高考英语特训班写作讲义
高考英语特训班写作讲义一、语法错误下面是我在教学过程中积累下来的学生在写作中常见的语法错误1.句子缺谓语。
典型例句①：The building like a match box.应为：The building is like a match box.典型例句②：He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom.应为：He told me that all my classmates were sitting in the classroom.2.主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误。
典型例句①：A worker of the farm lead us to the field.应为：A worker of the farm leads us to the field.典型例句②：All the students like books that was written by Lu Xun.应为：All the students like books that were written by Lu Xun.3.时态错误典型例句①：When he came back, he found that his wife has gone to bed.应为：When he came back, he found that his wife had gone to bed.典型例句②：What are you doing this time yesterday?应为：What were you doing this time yesterday?4.词性混用典型例句①：She enjoys study English.应为：She enjoys English study. 或：She enjoys studying English.典型例句②：Can you understand my speak?应为：Can you understand my speaking/words? 或：Can you understand me?典型例句③：When you through the valley, you may see a big pine tree.应为：When you go through the valley, you may see a big pine tree.5.代词指代错误典型例句：She told my sister that she has passed the exam.应为：She told my sister that my sister has passed the exam.或：She has passed the exam and told this to my sister.6.介词误用典型例句①：In my surprise, he has got the first prize.应为：To my surprise, he has got the first prize.典型例句②：He came here to attend the meeting in car.应为：He came here to attend the meeting by car.典型例句③：Don’t read under the sun.应为：Don’t read in the sun.典型例句④：He was hurt on his right foot.应为：He was hurt in his right foot.7.冠词误用典型例句①：We elected Li Hua the monitor of the Class Five.应为：We elected Li Hua monitor of the Class Five.典型例句②：Once upon a time, there was a one-eyed king.应为：Once upon a time, there was an one-eyed king.典型例句③：The history is actually a very interesting subject.应为：History is actually a very interesting subject.8.误把不可数名词用为可数名词典型例句①：Workers have many interests in the new machine.应为：Workers have much interests in the new machine.典型例句②：It is rare to see such a nice weather in Beijing.应为：It is rare to see such nice weather in Beijing9.误把可数名词用为不可数名词典型例句①：There is always traffic jam.应为：There is always a traffic jam.典型例句②：Let’s go out for walk.应为：Let’s go out for a walk.10.数词用法错误典型例句①：There are several hundreds people in the hall.应为：There are several hundred people in the hall.典型例句②：Thousand of students are planting trees in the hill.应为：Thousands of students are planting trees in the hill.典型例句③：More than five hundreds of taxi drivers are on strike.应为：More than five hundred taxi drivers are on strike.11.动词用法错误典型例句①：Where are you come from?应为：Where do you come from?/Where are you from?典型例句②：When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting for me.应为：When I arrived in (reach) Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting for me.典型例句③：He didn’t notice the teacher to come into the classroom.应为：He didn’t notice the teacher come into the classroom.典型例句④：The accident was happened in 1999.应为：The accident happened in 1999.12.习惯用法错误典型例句①：The actor in this movie is very beautiful.应为：The actor in this movie is very handsome.典型例句②：I and My parents are working in the field.应为：My parents and I are working in the field.典型例句③：The reason is because he does not know what to do next.应为：The reason is that he does not know what to do next.二、拼写错误下面是我在教学过程中积累下来的学生常常拼写错误的单词。
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高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)
高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)
高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)
Key 1
表达多样化
学好英语对于我们来说是重要的.
Studying English is important for us
It is important for us to learn English
I think it crucial for us to study English
高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)
高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)
Key 1
表达多样化
她是一个多么漂亮的女孩. She is such a nice girl
How beautiful she is
What a good-looking girl she is
What an eye-catching girl she is
The doctor spares no effort to save the patient
The doctor does his level best to save the patient
高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)
高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)
组织结构不清
逻辑连接词；开头；结尾 万能公式
高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)
高中英语写作模块特训课件(共58张)
Key 3
逻辑连接词
First to begin with first of all
second then moreover
at the outset
furthermore
first and foremost what’s more
=as a result of
高考作文专题培训Why
Handwriting
PART 01
书写的重要性
别人家的？ 我们家的!
