中考英语书面表达复习课件(精品)

中考专项复习
英语书面表达
永安六中 杨彩燕
中考英语写作评分标准
一类（13-15分）：写出全部内容要点，语句流畅。基 本无语法和词汇方面的错误。词数达到要求。基本 无单词拼写及标点错误。 • 二类（10-12分）：写出大部分要点内容。语句较流 畅。有少量语法和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 有少量单词拼写及标点错误。 • 三类（7-9分）：写出部分要点。语句基本通顺。有 一些语法和词汇错误，有少量单词及标点错误。 • 四类（4-6分）：写出少量内容要点，语句不通顺。 语法、词汇、单词拼写、标点错误较多。只有少量 句子表达正确。 • 五类（0-3分）：基本上没有写出内容要点，语法、 词汇、单词拼写错误较多。基本上没有通顺的句子。 只写出一些单词，不知所云。
For example:
Keeping healthy In short, it’s important to have good habits and keep healthy.
Helping others I believe if we can help each other, our world will be more and more beautiful.
As we all know ,the Internet plays an important part in our lives.
正文：巧用连接词（一）
按事情发展的先后或时间顺序
1）Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly 2）first, then/next, after that/ next, finally 表示并列 not only... but also, both... and, on the other hand
写好篇章结构
Beginning topic sentence 主题句 开头 ----说出文中的要点、核心问题
Middle 正文
supporting sentences支持句
----用例子、实事或数据围绕主题 开展叙述、讨论 concluding sentence 结论句
Ending
结尾
----对全文的总结和概括。
书面表达一般步骤： ⑴审题目：切中题意。 ⑵列提纲：要点，先后顺序，分层次。 ⑶定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头和 结尾。 ⑷写全文：句型，结构词汇，关联词，表达， 字数。 ⑸改病句：认真检查，改正错误。 ⑹卷面整洁：书写工整，卷面整洁。
用适当的连词连接文段
My name is Tom. I am 15 years old. I am and I wear glasses. I am shy _____friendly. but tall ____ • I have a happy family. There are 3 people in my family. I have lots of hobbies. ____________,I For example enjoy________singing _________ not only but also collecting stamps. Now, I study in Class 3，Grade 3, Bayi High School. My favorite subject is math. Besides I am interested in __________, and so on I live far English,Chinese,physics ____________. so I usually get up at 6:00 and go from school ____ to school by subway. In a word I have a busy _____wonderful • ________, life. but
Beginning（开头）
开头万能句型： 1) ....plays an important part in the... 2) As we know, ... becomes more and more.... 3) Many people say that.... But I don’t think so.
正文：加例子（四） 我们应尽所能保护环境拯救地球。
We should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.
Enjoy some proverbs 1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 2.Where there is a will, 有志者事竟成。 there is a way. 3.Every coin has two sides. 事情都有两面性 4.The early bird catches the worm. 早起的鸟儿有虫吃。 5.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果， 医生远离我。
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正文：句式富于变化（二）
We should have a healthy habit. ( good)
It’s necessary for us to have a healthy habit. (better) A She is very young. She can’t carry the heavy box.
表示举例或补充 1）for example 2）besides / what’s more/ what’s worse 表示转折 however, though, instead of 表示原因 thanks to, because 表示结果 as result (of) , so ，so...that, 表目的 in order to, so that ...
加例子
在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。
I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, tidying the room, sweeping the floor and so on.
结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应
1. 与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点, 注意避免重复句式。 2. 结尾经典词组、句型： At last/ Finally ... 最后 In a word/ In short, ... 总而言之 Let’s try our best to .... If we can..., ... will be ....
B
C
She is too ng to carry the heavy box.
She is so young that she can’t carry the …
正文：加谚语(saying) （三）
加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法
Joining the English club is a good way to learn English. As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.
一、字数达标， 卷面整洁。 二、把握英语造句的特点： 1、“ 先主谓，后时地”。 今天下午我们要在操场举行篮球比赛。 We will have a basketball game on the playground this afternoon. 2、“无动不成句”。 He very happy. My father at home . She twelve years old. 三、以简单句为主。长句短句交叉使用最 好。尽量不重复句型。
For example:
1. Learning English
As we all know, English becomes more and more popular/ important.
Many people say it’s difficult to learn English.But I don’t think so. 2. The Internet