英语四级作文PPT课件(含评分讲解2012)
Sample 5 It was the morning of April 6th, 2003. At about 7:30, I went to school by bike as usual. It was a rainy day and the road was slippery. On the way, I noticed a boy riding in front of me, talking loudly with his friends. He didn’t wear a raincoat; instead he held an umbrella in one hand, and rode with another hand. As he turned left to Guangming Road, he failed to see a car coming from behind a truck parked on the corner. Suddenly I heard a big noise and saw an umbrella thrown away. The boy was knocked down by the car. I was completely shocked. I think the boy’s absent-mindedness accounted much for the accident. He was talking all the time and dangerously used an umbrella while riding a bike. The weather also played a role in the tragedy. The third cause was the improperly parked truck, which was big enough to make the road conditions invisible to the students who were going to make a turn. All these contributed to this accident
二、 中间常用句式（扩展段的连接） 通常按重要程度排列，我们习惯于先说最重要的，西方人则 相反，但都得符合逻辑顺序。 1．表示“首先”first, firstly, first of all, to begin with 2．表示“第二”、“此外”“其次”、“况且”second, secondly, and, besides, moreover, additionally, furthermore, what’s more, in addition, besides+名词短语，in addition to+ 名词短语 3．表示 “最后”finally, last, lastly 4．表示 “最重要的是” above all, most important of all， 在跌降法里用last but not least 最后但并非最不重要的是。 5.表示“更严重的是”、“更糟糕的是” more serious, even worse, to make matter worse 6. 表示“最为严重的是”、“最糟糕的是”most serious of all, worst of all
例如： 1）First of all, 论据1. More importantly, 论据2. Most important of all, 论据3. In summary, 总结观点. 2) The advantages can be listed as follows：First, 好处1. Besides, 好处2. Most important of all, 好处3. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with,坏处1. To make matter worse,坏处 2. Worst of all,坏处3. 3）For one thing, 论据1. For another, 论据2. Last but not the least, 论据3. To conclude, 总结观点或 From above, we can predict that 预测. 4）First of all, 论据1。 Furthermore, 论据2。 Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论 据3。 A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。 或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
5．其他词语或句式：
1 ）用于 强调 ： after all, any way, in fact, indeed, apparently, clearly, obviously, especially, 2）用于对比：however, on one hand, on the other hand, in contrast, by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, instead, but, different from, 3）用于比较：similarly, likewise, like, in the same way, 4）用于列举：for example, for instance, such as, except (for) 5）表示时间：later, then, next, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, after that, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, after some time, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, presently, since, as soon as, afterwards, some time later, temporally, in the meanwhile, after a while, 6）用于解释：in other words, as a matter of fact, that is, 7) 用于让步：although, in spite of, despite, even though, even if, though, no matter how 8) 用于结果：consequently, thus, as a result, as a consequence, hence, so, therefore, accordingly 9) 其他：not only…but also…, as far as I am concerned, when it comes to…, in practice, in principle, another key aspect of…is…, it is true that…, what is more serious is…, there is no doubt that…,but it is a pity that…,but the trouble /problem/point is…
四、评分标准： 1．作文题满分为15分。 阅卷标准共人为五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。 2分-----条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错 误。 5分-------基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。 8分-------基本切题，表达思想比清楚，文字尚连贯，但语言错误较多。 11分-----切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分------切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上无语言错误。 阅卷人员根根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为某一分数文件次（如8分）相似，即定 为（8分）；若认为稍优或劣于该档次，则可加一分（9分）或减一分（7分），但不得加减 半分。 字数不足应酌情扣分：
第二 四级作文的结构 一、四级作文的段落基本结构： 二、全文(议论文)基本结构：
主题句 主题段
连接词
主题句（第1句）
扩展句（1到2句）
终结句（引出下文）
段 扩展句 落
过渡词
词 1
扩展段(1-2段)
2
连接词 过渡词 3
词 终结句 终结段
主题句（第1句）
扩展句
终结句（最后1句）
一、开头常用语式(主题段的引入)
As the proverb says… Many people believe that… It is generally believed that… It is well known that… No one can deny the fact that There are many arguments/opinions/views about
第一部分
第一、四级作文的评分标准和要求 一、考核要求： 1. 时间：30分钟 2. 字数：120词以上 （120－150） 3. 题型： 1）根据给出的段首句续写 2）根据中文提要作文 3）根据图表写作 4）书信写作 二、评分原则： 1. 大学英语考试的目的是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六 级教学要求，对作文的评分应以此要求为准则。 2. 大学英语考试作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的 印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。 3. 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作 文应表达题目所规定的内容,而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题,是 否充分表达思想,也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切地表达思想,也就是要考虑语言 上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。 4. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分,包括满分;该给低分的给低分,包括零分。一 名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。
英语四级作文PPT课件(含评分讲解2012)
at the morning, May1. Two children by bike went to school. A car is so fast, the streel. And the car
touched two children by bike, and the Traffic Accident has happened. One is touched so far way and the other is put down. Mary people come here, and they sent to two children who go to Hospiton. Wait a time, The ploiemen arriverd in the Accident place.