Part 02
Tips for high mark
得分宝典
南海区作文平均分分布
分 值 人 数 分 值 0 64 13 1 54 14 2 63 15 3 72 16 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12
万能开头用语
tell you something about..
介绍信 感谢信
thank you for sth... express my sincere gratitude for express my apology for... 道歉信 apologize to you for...
I am writing to
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人 105 149 153 143 122 848 755 524 228 107 21 数 0 5 5 0 2
得分宝典 1. 格式要对
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1） 问好
Beginning
2）写信背景： 3）写信目的：
回信开头： 1. Thank you for your letter of November 29, telling me that... 2. It’s good to hear from you and know that…… 3. I’m very delighted to receive your letter telling me that.. 4. Thank you for your letter asking about. Here is something about it. 5. I’m sorry that it has taken me so long to reply\in answering.. 6. Thanks very much for your kind invitation. I feel quite honored that someone noticed me. I'd be delighted to accept the invitation.
记叙文--高考精品班理科综合寒假特训班辅导《英语》第二章第一节讲义1
正保远程教育旗下品牌网站美国纽交所上市公司(NYSE:DL)中小学教育网高考精品班理科综合寒假特训班辅导《英语》第二章第一节讲义1记叙文类型：写事记叙文--叙述已经发生的事情，包括故事发生的时间、地点和人物写人记叙文--人物的成长经历、爱好、特长、家庭背景和成就写作步骤（六步法）：“审”、“列”、“选”、“写”、“润”、“查”。
“审”即审题意，审要求，确定时态、人称，明确要求、捕捉要领，切中题意。
“列”即列要点、拉主线、定中心。
“选”即选词语、选句式、选好开头与结尾。
“写”即写好句，尽量用自己最熟悉的词语或句型，直截了当，开门见山；遣词造句，力争做到句式恰当、成分完整、句意清楚，并联句成段；切忌生搬硬造些汉语式句子和使用没有把握的生僻词语。
“润”即润色加工，有效而恰当地使用连接词。
流畅表达命题要求，尽力使短文连贯、紧凑、自然，以提升语篇层次。
“查”即查语感、语法、行文逻辑、习惯表达，避免出现某些低级错误，如拼写错误。
写事记叙文【写作指导】写事记叙文，以时间为中心组织材料，围绕中心事件，将人物、时间、地点、原因和结果, 即五个“W”（ what, who, when, where, why）和一个”How”【几点注意】1.正确使用时态和人称①时态：多用一般过去时，灵活使用其他时态②人称：第一人称（记叙本人的经历或耳闻目睹的事件）第三人称（记叙他人的经历或事件）2.叙述内容要突出中心，详略得当，清楚连贯, 事件信息点的表述不要完全按照所给的顺序，要适当重组信息点，正确运用一些过渡词及短语，使故事有条理、连贯、流畅。
3.常见叙述线索①以时间为线索，按时间的顺序展开②以地点为线索，以地点的转移为顺序展开③以事件发展的过程为线索，或以人物出现的先后次序展开4.正确运用描写事件的词汇和句型。
【常用词语】①表达时间at about 4:30 p. m; on Thursday; be doing…when..;②表达地点at the crossing; at the end of street; near our school; five kilomete rs to; on the spot;…③表达交通情况a traffic accident; on one’s way to; be very crowded in the street; a car coming from behind;high speed; knock sb. over; be seriously injured; drive a car; ride a bike; drive off; traffic lights; turn left; lead to; a n umber of; report…to…例文1。
新高考英语读后续写特训营 ：02读后续写：转折思维
新高考英语读后续写特训营：02读后续写：转折思维距离高考还有一段时间，不少有经验的老师都会提醒考生，愈是临近高考，能否咬紧牙关、学会自我调节，态度是否主动积极，安排是否科学合理，能不能保持良好的心态、以饱满的情绪迎接挑战，其效果往往大不一样。
以下是本人从事10多年教学经验总结出的以下学习资料，希望可以帮助大家提高答题的正确率，希望对你有所帮助，有志者事竟成！养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。
做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。
总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习量。
在这个时候，学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式，最重要的是以平常心去面对考试。
英语最后的复习要树立信心，考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”，遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。
越到最后，考生越要回归基础，单词最好再梳理一遍，这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。
另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺复习方法。
