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高考英语短文改错专项训练（含答案）1.【2016 ·全国新课标I】短文改错（ 10分）3. 【2016 ·全国新课标III 】短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分10My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for m Theybig ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I though knewcustomers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my pa didntells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do onefresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that time , I even felt my parents couldn ’t understand me so I h could behe never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strang clothes.that our business will grow steady.Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but wantto have my parents to turn to whenever need help.2.【2016 ·全国新课标II】短文改错（共10 小题，每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home andtake a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a tripabroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get frombooks. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.4.【2016 ·四川】短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分It is Mother ’s Day today. Though it ’s a western festival, it China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the housewo a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, a shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flow asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The1Mother ’s Day ！”Mom was grateful and moving.5.【2016 ·浙江】短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice Iremember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day ,we’d greet het at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us, Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat,my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It wasboth excited and frightening to be up there！My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor a packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surpri made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy t biscuits with happy laughter!2.【2015 ·四川】短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1.5 分，共 15 分Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really share with you some of theproblems I have been experiencing.2015 年高考试题分项解析之专题---- 短文改错As I tell you last time, I made threenew friend here. We hang outtogetherdul u n c h a n d1.【2015 ·陕西】短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1.5 分，满分 15 分）My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bar been three Saturdaysnow and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time activity! In fact ,I don ’t like to go anymore, so I’m afra friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you2him?Please help with me and give me some advice.race3.【2015 ·浙江】短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at theview. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. Inthe mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy theview of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I wasalways interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position ofthe classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was onlya child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.4.【2015 ·新课标全国II 】One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his paren very crowdedG. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so v that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony wa and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“H again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised he never happen again.5.【2015 ·新课标全国I 】When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would b am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industr environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown t has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways environment. Ifwe fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .2014 年高考试题分项解析之专题---- 短文改错1. Correction 1(2014课标全国Ⅰ )Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and Iplanted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then—for allthese year — we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, butjuicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with ourneighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place yearafter year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!2. Correction 2(2014课标全国Ⅱ )My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities.For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports forone hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowersand trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest,or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and h They are not only our teachers but also our friends.3. Correction 3(2014浙江)I was taking a train to London ’s Victoria Station. I had notic carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A pa realized he couldn ’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually foun seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket s pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even notice ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers t If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a place to live in.4. Correction 4(2014辽宁)Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors,to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.We ’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all nightwith the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that youcan figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose5. Correction 5(2014四川)Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should dowhen a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door andwait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher imclassmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come5高考英语短文改错专项训练(答案解析 ) 2. 【2016 ·全国新课标II 】短文改错（共10 小题，每小题 1 分，1.【2016 ·全国新课标I】短文改错（ 10分）【答案】 1.how 改为 what2.chose 改为 choose3.take 改为taking4.b【答案】1. that →where 2. but去掉 3. had→have 4. honest → honesty and 5.about 后加 the5. or → and6.your 改为 our7.knowledges改为 knowledge8.删除 can can 改为 s6. using → used7.becoming前加 of8.the →a9. our → his10.9.thought 改为 think 10.many改为 muchstead →steadily 【解析】试题分析：考查记叙文，“我”和同学们对暑假的旅游计论。
高考英语短文改错精选附答案
