雅思：大作文审题解析
雅思大作文审题(课堂PPT)
焦点句
S2
Let readers know what topic is under debate/discussed
• 观点陈述型： • There is a perception that …, while a counter-
argument is that… • One topic of discussion is concerned with whether
• There is a perception that parents are responsible for this severe problem due to their imappropriate way of fostering, while a counterargument is that the modern life styles are the foundamental reason of this disturbing situation.
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introduction
• 背景： • The issue of the impact of global environmental
problems has heated up in recent years. • 焦点： • There is a perception that higher prices at the
pump are a small sacrifice for a program that helps the environment , while a counterargument is that it provides no benefits . • 个人观点： • My personal view is that higher price is no benefits to solve the problem.
峰哥雅思托福雅思写作机经解析
峰哥：2014年11月1日雅思写作大作文解析Some people say job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that having a permanent job is better than enjoying the job. Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.本次考察的是社会话题（幸福和工作）。
从工作切入的题目出现的概率较小。
难度系数一如前几次，依然较大，对熊孩子们来说有一定的挑战。
在审题的时候依然要抓住“一个中心（job），两个基本点（satisfaction or survival)”。
但是就话题本身而言，城镇的孩纸并不陌生。
就是一个关于“工作幸福感”和“工作稳定性”哪个更重要的问题。
写的时候要注意文章结构，我在这里采用经典4段式折中方案，采用“情况分析法”，找到“人”这一个突破口进行切入。
（276字）Employment has been a big concern among the public since nobody can survive without salary. However, in order to make a living, someone prefer to sacrifice their happiness and reluctantly work in an unpleasant environment. Then, the dispute on job security and job satisfaction arose.As we know, having a permanent job would definitely bring people many benefits, especially for the homeless and the migrant workers. In their minds, food is always on the top agenda and followed by satisfaction or happiness or even the basic living condition that they ought to have. So in the lower class’ point to view, having a permanent job means getting a promise of endless living materials. That’s why so many people prefer to stay in an unsatisfying company rather than leave for a much enjoyable one.However, for the workers who are able to support himself or herself, they usually do not stop at the pursuit for making a living, but continue striving for living in a high-quality life. This is mostly for meeting the spiritual needs of which including the job satisfaction. For them, dissatisfaction in one place means a would-be job hopping. In this sense, job satisfaction is much more important than a permanent but not satisfying job.To sum up, the extent of the importance of job security and job satisfaction are various for different groups of people. If I stand with the lower class, I would say that having a permanent job is more practicable and necessary than pursuing the job satisfaction. But if I am with the upper and middle class, I would hold quite an opposite view.。
2023年9月9日雅思大作文真题参考范文
2023年9月9日雅思大作文真题参考范文一、2023年9月9日雅思大作文题目Some people suggest that young adults should be encouraged to do some unpaid work for a period of time for the community to help people. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?(2023/09/09)二、2023年9月9日雅思大作文范文及解析IntroductionYoung adults, as responsible citizens of a progressive society, are highly suggested to be engaged in unpaid community service. In spite of some valid concerns to such involvements, I find myself in staunch agreement with the statement with some of the reasons elucidated in this essay.解析：本次考题跟剑桥雅思9 Test 2的大作文很像，但是限定词有所不同，审题注意针对young adults 和community;剑桥雅思9 Test2：Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?staunch adj.坚定的;elucidate v.阐明，解释;Body 1Indisputably, charitable activities in community organisations will proffer young adults a profound life experience. With daily lives being awash with electronic gadgets, we are living in an age when the young, after work and study, mostly go home and are glued to browsing the Internet or playing computer games. A healthy life balance, by this token, is increasingly hard to follow. Sparing time in charity work, therefore, will prevent them from sitting and squandering their time. Meanwhile, skills gained through these compulsory work, be it working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children, will be an asset on their CV and bring tangible boons in increasing their employability.解析：(1) 社区组织活动将为年轻人提供深刻的人生体验，帮助年轻人获得实践性技能，有助于他们将来的就业;be awash with v.被…所淹没;are glued to v.盯着;紧贴着;粘到…上;by this token 按照这个逻辑;由此推断;squander v.浪费，挥霍(金钱、时间等);asset n.有利条件，有价值的人或物;tangible adj.明确的，真实的;boon n.裨益，优势;毫无疑问，社区组织的慈善活动将为年轻人提供深刻的人生体验。
雅思7分大作文范文批改和解析
