高考英语书面表达(写作)及范文汇总

高考英语书面表达(写作)及范文汇总
高考英语书面表达(写作)及范文汇总

假定你是李华,希望通过外籍教师peter找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信,描述一下你理想中笔友的条件,并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括:

1.年龄;

2.性别;

3.爱好(旅游、运动、宠物等)。

注意:1.词数100 左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.开头语已为你写好。

dear peter,

i am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

best regards,

li hua

dear peter,

i'm writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

i look forward to hearing from you soon.

best regards,

li hua

【全国ii】

1.地点:距白山入口处500米;

2.房间及价格:单人间(共20间);

100元/天;双人间(共15间);

150元/天;热水淋浴;

3.餐饮:餐厅(中、西餐),咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);

4.游泳池:全天免费开放;

5.欢迎预定。

注意:

1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯

********************************************

baishan mountain hotel is now open for business.

baishan mountain hotel is now open for business.

our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to baishan mountain. it has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. a single room is 100 yuan and a double room 150 yuan for one night. you are advised to book in advance. the hotel serves three meals a day and there are chinese food and western food for you to choose from. you can also enjoy yourself at the café drinking tea or coffee in the evening. we also have a swimming pool, which is open all day and free of charge.

在英语课堂上,你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语,还是英语、汉语兼用?某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请你围绕"how do you prefer your english classes to be taught? in english only, or in both english and chinese?"这个问题,参考所给要点,选择一种授课形式,写一篇英语短文。

注意:1. 词数100~120,短文开头已给出(不计词数)

2. 参考词汇:atmosphere 氛围

i prefer my english classes to be taught in ...

i prefer my english classes to be taught in english only. as we all know, a good learning environment is vital if we want to study english well. classes taught in english provide students with such an environment. when english is the only language used in the classroom, students will have more opportunities to practise listening and speaking. therefore, they will be able to learn more quickly.

however, there are also some problems with this teaching method. as we haven't mastered enough english words, sometimes we may find it difficult to follow the teacher. slow learner may even lose interest in english.

i prefer my english classes to be taught in both english and chinese. in my opinion, learning english is a step-by-step process. as middle school students, we only have a small vocabulary. if the teacher can use some chinese in an english class, we will understand the lesson better.

if you want to learn a lesson well, you have to understand it first. to help students understand the lesson better, the teacher should use chinese from time to time. therefore, i like my teacher to use both english and chinese in teaching.

【安徽】

假设你是李华。美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给他写封回信,主要内容如下:

* 表示赞成。

* 提出你喜欢的栏目。

* 简要说明理由。

注意:

1.词数100左右。

2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好。

3.适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

4.参考词汇:栏目一column

june 8

dear mr. green,

i am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together._______________________________________________________________________ _________________________________

yours faithfully

li hua

dear mr. green,

i am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. it is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success.

i would like the magazine to have three columns : news, teachers' advice and students' voice. from the news column we can learn about what is going on in both of our schools. in teachers' advice, our teachers can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom. students' voice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies.

i believe that this magazine will surely strengthen our ties, and i am looking forward to reading it.

yours faithfully,

li hua

【北京】

第一节情景作文(20分)

假设你是李华,要给英国笔友harry写封信,介绍你班两位同学精选班长的过程。请按下图顺序描述。

注意:1.信的开头已为你写好。

2.词数不少于60.

提示词:竞选班长monitor election

dear harry,

how are things going?

last monday.(请将情景作文写在答题卡二第一页指定区域内)

best wishes,

li hua

第二节开放作文(15分)

请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50.

in your english class, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it.

dear harry,

how are things going?

last monday, our class held a monitor election. this was our first election, so everyone was excited. two of my classmates took par in the race; liu dong and wang hong. they each gave a speech telling us what they would do when they were elected. then we voted for the monitor. the result was 28 to 15 in wang hong's favor. wang hong because our new monitor. the whole class cheered for her, and she promised to do the best she could for us all.

best wishes,

li hua

第一节开放作文(15分)

one possible version:

in this picture, a mother bird stays in her nest in a big tree, watching her babies flying away. i think the mother bird must be very proud of her children, who are able

to find their own food now. but she may also feel a sense of loss since they no longer need her day-to day care as they used to. this picture shows very well the mixed feelings of parents when watching their children grow up. for my parents, things will be much easier. we will set up a family blog to post our photos, journals, and even audios. once i leave for college, we can conveniently share our experiences and support each other no matter where we are. their "nest" will never be empty. 【福建】

假设你是林华,福建省某中学高三学生,请你根据以下学生会倡议书的内容给某英文报社写一封信,叙述拟开展活动的内容并发表自己的看法。

注意:1.信的开头语已经给出,不计入总词数;

2.可根据内容要点适当发挥,但不要逐条翻译;

3.词数100左右:

