高中英语新高考背景下的作文讲评课课件
first person:_______________
Step 2: list the main points
1. the same problem
2. care for everything 3. make the generation gap deeper 4. worry about everything 5. make us grow up healthily and live happily 6. more understanding between…
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Copy 3: It is believed that our parents always pay attention to everything we do. They make it a rule that whatever we do, we should tell them. For example, tell them the reason and you can get the money which you ask for. Tell them where you go and then you can go out. They always worry about us. They take it for granted that whatever they do for us is good. They only want us to live happily and healthily. However, hadrdly do they change their mind no matter how we complain.
Paragraph 1: the common problem: parents care for everything Paragraph 2: how parents care for everythign of us Paragraph 3: the way to solve the problem
Copy 2: What we must face with is that our parents always get everything of us under control, which makes us feel rather uncomfortable. To our disappointment, parents always worry about what we wear everyday, how we behave at school and our studies, our meals, even the friends we have made. What’s more, they often say that the intension for these is to let us grow up healthily and happily. For fear of their feeling sad, we have to act as they require, rather than say a word. Child as I am, I entirely understand my parents. I think the key to it is to understand them. On the other hand, we should make our parents understand us, either. With the love between parents and us, we can lead a comfortable and senseful life! (张武斌 张武斌) 张武斌
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The approach to solve the problem is to understand our parents and make ourselves understood. Only in this way can we get on well with our parents.
(徐佳峰 徐佳峰) 徐佳峰
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All in all, we should give more understanding to our parents. As we know, all the parents love their children. So if we show our love to them properly, they will (金盛 金盛) 金盛 understand us, too.
For Class 16, Senior Three
Six steps for the writing practice: How to get on with our parents
Step 1: examine the topic
议论文 （Argumentative Writing ） Style:______________________________________ present tense:______________ Paragraphs:
Some wonderful sentences from our homework:
1. Not until we understand our parents’ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱconcern and hope on us can we feel the love deeply from their hearts.(骆东浩 骆东浩) 骆东浩 2. What really makes us uncomfortable is that our parents worry about everything we have done. (徐航远 徐航远) 徐航远 3.The better we understand our parents, the easier it will be to get along with them. (韩振宇 韩振宇) 韩振宇 4. Only when we try our best to communicate with them can we make each of us understood. (卫晓文 卫晓文) 卫晓文 5. We have every reason to believe their purpose of our growing up healthily and happily. (王芳 王芳) 王芳 6. Our parents manage everything of us, which is beyond what we can stand. (俞慧峰 俞慧峰) 俞慧峰 7. What they don’t know is that it will take away our freedom and make us unhappy. (吴伟健 吴伟健) 吴伟健
Step 4&5: connect the sentences and make some appolishment.
Step 6: Copy it out carefully and clearly.
Proof reading (find out 5 errors) Our parents concern about everything that we have done, which _______ us annoyed. They always worry about everything make makes and everybody, such as our study, entertainment and friends. As is often the case, they sometimes _____ our diary without look read our ___________ good for you.” explain they every time we ask permit. “It’s permission them why. Children as we are, there are some basic personal rights, which should be protected. How to get on well with our parents? It’s a problem. However, there is no reason for us to be against to our ＼ parents just because of it. Only when we try our best to communicate with them can we make each of us understand. It’s your sincerity and patience can call their respect on you. ∧ that Why not have a try?