雅思7分大作文范文批改和解析雅思7分大作范文批改和解析雅思写作提高第一步：结构(5.0 - 5.5)问题：出国留学的优点(the advantages of disadvantages of study abroad)同学：One reason for those who decide to go overseas to get a higher degree is that they believe they can get better education in certain fields. That is to say, different universities in different countries have their specialized courses and rich resources can be provided according to their needs and requirements. Another reason is that they can learn a foreign language in a more efficient way. There is no denying that living in an all-round English environment and being affected by local culture make people quick learners.解析：出国留学和高学历完全是两回事(出去读初中和高中都算出国);出国就是better education，在国内就不是better? 出国留学可不仅仅是上大学，而该同学认为出国留学就是去上大学的(因为她可能就是去上大学的，所以觉得所有人也都如此)，偏激。
此外，第四句论述变成了英语环境了(因为大家都去英语国家，所以主观认为，所有出国的人就是去学英语的)，再次带来了内容偏激。
2023年6月3日雅思大作文示范写作
2023年6月3日雅思大作文示范写作老人缺乏锻炼的原因与解决方法一、2023年6月3日雅思大作文题目Doctors encourage older people to take regular exercise, but few of them take enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what can be done to encourage them to take exercise?二、范文及解析IntroductionTaking regular exercise, as is universally acknowledged, plays midwife to helping old people keep physical fitness, while most of them, in spite of strong recommendation from doctors, still fail to take ample exercises. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my own perspective, are three predominant factors and viable solutions are in desperate need to avert the bleak future.解析本次task 2是新考题，但是整体难度并不大，审题注意限定词older people；play midwife to v.促成;帮助；ticklish adj.不安定的；难对付的；viable adj.可望成功的，切实可行的；avert v.防止，避免；bleak adj.不乐观的；Body 1Primarily, much as many elders are pleased to enjoy their twilight years, it does not look feasible since most youngsters, bread winners in families, are swamped with work under this cut-throat competition, under which circumstance, their parents will voluntarily help them with chores and minister to their grandchildren. Consequently, hardly do they have sufficient time to take sports. Another major contributing factor would have much to do with the transformed lifestyles of the elderly. Unlike the past when people have limited forms of entertainment, the current digital era is saturated with intriguing activities, ranging from surfing the internet to shooting off to see amusing videos, which tightly grip the old's attention. Benefited from its online convenience and diversity, the old will be indisposed to step out for exercises. Undeniable is also the fact that the lack of tailored creational amenities in the vicinity of residence will dampen the old's zeal for taking sports. To illustrate, with a swimming pool being kilometers away, swimming would only be a wild wish.解析Causes：(1)年轻人忙碌，老人需要帮助照顾家庭，带孩子；(2)老人在现代生活中的生活方式也有明显变化；(3)缺乏适合老年人运动锻炼的基础设施；feasible adj.可行的，办得到的；be swamped with v.忙着做;忙的一塌糊涂；cut-throat adj.（竞争）残酷的，激烈的；minister to v.照顾；援助；be saturated with v.使充满，使饱和；intriguing adj.非常有趣的，引人入胜的；grip v.使感兴趣，吸引住（某人）的注意；be indisposed to v.不愿意；tailor v.定做；迎合，使适应；amenity n.便利设施；vicinity n.周围地区，邻近地区，附近；dampen v.减弱，抑制；Body 2In order to address the prickly problem of inadequate physical exercise among elderly, the government should play a leading role by earmarking funds to proffering more age-appropriate sports facilities with either installing handrails or perfecting walking path, which are expected to give the old easier access to recreational areas, opening up more opportunities for them to join in activities like jogging and hiking. Apart from fiscal policy from the government, disseminating information through public service advertising, community centers and senior organizations is also of tangible boons in boosting the awareness concerning the significance of physical health. Besides, young adults, instead of being boomerang children, are supposed to shoulder more family responsibility for the care of older people is firmly within the domain of the family.解析Solutions：(1)政府起主导作用，投资完善运动设施，定制一些适合老年人锻炼的器材；(2)宣传以提升老人锻炼的思想意识；(3)年轻人要学会承担更大的家庭责任；prickly adj.多刺的；棘手的；earmark vt.指定……的用途；划拨（款项）；proffer v.递上；提供，提出；disseminate v.散布，传播（信息、知识等）；tangible adj.明确的，真实的；boon n.裨益，优势，有用的东西；boomerang children 回归子女；啃老族；ConclusionIn conclusion, barriers for the lack of sufficient exercise among the older individuals are various and the thorny issue should not be downplayed. By tailoring exercise facilities and elevating their awareness, older generations will be more likely to engage in regular physical activities.解析总结前文信息；重申观点。
11月1日雅思大作文范文解析
11月1日雅思大作文范文解析11月初第一场雅思考试的大作文题目，给各位考生带来了点小麻烦。
题干中赫然在列一个因果关系。
对于备考经验不是那么丰富的考生而言，这是个不小的麻烦。
通常的同意与否类的题目中会有“并列关系〞，“目的关系〞和“因果关系〞。
相对于表达比拟普通的题干而言，这些类题目都不算常见。
今天我们就剖析一下这个因果关系。
11月01日考题如下：Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for the people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11011.有明显的背景Children can learn effectively from watching television. Therefore，children should be encouraged to watch television regularly both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 0318上题中的第一句明显是个背景的介绍，因此这道题的讨论重点自然就是题干中的第二句。
