselves to their cell phones. Instead of their own eyes, they are using walking sticks to see their ways. • With the development of technology in the past few years, smart people gained its popularity….. • However, every coin has two sides…………
• 2013年12月英语四级作文 • Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to
write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people’s life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
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Technology has dramatically changed our world, stretching its legs to all walks of life（各行各业）. As is humorously depicted in the drawing, a boy holding a cell phone in his hand is asking his mother with great surprise. Since his phone can solve all the problems for him, he argues, is it still necessary to go to school? • Funny as it seems, this picture poses us a controversial question: “can technology replace traditional school learning?” For centuries, our Chinese have adhered to the public wisdom: school where education is provided is indispensable in our development. Nevertheless, there is a growing recognition that technology plays an extremely important role in our study, which we can hardly ignored. Nowadays, when childr” will be the first to come to their minds. • To my knowledge, school learning should go hand in hand with technology. While cell phones do help in solving school problems, they cannot have answers to all the questions, such as “how to become a real man”, “how to make real friends”. Schools can shape our personality and allow us to adapt to the real world.