高考英语作文讲评课（Writing）课件.ppt
⾼考英语作⽂讲评课（Writing）课件.pptBased-task Writing太⽩中学刘亚琴Teaching goals: Enable students to learn how to write an article.Teaching important and difficult points: Check the mistakes in students’ article. Teaching methods: Discussion, cooperative learning.Teaching aids: a computer and a pptTeaching procedures and waysStep1 lead-inStep2 Check the answer题⽬：假定你是中学⽣李华。
美国⼀个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的⼀项活动。
请根据写作要点和写作要求写⼀篇欢迎词。
写作要点：1.表⽰对客⼈的欢迎；2. 介绍此项活动（如活动⽬的、内容等）；3. 表达对客⼈的祝愿。
写作要求：1.词数不少于100词；2. 称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正⽂；3. 不能⽤真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear American guests,On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.As scheduled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on . The Show will beg in at two o’clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence.I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.18-23分黄云张银娟秦青李琼李⽂兴杨欢王阳赵天云朱媛张敏李爱琴郑茹李岚唐⽂丽崔红王娇张萌赵彤彤24分彭瑶梅赵林鑫周筱Mistake Correction in Spellings1.I am lucky to introtuce …2. …and Ping-Pong gams…3. The most important is English speach…4. This acitivity…Mistake Correction in Passage1.It’s benefit from communicating culture.(任永刚)I benefit from…2. I will greet you on my school behalf.(任永刚)I will greet you on behalf of our school.2.We take part in English Talent Show can improve students’ English. (黄云)We take part in English Talent Show to improve our English.4. I am express ours warm welcome to you.(张银娟严飞）I would like to express our warm welcome to you.5. This English Week activities consist to many interesting project. ( 杨欢）… consist of many interesting programs.6. Thanks for your come to…(杨欢)Thanks for coming to…7. Such as English spoken…(李莹莹秦青)Such as spoken English…8. We are lucky to invite you take part in this activity and we will appreariate if you can give us some advices. (李琼) We are lucky to invite you to take part in this activity and we will appreciate it if you can give us some advice.9. Due to our school English Talent Show students’ English level is high.(李岚)Due to our school English Talent Show, students’ English level has improved gradually10. I’m very thank you. (杨锐花)Thank you very much.11. In order to making… (李莹莹)In order to make…12. I think I’m very luckily.I think I’m very lucky.13. The key of this activity…The key to this activity…14. Our school develop a variety of English activity. (崔红)There are a variety of English activities in our school.15. The Talent Show, whose goal is improve our English communication.(彭瑶梅) The Talent Show , whose goal is to improve our English skills is very interesting. 16. We are hope you are happily.(王澜波)We hope you are happy.Excellent sentences in the passage1.Only in this way can I learn a lot of knowledge well. (黄云)2.I’m lucky to represent our warm welcome to you.(李⽂兴)3.I’m on behalf of our school to express our warm welcome to you.(赵林鑫)4.There is no denying the fact that this activity is very interesting.5. We not only talk about things we are interested in to practice our oral Englishbut also exchange our experience in English study. (李爱琴)6. Only after you attend this activity will you know the interest of this activity (it). (周筱)7. We are very glad to express our warm welcome to you. (周筱)StepⅢ Homework跟踪训练⽤正确的引导状语从句的连词(词组)填空1．It seemed only several minutes __ 1.2．It has been three years _3．Work hard，4．，_5．I was about to leave _6．The composition is all right，Ⅱ.句型转换1．Don't forget what your teacher says.(使⽤状语从句)1.＝_，don't forget.2．To his surprise，the little girl knows so many things.(使⽤名词性从句)＝①_＝②_＝③_3．Does Mr.Brown enjoy living in China? Could you tell us？(变为复合句)＝Could you tell us _ if/whether _ Mr.Brown _ enjoys _ living in China? 4．Jim is not a student.Tom is not a student，either.(合并为⼀个句⼦)＝_5．When does the train leave？I want to know.(改为含宾语从句的复合句)＝6．He lives in a big house，there stands a tree in front of the house. (变为复合句)＝He lives in a big house，__Step3 Homework。
高中英语写作讲评课件
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Writing skills
Question review skills
Comprehension of the question
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Ensure that students understand the requirements and
expectations of the writing task
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Paragraph development
Evaluate how well paragraphs are developed, including the
transitioning between ideas and topics
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Argumentation and reasoning
Examine the logical development of arguments and how
PPT courseware for high school English writing eva
目 录
• Introduction • Writing skills • Common Error Analysis • Excellent Sample Analysis • Student Works Review • Writing Practice and Improvement
Clarity of the question
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Analyze why the question is clear and specific, avoiding
ambiguity and fusion
Connection with the current
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Evaluate while the topic is relevant to the current and
新高考书面表达讲解(共26张PPT)
dark
Jane night
in the forest
walk, find, climb, stop, hsldoeiwespaJpapnoeinfeteltd wthiraetdJane did
Para 8: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. …
who when where
在理解阅读材料的基础上，为了创造性地构思续写内容，考生必须发挥想象力，准确判断作者 的写作思路和行文逻辑，这样才能续写符合逻辑的故事结局
四.回扣原文，揣摩写作思路
抓住文章的思路，结合段首的提示语，最终确定文章的写作思路。同时，结合文中划线的关键 词，确定段落的写作内容。
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高考英语读后续写的解题策略和技巧
lake, stream, helicopter, yellow blouse Jane, Tom walked, climbed
at a distance To her great joy
Choose at least five out of ten words and expressions
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Para. 7 But no more helicopters came and it was dark again.
