高考英语广东卷基础写作指南
近五年高考英语广东卷基础写作解读
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高考基础 写作命题解读
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１ 近 ５年基础写作命题 总结。 ． 年份 ４
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（９ １）建设 文明校 园 ；
（０ ２ ）快乐 的秘诀就是 ：记住美好的时光；
（１ ２）对大学 的选择情况 ；
（２ ２ ）专家呼吁限制垃圾食品广告 ；
（３ ２ ）高中生梦想的调查 。
二 、高考基础写作范文解读
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见 说 明文 和应用 文是近 年高考 的宠儿 。笔者认 为这 两 种文体 深受命 题者 的青 睐是 有一定道 理 的。说 明 文有 着条 理清 晰 ，层次分 明 的特 点 ，而应用文 则符 合 了语言作 为交 际载体 的要求 。在笔者 看来这 两类
广东高考英语基础写作指导
广东高考英语卷写作指导第一讲记叙文：如何写人一、写作指导高考英语基础写作中的写人偏重人物的介绍，可以用第一人称(如写求职信)，也可以用第三人称，时态常常常利用一般此刻时和一般过去时，具体的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来肯定。
写作进程中要注意以下几个方面的问题：1．人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面，但英语基础写作需要严格依照写作要求来写，包括所给的全数信息点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。
2．对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点信息。
重点信息一般是写作的目的所在，比如求职要重点突出学历、经历，新闻报导要重点突出事迹，介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点，等等。
3．正确运用描述人物的辞汇和句型。
4．注意运用正确的时态。
描述人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常常利用一般此刻时，而描述人物的诞生、教育背景、经历、事迹常常利用一般过去时。
二、常常利用词语外貌特征：beautiful, big nose, black eyes，fat, good-looking，handsome, healthy, near-sighted，ordinary-looking，pretty，short，strong, tall，thin, with a big nose, with a big smile, white-haired，metres tall, etc.性格特点：absent-minded, attractive，bad-tempered，be ready to help others, bright，charming，confident, diligent，friendly, generous, have a good temper, humorous，independent,kind, kind-hearted，lazy，narrow-minded, naughty，patient，think of others, smart，talkative，warm-hearted，wise，etc.诞生年龄：a twenty-five-year-old young man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 20, be born on Fe bruary 12th, 1987 , during his childhood, in one’s fifties, live a happy/ hard life,spend his childhood in the countryside, the son of a poor family, when he was a small boy, etc.兴趣爱好：be angry with sb for sth, be angry about, be delighted in doing, be good at singing, be interested in English, be fond of music, be crazy about, be pleased with, be sick for, be sorry for, be strict in one’s work, be worried about, do well in his researchwork, ,enjoy doing, expect to do, feel surprised at, have a strong desire to do, lookforward to doing sth., long for (long to do), make rapid progress in, put one’s heartinto, take a pleasure in doing; wish to do, work hard at his studies, etc.教育背景：be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test，a master’s degree, get on well with one’s lessons, give sb. a passing grade, ，go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from Physics Department of Qinghua University, hisfather was very strict with him, lay a good foundation in English, major in history,receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, study hard at, take several courses at school, take an active part in classwhen at college, etc.经历事迹：become a member of the team, concentrate oneself to doing sth., devote oneselfto one’s business, do sth with great determination and perseverance, do research intothis field, encourage sb to do sth, fight for our revolutionary course, give up one’slife for sth, have a good way of doing sth, have a talent for language, make up one’s mind to do sth., overcome many difficulties, receive the Nobel Prize for physics,serve as nurse, set a new world record of 110 metre hurdling, try one’s best to dosth., win the first prize in the competition, win a gold /silver/ bronze medal, etc. 他人评价：an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by all his students, be honored as, be considered as, be famous/known as, be regarded as, his hard work brought him great success, make great contributions to our country, one of the most important persons in the past ten years, consider sb. as a genius, considersb. as the greatest leader, set a good example for all of us, speak highly of him, etc.参考范文：Dear Manager，I am writing you a letter in order to apply for a position in your company. My name is Li Hua and I was born in Foshan City of Guangdong Province in August 1981. I studied in Foshan No. 1 Middle School from 1994 - 2000, and then I cameto study in the Computer Department of Guangzhou University for four studiedcomputer science, Chinese, maths, English, ,and now I am working for a computer company. I like pop music and swimming very much, and I once won the first prize for swimming in the school competition.I am waiting for your reply.Thank youYours TruelyLi Hua参考例文：Hi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang. Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980, is a world famous basketball player.He is now one of the best players in Team Rocket in NBA, and he has been in All-Star Team for several times. Liu Xiang, who was also born in Shanghai but threeyears younger than Yao Ming, is a world champion in the 110-metre hurdls. He wonthe first prize in the Athens Olympic Games and broke the world record soon afterthat. Both of them love music, but Yao Ming likes listening to pop music while Liu Xiang likes singing.参考范文1. Li Ming, the monitor of Class 1 Grade 2, is healthy and lively. She does well in all her subjects, and she is fond of sports, singing and dancing. When she came to school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the language, but with great efforts she made a lot of progress in her English language study. In 2021 she took part inthe National Physics Olympic Competition and won the first prize. Li Ming is verystrict with herself in her work and daily life,and is always ready to help other people.2．请按照下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。
广东英语高考之基础写作指导PPT文档53页
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广东英语高考之基础写作指导
51、没有哪个社会可以制订一部永远 适用的 宪法， 甚至一 条永远 适英 格索尔
53、人们通常会发现，法律就是这样 一种的 网，触 犯法律 的人， 小的可 以穿网 而过， 大的可 以破网 而出， 只有中 等的才 会坠入 网中。 ——申 斯通 54、法律就是法律它是一座雄伟的大 夏，庇 护着我 们大家 ；它的 每一块 砖石都 垒在另 一块砖 石上。 ——高 尔斯华 绥 55、今天的法律未必明天仍是法律。 ——罗·伯顿
广东高考英语写作技巧方法课件
一. 基础写作基本要求
I. 基础写作考我们什么能力? A. 信息处理或整理的能力;[如:信息之间 能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后顺序等] B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确 性和合适性] C. 连句成文能力;[信息内容的完整性和连贯性]
如何处理或整理信息? 1. 存在问题 (1) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency and the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists， especially to the older people….
(He had a high fever and went to see the doctor.)
(3)
I am quite satisfied with the travel agency, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic, he could concern old men in our group. 错误诊断： ‘‘一逗到底”的中式英语表达 导致信息表达出现问题，不能用多个简单句表 达多个不同类型的信息内容。 I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old men in our group.
人们对学生网上交友持不同意见.请你用 如何 思 英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文,介 整理 考 信息? 绍人们的不同观点,并表达自己的看法. 赞成的理由 反对的理由
广东高考英语 第二章 基础写作解题技巧分析与演练
措 施：张贴禁烟标志 相关数据： （1）吸烟人数：约3.5亿 （2）分 布：男性75％；女性：25％ （3）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿 （4）因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万/年
﹡二手烟：second-hand smoke 【写作内容】 请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一 篇通讯，内容包括：
1. 禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范 围； 2. 目标和措施； 3. 相关数据。 【写作要求】 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。 【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章 结构连贯。（说明：为节省篇幅，因 【写作要求】和【评分标准】都是相 同的，以后各篇都省略了）
2．明白写作要求： 评分 原因 标准 语言 体现考生的英 规范 语基本功，为 分档主要依据 内容 体现考生的审 合适 题能力，为得 分重点 层次 体现考生对文章 清晰 脉络、行文方向
的整体把握
对应策略
使用高级词汇、 复杂句、从句等
全面体现 内容 先构思文 章骨架 列 出 写 作 提 纲
2．明白写作要求： 评分 原因 标准 卷面 体现考生思路 整洁 清晰，给阅卷 人留下好印象 句数 只能用5句话来 适当 表达题目所给 的全部信息点 对应策略 思考成熟再下笔
第四句 第五句
因二手烟死亡人数： 超过10万/年。
3. 译写单句巧用词。 翻译五个信息点时，注意组合每个信 息点成一句话，考虑语法使用（如：使用 何种人称和时态？——用一般现在时描述 现状；介绍实施禁烟不需涉及其它人称， 用第三人称）、主要词汇和短语（carry out，since，sign，recently，take up， influence，because of）。具体如下： (1) Our country has decided to carry out the policy to prevent smoking in public buildings all over the country since January 1st, 2011.
广东高考英语基础写作技巧指导
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作步骤：
第1步 审题
1 体裁格式 2 内容 3 人称、时态 4 信息点的整
合和排列
写信 描述高三学生现状。 第一人称。一般现在时。
6项
第2步 整合信息, 译成英语。
1) 每天在校时间约10小时。每天完成作 业时间3～4小时。
Every day we stay at school for about ten hours to have lessons. We spend at least three to four hours doing our homework. 2) 每天几乎没有时间娱乐、消遣。
2、如何做到句式灵活？ 1)并列句 2)复合句
(定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句) 3)强调句型 4)非谓语动词 5)倒装句 6)其他句型及结构
Ex:按要求改写下列句子。
1) English is widely used in the world. Most business letters are written in English. (合并为并列句)
5) (合并为定语从句)
6) July 11, when Zheng He began his famous voyage, has been named the Sailing Day in our country since 2005.