3．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Emily White came to the world 17 years ago, with so many birth problems in her body. Some of her organs, bones and muscles were out of shape. No one expected her to survive long. She did make it but with her strange body figure, everyone could recognize her, even from a distance.In her hometown, a yearly outdoor performance was held in the school auditorium(礼堂). It had been performed for so many years and actually had become one of the most important events of the Christmas season for many of the town's people.Many people tried out each year for it, but so many were turned away. It can only include the most excellent people in the field.Emily had a beautiful singing voice. Last year she went to Mrs. Owens- her music teacher to ask to join in the performance. Without letting her sing, Mrs. Owens took a glance at Amy's body and said, "Child, you are just not suitable. Everyone would stare at you and that would make you uncomfortable. It would make them uncomfortable, too.”Without singing a single note, Emily was sent back through the door of the choral room. Hurt and upset, she decided never to try out again. But Mrs. Owens then retired.This year, there came a new music teacher, Mr. Butler. He heard about Emily and suggested that she have a try.Emily didn't want to be rejected again, so she hesitated about it. As Emily struggled, the door was pushed open and Mr. Butler called, “Emily, you're next." Kind of nervous as she was, Emily did as Mr. Butler told her to. Mr. Butler sat by the piano to keep Emily company. When Emily finished her testing performance, she thanked Mr. Butler and knew the result would be posted on the door of the choral room the next day.Emily couldn't sleep that night. She tossed and turned in bed one thousand times. She was suffering from the feelings that she didn't fit and the great need to be accepted. By the next morning, her stomach was even in pain due to stress.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
高考英语写作专题复习备考讲座课件
确定好文章中心后，列好提纲，方可动笔写作，一气呵成。 写作时可根据题目的主题和要求套用适当的模板，把材料按照一 定的逻辑顺序组织起来，使用一些关联词使文章丰满，上下连贯 ，同时把各个句子和段落连接起来，使文章衔接自然，语言流畅 ，符合英语的表达习惯。对于与要求无关的内容切忌任意发挥， 画蛇添足。
3. 我看到了一些不良行为。
I found some bad behavior.
→ I found some bad behavior.I was quite disappointed to find some bad behavior. (心理 )
方法三 添加与所给信息有关的原因，结果，条 件，让步，手段，目的等内容
). 33.5% of the students feel happy that their parents trust them ，laying a basic foundation for family communication (3) (扩展 句). 31.7% are content to be in the equal position with their parents when they are talking with each other (4) (扩展句)．
此外，三段之间要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的过 渡手段。
利用十句作文法要注意：
(1) 选好开头句 (做到概括性强，表达清楚，主题突出) (2) 合理安排结构 (3) 恰当选择句型
下面是一篇典型的十句作文法的例子。
假如你校最近就“家长应该如何对待孩子”的问题进行了调 查，结果如下。请根据图表1中提供的信息描述调查结果，并针对 图表2中的一个数据所反映的情况表达你的看法。
高考英语二轮复习特训概要写作课件(17PPT)课件
Step2 Careful reading for the key words, phrases or sentences in each paragraph
Para2
Color is used increasingly by doctors for influencing mood and state of mind, and for various types of medical treatment. Green is a good color if you are not feeling well, and possibly this is why we some times give flowers and plants to friends and relatives in hospital. It is also thought that turquoise(青绿色), a “user-friendly” color, can treat stress and headache
Step2 Careful reading for the key words, phrases or sentences in each paragraph
para4
Companies have found that certain colors “speak to specific age groups. They often use red to attract younger people to their products, for example as it is lively and more youthful than colors like gold and navy(深蓝色), which older customers seem to prefer.
