高三英语复习第1部分专题5短文改错训练3短文改错

训练3 短文改错(Ⅲ)

(2016·陕西咸阳三模)

At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as my birthday gift.I felt such excited that I couldn't help try riding it.However, it was harder than expected.The bike seem too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still ，I had many fall off the bike.I was about to give up while my father came and encouraged me to keep going.Because

much practice, I did better and better.Looking back, and I couldn't have ridden a bike well without trying hard because success lie in continuous efforts through failures.

We can't often succeed at the time.If we stick to their work, we can make it in the end.

【答案】

At the age of twelve ，I got a nice bike as my birthday gift.I felt such

so excited

that I couldn't help try

trying riding it.However ，it was harder than expected.The bike

seem seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still ，I had many fall

falls off the bike.I was about to give up

while

when

my father came and encouraged me to keep going.Because much practice ，I did better and better.Looking back, ﹨and I couldn't have ridden a bike well without trying hard because success lie

lies

in continuous efforts through failures.

We can't often succeed at the a time.If we stick to their

our work ，we can make it

in the end.

(2016·山东泰安一模)

Everyone should take the action to reduce haze(雾霾), which is harmless to our health.First of all, I believe that if we plant more tree, there will be less haze in their city.Trees can absorb car exhaust fumes, thus reduce pollution.Second, the government should punish the factories where produce too many fumes.Exhaust fumes is the main cause of haze and do greatly harm to people's health. Third, I think

it was a great idea to encourage people to use public https://www.360docs.net/doc/585543005.html,st but not least, we can call on citizens ride bikes if they travel short journeys.

【答案】

Everyone should take ﹨the action to reduce haze(雾霾)，which is harmless

harmful to our

health.First of all ，I believe that if we plant more tree

trees ，there will be less haze

in their our city.Trees can absorb car exhaust fumes ，thus reduce reducing pollution.Second ，

the government should punish the factories where

which/that

produce too many

fumes.Exhaust fumes

is are the main cause of haze and do greatly great

harm to people's health.Third ，I think it

was

a great idea to encourage people to use public https://www.360docs.net/doc/585543005.html,st but not least ，we can call on citizens ride bikes if they travel short journeys.

(2016·河南中原名校一联) Dear Sir or Madam ，

I'm Wang Lin.My younger brother, who was a junior middle school student, wants to receive education in our International Department.I'm writing to get some informations on the issue.

To begin with, I'd like know when the entrance examination will take place but which subjects will be tested.In addition to, could you tell me the tuition and the relative rules about the scholarship? Finally, before finishing the studies in your school, which foreign universities could one apply for?

I would be gratefully if you could be so kind to provide me for the information and I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully ，

Wang Lin

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam ，

I'm Wang Lin.My younger brother ，who was

a junior middle school student ，wants

to receive education in

our

your

International Department.I'm writing to get some informations

information

on the issue.

To begin with ，I'd like ∧

to know when the entrance examination will take place but

and

which subjects will be tested.In addition ﹨t o ，could you tell me the tuition and the relative rules about the scholarship ？Finally ，before

after finishing the studies in

your school ，which foreign universities could

can

one apply for?

I would be gratefully grateful if you could be so kind to provide me for

with the information

and I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully ，

Wang Lin

【导学号：90892095】

(2016·东北三省四市二模)

In a general, most houseparents are annoying for boy students living in dormitories.I didn't begin to like our houseparents when something happened one night.I was sound asleep when my alarm clock drops onto the floor and were broken into pieces.After a minute, the houseparents on duty opened the door and rushed in.Instead blaming me, he asked me anxious what was going on.Before making sure I was OK, he asked me to go back to sleep and cleaned up herself.Since then, I have completely changed my opinion of our houseparents.They are like our parents, keep all of us safe.

【答案】

In ﹨a general, most houseparents are annoying for boy students living in dormitories.I didn't begin to like our houseparents when

until something happened one

night.I was sound asleep when my alarm clock drops dropped onto the floor and were

was broken

into pieces.After a minute, the

houseparents

houseparent

on duty opened thedoor and rushed

in.Instead blaming me, he asked me

anxious anxiously what wasgoing on.Before

After

making

sure I was OK, he asked me to go back to sleep and cleaned up herself

himself .Since then,

I have completely changed my opinion of our houseparents.They are like our parents, keep

keeping

all of us safe. 【导学号：90892096】

(2016·河北百校联盟一次联考)

I am an only child in my family.While eating, my parents always leave myself the best dish.But I don't eat out much because I don't have some appetite all the time.One day, my friend Alice asked me come to her home for dinner.In her family, a feeling was so pleasant because there had two kids in the family.When they were eating, my friend and her sister fight for the food.They ate a lot and laughed happy.I joined them in fighting for the food.I felt so happy but ate a lot.I got to know that the eating atmospheres could be very important.

【答案】

I am an only child in my family.While eating ，my parents always leave myself

the best dish.But I don't eat ﹨out much because I don't have some

any appetite all the

time.One day ，my friend Alice asked me come to her home for dinner.In her family ，a the feeling was so pleasant because there had were two kids in the family.When they were eating ，my friend and her sister

fight

fought

for the food.They ate a lot and laughed

happy happily .I joined them in fighting for the food.I felt so happy but

and ate a lot.I got

to know that the eating

atmospheres

atmosphere

could be very important.

(2016·福建福州3月月考)

Have you ever gone to a music festival? During a summer holiday in Hungary, I went to attend my the first music festival.It was really an excitement to us! Since 2002 the Sziget Festival had been running every year in Budapest.It lasts for a week, which famous singers and bands from around the world perform very brilliant. In Hungarian the word “sziget ” mean island, which is a very appropriate

name although the festival takes place on a large island in the middle of the Danube River in Budapest.Thousands people come on special “party trains” from other country such as France and Italy.

【答案】

Have you ever gone

been to a music festival ？During a summer holiday in Hungary ，

I went to attend my ﹨the first music festival.It was really an excitement to us

me ！

Since 2002 the Sziget Festival had

has been running every year in Budapest.It lasts for

a week ，

which

when

famous singers and bands from around the world perform very brilliant brilliantly .In Hungarian the word “sziget”mean

means island ，which is a very

appropriate name although because/since/as the festival takes place on a large island in the

middle of the Danube River in Budapest.Thousands people come on spec ial“party trains”from other country

countries such as France and Italy.