美化英语句子表达的5条建议
美化英语句子表达的5条建议作者：沈静来源：《新东方英语》2014年第02期Express （表达）这个词很有意思：它的词根是 press，意思是“在某物之上加力”，可引申为“竭力争取”“极力劝说”“硬塞”“熨烫（衣物）”等含义；而它的前缀ex表示“出来，离开”。
综合起来，express这个词便是“表达”（看来表达是需要用力“压”出来的）。
在新东方学校教了十年英语，笔者对这个词充满了敬畏。
不管是上口语课还是上写作课，都是教学生把内心的东西表达出来。
想用英语表达自己，你需做到两点：第一是有话可说，有料可写；第二是说得合适，写得漂亮。
要做到这两点并不简单，要仔细琢磨，甚至是绞尽脑汁。
在你还不能做到下笔生花的阶段，请考虑think twice原则，即先粗略传意，后美化表达。
下面介绍5条美化英语句子表达的建议。
建议一：表达多样（Variety）所谓“表达多样”，指的是在一个句子或一个段落中，如果有多处要表达同一个意思，我们就可以通过换词语、换句型或两者结合的方法来做到表达多样化。
下面分别举例说明这三种方法。
方法1：换词语《华尔街日报》2012年11月8日报道：“咖啡公司、咖啡馆以及街边熟食店经常涨价，很少降价。
今年早些时候，星巴克在美国东北和西南大部分地区的许多饮料涨价大约1%。
出售当肯甜甜圈和佛吉斯咖啡的JM斯马克公司在2011年涨价23%。
”三个“涨价”，raise prices用它三回？且慢！“排比” 虽然好，但让读者怀疑你词汇贫乏就麻烦大了。
多样化表达走起！例 Coffee companies， cafes and corner delis often raise prices； they rarely cut them. Earlier this year， Starbucks increased the prices of many drinks by around 1% in much of the Northeast and Sunbelt （阳光地带，特指美国南部和西南部地区）. J.M. Smucker Co.， which sells packaged Dunkin‟ Donuts and Folgers coffee had hiked them by 23% in 2011.点评不难看出，多样化表达需要具备一定的词汇量。
你得知道raise、increase、hike都可以表示“提高”，否则上述好句子冥思苦想亦不可得。
方法2：换句型多样化表达不只体现在词汇的变化上，换个句型结构，句子也会闪亮。
以表达“在旧金山的唐人街，人们在过节的时候通常吃米饭和雪豆；新墨西哥州人国庆节会吃辣椒；夏威夷人过节的时候要吃顿大餐”为例。
这个例子好，各种“吃”！该如何表达？我们很容易想到eat和have，如果能想到take、wallow，估计着实不易。
其实，此处我们可以换个句型试试。
例 In the Chinatown section of San Francisco， rice and snow peas are a part of many holiday meals. In New Mexico， one might encounter chili peppers on the Fourth of July. In Hawaii， one popular way to celebrate a holiday is with a feast.点评第一个“吃”的表达为：“Sth. is a part of meals.”虽然简单，但很精彩、灵活。
第二个“吃”的表达为：“One encounters sth.”用“某人遭遇食物”来表达“吃”，很好玩吧！最后一个“吃”的表达为：“One way to do sth. is with a feast.”做某事的一个方式是来一顿大餐，其意昭然若揭。
方法3：换词语与换句型相结合如果词语与句型的变化搭配使用，英语句子将会焕发瑰丽的色彩。
例如，颜色经常被用来描述人的情绪或状态，猜一猜“红”“粉”“蓝”“绿”分别代表什么？稍作思考，就能得出这个句子：“Red means angry； pink means healthy； blue means sad；green means jealous.”虽然说这个句子表意清晰，但means重复的次数过多，显得单调。
如果我们think twice，可将其美化，得出下面这个例句。
例“Red with rage” describes anger；“in the pink” mean s to be in good health；“feeling blue” is a sad way to feel；“green with envy” indicates a jealous attitude.点评不难发现，英语中有一些习语刚好表达了颜色跟人的关系。
比如，red with rage （气得脸色发红）描述了愤怒的状态；in the pink （面色红润）描述了健康的样子；feeling blue （忧郁如蓝调）描述了悲伤的感觉；green with envy （嫉妒得脸色发青）描述了嫉妒的态度。
“代表”的表达也实现了多样化：describe、mean to be、indicate是在努力换词，而feeling blue is a sad way to feel是通过换句型表达同样的意思。
建议二：强化语气（Emphasis）当我们坦陈观点、表达反对、强烈建议或直抒不快时，我们可以采取加强语气的方法来美化表达。
下面介绍三种加强语气的方法。
方法1：借力表达所谓借力表达是指通过借助副词、短语、助词等来加强句子的语气，使得句子表达更有力度。
下面通过例句来具体体会。
例1 Our vicar is always raising money for one cause or another， but he has never managed to get enough money to have the church clock repaired.点评此句属于借助副词加强语气：在进行时be doing中加入了频度副词always，用于表示一种厌烦不满的情绪。
如果我们要用英语表达“秦始皇在中国历史上最具争议”，掌握了初级语法规则的人会不假思索地想到：“The First Emperor of the Qin Dynasty is the most controversial figure in Chinese history.”这个表达虽然准确，但还是建议大家think twice。