2017高考英语复习之写作专训老师版
第一讲各司其职的8大句子成分第一步从写对句子开始写作中写对句子是最基本的要求，其中最重要的一点是句子结构要完整。
所以，同学们在平时训练时一定要从掌握最基本的句子成分和基本句式做起，通过观摩、背诵、仿写，最终写出准确无误的句子。
在高考中即使你的作文不能写得漂漂亮亮、洋气十足，也一定要写得像模像样，硬伤不多！所以学写作，要先从最基本的句子抓起。
句子由各个组成部分构成，这些组成部分叫作句子成分。
句子成分可分为主语、谓语、宾语、定语、状语、补语、表语和同位语等。
一、主语——句子的主体主语是句子的主体，是句子所要说明的人或事物，表示句子描述的是谁或什么。
更确切地说，主语是说明谓语所表示的动作或状态的执行者。
主语通常由名词(短语)、代词、数词、动词不定式(短语)、动名词(短语)或从句等充当。
The most obvious problem in our class is lack of interaction and teamwork.(2015·广东高考写作) 我们班最明显的问题是缺少互动和协作。
(名词短语作主语)[即时演练] 根据括号内的提示补全句子1．有时放弃一些东西可能意味着得到的更多。
(动名词短语作主语)Sometimes giving_up_a_little can mean getting more.(2015·浙江高考书面表达)2．如何与别人友好相处是你应该学会的第二件事。
(不定式短语作主语)How_to_get_along_well_with_others is the second thing you should learn.(2014·江西高考满分作文)3．我打算告诉你的是关于我们学校向你们中文班赠书之事。
(从句作主语)What_I_am_going_to_tell_you is about the book donation from our school to your Chinese class.(2015·天津高考满分作文)二、谓语——主语的行为谓语用来描述主语的行为动作、状态或特征。
(新)高中英语写作训练专题讲解课件
We are learning English.
高考专题复习讲解课件
五种基本的简单句
3. 主语+系动词+表语
We are students. He became a scientist. That sounds good.
4. 主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语
复合句
复合句里包含两个或更多的主谓结构, 其中 有一个主谓结构为句子的主体称为主句，另 一个／些主谓结构为从句，他（们）只能充 当句子的某一（些）成分，,如: 主语, 宾语, 表语, 同位语, 定语, 状语等. 根据他们在句子 中的功能分别称为主语从句, 宾语从句, 表 语从句, 同位语从句, 定语从句, 状语从句 等.
句子的简洁
• 段落(设计好一个段落)
• 一般说来, 一个段落由三部分组成: 主题句, 扩展句和结论句.主题句提出的论述的主题, 扩展句利用必要的细节对主题加以论证说 明,结论句总结全文,在论证的基础上得出结 论. 这三者是段落的必要成分,他们相辅相成, 构成一个完整的段落. 有些段落还有过渡句, 它起到段与段之间的顺利过渡.
