2020高考英语作文讲评(共47张PPT)
高考英语作文讲评课（Writing）课件.ppt
⾼考英语作⽂讲评课（Writing）课件.pptBased-task Writing太⽩中学刘亚琴Teaching goals: Enable students to learn how to write an article.Teaching important and difficult points: Check the mistakes in students’ article. Teaching methods: Discussion, cooperative learning.Teaching aids: a computer and a pptTeaching procedures and waysStep1 lead-inStep2 Check the answer题⽬：假定你是中学⽣李华。
美国⼀个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的⼀项活动。
请根据写作要点和写作要求写⼀篇欢迎词。
写作要点：1.表⽰对客⼈的欢迎；2. 介绍此项活动（如活动⽬的、内容等）；3. 表达对客⼈的祝愿。
写作要求：1.词数不少于100词；2. 称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正⽂；3. 不能⽤真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear American guests,On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.As scheduled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on . The Show will beg in at two o’clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence.I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.18-23分黄云张银娟秦青李琼李⽂兴杨欢王阳赵天云朱媛张敏李爱琴郑茹李岚唐⽂丽崔红王娇张萌赵彤彤24分彭瑶梅赵林鑫周筱Mistake Correction in Spellings1.I am lucky to introtuce …2. …and Ping-Pong gams…3. The most important is English speach…4. This acitivity…Mistake Correction in Passage1.It’s benefit from communicating culture.(任永刚)I benefit from…2. I will greet you on my school behalf.(任永刚)I will greet you on behalf of our school.2.We take part in English Talent Show can improve students’ English. (黄云)We take part in English Talent Show to improve our English.4. I am express ours warm welcome to you.(张银娟严飞）I would like to express our warm welcome to you.5. This English Week activities consist to many interesting project. ( 杨欢）… consist of many interesting programs.6. Thanks for your come to…(杨欢)Thanks for coming to…7. Such as English spoken…(李莹莹秦青)Such as spoken English…8. We are lucky to invite you take part in this activity and we will appreariate if you can give us some advices. (李琼) We are lucky to invite you to take part in this activity and we will appreciate it if you can give us some advice.9. Due to our school English Talent Show students’ English level is high.(李岚)Due to our school English Talent Show, students’ English level has improved gradually10. I’m very thank you. (杨锐花)Thank you very much.11. In order to making… (李莹莹)In order to make…12. I think I’m very luckily.I think I’m very lucky.13. The key of this activity…The key to this activity…14. Our school develop a variety of English activity. (崔红)There are a variety of English activities in our school.15. The Talent Show, whose goal is improve our English communication.(彭瑶梅) The Talent Show , whose goal is to improve our English skills is very interesting. 16. We are hope you are happily.(王澜波)We hope you are happy.Excellent sentences in the passage1.Only in this way can I learn a lot of knowledge well. (黄云)2.I’m lucky to represent our warm welcome to you.(李⽂兴)3.I’m on behalf of our school to express our warm welcome to you.(赵林鑫)4.There is no denying the fact that this activity is very interesting.5. We not only talk about things we are interested in to practice our oral Englishbut also exchange our experience in English study. (李爱琴)6. Only after you attend this activity will you know the interest of this activity (it). (周筱)7. We are very glad to express our warm welcome to you. (周筱)StepⅢ Homework跟踪训练⽤正确的引导状语从句的连词(词组)填空1．It seemed only several minutes __ 1.2．It has been three years _3．Work hard，4．，_5．I was about to leave _6．The composition is all right，Ⅱ.句型转换1．Don't forget what your teacher says.(使⽤状语从句)1.＝_，don't forget.2．To his surprise，the little girl knows so many things.(使⽤名词性从句)＝①_＝②_＝③_3．Does Mr.Brown enjoy living in China? Could you tell us？(变为复合句)＝Could you tell us _ if/whether _ Mr.Brown _ enjoys _ living in China? 4．Jim is not a student.Tom is not a student，either.(合并为⼀个句⼦)＝_5．When does the train leave？I want to know.(改为含宾语从句的复合句)＝6．He lives in a big house，there stands a tree in front of the house. (变为复合句)＝He lives in a big house，__Step3 Homework。
2020高考作文讲评PPT下载
sharing companies operate in a similar way.growing government regulation. A
They use apps that allow users, after
Hong Kong man who was arrested
paying a deposit, to unlock the wheels with for throwing several shared bikes
• Although the service of the bikesharing is notgwoeoldl, it can bring some advantages.