高考英语短文改错选编练习01 Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years. It camesudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I 76. __went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and 77. ____all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my 78. ____room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air 79. _______and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch 80. _______ them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came back 81. _______into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried 82. _______very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly 83. _______ crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran 84. ____ out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the 85. ___top of the back room.02 I have been planning to join in our college basketball team 76. ______ next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can 77. _______with other people who likes to play. They are teaching 78. _______me the most important rules and technologies of the game, 79. _______ and I am getting the better all the time. We have a 80. _______ neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area. 81. _______ One of my neighbors is helping rest of us 82. _______improved our skills. Tonight we are playing against 83. _______one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can 84. _______beat them if we won't make any mistakes. 85. _______3Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher ofBeijing Opera Theatre. Most of his students are from other part of 76. ___ China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen 77. _______ or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his students 78. _______ that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to 79. _______study in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when 80. _______ performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he 81. _______never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing. 82. _______For his opinion, actors should go on even when they 83. _______feel they have made a mistake in their performances 84. _______ because the moment is already gone but people can never 85. _______be back to it. . . So art is always changing and developing.4Today is Sunday, I have been studying all day long. On the 76. _______ morning, I had a dry breakfast. We have no water to drink because 77. ____ the water supplcut off. The water had come back in 78.__the evening. I did math then. I didn't stop after 12 o'clock. After a 79. _____ short lunch I had the break. Then I went to my Sunday English Class80.___ After a long and tired class for more than two hours, I got 81. _______to home. Some work had been done but some hadn't. I must 82. _______ review all my subject such as the Sciences, the Humanities, 83. _______ which include Chinese, English, Politics and History as 84. _______ well. That's terribly! Especially when there was no water. 85. _______5I was recent told that listening to loud music is gradually 76. _______ making people hard of hearing. I'm sure it has already been 77. _______ happened to my neighbor. For years she has turned a deaf 78. _______ ear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gave a 79. _______ party she isn't have to invite the rest of the street. Everyone 80. _______ can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has 81. _______ discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on 82. _______ rats. He declares they break down, almost paralyze(瘫) with 83. _______ legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them 84. _______ out by their tail. I wonder if the same thing will happen to 85. _______ my neighbor someday.6Dear Ralph,I'm a senior student. I have be in love with a boy for three 76. _______ years. But he is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstly 77. _______to express my feeling. And he wrote back. In his letter 78. _______he said, "We are students. Our task is study. Let us wait 79. _______to see until we have any chance after graduation." So 80. _______after graduation I telephoned to him, asking him about 81. _______go out . But he said he didn't want to. He just 82. _______wanted to sleep and watched TV. 83. _______What do you think I should do Do you think 84. _______I should continue to love him and give up 85. _______Sheila7Before leaving the class, the teacher, Miss White,said to her class, "Don't leave yourseats. Read your books on yourselves. You 76. _______would study hard and be good students. " As soon 77______as the teacher went away, the classroom becoming 78_______noisy. One boy drew a picture of the teacher 79_______on the blackboard. Another boy began to make face 80_____just to make the other students to laugh. The boy 81______put his finger close to his mouth and tell the 82______class that Miss White is coming back. All the 83______students sat down their seats and the classroom 84______became quiet again. The door open and in came Miss White. 85_____英语短文改错练习(02)1Once there lived a boy was very fond of 76________reading. But he was so poor to buy any 77________books. So he had to borrow them from a rich man 78________lived far away. The boy always tried 79________hard to finish read the books and returned 80________them to the owner within the giving time. So 81________the rich man was ready lending him any of the 82________books he wanted them. In this way he read a lot 83________and late became a well-known writer of his time. 84________ However, the rich man's son who didn't like to studyremained a man with a little knowledge. 85________2Our four-years-old son came into the house 76________proudly to showed me a caterpillar(毛毛虫)that was 77________ crawling up his arm. Trying hard to hiding my 78________nauseating feeling(掩饰我的恶心), I said, "Mark, 79________why don't you take them back outside Its mother 80________will be looking for it, but it will miss its mother. " 81________I was feeling rather pleasing at the way I had 82________handled the situation. And a few minutes 83________later Mark returned back to the house with two 84________caterpillars and said excitedly , "Look, I founded the mother!" 85________ 32001NMETLike most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers nor 76________ sisters---in any other words, I am an only child. My parents 77________ love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure 78________ that I get a good education. They did not want me to do 79________any work at family; they want me to devote all my time to 80________ my studies so that I'll get good marks in all my subject. We 81________ may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do 82________not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks 83________as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they 84________ really understand their own daughter What things are inother homes , I wonder. 