《新概念英语3》第23课中有这样一句：“No creature has received more praise and abuse than the common garden snail.”我们可以模仿这个句子来表达上面那句话。
例2 No other figure in Chinese history receives more praise and abuse than the First Emperor of the Qin Dynasty./No other figure in Chinese history is more controversial than the First Emperor of the Qin Dynasty.点评短语“no … more … than …”乃强化语气之利器！其精髓在于用比较级的形式表达出最高级的含义。
VOA在2012年10月19日报道：“科学家说携带疟疾病菌的蚊子凭自身是飞不了多远的，但是它们能且确实会搭乘人类所携带的行李进行长距离的旅行。
”如下是该英文句子。
例3 Scientists say malaria-carrying mosquitoes cannot travel far on their own. But the insects can， and do， catch rides in the belongings of people who travel.点评这个句子借助助词do来加强catch rides的语气，do可以翻译为“确实”。
方法2：采用倒装具有否定意义的副词及短语放在句首时，句子一般采用倒装。
请大家试着表达：“他们不仅勤奋，而且富有创造精神和发明精神。
”我们可以表达为：“They are not only industrious but they are creative and in ventive as well.”这里的“not only … but … as well”用得不错，但请think twice，这里还有进步的空间。
我们可将其美化为：例 Not only are they industrious， but they are creative and inventive as well.点评美化后的句子采用了倒装，加强了句子的语气。
方法3：使用双重否定句双重否定句可以加强肯定的语气。
比如，我们要表达：“当你初遇某人时，对他/她的外表做出反应是很正常的。
”我们可以用肯定句：“When you first meet someone， it is usual to react to his/her appearance.”我们也可以用双重否定来加强语气。
例 When you first meet someone， it is not unusual to react to his or her appearance.点评这个句子用not unusual替换了usual，语气强烈了很多。
建议三：言辞简洁（Conciseness）言辞简洁是写作的一个重要原则，我们可以通过省略重复部分、将从句变成短语、将短语变成单词来达到删繁从简的目的。
下面分别举例分析。
方法1：省略重复部分弗朗西斯·培根（Francis Bacon）在《论读书》（“Of Studies”）中提到：“有些书可以浅尝辄止；有些书可以狼吞虎咽；而有些书则需要细嚼慢咽，好好消化。
”完整的表达为：“Some books are to be tasted， others are to be swallowed，and some few are to be chewed and digested.”为保持言辞简洁，我们可以考虑将其精简，美化为下面这个句子。
例 Some books are to be tasted， others to be swallowed， and some few to be chewed and digested.点评这个句子省略了重复的be动词are。
美化英语句子表达的5条黄金法则分析
美化英语句子表达的5条黄金法则建议一：表达多样(Variety)所谓“表达多样”，指的是在一个句子或一个段落中，如有多处要表达同一个意思，我们就可以通过换词语、换句型或两者结合的方法来做到表达多样化。
下面分别举例说明这三种方法。
方法1：换词语《华尔街日报》( The Wall Street Journal) 2012 年11月8日报道：“咖啡公司、咖啡馆以及街边熟食店经常涨价，很少降价。
今年早些时候，星巴克在美国东北和西南大部分地区的许多饮料提价了大约1%。
出售当肯甜甜圈和佛吉斯咖啡的JM司马克公司在2011年提价23%。
”三个“涨价”，raise prices用它三回？且慢！“排比”虽然好，但让读者怀疑你“词汇贫乏”就麻烦大了。
多样化表达走起！例：Coffee companies, cafes, and corner delis often raise prices; they rarely cut them. Earlier this year, Starbucks increased the prices of many drinks by around 1% in much of the Northeast and Sunbelt (特指美国南部和西南部地区). J.M. Smucker Co., which sells package d Dunkin’ Donuts and Folgers coffee had hiked them by 23% in 2011.【点评】不难看出，多样化表达需要具备一定的词汇量。
你得知道raise、increase、hike都可以表示“提高”，否则上述好句子冥思苦想亦不可得。
方法2：换句型多样化表达不只体现在词汇的变化上，换个句型结构，句子也会闪亮。
以表达“在旧金山的唐人街，人们在过节的时候通常吃米饭和雪豆；新墨西哥州人国庆节会吃辣椒；夏威夷人过节的时候要吃顿大餐”为例。
英语作文优化句子的四种常用方法
[例12]我正在餐桌旁吃饭，一个人朝我 走了过来，那个人戴着一顶黑帽子。 [复杂] I was eating at the table when a man who was wearing a black hat came up to me. [简明] When I was eating at the table, a man wearing a black hat came up to me.