2020高考作文讲评PPT下载
2020高考作文讲评PPT下载
• you can find it easily and only pay for a little money.
• Riding bikes is a good way to keep healthy.
2020高考作文讲评PPT下载
2020高考作文讲评PPT下载
6.Capitalized letters大小写错误
• On the one hand, Iit is very convenient for us to use a bike-sharing.
• However, it’s our duty to protect the environment which we rely on.(it作形式 主语，rely on高级词汇,复杂结构) (陶敏)
• It can also build social bonds between people.(高级词汇) (陈楚乔)
2020年全国卷I试题讲评公开课课件(31张ppt)
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阅
二、主旨归纳
Para 2
读
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printed onto their leaves to show when
they’re short of water and a plant that can
结论 detect harmful chemicals in groundwater.
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二、主旨归纳
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读
理
topic
解
main idea of each paragraph
5.evaluate
4.restriction
6. consult
5.consequence
7. extend
fort zone
position 7.bottom line
阅读理解题型与思路
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阅
阅读错误题型一览
读
理 解
题号 正确率 考查类型 错因
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73% 细节理解 ?
教学目标 查找阅读题目问题之所在 厘清不同阅读题型的解题思路
（细节,推断与主旨） 体会完型中的明示与暗示
(上下文提示） 树立满分信念
阅
阅读完形词汇自查
读 理 解
1.detect 2. suspicion 3.transformative 4. register
1.constantly 2.casually 3.merely
makes the act of rereading so rich and
2020年高考英语试卷评析 25张PPT
阅读理解第一节15道小题中，全国I卷中有10道小题，考查 推断、归纳和概括等高阶阅读理解能力。新高考卷则通过提高阅读理解试题的分值与比重，进一步强化阅读 理解能力考查。
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全国I卷设置以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题 写一篇短文参赛的情境；
• 第三部分 语言知识运用（共两节，满分45分）
41 2021/4/25 is obvious. If we 42 it is a door, they’ll want to go
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在语篇选择上，全国
I卷选取重复阅读的感悟、竞走运动及其与跑步的比较等语 篇，能够启发考生运用批判性思维和辩证思维能力思考家 庭和社会生活中的现象和问题。在题目设置上，全国I卷第 31题询问作者对竞走运动的态度，这类试题要求学生运用 批判性思维和辩证思维，对材料内容归纳概括并进行逻辑 推理。
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• 第一、体现立德树人时代特征，促进德智体美劳全面发展
• 2020年高考英语全国卷试题，选材围绕人与自然、人与社会、人与自我三大主题全面考查英语 综合运用能力，体现立德树人时代特征，引导体美劳教育，促进德智体美劳全面发展。
• 一、是融入中国元素，切实增强“四个自信”。
• 全国I卷语法填空语篇讲述嫦娥四号无人探测器在月球背面成功着陆的重大事件，彰显民族自 豪感；
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高中英语作文复习：优劣利弊 (共46张PPT)
有关利与弊作文的写作模板
• 个人观点 Through the above analysis, I am in favor of…/ am a big supporter of…/approve
In my opionion, people can travel abroad if possible. But it depends on a person’s finance and health whether to travel abroad.
高中英语作文复习：优劣利弊 (共46张PPT)
B类只说“弊”的方面 缺点、不足之处、不利因素。 (1) (做)某事的不利因素显而易见。 The drawbacks/disadvantages of doing sth. are obvious/ apparent.
(2) (做)某事有好些不利之处。 There are several negative aspects/ weaknesses of doing…
Everyone smiles every day. Smile has a lot of advantages. Firstly,smile can reduce our pressure. In addition,smile helps us develop close relationship with other people. Last but not least, smile can help us keep healthy. In my opinion, ...
高考英语作文讲解优秀课件(共9张PPT)
in 5、词性混用
She enjoys study English.(studying) If anyone against the plan, please let me know.
is 6、非谓语动词出错
Being seriously ill, his class-mates sent him to hospital.