5) I will not be able to meet you at the airport. I have some experiments to do that day.(合并为状语从句)
a. We hardly have any time for relaxation.
广东省高考英语写作技巧和范文
高三英语写作指导资料——“读写任务”专题指导一、常用文章开头、睁开及结尾的句式：1. Summary:1).In this passage, the writer (author) explains/writes about......2).The passage/article points out/presents/states/compares/introduces/mainlytells us......3).We can learn from the passage that......4).The passage tells us a story of......, who........ Through the story,theauthor presents an idea that...... (记述＋寓意)5).As can be learned from the passage,6).The passage compares the benefits of A with B. Some argue in support of A,believing that..., while others prefer B, stating that......（谈论文）7).The writer sets some examples to tell us2.过渡句：1).I can’t agree more with the author.2).I agree with what is presented above.3).The view sounds right /reasonable but it is hardly practical.（谈论文）4).Personally, I prefer ......5).Different people have different opinions on this point.Some...,.. Others.....（两种看法）6). In my opinion, it is right for sb. to do......7). This story reminds me of an accident that I witnessed.8). Another example that jumps into my mind is......9).I have a similar (the same) experience.10).What Peter did reminds me of a story that happened two years ago.（记述文）3.结束段（句）：1).In conclusion/short/brief,...2).As is stated above, sth.has both advantages and disadvantages.My opinion isthat...（响应文章主题或标题）3).In a word, we have to strike/achieve a balance between A and B.Only if/when/after/by/in......, can we do......4).From what has been discussed above, we may safely （讨论两种事物经常用）draw the conclusion that...5).Taking all the above-mentioned factors into consideration， ..4.解题技巧：A. 标题：一般要有， 07 高考写信无法再拟标题。
广东高考英语科读写任务写作指导
广东高考英语科读写任务写作指导常见的，也是老师比较容易接受的结构安排是四段式（开头概括，中间两段，加总结），中间写两段是为了清晰地向阅卷老师表明题目给你的要求你都写了。
其实本来是三段，只是为了“捞分”，补上一句总结做末段，顺便show 一下漂亮表达。
一．第一段1．引入As is mentioned in the passage,…According to the author / article / passage,…(当下文又要用As isknown to us all,…时，为避免重复可换这个表达)2．概括内容说明文，抓住关键句稍做改动就可以，一般是每段的首句或尾句。
议论文，只需在论点和简要原因上灵活变化就行。
注意：议论文的要点归纳，假如文章中没有其他的论点和中心，可以出现作者论证其观点的例子。
记叙文，记叙文的总结必须体现与议论文不同的一点：只把故事的主要情节简述一遍，不理会其他枝节，直奔主题。
也就是说，我们只要“写与自己的文章主体内容中心一致的情节”！二．第二，三段（一）第二段开头（1）议论文的第二段开头承接：当材料中作者旗帜鲜明时，接下来就作者观点阐述自己的看法，那么，可以在第二段开头这样写：As far as I’m concerned, what the author said / mentioned above is true. 表赞同时还可以用：From where I stand, I couldn’t agree more with the author’s opinion. 或In my conception / From my perspective, I am in favor of the author’s opinion.“从我的角度/观点，我十分同意作者的观点”。
当材料中出现两种看法时，或者前面有出现“一些人这样想，一些人那样想”，接下来就几种观点阐述自己看法时，可以这样写：As far as I’m concerned, the former / latter view is true. 如Some people have the idea that …..Other people, however, think it better to….. As far as I’m conce rned, the former view does sound true.(2) 记叙文的第二段开头承接：“What the author mentioned above reminds me of one of my personal experience / my friend’s experience…)用于联系自己亲身经历或他人经历。
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2008年高考英语基础写作指导第一讲记叙文：如何写人一、写作指导高考英语基础写作中的写人侧重人物的介绍，可以用第一人称(如写求职信)，也可以用第三人称，时态常常用一般现在时和一般过去时，具体的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来确定。
写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题：1．人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面，但英语基础写作需要严格按照写作要求来写，包括所给的全部信息点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。
2．对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点信息。
重点信息通常是写作的目的所在，比如求职要重点突出学历、经历，新闻报道要重点突出事迹，介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点，等等。
3．正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。
4．注意运用正确的时态。
描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。