高考专题复习讲解课件
句子的简洁
• 2)写好主题句, 有两条原则 • 1.主题句要明确, 句中须有一个词,词组,或从句让
读者一目了然本段的确切主题, 明确本段的重点或 观点. 例如: This paragraph will talk about birds.这句作为主题句就太笼统, 不确切. 试比较 以下几句, 下列几个主题句就确切地阐明了段落的 主题:
句子的连贯
• 连贯性的要求是：句子前后之间要有照应， 有衔接，思想的表达应该有序，清楚．句 子与句子之间的过渡要符合逻辑，不能造 成歧义或矛盾．
高考英语 写作强化讲义最新 教案
2011考研强化班写作脚本注：该讲义包括课程中所讲到的全部内容，只需要按照顺序，对照课程使用即可，不需要其他的讲义和教材。
希望学员认真学习，做好相应的笔记。
第一节一、考研动向：（一）最新变化：1、硕士分类：1）学术型研究生：重学术2）专业学位研究生：重应用2、英语分类：1）英语一：重学术2012）英语二：重应用2043、词汇变难：1）基本要求：A. 一词多义，熟词僻义：B. 四大词性：名词、动词、形容词、副词2）最新要求：A. 词义关系：a.同义词b.近义词c.反义词同义替换（词汇+句型）B. 搭配关系：a.动介搭配：communicate with others,b.形介搭配：different fromc.形名搭配：extensive/a wide range of knowledge,C.词根词缀：4、小作文变难：Nothing is impossible!A节：题型有两种，每次考试选择其中的一种形式。
1）考生根据所给情景写出一篇约100词（标点符号不计算在内）的应用性短文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、报告等。
————05—09,10年英语二、2）要求考生根据所提供的汉语文章，用英语写出一篇80—100词的文章摘要。
3）告示（二）最新大纲：关注三本书：（出版单位：教育部考试中心，出版社：高等教育出版社，出版时间：八月份）第一本：《英语大纲》1、考试说明2、附录一：参考试题（最新大纲样题）3、附录二：词汇表4、附录三：1）前缀后缀：跨国公司 Multinational,宏观经济学Macroeconomics,微电子Microelectronics,双语的bilingual,免税的duty-free2）常见国名：葡萄牙Portugal,葡萄牙人Portuguese，荷兰The Netherlands3）七大洲名：南极洲Antarctica, 大洋洲Oceania4）常见缩写：c/o=care of由···转交，cf.=confer参看，试比较5．附录四：最新三年真题（08-10年）第二本书《考试分析》1）考试说明2）六套考题：参考试题，最新五年真题（06-10）第三本书《大纲解析》二、考前冲刺：（一）攻克词汇：1、词汇书：2、软件：《新东方背单词》（5）3、记忆法：杨鹏《17天搞定GRE词汇》（二）精研真题：1996-2010共15年1、词汇：没有一个词汇不认识2、选项：没有一个选项不了解3、句子结构：没有一个句子结构不清楚4、英译汉：阅读A节经典文章5、背诵：阅读A节经典文章（三）适当模考：2010年1月（考前务必模考三次）三、时间分配：1）2：00-2：15 小作文2）2：15-2：50 大作文3）2：50-4：00 阅读A节4）4：00-4：20 阅读B节5）4：20-4：40 阅读C节6）4：40-5：00 完形填空六字真经（1）四、写作学习：考研写作参考资料：王江涛的博客：/jtwang首页左侧：分类：考研复习：2010考研成绩交流贴《2011考研英语高分写作》（王江涛编著，群言出版社，2010年3月版）《仙之道长的考研写作课》（王江涛著，陕西师范大学出版社，2010年9月版）1、背诵：20大必背范文，滚瓜烂熟！脱口而出！多多益善！此处，讲到《高分写作》的P205，（十二）网络问题语言第一位、结构第二位、内容第三位：1）语言：两大评分标准（1）基本正确：及格分（2）丰富多变（词汇+句型）：高分2）结构：逻辑性（1）段落结构：总分总A.主题句：1句，改写提纲B.描述或论证：2-3句C.小结：1句（2）评分标准：A.关联词：小作文3-5个，大作文5-7个，适可而止B.同义替换：词汇+句型C.代词替换：it, that, they3）内容：论证充分（1）论点：首段尾句或二段首句以及末段首句（2）论据：（3）论证手段：高分作文三大要求：语言精彩、结构严谨、论证充分2、默写：仔细对比原文，发现写作弱点3、仿写：提高写作实力！很多题目反复重考：1）小作文A、道歉信（05年，08年真题）B、建议信（07年，08 年，09年真题）2）大作文考研写作六大必考话题：∙（1）健康：2考，96、97∙（2）两代关系：3考∙ 92、03、05∙（3）环境：4考∙ 91、99、00、09小∙（4）爱心：3考95、01、06小（5）文化：5考∙ A. 文化交流：02、10∙ B. 流行文化：93、06、09∙（6）青年面对社会：4考∙ 03、04、07、08第二节一、考研大作文框架结构：（讲义12页）3段，12句左右，160-250词，5-7个关联词，5-7个从句（多多益善）1、Introduction：第一段，3句左右1）图画/表作文：图画/表描述（1）General description：总体描述（人物+动作+环境或数据变化规律），1句（2）Details 1, 2, 3：细节描述（挖掘细节词，串联成句），1句（3）Caption/Symbolic meaning：文字说明或象征寓意，1句2007 2005Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET II. (20points)高分作文This picture reveals a not-uncommon phenomenon of how elders are treated by their grown-up children in some of the families in China. When they are too old to take care of themselves, the elders become burdens to be kicked around by their sons and daughters like a football, a pitiful and unjust sight that will arouse indignation among many Chinese.As a nation renowned in the world for many of its virtues, the Chinese people have been practicing filial piety throughout history. Many much-told stories reiterate this time-honored virtue of loving and respecting the elders, like the story of Ti Ying in the West Hart Dynasty who risked her life