类似的题目还有：The news media has become more influential in people’s lives. Some people, therefore, think it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 023Detailed description of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society, so this kind of information should be restricted on media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 0525Nowadays more and more people are using cell phones and computers to communicate with others. Therefore, they are losing the ability of face-to-face communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 1126在仔细读题之后，考生们很容易就能区分开题干中的背景信息，进而就可以明确知道该题目的讨论重点是什么。
雅思大作文真题范文解析
雅思大作文真题范文解析今天小编和大家分享雅思大作文真题范文解析，希望能够帮助到大家，下面小编就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。
2018年9月28日雅思大作文真题范文解析：团队精神范文解析这道题属于议论文，主要讨论相比于个体活动，是否团队活动能教给人们更加重要的技能。
在回答时可以两边都涉及到，这样既降低写作难度，又显得观点更加合理。
雅思写作大作文范文In this highly competitive world, acquiring a variety of skills has become far more important than ever before. It is argued that people gain more necessary abilities through participating in a variety of group work, compared with the individual one. From my perspective, skills gained from both types of activities are equally essential.在这个竞争激烈的世界里，获得各种技能已经变得比以往任何时候都重要得多。
有人认为，与个体相比，人们通过参与各种群体工作获得了更多必要的能力。
从我的角度来看，从这两种活动中获得的技能都是同等重要的。
On the one hand, what people are able to learn by teamwork is meaningful. Firstly, by cooperating and working together with other participators, people are able to gain a better understanding of how to collaborate with others, an important quality that can facilitate to achieve career success. Another essential ability people can develop from group activities is communication skill. Whatever the group work is, playing football, basketball or doing a scientific research, it requires participants to communicate and socialize with others from diverse backgrounds especially when they hold different perspectives. People with strong social skills can adapt to a new environment more quickly and are more likely to access good resources from their friends wherever they are.一方面，人们能够通过团队合作学习是有意义的。
2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解,附高分范文
2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解，附高分范文6.10雅思大作文真题解析+高分范文话题：社会话题—人们是否应该交税题目：Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay taxes to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?写作思路:公民纳税是合理合法的事情。
政府需要用税收的钱来维持社会的正常运转，比如建设和维护基础设施，提供各种公共服务。
此外，税收制度也是一种财富再分配的机制，高收入群体缴纳的税收比例更高。
政府将用税收资助弱势群体，建立社会保障体系，促进了社会的稳定和发展。
所以，除了部分低收入、困难的免税群体，大部分人都需要缴税。
雅思写作真题范文Taxes play a vital role in funding public services andensuring societal well-being. While some people arguefor keeping all the money earned and question thenecessity of paying taxes to the state, I disagree with thisopinion.Admittedly,individuals with low ines can retain allthe money they earn, which is a mon policy adoptedby many countries worldwide. This is to ensure everymember of society has the money to meet their basicsurvival needs.However, when a person s inesurpasses a certain threshold, they should fulfill theirobligation of paying taxes to the state.One primary reason for paying taxes is that governmentsneed money to maintain criticalinfrastructure andprovide public services. Education, healthcare.transportation, and public safety are all supported by taxrevenue. Without adequate funds, these essentialservices would suffer, affecting people' s lives andhindering societal progress. By contributing a portion oftheir earnings through taxes, individuals activelyparticipate in building a well-functioning society.真题范文Moreover, taxation serves as a mechanism forredistribution of wealth and the promotion of socialstability.In most tax systems, individuals with higherines contribute a larger proportion of their earningsThis policy can help address socioeconomic disparitiesand provide a safety net for the vulnerable members ofsociety. lf people were allowed to keep all the moneythey earn, it would widen the gap between the rich andthe poor, leading to various social problems, such asresentment towards the wealthy or even an increase inviolent crimes.In conclusion,I disagree with the idea of keeping all themoney people earn without paying taxes, as it fails toacknowledge the crucial role that taxation plays insustaining and advancing society重点词汇与语料fund提供资金necessity必要性retain保留surpass超过threshold门槛obligation义务infrastructure基础设施revenue收入adequate足够的hinder阻碍well-functioning 运转良好的mechanism机制重点词汇与语料redistribution重新分配disparity差距safety net安全保障vulnerable弱势的resentment憎恨sustain维持以上就是关于《2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解，附高分范文》介绍。
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开头段练习
• 背景：近年来儿童体重剧增这个问题日益热化。 • The issue of the rocketing average weight of children has heated up in recent years.
