高考英语大一轮复习 步骤化写作增分 第三步 过段落关 第二讲 如何写好文章正文讲义

第二讲如何写好文章正文正文是文章的核心段落，在写作时应遵循一定的顺序进行表达，才能让读者快速领会文章的表达内容，而不应是几个要点的简单堆砌。

合理地组织段落会使文章大放异彩。

一、组段应遵循的两个原则1．统一性原则一段话只能有一个中心，每句话都只能围绕这个中心去阐述，不能随心所欲地添加一些与中心无关的句子。

下面是一个缺乏统一性的段落：The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. Pointing to a policeman not far away, the young man explained. He stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind. We bought the bicycle.[名师指津]本段内容缺乏统一性，句与句之间关联性不大，貌似每句话表达一个中心意思。

语意颠倒，而且最后一句与中心无关。

正确内容如下：The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind. As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. Pointing to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, “He stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.”2．连贯性原则指句与句、段与段过渡自然(和谐、流畅，层次分明，符合逻辑)。

保持段落的连贯性就应恰如其分地运用过渡语，使内容承前启后。

如：first, at first, second, and then, finally, what’s more, but, however, such as, thus, as a result, in fact, therefore, in a word, in short等。

二、五种常见的组段排列法一般而言，段落排列是有讲究的，主要有五种常见的行之有效的方法：1．时间顺序排列法时间顺序排列法是按时间发生的先后顺序或动作先后顺序来组成段落的表达法。

这是一种简便而常见的手法，常用于讲故事、叙述经历、介绍历史事件、解释事物发展的过程、说明科学研究的程序等。

[典例1]Mike works very hard. He goes to work early. Every day he leaves his home and walks to the lift. He gets into the lift. It takes him down to the first floor.该段是按动作先后顺序，通过时间推进方式描述人物活动的，使Mike从离开家到坐电梯去一楼的场景非常清晰地呈现在读者眼前。

有时为了明确各句之间的时间关系，会使用一些较明显的时间标记或过渡语等。

[典例2]I was born in New York, but I grew up in San Francisco. I began to live in London25 years ago with my wife. If I am asked where I want to live forever, I would say London.[名师指津]按时间顺序安排的段落同样首先要写好主题句，然后按事情发生的顺序或步骤的先后进行组织表达，所以要学会选用合适的表示时间先后的过渡语，使句与句之间有机地联系起来。

过渡语就如同润滑剂，起到承上启下的作用，使表达流畅、自然。

在表达时间顺序时，经常使用的衔接词和过渡语有：now, then, before, after, afterwards, earlier, later, first, first of all, to begin/start with, firstly, at first, at the beginning, at the moment, at the same time, immediately, soon, next, meanwhile, gradually, finally, recently以及具体的时间状语，如in January, on Monday, on the morning of, in 2018, in spring, in a few days, in the past five years, one morning, the day before yesterday等。

2．空间顺序排列法空间顺序排列法是指按照事物或人物所处的空间位置进行有序的组织和布局的表现手法，如从左到右、从顶端到底部、由近及远等各种自然的顺序。

这种表达法常用于写人、物和景，大到一个国家、一个民族、一座山、一个湖、一艘轮船、一架飞机等，小到一幢房子、一个院子、一个房间、一件物品、一张脸等。

这种表达手法可分为静态描写和动态描写。

其目的是易于读者正确地理解所表达的内容。

按所表达的人或物相互之间的空间关系，进行有序地组织和描写。

一旦确定了安排顺序的形式，空间中的所有人或事物都应遵循这一形式，中途不能随意停止和改变。

[典例3]In the western suburbs of Jinan, there stands a small village. That is my native place. My native place is full of beauty. A green hill is behind it, and a wide field in front. Around the village, there is a little stream in which the fish are swimming to and fro. The most populous part of the village is in the west. There are many stone houses standing among the green trees. In the east of the village there is a temple, which has been used as a primary school. If one stands on the hill, he is sure to see a perfect view of the village.上文描述的是自己的家乡，作者按照空间顺序对村庄进行了描述，给读者展现了一幅清晰而美丽的家乡图画。

文中使用了许多表示位置的过渡语，使全文流畅通顺。

从上面的短文我们看出要写一篇准确描述空间位置的段落应该具备：(1)好的主题句；(2)空间位置的清晰、有序的组织；(3)合适的表示空间位置的过渡语。

按空间展开的段落之中的衔接词和过渡词有：near, near to, close to, far, far from, in front of, beyond, above, below, under, beneath, up, down, along, to the right/left, in/to the east of, around, surrounding, on the one side, on the other side, inside, outside, alongside, over, throughout, towards, in the middle, in the centre, at the top of, at the foot of, at the bottom of, at the edge of, at the end of, across 等。

3．比较对照排列法比较对照排列法是指将两个或更多的相似或相近的人或物，通过比较和对照，说明其差异及相似性的写作手法，其目的是揭示该事物或人物的特点或特征。

严格地说，比较是指出同种类型的两人(或更多人)或两物(或更多物)的相同点，而对照则是指出他(它)们的不同点。

然而，在实际表达时，比较和对照往往同时运用。

对事物或人物做比较对照时要注意的是：只能就同类的人或物进行比较，比如把当今中国和旧中国比较，而不能与计算机比较。

事物之间在逻辑上很难搭配的比较称之为比拟，如人生和河流，两者之间明显不同，只是比拟其相似性。

[典例4]Today, women’s life is much better than ever before. In the past women couldn’t get a job. They could only stay at home to take care of babies. But now women can get jobs easily and they can do any work as men do. In cities, all girls can go to school, and even in the countryside many girls can go to school, too.Now, people cherish girls as much as boys. They say girls and boys are the same. In their homes, husbands also do housework.People often say, “Women hold up half the sky.” In fact, women play a very important role in today’s society.I believe that one day, there will be a woman president in China.[名师指津]文章讨论了当今一个热点话题——现代妇女的社会地位。