温馨提示: 需要注意的是，我们在写 作时，不要一味地追求复 杂句型，能简则简，能用 短语，就不用从句。在句 式多样的前提下，尽量做 到精练。
[例11]我到家后马上给他打电话。 [一般] After I got home, I called him at once.
[较好] After getting home, I called him at once.
运用 用连接词整合下列句子。 4.He works hard himself. He encourages us to work hard, too.
4. He not only works hard himself but also encourages us to work hard.
5.These glasses are very expensive. Please be careful with them. 5. Please be careful with the glasses, for they are very expensive.
11.I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest. It will be held on June 5.
英语作文句子才能润色一点
英语作文句子才能润色一点英文回答：Refining English Sentences for Enhanced Nuance.Introduction.Crafting precise and evocative sentences is crucial for effective English communication. By understanding the nuances of language and employing various techniques, writers can elevate their writing and convey ideas with greater clarity and impact. This essay will explore strategies to refine English sentences, enhancing their elegance and precision.Techniques for Sentence Refinement.1. Use Active Voice.Passive voice can weaken sentences by distancing thesubject from the action. By converting sentences to active voice, writers can emphasize the agent of the action and strengthen the sentence structure.Example:Passive: "The report was written by the committee."Active: "The committee wrote the report."2. Vary Sentence Structure.Monotonous sentence structure can bore readers. By alternating simple, compound, and complex sentences, writers can create a more engaging and dynamic flow.Example:Simple: "The dog barked."Compound: "The dog barked and wagged its tail."Complex: "Although the dog barked, the mailman continued walking."3. Eliminate Redundancies.Redundant words add unnecessary length and clutter to sentences. By identifying and removing unnecessary words, writers can achieve conciseness and precision.Example:Redundant: "The big, large tree towered over the forest."Concise: "The towering tree dominated the forest."4. Use Specific Nouns and Adjectives.Vague nouns and adjectives weaken sentences. By using specific and descriptive words, writers can evoke vivid images and convey meaning more clearly.Example:Vague: "The man walked."Specific: "The elderly man ambled down the cobblestone street."5. Employ Transitional Words and Phrases.Transitional words and phrases guide readers through a text, ensuring smooth and logical flow. By using these devices, writers can connect ideas and make transitions less abrupt.Example:"Furthermore""However""In contrast"6. Proofread for Clarity and Coherence.Thorough proofreading is essential for detecting errors and ensuring clarity. By carefully reviewing their writing, writers can identify and correct any ambiguities or inconsistencies.Conclusion.By mastering these techniques, writers can refine their English sentences to achieve greater precision, elegance, and impact. By employing active voice, varying sentence structure, eliminating redundancies, using specific nouns and adjectives, employing transitional words, and proofreading diligently, they can elevate their writing to new heights of sophistication.中文回答：英语句子润色之法。
高考英语作文美化攻略
Not only can travelling relax us, but also broaden our horizons.
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主动不如被动巧
We can borrow five books, and we can keep them for a month.
I couldn’t have made great progress in English without his help.
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陈述不如倒装妙
He didn’t come here until 5 pm.
Not until 5 pm. did he come here. It was not until 5 pm. that he came here.
