2009改错短文十五
高考英语浙江卷短文改错详细解析
2009年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(浙江卷)注意事项：用黑色字迹的签字笔或钢笔将答案写在答题纸上，不能答在试题卷上。
第三部分：写作（共两节，满分40分）第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。
请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself , and he preferred to give it to everyone else.It was a lesson to us that it was possible∧give without expect anything in retum.1. 把friend改为friends。
在one of 之后应该使用名词复数形式。
2009年短文改错专项练习答案与简析
2009年短文改错专项练习答案与简析：(一)76. famous前加上a。
（名词数）。
77. 正确78. we前面加when，引导一个时间状语从句。
（句子成分多分析）79. them→us （逻辑错误须关注）80. visiting→visited（非谓动词细辨别）81. picture→pictures（名词数）82. passes→passed（动词形）83. 去掉down （习惯用法要记住）84. and→but（but, and, or和so）85. 去掉at（句子成分多分析/ 习惯用法要记住）。
(二) 76. hoped→hope 77. in→with 78. do→are 79. have前加to 80. 去掉第二个to 81. with-of 82. his →their 83. already前加have 84. lesson前加a 85. making→carrying（三）76. has后加a 77. lives→life 78. us后加of 79. which→that 80. knowledges- knowledge 81. But→However 82. his→their 83. 去掉they84. harmful→harm85.healthy→health（四）76. returning后加to 77. have→had 78. say→speak 79. interested→interesting80.ask-asked 81. it→which 82. their→his 83. 去掉to 84. she→he 85. 去掉it（五）76. serious→seriously 77. to→into 78. harm-harmful 79. in→on 80. take→get 81. such→so 82. stopping→stop 83. water前加the 84. paid前加been 85. 去掉more（六）76. 去掉a 77. have后加been 78. exam→exams 79. was→were 80.strong→strongly 81. too→so 82. 去掉of 83. live→living 84. of去掉85. fact后加that（七）1.extreme—extremely 2.will—will be/attending—attend 3.hope—hopes 4.That —What 5.right 6.a kindergarten—kindergarten 7.or—nor 8.nothing—anything 9.As—Like 10.if—as if（八）1．do→did 2．Nothing→Everything 3．In→On 4．since→so 5．去掉第一个the 6．buses→bus7．am→was 8．在teacher 前加my/the 9．discovered- discover10．but→and（九）1.Get-- Getting 2.mostly-- most 3.found --founded 4. in Canada∧-are 5.rests- rest 6.that -which7.paying-- paid 8.the school 9.was –is10. that –which（十）1. 第二个to去掉 2. made后加to 3 4. hardly改为hard 5. trees后加were 6. it 改为them 7. But改为So 8. other改为another 9. water改为watering 10. feel改为felt（十一）1．many→any; 2．row→be; 3．of^lake→the; 4．第二个was→were; 6lies-lie 6．lie→lay 7．or→and8．去掉about; 9．them→it; 10．tiring→tired.。
2009年全国中学生英语能力竞赛备考之短文改错
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2009届考前短文改错精练(1)
2009届考前短文改错精选精练（1）4篇Wise men don ' t always act as wise as we thinkAt times 76. ______they maybe done something silly : Because we always think they 77. __________are well known , so the stories about their foolish acts are still 78. ______ widely talked throughout the world in modern times . For example , 79. _____ Beethoven, the great composer of Austria was said to have insisted 80. ______on pay ing a waiter in a restaura nt for a dinner he has not eate n81. ______orever ordered; the British physicist Newt on , while lives in London ,82. ______cut two holes in the two doors of his flat , one big, other small,83. ______so as for his two cats to pass through them . He only thought the 84. _____bigger cat could not get through the smaller holes easily .85. _____【答案】76. wise改为wisely 77. done改为do 78.去掉so79. talked 后加about 80.正确81. has 改为had 82. lived 改为living 83. other 前加the 84.去掉them 85. holes 改为hole(2)Nowadays many graduate are look ing76. _____forward77. ______ to get employme nt in big cities, not willi ng toworkin the coun tryside. Unfortun ately, there are eno78. _____ ughcha nces to satisfy most of the job hun ters in big79. ______ cities,while in the coun tryside tale nted people are bad n80. ______ eededbut a lot of posts are wait ing for you. You can put81. ______ yourabilities to good use and you will able to make greater 82. ______ contributions of building a modern countryside. 83. _____ Therefore, I believe in you can have as bright a future 84. ______ in the coun tryside as we will have in the85. _____ cities.【答案】76. graduate 改为graduates 77. getting 78. are 后加not 79.正确80. bad 改为badly 81.but 改为and/so 82.will 后加be 83. of 改为to 84去掉in 85. we 改为you(3)加 have 85. them 改为 you(4)改为a 84.正确 85. that 改为whenIt is real a good cha nee to have all of you here We have spe nt several precious weeke nd in lear ning in the English Club . Because we have been members for a short period of time . We have made a great progress. 76.______________ 77. ____________ 78. ____________ 79. ____________ That is because we are all very active and the 80. activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides , 81. the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make 82. the activities lively and in terested I am very pleased to say 83. that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far . I 84. am looking forward to seeing all of them again in the near future 85.