峰哥雅思托福：2014年11月1日雅思写作机经解析
雅思写作机经2014
雅思写作2014年11月机经总结BY nina11月1日小作文: 柱形图×2参考：nina 雅思写作机经实战小作文--双柱图大作文：It is better for people to be unemployed than people to be employed but they do not enjoy. Agree or disagree?Key:agree: 没有兴趣工作效率低。
（很可能会心情压抑，没有创造力，约束能力不强而延迟或出错。
）Disagree：无兴趣就不做工作会使一个人变得不会自我控制，不利于长久发展。
（每个人都不是天生擅长并喜欢做每一件事情的，并且兴趣都是在实战中从每一次失败到成功的实战中慢慢培养出来的。
放弃自己该做的事情是对自己和他人的不负责任。
人们可以选择的是投入自己的职责并在实战中慢慢体会乐趣。
）11月8日小作文：柱图大作文：Some think most crime is the result of circumstances, e.g.: poverty and other social problems. Others believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss.Key：支持甲：贫穷是造成犯罪的根本原因，社会方面的因素是诱因。
（如在经济危机的时候企业裁员，很多人因丧失工作无生存能力可能会以偷抢度日。
）支持乙：本性差是犯罪的常见因素。
（如同样是因丢掉工作而没有生活来源的人中，有的人心态积极会冷静地想办法度过难关，而有的人则心理不平衡甚至是仇富而犯下罪行。
当然，也有的人生活很富裕但是妒忌心强或是追求刺激而犯罪。
报复性犯罪和吸食毒品就是其中的案例。
）11月13日小作文：地图（对比式地图）参照：nina高分机经实战地图大作文：Research shows that overeating can be just as harmful as smoking. Thus the advertising of certain food products should be banned, as cigerate is banned in many countries. Do you agree or disagree?11月22日小作文：表格参考：nina 高分机经实战表格大作文：Online shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is positive or negative development？Key:Positive: 1. online shopping 更省时间。
雅思11test1写作范文
雅思11test1写作范文一、开头段。
Hey there! When it comes to university education, the big question of whether it should focus more on theoretical knowledge or practical skills is like a hot potato. Some people firmly believe that theory is the king, while others think that getting your hands dirty with practical skills is the real deal. Well, let's dig into this topic a bit deeper.二、主体段1 阐述理论知识的重要性（站在支持理论知识的角度）On one hand, theoretical knowledge is like the foundation of a big, shiny skyscraper. Without it, the whole building would just come tumbling down. In university, students study all kinds of theories. For example, in physics, they learn about the laws of motion. These theories might seem a bit dry and abstract at first, but they are super important. They give students a framework to understand how the world around them works.It's like having a map before you go on a journey. Theoretical knowledge helps students develop their critical thinking skills. They learn to analyze different concepts, make connections between different ideas, and question the existing knowledge. This kind of intellectual exercise is really valuable. Also, a strong theoretical background can open up many career opportunities in fields like research. Scientists need a deep understanding of theories to make new discoveries. So, it's not just about passing exams, but about building a solid base for future development.三、主体段2 阐述实践技能的重要性（站在支持实践技能的角度）On the flip side, practical skills are like the tools in a toolbox. You can't build a house just by looking at the blueprints, right? You need topick up those hammers and nails and start working. In university, practical skills are becoming more and more crucial. Take engineering students, for instance. They can't just know all the equations and theories aboutbuilding structures. They need to know how to actually build things, test materials, and operate machinery.Practical skills also make students more employable right after graduation. In today's job market, employers are often looking for people who can hit the ground running. If a student has already had some hands on experience in their field, they are more likely to get a job. Moreover, practical skills can enhance students' creativity. When they are working on real world projects, they often come up with innovative solutions to problems. It's like they are learning by doing, and this kind of learning can be really effective.四、结尾段。
