高考英语新创新一轮复习写作第三编第一讲词汇营造亮点4角度学案含解析

第三编要想作文得高分，首先要让作文的亮点飞。

如果作文没有一点萤萤亮点，那作文只能在基础等级徘徊。

如何营造些许亮点，本部分从两大方面词汇、句式、18个角度给予细化讲解。

第一讲词汇营造亮点4角度扮亮词汇(一) 特别的爱给特别的你——名词名词属于实词，名词表示人、事物、地点或抽象概念的名称，名词同时也分为专有名词和普通名词。

名词用得好更能出众脱俗，让阅卷老师眼前一亮。

名词的种类：普通名词专有名词可数名词不可数名词专门指代某一人、物、地点等的名词个体名词集体名词物质名词抽象名词[典题1] (一般词)Now we have a chance to develop a greater understanding of each other.(高级词)Now we have an opportunity to develop a greater understanding of each other.现在我们有一个好机会，可以大大增进对彼此的了解。

[典题2] (一般词)There are four basic choices; they are described briefly below.(高级词)There are four basic alternatives; they are described briefly below.有四个基本的选择，简述如下。

高中阶段常见的名词及名词短语类写作高级词汇①机会 chance→opportunity②选择 choice→alternative③课程 course→curriculum④影响 effect→influence/impact⑤后果 result→consequence⑥缺点 shortcoming→drawback⑦方法way→approach⑧职业career→profession⑨建议advice→guidance⑩老人old people→the old/the elderly/the aged/senior citizens⑪青少年young people→youngsters/youths/adolescents⑫几天前a few days ago→the other day⑬一个表现好的孩子a child who behaves in a proper way→a well­behaved child[专题过关训练]先用所给的词补全句子，然后对该词进行升级1．因此，我没有足够的时间去锻炼。

As_a_result,_I don't have enough time to take exercise.(result)→As_a_consequence,_I don't have enough time to take exercise.2．所有学校都设有音乐和舞蹈课。

All the schools have music and dancing classes as_parts_of_the_course.(course)→All the schools have music and dancing classes as_parts_of_the_curriculum.3．他们称他们期望这次会议会对国家的未来产生显著影响。

They say they expect the meeting to have_a_marked_effect_on_the_future of_the_country.(effect)→They say they expect the meeting to have_a_marked_impact/influence_on_the_future_of_the_country.4．(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)最重要的是，老人通常是最先品尝桌上食物的人，因为他们在中国受到很好的尊重。

Most importantly, old_people_are_usually_the_first_to_taste the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.(old people)→Most importantly, the_old/the_elderly/the_aged/senior_citizens_are_usually_the_first_to_taste the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.5．(2018·天津高考书面表达)因此，我认为这不仅是你展示自己才华的黄金机会，同时也可以为我们提供建议。

Therefore, I think not_only_will_it_be_a_golden_chance_for_you_to_show_your great_talent,_but_also_you_can_offer_us_advice.(chance, advice)→Therefore, I think not_only_will_it_be_a_golden_opportunity_for_you_to_show_your great_talent,_but_also_you_can_offer_us_guidance.6．在这类职业中，只有20%的岗位是由女性担任的。

Only_20_percent_of_jobs_in_the_careers are held by women.(career)→Only_20_percent_of_jobs_in_the_professions are held by women.7．激励这些年轻人的不是对成就的渴望，而是对失败的恐惧。

These_young_people_are_motivated not by a desire to achieve, but by fear of failure.(young people)→These_youngsters/youths/adolescents_are_motivated not by a desire to achieve, but by fear of failure.8．我们将探索收集信息的不同方法。

We will be exploring different_ways_to_gather_information.(way)→We will be exploring different_approaches_to_gathering_information.扮亮词汇(二) 炫酷亮闪你的眼——动词(短语)动词根据其后是否能跟宾语，可分为两类，分别是：及物动词(Transitive Verb)、不及物动词(Intransitive Verb)，缩写形式分别为vt.和vi.。

[典题1] (一般词)He likes playing football, which is his favourite.(高级词)He is fond of playing football, which is his favourite.他喜欢踢足球，这是他最喜欢的运动。

[典题2] (一般词)As for me, I believe that the number of tourists should be limited for the following reasons.(高级词)As for me, I'm firmly convinced that the number of tourists should be limited for the following reasons.就我而言，我坚定地认为游客的数量应得到限制，理由如下。

高中阶段常见的动词及动词短语类写作高级词汇①看见see→catch sight of②遇见meet→come across③引起cause→lead to/result in/give rise to④拥有have→possess⑤提高develop/improve→promote⑥替代replace→substitute⑦面对face→be faced with⑧容忍bear→put up with⑨处理do with→deal with/cope with⑩决定decide→determine/make up one's mind⑪考虑consider→take into account/consideration⑫应该should→be supposed to⑬理解understand→make sense of/figure out⑭使用use→employ/make use of/take advantage of⑮道歉apologize→make an apology⑯记住remember→keep in mind⑰发生happen→occur/come about⑱想起think of→occur to/come up with⑲感谢thank→appreciate⑳帮助某人help sb.→do sb.a favor21节省save→set aside○22参观visit→tour/pay a visit to○23分发hand out→distribute○24站起来stand up→get to one's feet○25习惯于be used to→be accustomed to○26一定be sure to→be bound to○27为……做准备prepare for→make preparations for/be prepared for○28反对be against→object to○29厌烦be bored with→be fed up with/be tired of○30忙于be busy in (with)→be occupied in (with)/be buried in/be engaged in○31闻名be famous for→have a reputation for○32感到舒服feel comfortable→feel at ease○33美化学校make the school beautiful→beautify the school○34置若罔闻refuse to listen to→turn a deaf ear to○35成功做某事succeed in doing sth.→make it○36想做某事want to do sth.→seek/intend/desire to do sth.○37照看look after→attend to○38尽力做某事try one's best to do sth.→spare no effort to do sth.○39向某人寻求帮助ask someone for help→turn to sb.for help○40我认为I think→in my opinion/as far as I'm concerned○[专题过关训练]Ⅰ.选用方框中的短语替换下列句中加黑部分put up with， consist of， be devoted to， make use of， fix one's eyes uponthe picture on the wall.fixed_his_eyes_upon 2．The small group has six people.consists_of3．She was afraid she couldn't bear the pain.put_up_with4．All his life was given to the Party's educational cause.was_devoted_to5．We will use her vast experience.make_use_ofⅡ.请用高级词汇替换下列句中加黑部分1．(2018·6月浙江高考写作)I will be grateful if you could offer me the opportunity.give_me_a_kind_consideration2．(2016·北京高考书面表达)Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.came_up_with3．(2015·湖南高考书面表达)At the same time, I decided to study harder rather than wasteprecious time on those useless things.made_up_my_mind4．We'll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.promote5．Would you please help me to turn down the radio？do_me_a_favor6．Developing very quickly, the Internet causes the breakdown of face­to­face communication.gives_rise_to7．When you are bored with the people sometimes, you'd better find a quiet place, listening to some classical music.fed_up_with8．So far as I know, everyone of them wants to be a model student.intends_toⅢ.用所给动词的高级词汇补全句子1．几天前我在你的店铺买了一部手机。