85________4March22nd , Tuesday , cloudyI watch TV until nearly 12 o clock, so I could not 76________go over my lessons. This morning I got up very late 77________that I had to hurry school without breakfast yet I 78________was late of the first class . When I entered the 79________ classroom, the maths teacher had to stop explaining 80________an important problem, and all the eyes fixed upon 81________me . My face turned to red. Something even worse 82________ happened to me in the English class. The teacher askedme to recite the text, but I could speak nothing but 83________Sorry , as I did not spend any time preparing my lessons . 84________ The teacher looked at me with his coldly eyes, I stood 85________at my bench without daring to raise my head . Whata terrible day I had! I will never do anything like this.5A king liked to write stories.One day, the king showed some his stories 76________with a famous writer. The writer said that 77________these stories were bad. The king get angry 78________with him and sent him to the prison. After 79________one time the king felt pity for the writer 80________and set him freely. When the writer was 81________out prison, again the king showed him 82________some stories and asked how he thought them. 83________The writer turned into the soldiers and said, 84________"Take me back prison. " 85________6At beginning of term I 76________introduced my teacher for my parents. 77________Our teacher Mr. Wang asked my parents of my 78________summer holiday. To my parents' opinion 79________I have a good time with my classmates. 80________I told my teacher that I had finished 81________homeworks at home. Then I helped 82________my father in the farm. We went on 83________work by the lights of the tractors . 84________Father had only two and three young men 85________working for him at harvest time.7Time flies as an arrow. I'm already in the second half 76________of senior grade 3 before I realized it. It is only a little more 77________ than three months before I graduate middle school. At 78________the present, I'm busy reviewing my lessons in order to 79________take the college entrance examination. I hope to go to 80________Beijing University, that is one of the best universities not 81________only in China but also in the world. I'll try my best to turn 82________my dream to reality. Most of my classmates are also 83________studying very hard to realize our wishes. I do believe 84________ everyone will be able to enter a very good university and college 85________ 英语短文改错练习(03)1Once, lately at night, an Englishman came out 76_________of his room into a passage of the hotel and ask 77_________the servant to bring her a glass of water. The servant 78_________did as he asked. The Englishman reentered his room, 79_________and a few minutes later he came into the passage again 80_________and once more asked the servant a glass of water. 81_________Every a few minutes the Englishman would come out 82_________of his room and repeated his request. After a half hour 83_________the astonishing servant decided to ask the man what 84_________he was doing with the water. "Nothing," answered he 85_________ calmly. "It's simply that the room is on fire.短文改错011.76. sudden--suddenly 77. hotter---hot 78. is--was 79. √ 80. out--out of81. drop—drops 82. house前加the 83. loudly---loud 84. 去掉when 85. broke--broken276. 去掉in 77. more → much 78. likes → like 79. technologies → techniques 80. 去掉the 81. play → plays 82. rest前加the 83. improved → improve 84. √ 85. won't → don't376. part- parts 77. a-the 78. hope∧to 79. 去掉it 80. thought-thinks81. deep-deeply 82. hearing-heard 83. For-In 84. √ 85. but-and476. On→In 77. have→had 78. 在cut前加上been 79. after→until 80. the→a81. tired→tiring 827. 去掉to 83. subject→subjects 84. 正确85. terribly→ terrible576.recently 77 去掉been 78 正确79 gave---gives 80 isn't---doesn't81 in---to 82 去掉a 83 with后加their 84 trembled---trembling 85 tail---tails676. be--been 77. firstly--first 78. feeling--feelings 79. 加to 80. until-- if / whether 81. 去掉to 82. go--going 83. watched--watch 84. 对85. and—or776 on-by 77 would-should 78 becoming-became 79 √ 80 face-faces81 to 82 tell-told 83 is-was 84 down-down on 85 open-opened短文改错02176 boy-boy who 77 so-too 78 √ 9 lived-who lived 80 read-reading81 giving-given 82 lending-to lend 83 them 84 late-later 85 a276 years-year 77 showed-show 78 hiding-hide 79 √ 80them-it81 but-and 82 pleasing-pleased 83 And-But 84 drop "back" 85 founded-found376 √ 77 any 78 can –can to 79 did-do 80 family-home81 subject-subjects 82 a –the 83 about 84 and-or 85 homes-families476. watch--watched 77.very---so 78.hurry后加to 79.of--for 80. √81.eyes后加were 82.to 去掉83.speak--say 84.as--for 85.coldly--cold.576some→some of 77 with →to 78 get →got 79 the 80 √81 freely →free 82 out→ out of 83 thought→ thought of 84 into→ to 85 back→ back to676 At→ At the 77 for→ to 78 of→ about 79 To→ In 80 have→ had81 √ 82 homeworks→ homework 83 in→ on 84 work→ working 85 and→ or776As—like 77.realized-realize 78.graduate∧ from 79.the 80 examinations81.that—which 82 √ 83 to—into 84 our—their 85 and--or短文改错0376 lately-late 77 ask-asked 78 her-him 79 he-he was 80 and-but81 servant-servant for 82 a 83 repeated-repeat 84 astonishing-astonished 85 right。
四川岳池县戴氏教育2022高考英语阅读理解和短文改错自练(3)及答案
1.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
留意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Once a man got on a bus for New York. He hid herself in the toilet，because he did not want to pay. But the passenger saw him. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say，“There's a bum (流浪汉) in the toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was pass from person to person. But anywher e along the way，it told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped bus and telephoned the police. When the police came，they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway，which resulted from a traffic jam. The police searched for several hour. Of course they found no bomb at all！【参考答案】1.其次句herself 改为himself第三句the改为a第四句say改为said第五句pass改为passed第六句anywhere改为somewhere第七句told前加was第八句immediate改为immediately第九句or改为and第十句from改为in第十一句hour改为hours 2.短文改错以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列状况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
高考英语短文改错 逻辑错误
考法3| 逻辑错误错误1——肯定误用否定或相反1．(2017·山东师大附中模拟)Unluckily, he was the only one who finally got the job, because the manager decided to give the job to whoever he believed was helpful.Unluckily→Luckily[作为唯一得到工作的人，应该是幸运的。
] 2．(2017·湖北省枣阳市模拟)In fact, he even scared my classmates away when they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.never→ever[此处应表达“他是我所认识的最温柔的人”，故never改为ever。
]3．(2017·长沙一中模拟)In my opinion, if the children are old enough and have the ability to live on their own, they can go abroad for further studies. Otherwise, they had not better study in their own country.去掉had和better之间的not[此处表示，他们最好在自己的国家学习，故去掉not。
