英语二作文真题与范文(10-16)160813

英语二作文题目与范文（10-16）

2010

Section IV Writing

47. Directions:

You have just come back from the U.S. as a member of a Sino-American cultural exchange program. Write a letter to your American colleague to

1) Express your thanks for his/her warm reception;

2) Welcome him/her to visit China in due course.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei” instead.

Do not write your address. (10 points)

48. Directions:

In this part, you are asked to write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

1) Interpret the chart and

2) Give your comments.

You should write at least 150 words。

Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

Part A model

My dear friend,

Thank you very much for receiving me, a delegate of Sino-America cultural exchange program, during my visit to America. Your considerate and warm reception made me feel at home. You kindly provided detailed explanation of American custom, assisting me to get over culture shock soon and, more importantly, have deeper understanding of American culture. I had a great time there, and I really appreciate everything you have done for me.

Additionally, I highly welcome you to come to China in due course so that I can reciprocate your hospitality. I promise you a fantastic visit, through which you may gain a deep insight into Chinese culture. Look forward to your visit.

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Wei

Part B model

As is shown in the chart, mobile-phone subscriptions grow rapidly from 2000 to 2008. We can also find out that developing countries are the driving force for such a rapid growth. According to the chart, mobile-phone subscription number increased to 8 times from 2000 to 2008, that is from around 0.5 billion to 4 billion, while that of developed countries only increased twice from around 0.5 billion to 1 billion.

I think there are two main reasons for such a great contrast. First of all, developing countries have much larger population than developed countries. For example, China and India nearly have half of the total population of the world. China has the most mobile-phone users right now, which increased greatly from 2000 to 2008. It is the same in India and other developing countries. Secondly, developing countries have been enjoying strong economic growth in recent years. As a result, people in most developing countries are richer and richer, especially in China. So they can afford to buy such necessities, including mobile phones, as the prices continued to drop greatly in the past years.

Thus, we can conclude that as economy grows strongly in developing countries, people in these countries can buy such products. (201 words)

教育部考试中心《考试分析》评语：

本文得分14分（满分15分）。该文很好地完成了试题规定的任务，内容完整。在图表内容方面，考生并不仅仅局限于数字本身，而是注意挖掘这些数字背后的规律，是对图表具体数字的总结与升华。

在评论方面，内容也比较全面、中肯。本文总体结构完整，语言比较流畅，措辞准确，用词和句型有变化，无重大语法错误。另外，本文也有效使用了各种衔接手段，内容连贯，前后照应，层次分明，易于理解。字数符合要求。

但本文个别地方表达不明确，如while subscription number only increased from around 0.5 billion to 1 billion，其主语应当是developed countries。

范文二

In this chart, we can see the mobile phone subscriptions in developed countries have a steady and slight increase from 1990 to 2007 and then remain constant in 2008. Meanwhile the mobile phone subscriptions in developing countries have witnessed a slow increase from 1990 to 2004 and then a great surge from 2004 to 20007: the biggest surge happens from 2005 to 2006.

This chart reflects different developing modes of mobile phone industry in developed and developing countries. The developed countries have a limited number of populations, most of whom are well-educated. Therefore, the spreading of the mobile phone service is efficient and soon the market is saturated. Also at the beginning the developed countries have more people who can afford this service. The developing countries have a large population who keeps a large demand for mobile service. As the mobile phone service becomes cheaper and cheaper, the increasing customers subscribe to benefit from this service.