考研英语作文经典范文(社会热点)

一、低碳和环保

高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。

This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life. Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all. Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon. This deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development. According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4. 71 kilogram each month。

To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life. We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy.All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。

佳作妙译

如上图生动地展示，一个小男孩正在沙发上舒适地睡觉，电视还开着。这时候妈妈走过来帮他关了电视，责怪小男孩又忘了关电视。

这种现象在我们的生活中随处可见。很多人习惯于做什么事情都开着电视，实际上并不看。这种习惯会导致电力和能源的浪费，这会导致碳排放。这偏离了流行的“低碳生活”的理念。低碳生活是指，减少碳，尤其是二氧化碳的排放，以保护环境，实现可持续发展。根据统计数据，如果我们每天把开电视的时间减少一小时，则每个月可以减少4. 17千克的碳排放量。

作为对地球负责任的管理者，我们必须在公众中推广并普及低碳的生活方式，从日常生活中的每个细节开始。我们必须要改变为了获得短期的快速经济发展，牺牲长期的环境健康的做法，转向发展绿色经济、循环经济以及低碳经济。所有这些有效的措施可以帮助我们实现社会发展和自然有序发展之间的和谐。

名师点评

① is sleeping soundly: 熟睡，也可以表达为 A boy is fast asleep。“soundly and comfortably”这类副词的加入，使得描述更生动活泼，而不是单调的主谓宾。

② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。

该句主干结构是：A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television。

这个句型的含义是：一件事情正在发生(正在睡觉)，突然发生了另一件事(妈妈来关电视)。

“with the television on”： with 引导的伴随结构，即A boy is sleeping, while the television is on. 也可以写成伴随状语A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。

“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”，这句是妈妈关电视的伴随动作，一边关电视，一边责怪孩子忘记关电视。

图画描述这句，写得越精彩越好，这句是先入为主的句子，也是阅卷老师重点看的句子。

③ are used to doing: 习惯于做某事，使用短语表达，地道准确。

④ to serve as respon sible stewards of the planet:这是2005年真题阅读中的原句，的文章里面的句型，引用的标准到位。

一般而言，环保类话题，都可以用这句话，引出第三段的个人评论。

历年真题是一座巨大的宝库，我们一定要充分利用，举一反三。

二、网络的利和弊

思路拓展

所有利弊型的文章，均可按照本范文提供的思路进行论述。例如，城市化的利和弊。大学扩招的利和弊等。

高分范文

Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online. Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①. It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。

The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows. On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience. For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on. On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③. For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating. Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。

In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time. On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided. Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work④。

佳作妙译

如图所示，图片中一个女孩正在网上问一个问题，来自于网友的答案差异太大了，以至于女孩很困惑到底该听谁的。很明显，人们面临困境的时候上网提问的现象已经成为一种时尚。

这幅图所隐含的意义可以阐释如下。一方面，因特网为我们提供了很大便利。例如，通过百度等搜索引擎键入一些命令、点击几下鼠标，我们就可以获得几乎各个领域的知识。另一方面，由于因特网上有海量的信息，很难区分好的信息和坏的信息。例如青少年可能会把错误的信息误认为是正确的，其结果是非常具有毁灭性的。网上的一些不健康信息也可能会给人们带来负面影响。

总之，一方面，充分利用因特网来提高效率，节约时间，这很重要。另一方面，应该采取有效的措施教育人们去排除网上不合适的甚至错误的数据，以免被误导。只有这样，网络才能更好地为我们的生活、学习和工作服务。

名师点评

② with an explosive amount of information on the Internet: 这是2004年真题阅读第一篇中的句型。

③ it can be difficult to tell good information from bad: 这是2003年真题阅读第一篇中的句型。可见，充分了解真题阅读，对于提高写作的帮助作用也很大。

④ Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work：倒装句。

倒装句的写法(部分倒装)：

原句：The net can better serve for our life, study and work only in this way。

only放在句首，把情态动词can和主语交换一下位置就写成了倒装句。

三、醉酒驾车和安全意识、社会责任

实际上，本文的内容和行文思路，不仅仅适用于醉酒驾车，还适用于所有关于安全事故和社会责任的图片话题。

例如，火灾、漏油事故、施工事故、违反交规等等一系列和安全或社会责任感相关的话题，都可以参考此文。

高分范文

What a scary and sensational scene it is! In the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler①, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car. What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country。