]4．(2017·湖南市六校联盟联考)At last, Ben called me just before I went to bed. I saidI ever minded. We are still good friends now and I feel much better.ever→never[根据句意可知，此处表示我并不在意，故ever改为never。
高考英语短文改错训练3,共5篇,含答案
2020届高二英语专题：短文改错（三）1.短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
）划掉。
修改：修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
后的词。
Good morning, everyone. It’s great honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li Xiaojun, born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teachers. Influenced by them, I read widely during my early age, but I’ve developed a great interest in arts and sports. I’m easy-going, get along well with my classmates.It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also help me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your university has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream constantly that I, along with mine classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors. I dream that I will swim freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.1.Good morning, everyone. It’s ∧ great honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li Xiaojun,a born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teachers. Influencedboth 或去掉all by them, I read widely during my early age, but by them, I read widely during my early age, but I’ve developed a great interest in arts and I’ve developed a great interest in arts andand sports. I’m easy sports. I’m easy-going, -going, ∧get along well with my classmates.and 或get 改为getting It is this personality which It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also helpthathelps me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your to university has always been a beautiful dream for me.university has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream I dream constantly that I, along with minemy classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors. I dream that I will swimhappily freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.dreams2.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
高考英语短文改错练习题30题
高考英语短文改错练习题30题1. I go to school by bike every day, but yesterday I took a bus because my bike is broken.答案：is 改为was。
错误类型为时态错误。
因为前面提到yesterday，所以句子整体要用过去时态。
依据的语法规则是一般过去时表示过去某个时间发生的动作或存在的状态。
2. In our school, there have many activities for students to take part in.答案：have 改为are。
错误类型为there be 句型误用。
there be 表示“有”，不能用there have。
依据的语法规则是there be 句型的固定用法。
3. The teacher asked us to write a composition, and I spend two hours finishing it.答案：spend 改为spent。
错误类型为时态错误。
整个句子叙述的是过去的事情，要用过去时态。
依据的语法规则是一般过去时的用法。
4. I am interesting in playing basketball, and I often play it after school.答案：interesting 改为interested。
错误类型为形容词误用。
be interested in 是固定搭配，表示“对……感兴趣”。
依据的语法规则是interested 修饰人，interesting 修饰物。
5. The students are required to hand in their homework on time, but some of them always forget to do it.答案：forget 改为forgets。
错误类型为主谓不一致。
英语高考短文改错精选和答案详解(25篇)
高考短文改错精选及答案详解(25篇)1.Friendship is importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all 76.our lives we can’t live without friendship just like we can’t77.live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on 78.well with one another to go ahead under different kind of 79. difficulties in front of us. But real friendship is easy to 80.come by, True friendship must be sincerely and be based 81.on understand each other but not on benefits of each 82.other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us. 83.By his advice we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore 84.more friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves. 85.2.Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over 91. _______ the world men and woman , boys and girls enjoy sports . Since 92. _______ long ago , many adults and children called their friends together 93. _______to spend hours , even days play games . One of the reasons why people 94. _______like to play is that sports help them to live happily . In other words, 95. _______they help to keep people strongly and feeling good . When people are 96. _______playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities 97. _______for their health .Having fun with their friends make them happy. 98. _______Many people enjoy sports by watch the others play. In American 99. _______big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games. 100 _______3.Last week life didn’t look very well for heart transplant patient.76. Barry Brooks from London. He was told six month ago that he would 77. need the operation if he is to survive. He immediately planned to make 78. the across Atlantic journey to the hospital in Chicago to have the 79. operation on. While he was in transit（中转）at JFK airport in New York, 80. he received the news that his new heart had accidentally transported 81. to other hospital. Barry then had to get on a different plane to 82. convey him to the other hospital, there the operation was carried. 83. out in time. Barry is now gradually recovering from the transplant. 84. but he told us,“ I feel like being a new man-this new heart has”85. changed my life.”4.Have you ever asked you why children 76.go to school? You’ll probably say that they 77.go to learn their native languages and other 78.languages, physics, geography, history or all 79.the other subject. That’s quite true, but 80.why they learn these things? And are these 81.things all what they learn at school? 82.There is much in school education than 83.just learning knowledge. We go school, above 84.all, to learn how to learn, so that when we’ll 85.finish school, we can continue to learn.5.The Chinese diet is the healthy in the world. 61.It contains lots of fruit and green vegetables. 62.It's high at fibre and low in sugar and fat. 63.But the western diet contains too many 64.fat and sugar in form of creams, cakes and so on. 65.Because this, westerners very easily 66.put to weight. As a result, scores of people 67.die from heart illness, some suffer from 68.bad teeth. So the doctor suggests us not 69.to do that. We'd better to eat our healthy food. 70.6.Dear classmates ,Now I’d like to tell you why I learn English. 1. __I often read English aloud and try learn something 2. __ important by hearts , which helps me remember it easily and 3. __ form the good habit of thinking in English 4. __I listen to a lot and talk with others in English . 5. __In this way , I was improved both my hearing 6. _ and my spoken English. I keep a diary in English every day but my 7. ___ spoken English is becoming better and better. 