字数不足应酌情扣分：
少10字
少20字
少30字
少40字
少50字
少51字
累计字数
110－119
100－109
90－99
80－89
70－79
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五、 评分实例 Title： An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident
四级作文pptppt课件
五．2012年12月英语四级高分范文
Judging from the table, we can see that people’s income increases along with their education levels. Above all，the average college graduates earn much more than the typical high-school graduates.
二．写作的六项基本原则
1.长短句原则 长短句交错结合，在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释 主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候可以采用先短后长 的句群形式
2.主题句原则 主题句通常放在句首
3.阐述观点的一二三原则
To begin with,then,furthermore,finally
To start with,next,in addition to,finally
Judging from 是一个由现在分词转化而来的独立主格结构,在句子单独使用, 不受主语的影响.为文章添色不少，可以一下就吸引到阅卷者的注意力
The fact revealed by these data is obvious: a degree does bring distinctive financial benefits to its holders. But is it true that a degree alone can ensure a bright future? I don’t think so because, on the one hand, the financial value of high education depends heavily on what skills graduates can gain from it instead of the degree itself. After all, an employer only pays for your ability and performance, not for your certificate. On the other hand, the most valuable bless high education brings to graduates is the ability to learn quickly and efficiently. People received more education tend to keep lifelong learning habits after their graduation, which would help them gain more opportunities in their career path.
2012年英语四级作文范文ppt
The Power of Perseverance: A Journey toSuccessIn the journey of life, perseverance is often the key to unlocking success. This statement resonates deeply with me, as I believe that success is not merely the result of talent or intelligence, but rather a product of our determination and resilience in the face of challenges.As I reflect on my own life experiences, I remember a particularly challenging moment when I was preparing for the CET-4 exam. The language barrier was a significant hurdle, and the pressure to perform well was immense. However, it was my perseverance that helped me overcome these obstacles. I committed myself to regular practice, dedicating hours each day to improving my language skills.I persevered despite the setbacks and failures, learning from each mistake and using it as a stepping stone to success.The power of perseverance is further exemplified by the stories of successful individuals from diverse fields. Whether it's a sports champion who trains relentlessly to achieve excellence, or a scientist who spends yearsconducting research to make a groundbreaking discovery, they all share a common trait: perseverance. They understand that success does not come easily, and that it requires hard work, dedication, and the ability to stay focused in the face of adversity.Moreover, perseverance instills in us a sense of purpose and direction. When we persevere, we are morelikely to set clear goals and work towards them with determination. This focus and clarity give us a sense of control over our own destiny, allowing us to shape our future according to our vision and aspirations.However, it's important to note that perseverance does not mean stubbornly sticking to one path regardless of obstacles. Instead, it involves a flexible and adaptive approach, where we are willing to learn from our mistakes, reevaluate our goals, and adjust our strategies as needed. This balance between perseverance and flexibility iscrucial for sustained success.In conclusion, perseverance is a critical component of success. It is the driving force that propels us forward in the face of challenges, helps us learn from our mistakes,and enables us to achieve our goals. As we embark on our respective journeys, let us remember that with perseverance, no dream is too big, and no goal is unattainable.**毅力的力量：通往成功的旅程**在人生的旅途中，毅力常常是通往成功的关键。
大学英语四级作文(共23张PPT)
6) 不要千篇一律使用主动句，适当运用被动句。如：
“我们应该更多的为那些不跟子女住在一起的老人着想。”
We should think more about the old people who live apart from their kids.
Even ten wild horses cannot drag back him from his looking forward
to the summer vacation. [Overstatement （夸张）修辞]
13）表示原因时少使用“due to, owing to” 更不建议尔等写出
★★ 比较以下（并掌握后一种）表达方式：
1)越来越多的中国家庭开始拥有私家车了。
“More and more Chinese families begin to own private cars.”
“An increasing number of Chinese families begin to own private cars.”