峰哥雅思托福：2014年11月13日雅思写作机经解析(2)
峰哥雅思托福：2014年11月13日雅思写作机经解析（2）Research shows that overeating can be just as harmful as smoking. Thus,the advertising of certain food products should be banned, as cigarette isbanned in many countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?本次考察的是生活话题（贪吃+广告）。
难度适中。
如同意，则要论证贪吃的危害，以及广告对于贪吃的诱导性，对于消费者的误导性。
如不同意，则要突出广告对于消费者没什么坏影响（广告引领时尚，引领大众消费。
）香烟与贪吃完全是两码事（比如，贪吃伤害自己，而香烟却伤害周围所有人，危害更大）。
本文站在同意的立场上，采用四段式，从两个方面突出贪吃危害，结尾总结原因是因为广告的罪大恶极，所以要禁止广告！（285字）啦啦啦。
Traditionally, people concern much about the damage smoking bring to us. However, a research proved that overeating as a bad habit do as much harm as smoking do to our health. Someone, then, suggested the government to ban advertising about certainfood products just as the restraint on tobacco products. I think this advice is very effective in the campaign against overeating and the following are the reasons why Iagree with that.Overeating increases the chance people get various kinds of devastating diseases, such as stomach cancer, diabetes, hypertension, etc. An alarming fact is that the bad eating habit is not only damaging the older generation’s health, but also affect the younger generation. Reports say that diabetes, which was considered as the old people’s diseases are undermining many children’s health.峰哥雅思托福：2014年11月13日雅思写作机经解析（2）Additionally, people with the overeating habit are easily to get overweight, which isbelieved as a big threat to our health and a disaster to those women who dream ofkeeping a nice figure. What makes things worse is that many people are losing confidence in losing weight. Keeping diet or doing sports are becoming some kind ofmission impossible. No matter how clear they understand the harm overeating bringsto them, they just can not help to buy too much certain kind of food, even junk food, regardless of the spending and real necessity.This lies in the fact that, in order to stimulate the customers’purchasing desire,manufacturers or merchants tend to beautify and exaggerate their products in the advertisements and cheat the customers. So if advertising on certain food be banned,the customers will never be misled and certain food consumption shall be minimized.。
雅思写作例题解析
Writing task 2:It is better for people to be unemployed than to be employed without a job they enjoy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Sample answer:People work for different reasons. Some work for fun, because they get an enjoyable job; however, some others have to do a job they do not like for living. Then, some people come up with the idea that it is better not to be employed, if they do not enjoy doing it. Personally, though this idea sounds attractive, it cannot bear closer analysis.First of all, everybody has to make a living which requires earning more or less income to cover daily expenses. Doing a job and getting paid provides such financial resources for most people. For example, living in cities can be expensive, not to mention big cities, such as London and New York. Even if living in a small town, you have to buy basic necessities of life. To afford to live in this world, you have to be employed, so it is not a matter of personal choice.Secondly, since one must be employed by others