in order to save her wronged father from corporal punishment.Those who tried every means to avoid their duty of looking after their eiders should bear in mind that they are much indebted to their parents for their birth and growth. Without the loving care and unrelenting work of their parents, how could they have grown up healthy and successful? How could it possible for them to go about without the pricks of conscience?Everyone of us should live up to the virtues passed down to us by our ancestors. Only in this way can we be worthy of the name of a Chinese.2006高分作文The two photos show that people are enthusiastic about football stars such as the English football player Beckham. Some, like the young man in the photo, express their enthusiasm by writing his name on their faces, while others, like the one in the hair studio, spend as much as 300 yuan for a hair style modeling on that of Beckham.In fact, that kind of star-worshipping is not uncommon nowadays among the Chinese people. For example, the so-called "Super Girls" become fashionable almost overnight, with fans chasing after them in a kind of blind worship. It seems as if people are badly in need of someone to whom to pay their respect, and to realize their own aspirations of an immediate success or stardom.Famous football players won our favor and earned our respect by their hard work and excellent performance on the football field. What, then, deserves to be worshipped, their diligence and perseverance, or their hairstyle and ways of living? The answer seems self-evident: what we should learn is their spirit, not the superficial styles of living. Fashion is often short-lived, but the ever-lasting memory of a courageous, undaunted and skillful football player is what inspires us in our pursuit for better life and brighter future.2004Directions:2003温室花朵经不起风雨2008 20092）提纲/情景作文：现状说明（1）Background information：背景交代，1句（2）General talk of the topic：引出主题，1句（3）Thesis: state specifically what your opinion is：确立论点，1句大作文四大要素❝1）描述：第一段，图画描述❝2）象征寓意：1句，全文中心思想，首段尾句或二段首句，承上启下，画龙点睛❝3）分析：第二段，意义阐释❝4）评论：第三段，建议措施2、Body：第二段，意义阐释，5句左右1）Topic sentence：Symbolic meaning，主题句，象征寓意，1句2）Argument：论证，3句左右，考研写作四大论证手段（1）Cause and Effect：因果论证（这里提到的范文即上面07年真题的高分作文）高分作文As we can see from the picture, a football match is going on. On guarding the door, the left man seems to be keeping a "huge door" that is easy and inevitable for a goal, while the fight person hesitates to kick the ball with an illusion about the "huge door keeper". It is obvious that both of them exaggerate the difficulties in front of them.This photo does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon which is not uncommon in China now. The young always give up because the problem is beyond their ability to cope with. Superficially, it seems to be somewhat reasonable, but when weighing in the mind, we find there is an apparent tendency underlying this phenomenon: the lack of confidence. Firstly, it is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties. We can do nothing but face them. Secondly, attitude is the key point to take the first step. Assume bravery and confidence