Feeling: disappointed
Find a place to sleep
Time: the night before slept Para. 8
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
Some steps to analyze before Continuation : 1. Find the style、person、tense、theme of the passage
2024届高考英语二轮复习作文写作讲评课课件
Activity1: Self study 5’
Correct the mistakes by yourselves according to the teacher’s evaluation. 根据老师的批阅，自己修改句子，并在练习本重写一遍改后的句子。
注意: 挑选几句重要的即可，不需要全写。写完后可以同桌或者组内
如何审题？
通过仔细审题，你能得出的信息： 1.体裁：投稿类文章，直接切入主题展开内容即可。 2.段落分布：三段式较为合理
第一段：总体概述+背景简单介绍 第二段：学习活动状况描述+简单评论 第三段：你的建议
Para1: 整体概述+背景简单介绍
Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many ways we can do to learn English well. ?
互相讨论修改。
Activity2: Feedback on the composition
Advantages: 1. 基本掌握投稿类文章的写作思路； 2.开始有意识地去使用一些多样化的句式和表达，例如adopt ... methods, account for等。
Disadvantages:
1.低级失误仍然特别多,句子不会写(句子成分缺失、从句不会用)； 2.审题不清，要点遗漏或者所给信息利用不全； 3.重复现象严重，废话太多； 4.句意表达不清楚，不知所云 5.评论或建议不能够回扣主题，或者随意改动为其他话题。
其他需要注意的问题
1. 在规定的格子之内把需要的内容写完，所写内容不能超出所给的 格子，否则会扣分。(不是越多越好！) 2.要点一定不能遗漏，否则扣分很严重！ 3. 卷面的勾画一定要严格控制！
2023年6月全国高考英语新课标I卷读后续写讲评课件
高考英语写作指导课课件(69张PPT)
They even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign "No _____________ littering" nearby.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
have studied
written
English very well.
is
10.There are some advice in teaching English.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
1. They even threw rubbish into the lake. They totally ignored the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby. (使用V-ing形式)
6.My English level is common and I can't speak very ∧ well.
average along it
7.I believe we can get alone well with each other.
8.Besides, I think speaking English is as important as writing English. spoken 9.I study English for 12 years so I think I know
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!
高考英语作文讲评课(Writing)课件ppt
Based-task Writing太白中学刘亚琴Teaching goals: Enable students to learn how to write an article.Teaching important and difficult points: Check the mistakes in students’ article. Teaching methods: Discussion, cooperative learning.Teaching aids: a computer and a pptTeaching procedures and waysStep1 lead-inStep2 Check the answer题目：假定你是中学生李华。
美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。
请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。
写作要点：1.表示对客人的欢迎；2. 介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）；3. 表达对客人的祝愿。
写作要求：1.词数不少于100词；2. 称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正文；3. 不能用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear American guests,On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.As scheduled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on . The Show will beg in at two o’clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence.I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.18-23分黄云张银娟秦青李琼李文兴杨欢王阳赵天云朱媛张敏李爱琴郑茹李岚唐文丽崔红王娇张萌赵彤彤24分彭瑶梅赵林鑫周筱Mistake Correction in Spellings1.I am lucky to introtuce …2. …and Ping-Pong gams…3. The most important is English speach…4. This acitivity…Mistake Correction in Passage1.It’s benefit from communicating culture.(任永刚)I benefit from…2. I will greet you on my school behalf.(任永刚)I will greet you on behalf of our school.2.We take part in English Talent Show can improve students’ English. (黄云)We take part in English Talent Show to improve our English.4. I am express ours warm welcome to you.(张银娟严飞）I would like to express our warm welcome to you.5. This English Week activities consist to many interesting project. ( 杨欢）… consist of many interesting programs.6. Thanks for your come to…(杨欢)Thanks for coming to…7. Such as English spoken…(李莹莹秦青)Such as spoken English…8. We are lucky to invite you take part in this activity and we will appreariate if you can give us some advices. (李琼)We are lucky to invite you to take part in this activity and we will appreciate it if you can give us some advice.9. Due to our school English Talent Show students’ English level is high.(李岚)Due to our school English Talent Show, students’ English level has improved gradually10. I’m very thank you. (杨锐花)Thank you very much.11. In order to making… (李莹莹)In order to make…12. I think I’m very luckily.I think I’m very lucky.13. The key of this activity…The key to this activity…14. Our school develop a variety of English activity. (崔红)There are a variety of English activities in our school.15. The Talent Show, whose goal is improve our English communication.