or self-employed, why not work with a positive attitude. Everybody has the right to choose what kind of job he/she does, so first choose a job you enjoy, if you can. If you have to do a job that you dislike, try to see the positive sides and think what this job can bring to you. As a result, you often may find the happiness in the job. The statement to be unemployed because of not enjoying doing a job is more about escaping.Thirdly, it happens in some countries that some people do not get employed and use the excuse of not being happy doing their job. These people rely on the money from their parents’ or the welfare of the government. For example, some young people do not go to work and live a luxurious life in China, because they are from a rich family. These people have earned a nickname of “the rich second generation”, and they are actually avoiding their responsibility as a valuable member of the society. Furthermore, because they do not have regular work to do, their life is more hopeless and in vain than those poor people who work hard with low pay.In conclusion, I disagree with the idea to choose to be unemployed just because of not enjoying doing a job. Having a job and making a contribution to the society is the responsibility for every citizen to do.解析：本题很容易把be employed理解得过于狭隘，其实就是就业的意思，而不能仅仅理解为雇佣，比如，自己创业，做一个农民或者个体劳动者都是属于be employed 的范围。
剑桥雅思14Test1大作文解析
剑桥雅思14Test1大作文解析雅思写作7分，肯定算高分了。
很多雅思培训机构，甚至学生出分写作6.5时，也要大肆宣传一番。
你们一直以为的7分作文的词汇可能长下面这个样子：但实际上，7分作文的用词长下面这个样子。
在雅思写作的4项评分标准中，前面两项的TR(任务回应)和CC(逻辑连贯与衔接)，本质上是优于后面两项的LR（词汇）与GRA（语法）的。
因为写议论文，最重要的并不是长难句和华丽的词藻，而应该是你的观点和你的论证过程。
以剑桥14Test 1的大作文为例：Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.这又是一道文邹邹的题，题目要我们去讨论：遇到坏的情况时，到底是要接受呢，还是要奋进起来，去改进这些坏情况？我们请AB两个同学来讨论一下：A：“当然不能被动地接受了，我们要用智慧，用方法去突破困难。
”B：“这要看这个坏情况是什么，如果改变不了的，我们就不要无谓地挣扎；如果能够改变的，我们就要去主动解决问题”。
你们觉得哪位同学的话，更有道理呢？这个题目是一个讨论双方的题目：Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.也就是不管你同意观点1，还是同意观点2，还是两个观点都不同意，你都得双方都作出讨论；如果没有双方都讨论的话，那么在TR(任务回应)方面，就会立马被扣上严重的一笔。
遇到这种文邹邹的题，我们是避不了，要用比较语文式的文邹邹去展开的。
2014+2015年雅思A类写作真题全年汇总
2015年2月28日雅思机经：写作2.28小作文柱图，大作文是Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?2015年2月7日雅思写作机经大作文：Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why? What can be done to attract local people?对于很多博物馆和历史遗迹而言，参观者多有游客，而非本地人，原因何在，如何吸引当地人？小作文：小作文双图，对比2008年英国男女性平均花在Household Activity和在Leisure Activity的时间，单位分钟每天。
G类：小作文，写求职信,关于volunteer照顾local community的小孩，为什么感兴趣为什么认为自己适合和details of availibility。
G类大作文，computer makes the world a better place.同不同意。
2015年1月31日雅思写作机经雅思A类小作文柱图，大作文Some people argue that too much attention and too many resources are given to protection wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?2015年1月29日雅思写作回忆(小鹏哥提供)小作文：流程图大作文：利弊讨论;新题出现Currently, some scientists or travelers like to travel to remote natural environment such as south pole, do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. 很多科学家和游客喜欢去遥远的有自然美景的地方旅行，是否利大于弊?2015年1月17日雅思机经(写作)小作文：线图sales of books 比较四年的趋势大作文：say that people are free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss.作文考了“有些人认为我们应该控制噪音，有些人认为不应该，讨论两个观点，给出你的观点.2015年1月10日雅思写作机经1.10雅思A类小作文柱图，大作文The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. What do you think?2014年12月4日雅思机经：写作雅思写作A类小作文线图General Motors, Ford, Honda, Toyota制造汽车所用时间大作文:some people say that its better to teach language students in small classes, others think the number of people does not matter. discuss and give11.22雅思A类小作文表格，关于美国和加拿大留学生的对比。