to solve the problem, you will find the question is not as "huge" as you imagine. Take us for example, the entrance exam for graduate students even seems to a horrible monster before us. Some people give up, some persist. So, with confidence and the fight assessment of the difficulties, try and exert your strength, and then we will overcome all problems.On the whole, I believe we young people should face the difficulties in right manner. And nothing is impossible, just do it.5.From the information given in the above column chart, we can see a striking contrast in mobile-phone subscriptions between developing and developed countries from 2000to2008. During this period, there has been a dramatic increase from 0.4 to 4 billion mobile phone subscriptions in developing countries, while that of developed countries remained steady under 1 billion during the decade.At least two fundamental factors could contribute to this phenomenon. On the one hand, with the rapid increase in economy happening in the developing countries, the telecommunication industry in those countries got a great bound to meet the demand of globalization. As a result, the user of mobile phone which can narrow the distance between people and link the whole world together rose at an incredible speed. On the other hand, the extremely advanced civilization of developed countries means less potential in many aspects including in the area of private telecommunication tools and their demand for further enlargement of such tools tend to saturation.In conclusion, while mobile phones subscriptions, if used carelessly or without restraint, could prove to be a double-edged sword, the fact remains that it is already extremely prevalent in both developing and developed countries and even today, continue rise in popularity. Given the levels of intelligence, prudence and discretion imbued in people, I am sure that most of them will be able to sidestep the potential drawbacks of mobile phones, while taking advantage of all its merits. （241 words）根据上述柱状图所提供的信息，我们可以看出从2000年到2008年，发展中国家和发达国家之间在手机入网方面存在着惊人的对比。
开放作文--高考精品班理科综合寒假特训班辅导《英语》第三章第一节讲义1
正保远程教育旗下品牌网站美国纽交所上市公司(NYSE:DL)中小学教育网高考精品班理科综合寒假特训班辅导《英语》第三章第一节讲义1开放作文特点、评分标准、写作思路、写作方法、基本类型特点:开放作文，是一种比情景作文限制较少的、留给考生自由发挥空间更多的考查考生书面表达能力的一种题型。
评分标准:文章是否扣题；内容是否充实、健康；思维是否活跃；逻辑是否清晰；语言是否规范；交际是否得体。
写作思路:1.确定情景；明确要求2.合理想象；自命主题3.量力而行；逻辑清晰4.自圆其说；规范语言写作方法:1.认真审题，即：审语境、审人称、审时态2.主次之分，详略得当；有细节支撑3.紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应，使文章有一定的完整性。
4.力求内容新颖，符合逻辑5.思想健康，积极向上6.字数符合要求，不少于50字。
不要过多（罗嗦）或太少（意思不清），基本类型:1. 逻辑性思维：根据结果，给出原因例根据下面提供的情景，写一段接续文字。
You and your friend are in your room. He finds one of the windows is broken and says, “Your window is broken. What happened?” You tell him what happened. ____________ 【审题】人称：第一、第三人称时态：一般过去时写作内容：描述发生的事件Possible version:I guess it was all my fault. My mother was doing some reading by the window yesterday, and she asked me to get a book from the bookshelf for her. It was a hardcover and a little thick. I got the book and decided to throw it to her. But she missed it, and it broke the window.2. 聚集性思维1）根据语境陈述计划、打算例根据下面提供的情景，写一段接续文字，词数不少于50。