地道英语，但绝对不要多用滥用！) 此外，大学陆续学到的critical, crucial, paramount, significant, vital, 以
及先前掌握的be of (great) importance, necessary等等都是用来替代 “important”这一单调词汇的！
15）如要用“不仅……而且……”不要只用not only ... but also…， 学会使用其它表达方式：
英语四级范文ppt
英语四级范文pptTitle: The Importance of Learning EnglishGood morning, everyone. Today, I would like to talk to you about the importance of learning English.First of all, English is the most widely spoken language in the world. It is the official language of 54 countries and is spoken by over 1.5 billion people. Therefore, learning English can greatly expand our opportunities for communication and connection with people from different cultures and backgrounds.Secondly, English is the language of business and commerce. In today's global economy, English is the dominant language used in international business and trade. Proficiency in English can open up new career opportunities and enhance our ability to compete in the global marketplace.Additionally, English is the language of science and technology. Many of the world's top scientific journals and research papers are published in English. By masteringEnglish, we can access the latest developments in various fields and contribute to the advancement of human knowledge.Furthermore, English is the key to accessing a wealth of information and knowledge. The majority of the world's academic and educational resources are available in English. By learning English, we can broaden our intellectual horizons and gain access to a wide range of literature, art, and cultural heritage.In conclusion, learning English is essential in today's interconnected world. It opens doors to new opportunities, facilitates communication and understanding, and allows usto engage with the global community. Therefore, I strongly encourage everyone to prioritize the learning of Englishand take advantage of the many benefits it offers.中文：大家早上好。
大学英语四级写作完整ppt课件
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如何结尾？——你的看法和打算
• 我的看法和打算 (结论)
基本结构： Your thought + The meaning of your choice 例：我认为应该举办英语口试 + 这么做的意义何在
In my opinion, a test of spoken English will do more good than harm. Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society. Whether I take the test or not, I shall spare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study.
• 11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 • 14分——切题。表达思想清楚，内容丰富，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本
上无语言错误。
• 另外，字数不足，也酌情扣分，如累计字数为110－119扣1分，100－ 109扣2分，90—99扣3分，70－79扣5分，50－59扣7分，少于49扣9分。 累计字数不包括题目中给出的主题句、起始句和结尾句中的字数。
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具体评分标准如下：
• 0分 —— 白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而思想无法 表达。
• 2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误， 且多为严重错误。
四级写作全方位讲解啊有例句模板历年的作文范例ppt课件
Sample writing
The Effects of Exercise on Our Health 1. 分析体育锻炼给我们带来的益处。 2. 分析体育锻炼给我们带来的坏处。 3. 给出如何参加体育锻炼的建议。
Reference model
The Effects of Exercise on Our Health
Reference Model (3)
which are quite misleading. Finally, new technical inventions do not necessarily lead to progress in learning. Diligence is always the decisive factor, because “There is no royal road to learning”.
• The biggest advantage of …. What’s more….
• However, the negative effects are obvious. To begin with, …. In the second place,…. Finally,….
• Up until now, we can see it clearly that…. The key lies in the user--- so long as we can make proper use of it, it can be most helpful to us in many respects.
1) As is known to all, exercise does bring a lot of benefits to our health. 2) First, it can greatly strengthen our hearts, lungs, bones and muscles, thereby changing our whole health for the better. 3) Besides, it can make our brains better able to react to what is going on around us. 4) And best of all, it can help us breed optimism about our tough life.
英语四级写作PPT讲解
Body
02
Provide detailed information and examples to support
your main idea or argument.
Conclusion
03
Wrap up your paragraph with a clear conclusion that
summarizes your maபைடு நூலகம்n points.
Explaining a concept, idea, or process in a clear and organized way, often with examples and explanations.
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Writing skills
Question review skills
Understand the question
Subject-verb agreement
The subject and verb must agree in number. For example, "The cat is sitting on the mat" (not "are").
Verb tense
The verb tense must be appropriate for the context. For example, "I walked to the store yesterday" (not "will walk").
Common question types
Composition writing
Summary writing
Writing a complete composition on a given topic, usually with a specific structure and format.
METS4(医护英语考试四级)作文练习ppt课件
• Several points should be noted when providing postoperative care to those patients.
In brief, desirable postoperative nursing care, along with active collaboration of the patients' families and friends, is indispensable in achieving successful outcomes with operative treatment of the cancer patients.
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METS IV
Writing
Exe. 1
• You are observing a physical examination of a patient with a suspected heart problem.
• Read the information in the following patient notes and write a case report.
Several points should be noted when providing postoperative care to those patients. Firstly, by strictly following the doctor's instructions, we nursing staff offer routine nursing care or intensive care, and take charge of observing and recording vital sign data, including blood pressure, body temperature, pulse rate and respiration rate. Secondly, psychological care for these cancer patients, such as great compassion, patience and understanding, is crucial to the management of their mental stress. Thirdly, we are also expected to tell the patients some information on how to follow proper diet and exercise plans beneficial to their recovery.
2012年英语四级作文范文ppt
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