最新高考英语感谢信

英语试题写作“1.2.3”精析

假定你是新华中学的学生李华，在你的一个英国朋友Mary家里度过了愉快的一周，在回国之前，你想给Mary写一封感谢信。

内容包括：1.表示感谢；2.一周收获； 3.邀请她明年夏天到中国。

注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；词数120左右；

供： 1.表达谢意

2.感谢的原因，在英国朋友Mary家一周收获

3.邀请她明年夏天到中国。

需：写一封感谢信，词数120字左右。

结合点：把能够表达文章的意思的一些零散的词汇、短语、句型以及可以增添文章亮点的高级词汇和句型全部罗列出来，然后根据文章要求，把要表达的三个要意列成提纲放在三个自然段，有了提纲，文章在材料安排上才会层次分明，在此基础上，再把刚才想到的表达把提纲扩充，增加细节描述，并注重使用一些连接副词把文章串起来，使得文章流畅自然。最后达到我们题目的需求，呈现出一篇好的作文。

1.审题：确定文章体裁：感谢信

人称：信一般以第一人称为主

时态：一般现在时和一般将来时为主，讲过去的经历时还用到一般过去式

2.确定文章结构：第一段：表达谢意；

第二段：感谢的原因, 在英国朋友Mary家一周收获；

第三段：邀请她明年夏天到中国。

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3. 我们从供的内容可以挖掘出以下的一些要点：

文章可能会用到的一些高级词汇：

Gratitude benefit unforgettable experience improve appreciate look forward to等

文章可以用到的一些句型：

表达谢意的：

①Many thanks for your kind and warm help.

②Thank you for your generous hospitality.

③I＇m sincerely grateful for all your help in…

④Thank you for doing so much to make my trip interesting.

⑤ Thank you for your kindness to have done me a favour.

另外，表示从对方的帮助中获益时，可以用：

①I benefited greatly from your help.

②Your help benefited me greatly

③Thanks to your help , I achieved…

也可用虚拟语气来增强表达效果：

①Without your help，I couldn’t have…

②But for your help, I couldn’t have…

感谢的原因方面的：

1、During this week, I got a good knowledge of England , which introduced me to more about England culture.

2、In an environment exposed to English , my English listening and speaking skills got improved greatly.

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3、Furthermore, I made some new friends, who helped me a lot. 表示邀请的：

①Welcome to my home town next summmer.

②I really hope you can come.

③I do hope that you will be able to come.

④I would feel /be honoured if you could come.

文章可能会用到的一些起连接作用的短语：

1.what’s more; furthermore; besides;

2.as a result / as a consequence;

3.so/therefore

4.meanwhile.

5.nonetheless

6.But it's a pity that...

7.However , the difficulty lies in...

8.Similarly, we should pay attention to....

9.not(that)...but(that)...

10.In this respect, we may as well (say)

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4. 列提纲

1.本文是感谢信，用第一人称

一．确定文章的人称和时态 2.写一周收获时用一般过去时

3.表示邀请时现在时和过去时灵活选用

已知 1.表示感谢 para1 （供） 2.列举一周 para2 未知 二．正文要点 （需） 3. 发出邀请 para3 Thank you very much for… I am so grateful for… I would like to express my gratitude for… I benefited greatly from… Thanks to your help, I achieved… (用虚拟语气增强效果) Without your help, I could n’t have… But for your help, I couldn’t have I do hope that you will be able to come to…

I think it would be a good idea if you could come… I would be looking forward to your coming. Dear Mary,

I am writing to express my gratitude for

your company while I was at your home,

which was an unforgettable experience for me and I benefited a lot from it. During this week, I got a good knowledge of England, which introduced me to more than England culture. In an

environment exposed to English, my English listening and speaking skills got improved greatly. Furthermore, I made some new friends, who helped me a lot. Welcome to my home next summer. I will be your guide and you can experience traditional Chinese culture and taste Chinese

food. I am looking forward to your coming. Best wishes! Yours, Li hua