The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility. For one thing, consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities. Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice. So life is to be respected and awed②. It is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life, with a careless driving under the influence (DUI)③. For another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear social responsibility. We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we love and who love us. It is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and, may be, great living burden④。

In short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the authority to punish drunk drivers severely such as suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail. Besides, the mass media, such as TV, radio and website, should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility to reduce the rate of car accident。

佳作妙译

这是一幅多么可怕的触目惊心的场景啊！在这幅图中，烂醉如泥的司机正在马路上飞速行驶，车上还顶着一大瓶啤酒。这幅图所传达的意义，对我们国家的每一位成员，都具有现实和警醒的意义。

这幅栩栩如生的图画的深刻意义可以从安全意识和社会责任感两个角度阐释。一方面，安全意识应该是我首要重视的问题。生命是一次单程旅行：你不能经历两次生命。所以我们应该敬重生命、敬畏生命。由于醉酒驾车的疏忽而宣告任何一条生命的结束是残忍的、不人道的。另一方面，作为这个社会负责任的一员，我们每个人都应该去承担社会责任。我们不仅仅是为了自己活着，我们也为那些我们所爱的和爱我们的人活着。无论是声称司机的、还是受害者的生命不重要，都是不负责任的。因为这会给他们的家人和亲戚带来巨大的悲痛和沉重的生活负担。

简言之，官方应该制定立法措施严厉地惩罚醉酒驾车的司机，例如吊销驾照或进行监禁。立法措施势在必行。此外，电视、收音机、网站等大众传媒应该共同努力来提高公民的安全意识和责任感，以降低交通事故的发生率。

名师点评

① as drunken as a fiddler: 醉得像一个游荡者。实际上是一个比喻，相当于汉语中的烂醉如泥。用语非常形象生动，一个酩酊大醉的司机形象跃然纸上！

② Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice：非常富有哲理性，语言优美、地道。respected and awed: 敬重和敬畏，语言简洁、有力、到位。

③ DUI: 醉酒驾车，也可以写成：drunk driving。

④ leaving…:动词的ing形式作伴随状语。句型经典。

五、节约资源

关于节约能源的话题，都可以按照这个行文思路和语言模式进行展开。

高分范文

Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource. Actually, water resource is very limited and precious. It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①. Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。

However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②. For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users. Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others. In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③. Water resource is indispensable④ not only in our daily life but also in the industry and

agriculture. And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine w hat the world would be like⑤ when there is no more water。

Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥ this emergency, further measures still need to be taken. On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water. On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted. To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。

佳作妙译

水资源一度被误认为是一种无限的可再生资源，实际上，水资源是非常有限且宝贵的。有幸的是现在公众开始关注这一问题了。如图所示，一只可爱的快乐小猪存钱罐积攒着水龙头里流出的每一滴水，就像存钱一样。

然而，水资源短缺问题仍然威胁着全人类的生存和发展。浪费水的现象在日常生活中仍然随处可见。例如，经常有粗心大意者忘记关水龙头。更有甚者认为自己缴了水费就有权浪费，和他人无关。事实上，水资源不仅在生活中必不可少，在工农业生产中也是不可或缺的。水资源是全人类共同的财富，很难想象当没有水的时候世界会是什么样子。

虽然越来越多的人已经认识到了这种紧迫性，但是仍然要采取进一步的措施。从宏观层面上讲，全世界应该共同努力反对浪费水。从微观层面上讲，要进行广泛的宣传活动。比如在电视台播出关于如何节水的节目。节约用水就是存储幸福，只有节约用水才能为子孙后代存储更好的生活。

名师点评

① It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention: 来自于2005年阅读真题，原句是这样的：Fortunately, the White House is starting to pay attention。