8. ___ I also try my best to master the necessary grammarknowledge. By this means , I can express itself 9. ___ in English correct . That’s the way I have been learnin g 10. __ English . I hope it will be useful to you .That’s all . Thank you.7．Dear Mr. Smith,I am writing to tell you a piece of excited news: 76.___________I won first place in the Spoken English Competition of 77.___________ our city . The achievement that I made it is due to your 78.___________ kind help. You spent so much time help me with my spoken 79.___________English that I made rapid progress, I remember you advice 80.___________" Speak slowly and clearly. " Thank you very much all your time 81.___________and advice . I heard that you and your wife will visit 82.___________our school before long. I'm very glad and look forward to 83.___________see you. I sent you a telescope as a small gift. 84.___________Please check the mail and I hope you will like them. 85.___________Yours Li Ming8．Nowadays more and more people, specially schoolboys and schoolgirls, are 76_____ give to video games. Many of them spend all of their spare time 77_____ to the games, and some even stay at the game machines all day 78_____ long. The reason is that they can enrich their lives as well as 79_____ knowledge by playing video games. But it’s a good way of relaxing 80_____ after a day’s work and study , as video games can bring a fun to 81_____ people’s life. However, on the other hand , play video games too 82_____ much can waste time and money, and has an ill effect on 83_____ people’s eyesight and healthy .So, video games, like coins, have two sides. 84_____ The key point is that we should make of the games properly. 85_____9Henry Royce did not like his car, that ran badly and often 76.broke down. So he decided to make a best car himself, 77.and in 1904 he produced his first new model. Charles Rolls, 78.a car maker, was very interested in Royce' s car, but soon 79.Rolls and Royce go into business together. One of their first 80.model was the Silver Ghost. In 1907, a Silver Ghost broke the 81.world’s record by drive 14,371 miles without breaking down 82.once. After the drive, it was cost just over ￡2 to put the car 83.back into perfect condition. This is not surprising that the Silver 84.Ghost was regarded “the best car in the world”. 85.10．Most families in China hoped their single children will 61. ______have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. 62. ______So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much 63. ______homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. 64. ______The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No 65. ______wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even 66. ______attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people 67. ______already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. 68. ______Shouldn’t we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our 69. ______government is carry out a plan to solve the education problems. 70. ______11One day, on her way school, Li Lan found a small bag 76.________near a bus station. She opened it and found a lot of money 77.________as soon as a calling card inside. From the calling card, she 78.________ invented the owner’s address and his telephone number. 79.________She thought the owner must very worried. So she went 80.________to the public telephones and called the owner. Then she 81.________ waited for the bus station. The owner came by taxi very 82.________ soon, and Li Lan gave the bag to him. The owner is so grateful 83._________to her that he took out from 100 yuan to reward Li Lan, 84._________ But Li Lan polite refused it and went on to school. 85._________12Fishing is my favorite sport. I often fished for 76.________________hour without catching anything, but this doesn’t worry 77. ________________me. Some fishermen are unlucky. Instead catching fish, 78. ________________they catch old boots and rubbish. I’m even less luck. I 79.________________never catch everything—even old boots after having 80. ________________spent a whole morning on the river. So I always go home 81. ________________with empty bag. “Y ou should give up fishing,” my friends 82. ________________say, “It’s a waste time.” But they don’t realize one 83. ________________ important thing. I’m not real interested in fishing. I’m 84. ________________only interested in sitting in a boat and do nothing at all. 85. ________________13．Life is made up from success and failure. No 76. ______ one is always success and also no one is always a 77.______ failure. So it doesn’t make much different 78.______ whether you are successful or not. The most 79._-____ important thing is simply that you do before your success 80.______ or failure. If you lost heart when you fail 81.______ or show proud when you succeed, you will 82.______ never succeed. Instead, you should face to it 83.______ bravely and keep up with your courage when you 84.______ success, and then your failure can be changed into success. 85._______14．I went to the Summer Palace last week. At the gateI happened to meet some American tourists. I greeted to 76.______them in English and then we began to chat. I got know 77.______that they were college students travel in China. Most of 78.______them were found of Chinese medicine. They are busy taking 79.______pictures and were much impressed with the changes that 80.______had been taken place in the past few years as well. After 81.______that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time. 82.______We exchanged our email address so that we could write to 83.______each other in future. They thanked us again and again. I 84.______was very glad to have a chance to practicing my oral English. 85._______15．Tom and Dick are next door neighbor who both 76. ____work in same office. They often walk together to and 77. ____from work. Once they were walking to home together 78. ____while it suddenly started to rain. Tom quickly opened 79. ____his umbrella and said proud, “My wife really was great80. ____ foresight. She said this morning it would rain and tell 81. ____me to carry my umbrella.” Dick smiled and walked 82. ____up to him under the protection of the umbrella, said, 83. ____“Mine has even great foresight. She didn’t let me84. ____carry one as she knew you’d share yours with you.”85. ____16．Before he was a teacher , Bob told me what he 76 ___________ would like to be a lawyer when he was at school . 77 ___________ He worked very hard in his lessons and tried to 78___________ enter into a famous university , but something unhappy 79 ___________ happened in his family , which make necessary for him 80___________ to make for a living . As a young man , he had been a 81___________ bus driver ,a dustman and a salesman .But he spends his 82 ___________ spare time studying and finally becoming a college 83___________ teacher . “Young people,” he often said ,“full of wishes 84 ___________ and dream s before they step into the society” 85 ___________17．