二、常用词语外貌特征：beautiful, big nose, black eyes，fat, good-looking，handsome, healthy, near -sighted，ordinary-looking，pretty，short，strong, tall，thin, with a big nose, with a big smile, white-haired，1.80 metres tall, etc.性格特点：absent-minded, attractive，bad-tempered，be ready to help others, bright，c harming，confident, diligent，friendly, generous, have a good temper, humorous，independe nt, kind, kind-hearted，lazy，narrow-minded, naughty，patient，think of others, smart，tal kative，warm-hearted，wise，etc.出生年龄：a twenty-five-year-old young man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 20, be b orn on February 12th, 1987 , durin g his childhood, in one’s fifties, live a happy/ hard life, spend his childhood in the countryside, the son of a poor family, when he was a small boy, etc.兴趣爱好：be angry with sb for sth, be angry about, be delighted in doing, be good at singing, be interested in English, be fond of music, be crazy about, be pleased with, b e sick for, be sorry for, be strict in one’s work, be worried about, do well in his researc h work, ,enjoy doing, expect to do, feel surprised at, have a strong desire to do, look for ward to doing sth., long for (long to do), make rapid progress in, put one’s heart into, ta ke a pleasure in doing; wish to do, work hard at his studies, etc.教育背景：be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test, get a m aster’s degree, get on well with one’s lessons, give sb. a passing grade, go abroad to furt her one’s study, graduate from Physics Department of Qinghua University, his father was very strict with him, lay a good foundation in English, major in history, receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, study hard at, take several courses at school, take an activ e part in class，when at college, etc.经历事迹：become a member of the team, concentrate oneself to doing sth., devote oneself to one’s business, do sth with great determination and perseverance, do research in to this field, encourage sb to do sth, fight for our revolutionary course, give up one’s life for sth, have a good wa y of doing sth, have a talent for language, make up one’s mind to do sth., overcome many difficulties, receive the Nobel Prize for physics, serve as nurs e, set a new world record of 110 metre hurdling, try one’s best to do sth., win the first prize in the competition, win a gold /silver/ bronze medal, etc.他人评价：an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by all his students, be honored as, be considered as, be famous/known as, be regarded as, his hard work brought him great success, make great contributions to our country, one of th e most important persons in the past ten years, consider sb. as a genius, consider sb. as t he greatest leader, set a good example for all of us, speak highly of him, etc.三、实例分析【例1】李华自我介绍假设你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作，你需要用英文给人事部经理写一封信，介绍1．简介必须包括以上全部内容（信的开头和结尾已经写好）；2．使用5个句子。
Dear Manager,.I am waiting for your reply.Thank you.Yours Truly,Li HuaDear Manager,I am writing you a letter in order to apply for a position in your company. My name is Li Hua and I was born in Foshan City of Guangdong Province in August 1981.I studied in Foshan No. 1 Middle School from 1994 - 2000, and then I came to study in the Computer Department of Guangzhou University for four years. I studied computer sci ence, Chinese, maths, English, P.E, and now I am working for a computer company. I lik e pop music and swimming very much, and I once won the first prize for swimming in t he school competition.I am waiting for your reply.Thank you.Yours Truly,Li Hua【例2】介绍姚明和刘翔假设你是李华，正在美国参加学习，课堂上老师要求你简要介绍我国的名人，你选择了1． 简介必须包括以上全部内容（开头已经为你写好）；2． 使用5个句子。
3． 参考词汇：火箭队 Rocket ， 110米栏110-metre hurdling ，雅典奥运会——the Athens Olympic GamesHi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu X iang._______________________________________________________________________ ____________That’s all. Thank you!参考例文：Hi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu X iang. Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980, is a world famous basketball player. He is no w one of the best players in Team Rocket in NBA, and he has been in All-Star Team fo r several times. Liu Xiang, who was also born in Shanghai but three years younger than Yao Ming, is a world champion in the 110-metre hurdls. He won the first prize in the At hens Olympic Games and broke the world record soon after that. Both of them love musi c, but Yao Ming likes listening to popmusic whilst Liu Xiang likes singing.四、即时练习1. 介绍同学假设你是李华，学校网站英文版通讯员，最近学校网站准备宣传一些优秀学生，请你用英文为李敏同学写一篇简介，李敏同学的基本情况如下：1．简介必须包括以上全部内容；2．版面有限，只能使用5个句子。