历年真题是一座巨大的宝库，广大考生一定要学会充分利用这宝贵的资源！

② 第二段开头，用了一个转折词，也就是“起承转合”中的所谓的“转”，把这篇作文改造成了一篇社会问题型作文，也就是大家最擅长写的作文。

③ In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it: 倒装句，表语提前，句子倒装。

倒装句写法：

第一步：写正常原句：Water is so precious that we cannot afford to waste it。

第二步：表语precious提前。

第三步：主谓倒置，变成So precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it。

普通的so… that… 句型，也能被化腐朽为神奇，成为钻石加分句型！

④ indispensable: 不可或缺的，替换important的一个很好的词汇。

顺便讲一个英译汉的技巧：大家可以看到，在译文中，这句话被翻译两次：必不可少、不可或缺。

因为原文中出现了：not only… but also，所以这个单词被拆开翻译成了两个近义词，以使行文更加通顺。

⑤ what the world would be like：注意宾语从句必须用陈述语序。

⑥ become aware of: 意识到。意思和用法都等同于be conscious of。后边接词语。

⑦ 非常重要：一般而言，历年真题中谈到的正面话题，或者人生哲理类的文章，有可能题目要求会变成：

Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

(1) describe the drawing briefly,

(2) explain its intended meaning, and then

(3) support your view with an example/examples。

也就是第三段并非发表个人评论(建议措施)，而是举例，这时候就需要我们去调整一下文章的叙述方法。

这种情况下，我们可以把结尾段调整为：

Examples of people’s increasing awareness on saving water can easily be found anywhere in our life. On the macro level, the whole world is making a joint effort to fight against waste of water. On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, can be seen nearly anywhere and every day. In short, to store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。

这样的话，结尾段就从建议措施，变成了论证文章的示例。

可见，随机应变，对写好考研作文也很重要。

六、面对人生和社会：乐观和豁达高分范文

As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above, the sheep lives happily in an optimistic state of mind, ignoring the threat of a dark shade, because he believes that wh ere there is shadow, there is sunshine①. What is conveyed in the picture is both positive and illuminating。

As far as the purpose of the drawer is concerned, I think he intends to remind us of the importance of optimism. If the sheep in the cartoon feels anxious and pessimistic about the dark shade all day long, he can by no means have a comfortable and happy life. Examples like this are numerous, but I think the following one will be convincing enough. If there is half a cup of water, the pessimist may cry over it because they have only a half, while② the optimist may cheer for it because they still have a half. Obviously, they will have different perceptions and feelings③ toward the same life。

There is no denying that, most optimists have a high happiness index, which can hardly be experienced by pessimists. Therefore, we must read our life with a positive attitude. What’s more, the optimistic attitude can infect others strongly, meaning that we will find that all the friends around us are optimistic if we observe them in the same perspective. As a result, an atmosphere of optimism and happiness could be naturally set up.Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of Shelley, the

well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be fa r behind?”④

佳作妙译

上面的漫画清楚地表现出这只山羊不顾阴影的威胁仍然保持乐观，因为它相信有阴影的地方就一定有阳光。图片中反映的问题是积极的和富有启发性的。

我认为作者要表达的意义是要提醒我们保持乐观心态的重要性。如果漫画中的山羊终日悲观地生活在阴影中，它将永远无法获得舒适和幸福的生活。类似的例子千千万，但是我认为下面的例子就足够有说服力。如果这里有半杯水，悲观的人会抱怨只剩下半杯了，而乐观的人在庆幸还有半杯可以喝。显然，面对同样的生活，他们会有不同的感受。

毫无疑问，乐观者拥有更高的幸福指数，而悲观者永远也体会不到。因此我们必须以积极的态度面对生活。而且乐观的情绪能强烈地感染他人，这就意味着如果我们以乐观的视角面对周围的朋友们，他们也会同样地乐观。于是，乐观和幸福的气氛自然而然地就建立起来了。因此，让我们把著名诗人雪莱的名句铭记在心吧：冬天来了，春天还会远么？

名师点评

① where there is shadow, there is sunshine: 这句话读起来是不是很熟悉？

没错，它正是仿写了我们非常熟悉的谚语“Where there is a will, there is a way”：有志者，事竟成。

作者将这句话仿写得惟妙惟肖，可见作者对语言驾驭是何等的娴熟。

② while: 表示两种现象的对比、反差，常翻译成“而”。

③ perceptions and feelings: 近义词叠加。

近义词叠加也是一种向阅卷老师展示自己语言能力和词汇量的一种极为有效的手段。

翻译：只翻译出一种意思即可。即，这两个词合译为：感受。

④ Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”

全文的点睛之笔，堪称经典。

首先：keep sth. in mind 这个词组用得很地道。

其次：引用了雪莱的诗歌，表现出了深厚的文化底蕴。

第三：the famous line=“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”即后者为前者的同位语。

同位语的介入，使句子结构错落有致，层次分明，朗朗上口。

第四：著名诗句“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”淋漓尽致地诠释了乐观的生活态度。

实际上，历年真题的阅读中又何曾没有出现过这种模仿呢？广大考生可以去查阅2007年text 3中的最后一句：The financial fallout has begun, and the political fallout may not be far behind。

⑤ 非常重要：本题题目要求最后一段也可能会变成：

support your view with an example/examples。

这时候，我们可以把文章的结尾改写为：

Examples of optimistic attitude toward life can easily be found anywhere in our world. How would have Zhang Haidi, suffering from the high paraplegia, made such glowing achievements in life, without her strong mind and optimistic attitude? Facing the serious diseases and hardships in life, she did not choose to hold back.

Instead, she has been courageous and optimistic enough to defeat them. She has set an excellent example for us。

⑤ To eliminate the immoral behavior of…: 为了……。作目的状语。

八、城市交通

思维拓展

建议措施部分，还可以从如下角度提出：

呼吁政府：投资完善基础设施、继续坚持限行的制度。

倡导低碳出行：步行、骑自行车。

倡导理智选择城市：人全部拥挤在大城市带来的负面影响。

高分范文

How horrible the traffic is! The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street. In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street①. Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses. Instead, the street is filled with too many private cars。

Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays. With the number of private cars increasing②, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen. Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment. On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait. Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted on the road. On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars③ has increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。

Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam. Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars④ should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate. Secondly, public transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can have a smooth transportation。

佳作妙译

交通状况真是一团糟！这幅漫画描述了街上糟糕的交通堵塞的场景。实际上，交通堵塞严重到了一定程度，和其说这是一条拥挤的街道，还不如说这是一个停车场。焦急的乘客等不到数量稀少的公交车，而私家车却到处都是。

虽然这幅图有点夸张，但是当今这种现象并不罕见。私家车的增多必然产生大城市交通堵塞。大城市沉重的交通压力会给人民生活带来不便，也会对环境造成负面影响。一方面，一旦发生堵车，原来很近的路程似乎变得十分漫长，除了等没有别的办法，大量的宝贵时间被浪费在路上。另一方面，汽车排放的尾气更增加了环境的负担、导致了碳排放，这和低碳生活的理念相违背。

因此，应该采取有效措施缓解严重的交通堵塞问题。第一，通过提高税费限制私家车拥有率(保有量)。第二，应该鼓励和推广低碳的公交车、地铁等公共交通工具，以便我们拥有更顺畅的交通。

名师点评

① it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street: more of A than B的结构，通过字面可以理解成：更多的是A而不是B。

翻译的时候，往往翻译成：和其说是B，不如说是A。

反过来，当我们想用英语表达“和其……不如……”的时候，我们可以采用这个结构。

实际上，这个结构在历年真题阅读中曾多次出现。如2000年Text 3中的选项：Futurist poetry is more of a transient phenomenon than literature。

② With the number of private cars increasing: with 短语表伴随，翻译成“随着”。

③ exhausted gas emitted by cars: 其中emitted by cars是过去分词短语作后置定语。

相当于定语从句：gas which is emitted by cars(被汽车排放的尾气)。

写法：请参考《商业行贿》点评第①条。

④ taxes levied on the sales of private cars: 其中levied on the sales of private cars(针对私家车被征的税)，为过去分词做定语。写法：请参考《商业行贿》点评第①条。

九、科技和生活

科技和生活

思路点拨

图中描述的是武广高铁的开通，给城际交通带来了极大便利。表面上看，它反映的是城市和城市之间距离被“缩短”的问题，但是更深层次来讲，是科技带来了这一切，所以这幅图可以有两个切入点：城际交通、科技改变生活。本文作者选取了第二个角度为主要论述视角。

第一段：图画描述；第二段：两个角度论述科学技术是第一生产力；第三段：提出建议、展望未来。

名师点评

① reducing…, bringing…: 并列的两个现在分词短语作状语。

② Science and technology are the primary productive forces: 科学技术是第一生产力。这是任何一篇和科技相关的文章都可以用的万能句型。

③ a new engine: 一个新的引擎，这是一个形象的比喻，把科技对经济发展的动力表达得非常具体、形象。

涉及到科技、发展、环境等题目时，不可避免的就需要用到发展这个词，本文中“发展”，多次出现，作者采用了多样化的词汇：“development(n。)”，“progress (n。)”，“flourish(v。)”，“boom(v. /n. )”，“advance”。

这类词汇还有：“prosperous(adj。)”，“improve(v。)”等。

近义词的多种替换方式，使得文章在统一中富于变化。广大考生可以把这些词汇积累下来，使用到自己的写作中去，也能起到妙笔生花的效果。

④ 如果题目要求最后一段举例，则我们可以把文章的结尾改成例子：如手机、因特网等是如何提高了生活效率的。