(彭瑶梅) The Talent Show , whose goal is to improve our English skills is very interesting. 16. We are hope you are happily.(王澜波)We hope you are happy.Excellent sentences in the passage1.Only in this way can I learn a lot of knowledge well. (黄云)2.I’m lucky to represent our warm welcome to you.(李文兴)3.I’m on behalf of our school to express our warm welcome to you.(赵林鑫)4.There is no denying the fact that this activity is very interesting.5. We not only talk about things we are interested in to practice our oral Englishbut also exchange our experience in English study. (李爱琴)6. Only after you attend this activity will you know the interest of this activity (it).(周筱)7. We are very glad to express our warm welcome to you. (周筱)StepⅢ Homework跟踪训练用正确的引导状语从句的连词(词组)填空1．It seemed only several minutes __ 1.2．It has been three years _3．Work hard，4．，_5．I was about to leave _6．The composition is all right，Ⅱ.句型转换1．Don't forget what your teacher says.(使用状语从句)1.＝_，don't forget.2．To his surprise，the little girl knows so many things.(使用名词性从句)＝①_＝②_＝③_3．Does Mr.Brown enjoy living in China? Could you tell us？(变为复合句)＝Could you tell us _ if/whether _ Mr.Brown _ enjoys _ living in China?4．Jim is not a student.Tom is not a student，either.(合并为一个句子)＝_5．When does the train leave？I want to know.(改为含宾语从句的复合句)＝6．He lives in a big house，there stands a tree in front of the house. (变为复合句)＝He lives in a big house，__Step3 Homework。
(新教材新高考)高三英语写作课件
It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I will never do it again.
养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之
一。做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容 作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做， 不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题 眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补 缺，纠正错误。总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习 量。在这个时候，学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式，最重要 的是以平常心去面对考试。英语最后的复习要树立信心，考试的 时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”，遇到容易的则要想“细心审 题”。越到最后，考生越要回归基础，单词最好再梳理一遍，这 样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲 刺复习方法。
3. 表示因果关系 （因为，因此，所以） for, so, therefore, as a result,because of, due to,owing to,thanks to… 4. 表示解释说明:
that is (to say),in other words, namely, such as,for example,
the traffic heavy;L_a__st__b_u_t_n_o_t__th_e__l_e_a_st_ it is a waste of natural resources（自然资 源）.
高考英语读写类作文讲评课件(38张PPT)
高 考 英 语 读 写类作 文讲评 课件(3 8张PPT )
▪ 参考1 ▪ At least 36 people died in a fatal stampede
[stæ m'piːd] during New Year celebrations in Shanghai on January 1st, 2015, caused by lack of awareness over safety risk and loose control at the scene. (35)（马苏云） ▪ 参考2 ▪ A tragedy in which at least 36 people died during New Year celebrations in Shanghai raised people’s awareness of the security of public places. And the author analyzed the causes of the tragedy. （33字）(杨天一)
▪ Most of the injured were young people in their twenties, a majority of them women. There were also college students and children. They were sent to several hospitals for treatment, including Changzheng Hospital, the Shanghai No.1 People’s Hospital, Ruijin Hospital and Huangpu District Central Hospital.
高考英语书面表达评讲课件 新课标 人教版
bdriofafdiceun ltthseiirn the journey.
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In msy opinidoiffnic,ultsietsay at home is better than go out.
staying
going
第八页，共22页。
•Transition words and phrases
1.Pre-writing：
审题： type（议论文） 、 tense(主要为一般现在(xiànzài)时) person(第一或第三人称) 、 main points(要点)
2.While-writing：
main points
sentences
passage
correct sentence structure transition words/expressions （过渡(guòdù)词） proper structure for the passage
2.As far as I’m concerned ,going outside is better than staying at home.(陈玲)
3.It’s more comfortable and convenient to stay at home.(骆群)
4. Some students think traveling can enrich their knowledge and broaden their horizons. (魏薇,万青等)
On the other hand, some hold the idea that traveling is a good way for us to learn much knowledge which we can’t learn from school. It’s just like a bridge that combines us with the outside world, which will broaden our horizons. These are very important for our future study and work. But it often costs us so much that we can’t afford, which might throw us into trouble.