Five books can be borrowed and they can be kept for a month.
The main problem now is how we can prevent this from happening again.
The main problem now is how this can be prevented from happening again.
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誊写规范不要少
一：肯定不如双否好
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二：陈述不如倒装妙
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三：主动不如被动巧
四：分词结构不能少
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肯定不如双否好
The postman comes on time every day.
The postman never fails to come on time.
英语中提建议句型
英语中提建议句型一、介绍在日常生活和工作中，我们经常需要向他人提出建议。
无论是在学习英语还是在实际交流中，学会如何提出建议是非常重要的。
本文将介绍一些常用的英语中提建议的句型，帮助你在各种场合下更流利地表达自己的建议。
二、表示建议的句型1. I suggest/recommend (that) + (someone) + (should) + 原形动词.例如：I suggest that you should take a break and relax.我建议你休息一下放松一下。
2. It's a good/wise idea to + 原形动词.例如：It's a wise idea to study in a quiet environment.在一个安静的环境里学习是个明智的选择。
3. You should + 原形动词.例如：You should practice speaking English every day.你应该每天练习说英语。
4. If I were you, I would + 原形动词.例如：If I were you, I would ask for help.如果我是你的话，我会寻求帮助。
5. How about/What about + 动名词/代词?例如：How about joining a study group?加入学习小组怎么样？6. Why don't you + 原形动词?例如：Why don't you try a new study method?为什么不尝试一种新的学习方法呢？7. Have you considered + 动名词/代词?例如：Have you considered listening to English podcasts?你考虑过听英语播客吗？8. It might be a good idea to + 原形动词.例如：It might be a good idea to review the vocabulary before the exam.在考试前复习词汇可能是个不错的主意。
提建议的句型英语
提建议的句型英语提出建议是人们日常生活中常用的语言交际方式，是人们在沟通中表达个人知识、想法和建议的重要途径，也是有效地影响别人的有效方式之一。
要提出有效的建议，首先要掌握英语的建议句型，而且要能够有条理地要求表达建议，才能让对方感受到你的言辞有效性，让他们明白你的观点，表达出你的认知和能力。
一、提出建议的句型1、Why don’t you…?示提出建议，相当于“你要不要……？”，表示一种友好的暗示，例如：Why don’t you have a rest? 你要不要休息一下？2、Why not…？示提出建议，也表示一种友好的暗示，例如：Why not go to the park together?不要一起去公园玩？3、You’d better…示提出建议，表示一种亲切的建议，例如： You’d better take a taxi. 你最好坐出租车。
4、Why not try…？示提出建议，表示一种试错的建议，例如： Why not try a different approach? 你要不要试试不同的方法？5、I think you should…示提出建议，表示一种建议，例如：I think you should spend more time with your family.认为你应该和家人多花些时间。
6、I suggest that you…也是表示提出建议，例如：I suggest that you get some help.建议你寻求一些帮助。
7、It would be a good idea if you…示提出建议，表示一种肯定的建议，例如：It would be a good idea if you took some time off.果你抽空休息会是个好主意。
二、提出建议的句子1、Why don’t you take a break and get some fresh air? 你要不要休息会儿，到外面呼吸点新鲜空气？2、Why not take some time off and relax?不要抽出些时间去放松一下？3、You’d better go and see a doctor if your condition doesn’t improve.果你的情况没有好转，最好去看医生。
3点雅思写作漂亮的建议
3点雅思写作漂亮的建议雅思写作如何能够取得高分，不仅仅是平常的积累和训练，还需要关键时刻用上美丽句子使文章变美丽，今日我给大家带来了3点雅思写作美丽的建议，盼望可以关心到大家，下面我就和大家共享，来观赏一下吧。
3点雅思写作美丽的建议干货速取雅思写作美丽建议一：避开空洞的单词和词组1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。
比如：When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion。
这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。
完全可以去掉。
改为：Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents。
2.有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time。
“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents,they did not have the options that young people have now。
雅思写作美丽建议二：避开重复1.尽量避开重复使用同样的词汇。
高考英语作文-句子美化
二、如何使用较多的语法结构 1．为了达到简洁的目的，我们常常用短语来代替 句子。这其中包括： (1)不定式短语 You are so kind that you help me. →You are so kind as to help me. →It’s so kind of you to help me. (2)过去分词短语 The teacher walked out of the lab and some
(4)Why did she turn a deaf ear to what I said?