4.参考词汇:增进promote;鼓励节约encourage econonmy

dear editor,

i am a student of senior tree in a middle school in fujian province.

yours sincerely,

lin hua

dear editor,

i am a student of senior tree in a middle school in fujian province.

in order that we can make the best of learning materials, the students'union of our school is arranging an activity. we students of senfor three are called on to give away our used books, newspapers or magazines to the students in the lower grades. the idea, which is intendent to promote friendsship and encourage economy, is highly praised and supported by the teachers and students alike. the activity will last about ten days, from june 10 to 20.

as a student, i am strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful.

i hope that this kind of activity will continue in the future.

yours sincerely,

lin hua

【广东】

ⅳ写作(共两节,满分40分)

第一节基础写作(共1小题,满分15分)

上周,我们以"谁是你的偶像"为题,在2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数据:

[写作内容]

根据以上数据,写一篇短文,包括以下内容:

1.调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象;

2.男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异;

3."父母"在男女生偶像中的排序差异;

4.男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同;

5.你的偶像及理由。

[写作要求]

1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;

2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

第二节读写任务(共l小题,满分25分)

阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

dear ari,

as you sleep in my arms, i'm amazed at how light you feel. i stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. i love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all i have in store for you.

i intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. that's why your mommy and i have named you ari, which means "lion". it's our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.

before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what you'd be like. would you be a boy or a girl? would you look like mommy, daddy or your elder brothers? anyway, we would find out soon.

finally your mother's labor came. and several hours later, we met the first time.

i held you high up in the air. i then was able to cut your umbilical cord (脐带) and put you in your mother's arms. she still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face.

love,

daddy

[写作内容]

假设你就是信中的ari,父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。今天是父亲50岁生日,你准备以写信的方式,祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容(信的开头和结尾已经为你写好):

1.以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望;

2.以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩,并包括如下要点:

(1)读信后的感受;

(2)以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受;

(3)表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。

[写作要求]

1.作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;

2.信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

【湖北】

假设你是某中学学生会主席李华,你校与本地一所国际学样经常举办联谊活动.你计划在重阳节组织学生到养老院去慰问老人,拟邀请国际学校的学生参加,请你根据以下内容要点给国际学样的学生会主席tony写一封信.

要点:向老人赠送礼物(鲜花、自制贺卡......);

为老人提供服务(做清洁、陪老人聊天......);

为老人表演节目(唱歌、跳舞......).

注意:1、词数为100左右;

2、信的开关和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);

3、已给出的信的开关和结尾不得抄入答题卡.

(以下所给内容不得抄入答题卡)

dear tony,

...

looking forward to your early reply.

yours,

li hua

we have planned several activities. when we get there,we will visit the elderly in their rooms in groups,presenitng them with flowers and self-made cards to show our respect and love. then we will do some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses.

as some old people feel lonely. we may chat with them about their old days, changes of our city, or anything they are interested in. we may also give them some performanees: singing, daneing, and so on.

i am sure we will both gain a better understanding of the elderly in china. if you have any suggestions, please let us know.

【江苏】

2007年4月29日上午10点到11点,全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行,江苏省1,100万学生积极参与了这项活动。

教育部倡导学生:

* 每天锻炼一小时

* 健康工作五十年

* 幸福生活一辈子

请你根据以上提示,用英语准备一份发言稿,向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况,并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼,谈谈你的看法及理由。

注意:

1、发言稿应包括以上所有信息,要有适当发挥。

2、词数:120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

3、参考词汇:阳光体育活动--a national student sports program;

教育部--the ministry of education

good afternoon, everyone,

____________________________________________________________________

thank you!

good afternoon, everyone.

on the morning of april 29, 2007, from 10:00 to 11:00, hundreds of millions of students from primary, middle schools and universities all over china joined in a national student sports program. eleven million students in jiangsu took an active part in this program.

the ministry of education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day, in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life.

personally, i think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise. although we take an hour a day for exercise, it is well worth it. taking exercise

helps us build up our body and keep a clear mind. therefore, we can work more efficiently.

thank you!

(125词)

【江西】

你所在的班级将要举办一次主题为"what can we do for our school?"的英语演讲比赛。请写一篇英语演讲稿,要求从以下四方面中任选一至二个进行阐述,并举例加以说明。

1.关心他人;

2.美化校园;

3.受护学校设施;

4.营造良好的学习氛围。

注意:

1.不要在书面表达中出现所在学校的校名和本人姓名,否则本节判为零分;

2.词数:100左右;

3.参考词汇:

爱心--love and care;校园--campus; 设施--facilities; 氛围--environment

4.开头和结尾已经写好,且不记入词数。

hello, everyone. it's nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and i think each of us can do something.

thank you for listening!

hello, everyone. it's nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and i think each of us can do something.

the first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautiful. every one of us may plant a tree in the school, or organize a thorough cleaning on the campus. we can also form a good habit of putting the rubbish in the trashcan.

the second thing we can do is to protect the facilities in our school. when we leave the classroom, we should never forget to turn off the light or close the door. we should not leave the tap water running or waste any materials in the laboratory class. if everyone does one thing for our school, i believe we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in.

thank you for listening!

【辽宁】

大学生活即将开始,你将面对新的学习和生活环境,请根据提示写一篇英语短文,谈谈你打算如何安排你的大学生活。内容要点应包括:

* 确定新的学习目标

* 改进学习方法

* 学会独立生活

* 参加各种课外活动

* 处理好与同学的关系

注意:(1)短文的内容要连贯、完整;

(2)短文单词数:100左右(开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数)。

i will go to college in the near future. after i enter college, i plan to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning. what's more, as i am away from my

parents, it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own, such as doing some washing and cleaning by myself. in my spare time, i will take part in different kinds of school activities, for example, i will often go to the english corner to practice my spoken english. in addition, i need to get along well with my classmates and teaches at college. i think i will have a wonderful college life. (102 words)

【山东】

今年,教育部直属示范大学将招收一批免费示范生,学生毕业后须回生源所在省份的中小学任教10年以上,你愿意成为一名免费示范生吗?请陈述理由。

【】陕西

请你根据所给材料、提纲以及要求写一篇英文稿件。

背景材料:

english horizons 第25卷总228(5/2007)期

编者按:本期刊出lora的来信,欢迎读者就信中谈到的问题进互动空间行分析并提出建议。

dear editor.

i'm a senior high school student, and i want to work part-time this summer. i think it is good to do so, but my parents don't agree with me i just can't understand them i need your advice. lara

要求:

1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。

2.短文词数不少于80(不含已写好的部分)。

3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。

4.书写须清晰、工整。

提纲:

第1段:lora利用暑假打工的理由

第2段:lora父母不同意的理由

第3段:你给lora的具体建议

i think that lora wants to work part-time for these reasons. first, she can make some pocket money to meet pet daily needs and thus develop a sense of independence. second. she can learn how to deal with various problems in the workplace. third, she can build up new friendships and improve bet social skills.

but her parents may regard learning as an increasingly important task for lora. this holiday should be a catch-up time for independent study. besides, personal safety may also be one of their major considerations.

my advice for lora is this: make a detailed plan for her study and work; ask her friends to work together with her, and tell her parents that she can manage things properly. i wish lora a pleasant summer.

【四川】

假设你是李华,你的英国笔友henry 最近来信,询问你高考后的暑期安排。请胸根据以下要点,用英语回一封信,说明你的计划,并简述理由。

1.休息; 2.读书; 3.陪伴父母; 4.参加社会活动;

注意:1.词数100左右,信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数);

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯;

3.参考词汇:

高考--college entrance examination

社会活动--social activities

dear henry,

i'm glad to receive your letter.

best wishes!

li hua

first of all, a good rest is needed because i do feel tired after the hard work of all these years. of course, i'll do some reading for fun, and for knowledge as well. i'll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. they've done so much for me, you know. if possible, i'll take part in some social activities so that i can know more about the society.

best wishes!

li hua

【天津】

假设你校举办看图征文活动,题目为"how to protect our eyesight"。请你用英语写一篇短文,指出图中所反映的现象,并从阅读时间、光线、眼睛保健及睡眠等方面,谈谈保护视力的具体方法。

注意:

1.词数:不少于100词;

2.可适当加入细节,以便使行文连贯。

参考词汇:

近视 - short-sighted

how to protect our eyesight

________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________

【重庆】

据报道,7岁的美国女孩amy bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中,美国抗癌协会(acs)决定,每当amy收到一封慰问信,就给她增加3美分的治疗款。假如你是新华中学的学生李华,请你用英文给amy写一封慰问信,主要内容包括:

* 自我介绍

* 得知的情况

* 表示鼓励

* 打算为她做什么

* 祝她早日康复

注意:

1. 信的格式已为你写好

2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。

3. 词数100左右。

4. 请在答题卡上作答。

dear amy,

i am a student from xinhua middle school. i am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer.

i will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. it will give more courage to live on.

may you recover soon.

yours,

li hua

【湖南】

假设你是王平,李华是你的同窗好友,请根据下列要点,用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。

要点:1. 简要表述李华在你心目中的印象;

2. 用一到两个相关的事例进行具体描述;

3. 对他李华表示美好的的祝愿。

注意:1. 内容积极向上,语意连贯,结构完整。词数120左右。

2. 不能写成诗歌形式;不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

高考英语书面表达背诵范文25篇

高考英语书面表达背诵 范文25篇 -CAL-FENGHAI-(2020YEAR-YICAI)_JINGBIAN

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