As is known , that is interesting to teach children to 76__________ swim while they are still babies . Most the large towns in 77 __________ Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for 78__________ babies . The idea has quickly spread to Europe from where, 79__________in several countries , special courses are now offered to 80 __________the children who are from 7 to 24 month old . 81 __________The first step is to have child get rid of fear of 82 __________ water . Next , he is teaching to float in water . Once he 83__________can do that naturally and can swim with fear , the child can 84__________ master the technique and push him forward through the water. 85__________18．At a party, it is quite normal of someone to have 1. ____a short conversation with you and then go on to talking 2. ____to other people! Don’t think they dislike you or they 3. ____are impolite. It has the custom at many parties 4. ____in Britain, particularly there people are standing up rather 5. ____than sitting down. Here are two ways of finishing conversation 6. ____at a party. "Excuse me. I think I’ll go and get another drinking. 7. ____See you later, perhaps?" "Oh. Excuse me. I’ve just seen 8. ____Mary Jennings over here. I’ve got to discuss a meeting we 9. ____are been having on Thursday. Would you excuse me for a moment?"" 10. ____19．There are advantage for students to work while 76. __________studying at school. One of them was that 77. __________they can earn money. For the most part, 78. __________students working to earn money for their own 79. __________use. Earning their own money allow them 80. __________to spend on anything as if they please. 81. __________They would have to ask their parents for 82. __________money or for permission to do things by 83. __________the money. Some students may also to save 84. __________up for our college or future use. 85. __________20My sister found a bird on the roadside. We named himJack and keep him for about three years. He would greet us 76.________ in a tree outside our bedroom, calling "Hello" as we lay in 77.________ bed in a morning. He also passed "Hello" to the cats when 78._______ they came into the room. We often played a trick on himself. 79._______ We'd throw a coin as far as possibly. Jack would fly away 80._______ and bring it back for us throw again. He would also catch 81._______ the food throwing to him from the other side of the room and 82._______ sing happily. But for the most wonderful thing about Jack 83.________ were his musical ability. Leaving him at home all day, we 84._______ would return at night to hear that he'd picked up from the 85._______ radio in the day21．My car just wouldn’t move any further .It was complete 76．________ dead, and I was a few miles far away from anywhere on a cold, 77．_______wet night .I decided walk around a little before accepting I’d 78．_______have to spend the night in the car .Maybe I can find a 79．________ telephone .Actually ,I didn’t have to walk far before I 80．________ found a small house standing on a field with a light 81．________ shone from the sitting room .I knocked at the door and 82．________ was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the 83．________ door but listened to my story carefully .He said he had 84．________no t elephone, and it wasn’t’ one within walking distance, 85．________but offered to come and look at my car.22You can find all kinds information in just 76. __________a few minute on the Internet. It’s like going to a77. __________huge library without have to walk around to find 78. __________your books. Recently even though, many people 79. __________have been discussing the dangers of the Internet. 80. __________They have been reports in America about people 81. __________trying to steal person information for bad purposes. 82. __________Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all 83. __________ information are good to society. For example, you 84. __________can find such information like how to kill people. 85. __________The problem will become more serious in the future.23．I often dream of a teacher , I dream of standing on the 76．platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys 77．and girls . I teach them , play with them , but watch them 78．growing up . I am always young when I was staying 79．with them . I know there is not easy to be a teacher . Y ou 80．have to learn in order to teach . Without enough knowledge, 81．you can never learn well .What is more , you have to 82．be friends with your pupils and take good care of him . 83．Only in this way can you be a good teacher and win 84．respect from them . Though I am a student now , I willwork as very hard to make my dream come true . 85．24．When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handingin the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had not studied 76. _____________at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. 77. _____________I went through the test for many times but I could only answer 78. _____________ three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail 79. _____________ the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it 80. _____________ and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't 81. _____________ looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand 82. _____________ on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't 83. _____________ know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not push for 84._____________ cheating but instead gave me a second chance. 85. _____________ 25．Dear Ralph,I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would 76. __________ describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 77. __________it seems always difficult for roe to do things well as 78. __________ them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as 79. __________a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 80. __________Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they 81. __________don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other 82. __________very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 83. __________ once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t 84. __________seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? 85. __________Yours,Tom答案1．76. important; 前加of 77. like--as 78. get 79. kinds 80. easy前加not 81. sincere 82. understanding 83. 正确84. persueded 85. more前加the 2．76. and －but 77. woman－women 78. called前加had 79. play- playing 80．正确81. feel-feeling 82. how-why 83. make-makes 84.watch+ing 85. sell-buy3．76. well-good/fine/nice/ok 77.month-months 78.is—was79.the—a 80.on 去掉81.had ∧been82.other—another 83.there—where 84.正确85.but—and4．76. 第二个you改为yourself。
语法填空+短文改错系列(三)--2022届高考英语三轮冲刺组合练
语法填空+短文改错系列（三）语法填空+短文改错601语法填空601 Book 6 Unit 1The styles of Western art have changed many times,1._________ Chinese art has changed less often. Art 2.______________(influence) by the way of life and beliefs. During the Middle Ages，the main aim of painters was to represent religious themes. Artists were interested in creating respect and love for God. In the Renaissance，people focused more on humans and 3._______(little) on religion. Artists tried to paint people and nature as 4.________ really were. Masaccio used perspective in his paintings 5._______ made people convince they were looking 6.___________ a hole in a wall at a real scene. In the late 19th century，Europe changed 7.____ great deal from a mostly agricultural society to a 8.__________(most) industrial one. The Impressionists were the first to paint outdoors. They had to paint quickly and their paintings were not detailed as those of9._________(early) painters. Today people accept the Impressionist paintings as the10._______________(begin) of modern art. Some modern art is abstract while some paintings of modern art are realistic.短文改错601Dear Jack，I just saw an advertisement for a special free exhibition of the Chinese art at the Beijing International Exhibition Center. It’s not far from your hotel，so I think that after dinner we could walk to the center and you could get to know a little about Chinese art .The exhibition has been organized especially for the Olympic Games in Beijing so there are some volunteers to help explain the art to visitors. In front of the center there is a club which many people from around the world often gather together to talk about art. Before we go to the exhibition，we could go there for a cup of coffee，get to know a little more about art around the world and maybe make friend. I hope it will be a special experience for us. I’m looking forward to it，since I real don’t know much about Chinese art myself, except that there are four basic kinds of Chinese paintings: figures，landscapes，flowers and birds，and folklore(民间传说). So you see —you don’t have to worry that you’re not familiar to Chinese art. That doesn’t mean you can’t understand pictures—remember，art cross cultures!I hope you’ll join me at the exhibition and experience some of China’s great art on my last day in China. I’m sure you’ll find it’s worth the time.Regards，Yang Keys:语法填空601：1.while2.is influenced3.less4.they5.which6.through7.a8.mostly9.earlier10.beginning短文改错601：1. the2. and∧---that3. organize---organized4. which---where5. Before---After6. friend---friends7. real---really8. to---with9. cross---crosses10. my---your语法填空+短文改错602语法填空602 Book 6 Unit 2There are various reasons 1._________ people write poetry. Some poems tell a story or describe something 2._______ a way that will give the reader a strong 3._______________(impress). 4._________ try to convey certain emotions. Poets use many different forms of poems to express 5._____________(they). In this text，however，we will look at a few of the simpler forms. Some of the first poetry 6.___________(write) in English was nursery rhymes. Children learned these when they were very young. Nursery rhymes like 7.______ one on the right are still a common type of children’s poetry. They delight small children 8.___________they have strong rhythm and rhyme and have a lot of repetition. This makes them easy to learn 9.______ to recite. By playing 10._______ the words in nursery rhymes，children learn about language.短文改错602Dear Wendy，I’m so glad to receive your letter. And it is really a coincidence what you asked me about the Tang poems，and I just have learnt anything about them.The Tang poems are various in forms or subjects. General speaking，they can be divided to two groups—classical poems and modern poems. Not only the length of a line but also the length of a poem is limited into a certain number of words. There are often four or eight or twelve lines with five or seven words in each line. Poets wrote poems for different purpose，for example，exposing the darkness of the society and describe the beautiful scenes.There were many famous poets during the Tang Dynasty，such as to Li Bai，Du Fu and Bai Judi. If you want to read more，the book 300 Tang Poems are a good choice，which includes poems of many wellknown poets. After reading them，you will have better understanding of the Tang poems.Yours sincerely，Zhang Wei Keys:语法填空602：1.why2.in3.impression4.Others5.themselves6.written7.the8.because9.and10.with短文改错602：1. what---that2. anything---something3. or---and4. General---Generally5. to---into6. purpose---purposes7. describe---describing8. to9. are---is10. have∧---a语法填空+短文改错603语法填空603 Book 6 Unit 3It’s easy for you to start smoking，but 1._________ you become addicted to it，you may find 2.____ difficult for you to quit. Firstly，you may become3.___________(physics) addicted to nicotine，one of the hundreds of harmful chemicals4.________ consist in cigarettes. Secondly，you may develop the habit of smoking and finally become mentally addicted to it.Smoking may have all kinds of harmful effects 5.___ the health of both the smokers themselves and nonsmokers around them. It not only affects your physical fitness，but also 6.______harm to your heart and lungs and causes a variety of diseases. 7._____(be) a smoker，the offensive smell and appearance of you may drive people around you away. So，it’s important that one quits smoking and lives a healthier life.To quit smoking，you should be wellprepared and make a list of all the benefits you may get after 8.___________(quit). Developing some new habits like listening to music，reading novels or doing housework may distract your attention and help you to forget your need for a cigarette. But if you really feel bad，you should consult 9.____ Doctor or chemist to get some professional help. Remember，if you 10._______(keep) trying，you will eventually succeed.