雅思阅读2014年11月份机经总结与分析
Bernice雅思阅读11月份机经总结与分析2014年11月1日Passage One 旧题主题：历史类题目：Greek Coins题型：判断6 填空（流程）4 句子填空3文章大意：第一部分讲了硬币是什么。
最早的硬币是公元前17 世纪出现的，在希腊第二部分希腊硬币的制作过程第三部分硬币的传播。
举例是波斯入侵利比亚Passage 2 旧题主题：文化类题目：West Africa题型：段落信息配对8 （有NB）多选（五选二）2 句子填空3文章大意：第一部分讲虽然西非的文化有很多不同点，但是其实是有很多想通性的第二段讲典型的西非家庭，是种地的。
家庭成员一般式父母，孩子，可能会包括爷爷奶奶。
典型的西非的房子，有牛棚马棚。
第四段讲职业一般是家庭传续的，如果是神职人员，孩子也会继承父业，也会做这个职业。
第五段：西非很传统，家庭观念很重，认为死去的祖先也是家庭的一部分，如果有不好的事情的发生，就会认为是不孝敬祖先惹来的厄运。
第六段：西非的生活习惯和地理环境有很大关系。
最后一段：西非的教育Passage 3新题主题：文学类文章标题：Science Fiction题型：单选3 句子配对6 判断5文章大意：有一个人对于科幻小说的定义是必须和科学知识有关。
但是不是所有人都同意，有的人认为只要和科学的概念有关也可以，比如外星人等等。
列举了很多书，以及他们的特点，比如有的是批评政府的。
最后一段篇幅较大，但是并没有出题，最后一道题是在倒数第二段。
2014年11月8日考试概述：本次阅读难度较大.一旧二新。
本次考试题型涉及选择题（multiple choice）、配对题（matching）、分类题、判断题、简答题等。
Passage 1主题：动物文章大意：野生马的保护和重归自然Passage 2主题：心理类文章大意：达尔文的进化论在企业管理中的应用Passage 3主题：自然地理文章题目：Antarctica-in from the cold?文章大意：南极洲自然环境的介绍及其对水循环气候等的影响。
峰哥雅思托福：2014年11月1日雅思写作机经解析
峰哥：2014年11月1日雅思写作大作文解析Some people say job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that having a permanent job is better than enjoying the job. Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.本次考察的是社会话题（幸福和工作）。
从工作切入的题目出现的概率较小。
难度系数一如前几次，依然较大，对熊孩子们来说有一定的挑战。
在审题的时候依然要抓住“一个中心（job），两个基本点（satisfaction or survival)”。
但是就话题本身而言，城镇的孩纸并不陌生。
就是一个关于“工作幸福感”和“工作稳定性”哪个更重要的问题。
写的时候要注意文章结构，我在这里采用经典4段式折中方案，采用“情况分析法”，找到“人”这一个突破口进行切入。
（276字）Employment has been a big concern among the public since nobody can survive without salary. However, in order to make a living, someone prefer to sacrifice their happiness and reluctantly work in an unpleasant environment. Then, the dispute on job security and job satisfaction arose.As we know, having a permanent job would definitely bring people many benefits, especially for the homeless and the migrant workers. In their minds, food is always on the top agenda and followed by satisfaction or happiness or even the basic living condition that they ought to have. So in the lower class’ point to view, having a permanent job means getting a promise of endless living materials. That’s why so many people prefer to stay in an unsatisfying company rather than leave for a much enjoyable one.However, for the workers who are able to support himself or herself, they usually do not stop at the pursuit for making a living, but continue striving for living in a high-quality life. This is mostly for meeting the spiritual needs of which including the job satisfaction. For them, dissatisfaction in one place means a would-be job hopping. In this sense, job satisfaction is much more important than a permanent but not satisfying job.To sum up, the extent of the importance of job security and job satisfaction are various for different groups of people. If I stand with the lower class, I would say that having a permanent job is more practicable and necessary than pursuing the job satisfaction. But if I am with the upper and middle class, I would hold quite an opposite view.。
11月雅思写作机经;大小作文
