记叙文概括要点

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读写任务训练------记叙文概括和句型转换 Learning goals: To learn how to write a summary. Step1 概括方法 阅读所给材料------找出文章的内容要点

记叙文的内容要点:时间(when) 地点(where) 什么人(who) 做了什么事(what) 结果怎么样(how) 记叙文摘要----用自己的话将记叙文的五要素串联起来

我们应首先找出这篇材料中故事的主角(who), 该主角(何时何地因何原因或出于何种目的)做了何事(what), 再弄清结果如何(how), 以及该故事说明了一个什么道理或给人有什么启示。即某人做了什么事？结果如何？（who ？ what？ the result？）。有寓意的，还得加上该故事说明了一个什么道理或给人有什么启示。 在写作过程中还注意以下几点： (1)时态应与原文时态一致。 (2)一般以第三人称的形式来表述。The writer, he/she等。 (3)不能抄写原文句子，而是用同义词、同义句表达。

实战演练： Passage 1 I took a trip to a big lake in Indonesia with my family two years ago. It was really a huge lake with beautiful scenery all around. People were amazed by the endless view in front of our eyes. Later on, unlike other girls, I volunteered to go water-skiing alone, I put on the life jacket, got on the motorboat immediately and started my engine as soon as possible. The lake seemed broad and endless, I was so thrilled to enjoy my trip among the mountains and waters that I sped my motorboat. Then, after some time, I found myself in the middle of the endless lake. A sudden fear came around me. I didn’t know where I was or even how far I had gone from the shore. What was worse, it began to rain and it became very cold and foggy. I rode everywhere but find my way back. It was useless for me to cry or shout for help. I was so terrified that I began to think about all kinds of horrible things. After floating on the water helpless and hopelessly for a long time, suddenly I heard someone calling my name. Soon, a big steamboat sailed to me and they pulled me up to the deck and asked me if I was hurt, I couldn’t say a word but cried out in my father’s arms.

材料分析 when

where who what

how(result) what to learn

We may begin like these: 1.The passage is about the writer’s unforgettable experience to water-skiing. 2.The writer tells us about his unforgettable experience to water-skiing. 3.The story is about the writer who went to water- skiing . 4.The author tells us that the writer went to water-skiing.

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Passage 2 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didn’t catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldn’t believe my ears. “Yes. It’s very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Don’t consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.” Suddenly, I understood what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didn’t move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience.

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Step 2: 实战演练： Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment. I went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I need to know some basic life skills, such as balancing a check-book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I love it—good facilities, helpful instructors, and a good library. The student’s Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on dance team in college and met a ton of people that way—it was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground.