16年改革后英语专四考试新题型材料作文模拟练习及范文分析-精选.pdf

专四新题型写作自2016年起，专四考试写作部分改革，要求根据所给的题目、图表或阅读材料等，写一篇200词左右的作文。

出现的新题型命题+材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求。

考生可以采取“简短概述材料—评论—总结”的写作模式。

值得注意的是，在写作过程中，概述材料和进行评论缺一不可，否则将可能被扣分。

例题1PART VI WRITINGRead carefully the following excerpt and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 WORDS, in which you should:1)Summarize the main message o f the excerpt, andthen2)Comment on whether students learn more fromclasses than from other resourcesYou can support yourself with information from the excerpt.Marks will be awarded for content relevance, c ontent sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss ofmarks.Do students learn more from classes than from otherresources?With the advent of the Internet and other telecommunications technologies, there is a vastly growing wealth of resources available from an immense range of media outlets. Students have the ability to absorb information in a quicker and more efficient way when researching on their own through reading publications or browsing webpages online. As a result, some people argue that students now learn more from other resources than from classes.Conducting research with online materials is an active process, which allows youngsters to focus in greater detail rather than passively listening to a lecture in a large classroom.The Internet and TV are also easily accessible platforms for students in the remote places where teaching resources are not as abundant as those in more developed regions.However, teachers have the capability of explaining the knowledge in a deeper way and not only providetheoretical explanation but also practical experience about life. They have accumulated a large body of intelligence that is profoundly more precise than other sources. Teachers not only function as initiators who impart knowledge but also serve as supervisors or guardians. The conventional role of instructors, in this day and age, has evolved to become evaluators and facilitators, guiding students in their academic and personal efforts.范文1In the information age, the traditional student-teacher relationship has been affected deeply and people begin to doubt whether students can learn more from classes thanfrom other resources.（介绍背景）According to the conventional view, teachers a re still the primary sourcefrom which students obtain professional knowledge, timely class interaction, and effective supervision fromteachers.（总结第一种观点）On the contrary, nowadays, many people believe that students can learn more from other resources s uch as Internet and TV since they aremore accessible and engage students more actively in research.（总结第二种观点）For me, I am in favor of the first view.（表明立场）Teachers play an i rreplaceable role in education, whether in the past or at present, since they not only impart it’ｓknowledge, but also educate people.（总论据）For one thing, what students learn from their classes is more precise than from other resources which provide an enormous amount of data needed to be s ifted through to determine which information is accurate.（理由一）For another, teachers in school put the shaping of personality in a place as important as the teaching of knowledge, which is hard for students to obtain from other resource.（理由二）In conclusion, the development of cutting-edgetechnology exerts a big impact on modern education. However, it can never eliminate the need for high-quality professionals in classroom.（重申论点）(213 words)例题2PART VI WRITINGRead carefully the following excerpt and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 WORDS, in which you should:1）Summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then 2）Comment on w hether people should choose to become indoorsyYou can support yourself with information from the excerpt.Marks will be awarded for content relevance, c ontent sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.Should people choose to become indoorsy in modernworld?In modern times when we can buy everything we need on the Internet, and communicate and even work through the Internet, becoming indoorsy men or womenis simply a choice of different lifestyle. In the past, if you want to buy something, you need to go out of your house, go to the store, and spend an hour or two choosing the product you want to buy. But now you can just sit in front of a computer and click your mouse, and the product can be delivered to you. Being indoorsy can save people a lot of time.Being indoorsy can allow people to think and workin a peaceful environment. For example, writers can be quite creative when they are alone at home without being interrupted.Some sociologists warn that the indoorsy lifestyle will make people become self-centered and naive. If people stay at home for a long time, they will have little interpersonal contact with others. They do not know how to have face-to-face communication with others, and they may become shy, uncomfortable, or self-centered whenthey are involved in real-life communication. This indoorsy lifestyle will have a bad effect on their normal interpersonal relationship and their normal work.Indoorsy men or women spend most of their time sitting in front of a computer, and they seldom attend outdoor activities. Watching the computer screen for a long time will do great harm to their eyes. Also, many indoorsy people do not like to attend sports activities, and in the long run, their health will get worse.范文2审题思路本题讨论“宅”生活是否可取。