短文改错603Dear Mike，I’m very sorry to hear that you are in the hospital with eyesight decreased and obesity and some other diseases. I hope that you will recover soon.You said that your illness was caused by surf the Internet too much. That’s true. Some of my friends，whom often do such things，are beginning to feel bad too. They say that they can’t see now as clear as before. And my teachers oftentell us that it’s bad of us to stay late surfing the Internet every day.However，I think that we should spend more time on the Internet from now on. Instead，we should work out keep healthy，because nothing is more important than health. Only when we are healthy can we study better.Follow the doctor’s advice and don’t worry，and you will be good soon.Best wishes!Yours，Li MingKeys:语法填空603：1.once2.it3.physically4.that / which5.on6.does7.Being8.quitting9.a10.keep短文改错603：1. the2. decreased---decreasing3. surf---surfing4. whom---who5. clear---clearly6. of---for7. However---Therefore8. more---less9. ∧keep---to10. good---well语法填空+短文改错604语法填空604 Book 6 Unit 4There is no doubt 1________the earth is becoming warmer but there is a fierce debate over whether it is human activity that has caused this global warming 2.______ whether it is just a natural phenomenon.Many scientists like Dr.Janice Foster believe that people have caused 3._____ increase in the earth’s temperature by burning fossil fuels like coal，natural gas and oil to produce energy whose byproducts 4.___________(call) “greenhouse”gases，the most important one 5.___________(be) carbon dioxide. These gases trap heat from the sun and therefore warm the earth，without 6.________ the earth would be about thirtythree degrees Celsius cooler 7._______ it is. But increased amount of extra carbon dioxide 8._________(mean) that more heat energy is trapped in the atmosphere causing the global temperature to go up.9．_____ the other hand，scientists like George Hambley believe that any warming will be mild with few bad environmental consequences and more carbon dioxide is 10.___________(actual) a positive thing.短文改错604We are happy to see that the world economy is developing fast，and with the fast development of industry come different kinds of pollution. We have surrounded by polluted air，water and soil. It is clear that they have become the problems what worry near everyone and the government.How to prevent the pollution？We must both strength people’s sense of environmental protection and control the decrease of population. We should knowthat destroying the environment mean destroying our own home—the earth.I hope all the people in the world will join hand to protect the environment. Only by this way will we have a good future.Keys:语法填空604：1.that2.or3.the4.are called5.being6.which7.than8.means9.On10.actually短文改错604：1. and---but2. have∧---been3. what---which4. near---nearly5. the6. strength---strengthen7. decrease---increase8. mean---means9. hand---hands10. by---in语法填空+短文改错605语法填空605 Book 6 Unit 5I often travel to 1.___________(usual) places and work alongside people from all over the world. Using scientific equipment and 2._____________(collect) information about volcanoes is my job. 3.__________ my job is occasionally dangerous，I don’t mind because danger excites me and makes me feel alive. As is known， 4.______lava from the volcano flows，many houses will 5.____________(cover) with lava or burnt to the ground. However，my job helps other scientists predict where lava from the volcano will flow next and how fast，6._______ can help protect ordinary people from one of the most powerful forces on earth—the volcano. I once experienced the 7._________(erupt)of Mount Kilauea and was lucky to have a close look at the 8.______________(absolute) fantastic sight. When it broke out，red lava was fountained hundreds of meters into the air. All the lava 9.___________(pass) slowly down the mountain caused great damage and buried everything in 10._______(it) path under the molten rock.短文改错605My dear classmates，we all know which life is precious. Then how can we protect us when we come across a horrible earthquake？Now let me give you some advices on how to survive from an earthquake.When a serious earthquake take place，we should hide in a bathroom or under some strong furniture immediate. At the same time we’d better fallen on the ground and close our eyes with a towel on our nose and mouth to stop the dust. If it is possible，please turn off the gas stop and the electric power switch. And you mustn’t try to run out or jump from a building. And do remember to use the elevator.That’s all. Thank you!Keys:语法填空605：1.unusual2.collecting3.Although/Though/While4.when5.be covered6.which7.eruption8.absolutely9.passing10.its短文改错605：1. which---that2. us---ourselves3. advices---advice4. from5. take---takes6. immediate---immediately7. fallen---fall8. And---But9. from---off10. remember∧---not。
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第一节短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。
短文中
共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
The best gift I have ever received is a hand-made calendar. It was made up by my best friend Jane, with who I have so much in common. On each page of the calendar, there is the picture of us with some word written by Jane. She either tells me what she feels about our friendship or encourages me try my best and live a happy life. Whenever I look at the calendar, I am touched by something warmly, and my heart is filling with love. This gift is a memory of the wonderful time I spend with Jane in junior high school and I will keep them forever.
参考答案及解析
第一节短文改错
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Jane, with who I have so much in common. On each page of the calendar, there is the picture
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with some word written by Jane. She either tells me what she feels about our friendship or words how
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something warmly, and my heart is filling with love. This gift is a memory of the wonderful time I
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spend with Jane in junior high school and I will keep them forever.
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【分析】
这是一篇夹叙夹议的文章。
文章主要讲了作者收到的最好的礼物是作者的好朋友简亲手制作的一本日历。
这件礼物是作者和简在初中度过的美好时光的回忆，作者将永远珍藏它。
【详解】
第一处：考查动词。
句意：它是我最好的朋友简做的，我和她有很多共同之处。
be made up 由……组成，文中表示“由……做的”，所以去掉up。
第二处：考查定语从句。
这里含有一个定语从句，先行词是my best friend Jane，介词+关系代词引导的定语从句，指人，只能用whom，所以who改成whom。
第三处：考查冠词。
句意：在日历的每一页上，都有一张我们的照片和简写的一些话语。
泛指“一张照片”，picture的首字母发音是辅音，用不定冠词a，所以the改成a。
第四处：考查名词单复数。
句意：在日历的每一页上，都有一张我们的照片和简写的一些话语。
文中“话语”是复数意义，用名词复数，所以word改成words。
第五处：考查宾语从句。
句意：她要么告诉我她怎样感觉我们的友谊，要么鼓励我尽我最大的努力，过上幸福的生活。
这里含有一个宾语从句，表示“怎样感觉我们的友谊”，
用引导词how，所以what改成how。
第六处：考查固定用法。
句意：她要么告诉我她怎样感觉我们的友谊，要么鼓励我尽我最大的努力，过上幸福的生活。
encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事，该用法是固定
用法，所以me后添加to。
第七处：考查形容词。
句意：每当我看日历的时候，我都被一些温暖的东西所感动，我的心里充满了爱。
修饰不定代词something，用形容词，所以warmly改成warm。
第八处：考查固定短语。
句意：每当我看日历的时候，我都被一些温暖的东西所感动，我的心里充满了爱。
be filled with被……充满，该短语是固定短语，所以filling改成filled。
第九处：考查时态。
句意：这件礼物是我和简在初中度过的美好时光的回忆，我将永远珍藏它。
文中“我和简在初中度过的美好时光”是发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，所
以spend改成spent。
第十处：考查代词。
句意：这件礼物是我和简在初中度过的美好时光的回忆，我将永远珍藏它。
指代上文的“这件礼物”，用it，所以them改成it。