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7.要写好 一篇记 叙文， 首先必 须确定 自己的 情感， 然后根 据自己 的情感 选择提 炼材料 ，再加 以细致 的描写 ，在必 要的地 方画龙 点睛地 穿插一 点议论 。
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8.对任何 一篇记 叙文而 言，叙 述是骨 架，描 写是血 肉，而 抒情与 议论则 是灵魂 ，这四 者是缺 一不可 的。总 之，我 们要学 会综合 运用多 种表现 手法， 使我们 笔下的 文字显 得生动 活泼、 形象可 感、醒 人耳目 、启人 深思。
• and
to
well
All the best,
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Li Hua
2020/11/4
实例写作
(2010 全国Ⅱ) 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。 你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告诉招聘信息。内容主要包括：
1．教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等 2．授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础） 3．工作量：
2020/11/4
学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析
is • 4、谓语动词用法出错 • He dressed in a new coat. • Great changes have been taken place. • When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting for me. • He didn’t notice the teacher to come into the classroom.
2020届高考英语作文评讲教学课件 (共48张PPT)
Dear David,
How is everything going? I’m writing to invite you to join us in our field study project this weekend.
(This Saturday, the students of our school will make a one—day field trip to Hongxing Village, which lies in the suburb of this town). The purpose of this project is to see with our own eyes what’s going on out there and how the villagers are doing with their lives. (I know you are curious about the development of our country, and I am sure you don’t want to miss it).
universally acknowledged that great changes have taken place in recent years. The environment improves a lot, so do the various cultures. It is worth visiting.
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• What’s more, the destruction of bikesharing is a big problems.
2）Agreement主谓一致
• it seems that Bike-sharing gives away people’s information.
• but the bike-sharing service still exists some problem.
but some problems with bike-sharing service still exist.
2.Singular andIn China, many vehicles like bbuussesand
• First ,with the developing of socieaty,there are more and more cars on the road.
• However, it’s our duty to protect the environment which we rely on.(it作形式 主语，rely on高级词汇,复杂结构) (陶敏)
• It can also build social bonds between people.(高级词汇) (陈楚乔)
• 3.be able to polish up their writings
Lead-in
1.What can be called a good article?
•【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连 贯，词数适当。
•2.What are the difficulties you meet in writing articles?
• As far as the promoting of the bikesharing is concerned, I think ...(活用句 型) (吴雨欣)
• Above are my opinions.（倒装）(吴雨欣)
• I can’t be in more favor of it. （can’t...more句型）(胡慧月)
• What’s more, it bringsa big
convenience to people.
3.Spelling单词拼写错误
• we should help introducet the bikesharing to everyone.
• Besides, if city isccrroowwdeeddwith cars during rush hours, the citizen can use those bikes to their companies as soon as possible.
作文讲评
Teaching Aims
At the end of the class ,the students are supposed to
• 1.be more aware of mistakes made in their articles
• 2.know more about the right ways of writing
Weak points:
• 错误统计： 高二13
（41人）
错误类型 数量
搭配错误 50
单复数错误 35
单词拼写 31
动词运用 19
词性
14
句首大小写 14
1.Collocation搭配错误
• ...because bikes are almost distributed to everywhere.
• This is one of the greatest invitations to traffic accidents.(高级词汇) (吕梦娟)
• Notice:
• They have achieved much in advanced phrases and sentence structures. We should learn from them.
• Last but not least, when riding bikes, we will feel more relaxed after the whole day’s hard work.(省略句) (邓雪怡)
• Use bike-sharing, and you will find that it is useful.（祈使句+and+陈述句）(张子莹)
• Although the service of the bikesharing is notgwoeoldl, it can bring some advantages.
• you can find it easily and only pay for a little money.
• so, we should encourage people to ride Bbikicey-cslehsaring quite often than driving.
1).加强基础词汇和基本句子结构学习。 2).提高综合运用复合句的能力。 3).注意句子间的过渡和衔接。 4).仿写、背诵、熟读话题范文。
Comments on the writings
• Strong points:
• If so, we will build an environmentally friendly society.(省略句) (邢臻)
• ....bicycle riding is the least expensive way of traveling apart from walking.(adj 最高级用于否定表达) (吕露露、程亚玮)
• We are supposed to achieve a balance between development and nature. （achieve a balance between...高级词汇） (陶敏)