置若罔闻、不理睬
语言是文化的载体，习语又是语言的精华。恰当 地使用它，会给文章增色，加强文章的感染力， 从而引人入胜。
6．引用谚语。 和汉语一样，英语中也有大量谚语。 若能在写作中恰当运用，会给文章增色不少。
(同义词don't know)
(3)We will _t_a_k_e_ the matter _i_n_t_o_a__c_c_o_u_n__t_____
(同义词consider)
/consideration
(4) He _i_s_f_o_n_d__o_f__ music so much that he
【体验写作】 Ⅰ.用更贴切的词来k代in替d-画he线ar的te词d 1．Terry is such a good boy that every
student wants to get along with him. 2．It is freceozlidng this winter. A drop of water will freeze in no time. 3．He is a hunmicoerousstudent. He often makes
树作文之学会美化英语书面表达中的句子
学会美化英语书面表达中的句子书面表达是中学英语数学中的重要组成部分，是检验学生书面交际能力的一个重要途径。
自1993年开始。
书面表达约按总分的16.6%计分，满分为25分。
书面表达题作为要求考生输出所学知识的测试题，比语法选择、完形填空、阅读理解等题目更能直接考查学生运用英语进行表达的能力。
提高学生的书面表达能力，对于全面提高学生的英语语言素质具有重要意义。
一篇没有错误的文章不能算好文章。
如何使自己的英语作文上一个新台阶，这就要尽量美化文章中的句子。
我们可从以下几种方法人手：方法一：在用词上工夫高考书面表达在词汇方面得高分的评分要求是：应用了较多的词汇；词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较高级词汇所致：具备较强的语言运用能力。
要想得高分应遵循以下两个原则：1.高级词汇优先原则。
这里的高级词汇是指相对复杂的词汇。
如：(1)我很害怕。
本句可说成：i’ m very afraid./i’ m very frightened./i’ mvery scared.分析：三种表达中，最后一种肯定是最好的。
(2)他很聪明。
本句可说成：he is clever ( bright， smart， wise，intelli-gent， cute ).分析：用smart，intelhgent，cute当然更好。
2.短语优先原则。
考试写作时，使用短语有两个好处：其一，使文章增加亮点，摆脱千人一面的局面；其二，可以凑词数。
如：(1)he decided to start early the next morning.本句可说成：he decided to make an early start the nextmorning.(2)we enjoyed talking about old times after a long sepa-ration.本句可说成：we enjoyed having a talk about old timesaftera long separation.方法二：在句子结构上做到脱颖而出书面表达在句子结构方面得高分的评分要求是：应用了较多的语法结构：语法结构方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构所致；具备较强的语言表达能力。
十句美化作文
十种英语句子的美化方法英语作文如何使普通句子变得更漂亮？从一般句式到特殊表达：一、改变时态The bell is ringing now. 一般There goes the bell. 特殊二、改变语态People suggest that the conference be put off. 一般It is suggested that the conference be put off. 特殊三、使用不定式He is so kind that he can help me. 一般He is so kind as to help me. 特殊四、使用过去分词1. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. 一般Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab. 特殊2. Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten. 一般Once seen, it can never be forgotten. 特殊五、使用v- ing1. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail．一般On arriving /his arrival, please give me an e-mail. 特殊2. If the weather permits, I will come tomorrow. 一般I will come tomorrow, weather permitting. 特殊六、使用名词性从句1. It disappointed everybody that he didn't turn up. 一般The fact that he didn' t turn up disappointed everybody. 特殊2. I happened to have met him. 一般It happened that I had met him. 特殊3. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. 一般What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. 特殊七、使用定语从句The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. 一般The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. 特殊八、使用状语从句1. I won’t believe what he says. 一般No matter what he says, I won‘t believe him. 特殊2. If you come back before six o'clock, you can go out. 一般You can go out on condition that you come back before six o'clock. 特殊3. If she doesn't agree, what shall we do? 一般Supposing that she doesn't agree, what shall we do? 特殊九、使用虚拟语气The ship didn't sink with all on board because there were the efforts of the captain. 一般But for the efforts of the captain, the ship would have sunk with all on board. 特殊十、使用倒装句型Though I'm weak I'll make the effort. 一般Weak as I am, I'll make the effort. 特殊十招练就完美发音每个人都知道使用英语是真正改善发音的唯一办法。