开头段练习
• 焦点：有观点认为家长应为他们错误的养育方式 负责，而持相反观点 人认为是现代生活方式是 导致恼人局面的根本原因。 • There is a perception that parents are responsible for this severe problem due to their imappropriate way of fostering, while a counterargument is that the modern life styles are the foundamental reason of this disturbing situation.
题 目 B In modern society, an increasing number of children suffer from obesity. Some people think parents are main reasons for this, while others think there are other causes leading to this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Lesson five：task two 开头段&审题
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开头段写法
审题
大作文类型
观点讨论类 agree or disagree positive or negative advantage outweigh disadvantage Discuss both…give your own opinion. 问题解决类 why happened? How to solve the problem?
introduction练习
Restriction on air travel；
introduction练习
Funding education 背景：前十年以来高等教育的资金一直是整个国 家最焦点的讨论及争论话题。 In the last decade, the funding of higher education has become one of the most vital focuses of discussion and disputes across the whole country. 观点：关于谁应为快速增长的高学费负责，人们 观点各有不同。 Opinions are deeply divided as to who are responsible for paying the increasingly high fees.
开头段练习
• There have always been differences in the types of men and women have done. • However, the trend in modern times has been for both men and women to have greater freedom of choice in terms of employment. • Some people might say that there is no need to go further. • However, in my view, wherever possible, gender equality should be encouraged.
开头段练习
• 个人观点：我个人认为家庭 社会都无法免责。 • My personal view is that both the households and the society cannot avoid the obligation.
背景句
S1 To introduce the topic in general
开头段常用语言
• 在当代： • In the present age/ in this day and age/ in the present-day society/ in contemporary society/ at present/ in current society/ in the contemporary world • 众所周知： • It is generally(widely/commonly/extensively/universally) believed that • 越来越重要： • play a/an –role in perform an– function in • Adj. Important significant critical crucial essential fundamental pivotal vital • N: be of importance/ significance
introduction
题 目 A The obesity rate of children is growing nowadays. Some people believe it is mainly due to parents’ inappropriate way of raising them. Do you agree or disagree?
Task 2 Introduction (argumentation)
Task 2 introduction
introduct the world’s environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
introduction练习
Protecting the environment
现阶段没有人会否定保护环境的重要性，但关 于如何完成人们却没有达成一致。 These days, no one would deny the importance of protecting the environment. But there is no consensus on how to achieve this end.
观点句
S3
Your personal view on the issue
• Personally,… • My personal view is that … • From my point of view,… is of benefits/its benefits are far more over its downsides/its benefits cannot justify its harmful effects. • （上句是反方观点） However, in my view（自己 观点）
焦点句
S2 Let readers know what topic is under debate/discussed • 观点陈述型： • There is a perception that …, while a counterargument is that… • One topic of discussion is concerned with whether it is necessary to…… • 转折让步型： • However, some people believe this is …and … should be …as much as possible.
introduction
• 背景： • The issue of the impact of global environmental problems has heated up in recent years. • 焦点： • There is a perception that higher prices at the pump are a small sacrifice for a program that helps the environment , while a counterargument is that it provides no benefits . • 个人观点： • My personal view is that higher price is no benefits to solve the problem.
开头段练习
Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?
开头段常用语言