年11月雅思写作机经大/小作文年11月雅思写作机经详细内容包括大作文和小作文两个局部，机经对于考前的一个星期来说是一个非常有参考价值的作用，希望年11月雅思写作机经可以彻底帮助大家勇夺高分！年11月雅思小作文机经之地图题：The mapbelow gives information about a school in and the change of the sameschool in . Summarize the information by selection and reporting the mainfeatures,and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.年11月雅思大作文机经：一级重点1.Somepeople think governments should spend money on measures to save languages withfew speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste offinancial resources.2.Manycountries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art isnecessary, but others say money is better spent on improving health andeducation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. / In manycountries, government sponsorship of the artscosts millions in taxpayers’money. There are many more important things tospend money on. Do you agree?3.Housingshortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people thinkonly government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree ordisagree?4.Somepeople think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds ofartists including painters, musicians and poets, etc. However, other peoplethink that is a waste of money.5.Housingshortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people thinkonly government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree ordisagree?解读雅思写作机经的优势：首先雅思写作机经只是提供了一个方便，帮助大家缩小了考试范围不需要在茫茫题海中乱刷题。
月日雅思考试写作真题机经不要写跑题
appeara neesuccess of life第一段：社会背景+正向/反向观点
+自己观点 （1客观因素/外因2主观因素/内因）社会背景： 平衡 式的成功的生活意味目标的达成+现实生活的幸福感正向观
点：一些人认为一一钱与个人长相一一实现成功生活一一更重要的因 素。自己观点：我认为 理想的生活状态的达成主要基于1勤奋的工作2明智的选择 第二段：论点+论据+例证+结论 论点：勤奋工作一一取 得一一幸福与成就的必经途径。论据：没有执着努力的付出一一不会
有一一丰厚的回报。例证：任何一个实现财富自由，幸福人生的成功
人士，都以勤勉务实的态度，坚持不懈的努力，克服障碍，达成目标。
结论：勤勉的工作一一起了不可替代的作用一一实现理想的生活。第
三段：论点+论据+例证+结论论点：明智的选择一一决定着人生的幸福 与否的方向论据：选择不对一一努力白费。例证：选择适合的行业，
universityor similar academic institution.To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
写作思 路指导 来自 环球雅 思慎浩 老师
题目解析：一些人认为成功的生活基于努力的工作以及决定但是其他人 认为有更重要的因素例如资金和人的外貌.讨论彼此观点给出你的观 点：关键词分析：背景关键词：success of life,论点关键词：hard work determ in ati onsuccess of life money , pers onal
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峰哥：2014年11月1日雅思写作大作文解析
Somepeoplesayjobsatisfactionismoreimportantthanjobsecurity,whileother sbelievethathavingapermanentjobisbetterthanenjoyingthejob.Discussboth oftheviewsandgiveyourownopinion.
本次考察的是社会话题（幸福和工作）。
从工作切入的题目出现的概率较小。
难度系数一如前几次，依然较大，对熊孩子们来说有一定的挑战。
在审题的时候依然要抓住“一个中心（job），两个基本点（satisfactionorsurvival)”。
但是就话题本身而言，城镇的孩纸并不陌生。
就是一个关于“工作幸福感”和“工作稳定性”哪个更重要的问题。
写的时候要注意文章结构，我在这里采用经典4段式折中方案，采用“情况分析法”，找到“人”这一个突破口进行切入。
（276字）Employmenthasbeenabigconcernamongthepublicsincenobodycansurvivewithoutsalary. However,inordertomakealiving,someoneprefertosacrificetheirhappinessandreluctantly workinanunpleasantenvironment.Then,thedisputeonjobsecurityandjobsatisfactionaros e.
Asweknow,havingapermanentjobwoulddefinitelybringpeoplemanybenefits,especiallyfo rthehomelessandthemigrantworkers.Intheirminds,foodisalwaysonthetopagendaandfoll owedbysatisfactionorhappinessoreventhebasiclivingconditionthattheyoughttohave.Soi nthelowerclass’pointtoview,havingapermanentjobmeansgettingapromiseof endlesslivin gmaterials.That’swhysomanypeopleprefertost ayinanunsatisfyingcompanyratherthanle aveforamuchenjoyableone.
However,fortheworkerswhoareabletosupporthimselforherself,theyusuallydonotstopatt hepursuitformakingaliving,butcontinuestrivingforlivinginahigh-qualitylife.Thisismostlyf ormeetingthespiritualneedsofwhichincludingthejobsatisfaction.Forthem,dissatisfactioni noneplacemeansawould-bejobhopping.Inthissense,jobsatisfactionismuchmoreimporta ntthanapermanentbutnotsatisfyingjob.
Tosumup,theextentoftheimportanceofjobsecurityandjobsatisfactionarevariousfordiffer entgroupsofpeople.IfIstandwiththelowerclass,Iwouldsaythathavingapermanentjobism orepracticableandnecessarythanpursuingthejobsatisfaction.ButifIamwiththeupperand middleclass,Iwouldholdquiteanoppositeview.。