【答案】76.real 改为really77. weeke nds 78. Because-Though/ Although 79. made 后去掉 a 80.正确 81. and 改为 but 82. his 改为 their 83. interested 改为 interesting84. improved第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）Whe n I was youn g, I did n't know what friendship. When I76. stayed with my frien ds, a warm feeli ng came out of the bottom from 77. my heart. Now I have grow n up and got many friend. And I78have bee n tasted the pleasa nt feeli ng of frien dship. Whe n I am happy, 79. they are also happy and shared the happ in ess with me. Whe n I 80. make progress, they will be very excit ing. In stead, whe n 81. I ' m in a difficult situation, they will offer help to me. So 82. frien dship is n ever an on e-way ticket. If we want to get it, 83. we must treat others well at first. We should always be ready to 84. help others, especially that they are in difficult situatio ns. 85.【答案】76.在 friendship 后加 was77. from 改为 of 78. friend 改为 friends79. 去 been 80. shared 改为 share 81. exciting 改为 excited 82. So 改为 But 83. an。
2009年高考英语改错新题型预测题
2009年高考短文改错新题型下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分Passage 1It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007． I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street．Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road．The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road．He fell with a cry．The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west． I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864．After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital．Passage 2I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am a llowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important fo r us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.Passage 3Dear sir,Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very much.CustomerLi MingPassage 4I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my place.We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much. But we’ve kept writing to each other.Passage 5I feel quite sure the chemistry test that we’re going to have tomorrow. The teacher has already told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has been good．In a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy it most. Susan and I had already spent two hours review pages 115-140 tonight. We are going to devote another hour to practise with some of the sample(实例) problem. Then I will ready for the test.Passage 6Dear Susan,I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.Yours,Zhang Ming Passage 7Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could evencommunicate some college students freely.Passage 8If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as much as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history or culture and show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Games a success.Passage 9Dear Mary,I receive your E-mail just now. Don’t worry about me. I’m getting on well with my research work in the lab. But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests. I’m afraid I couldn’t agree with you . I know it is difficulty to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be important tool in our future work. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way. I’ m looking forward to hearing good news from yo u.Yours,Li HuaPassage 10Dear Ralph,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent,but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last oneto move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I findthey are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’vebecome cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how Ifelt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall thissadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?Key for reference:Passage 1It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007． I was walking along Park Road towards the oneast while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street．Then I saw a when sideyellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road．The next momentmakethe car hit the man while she was crossing the road．He fell with a cry．The car didn’t stopheand drive off at full speed heading west． I noticed the driver was∧young woman ∧wore a pair drove a who/改为wearingof glasses and the plate number was AC864．After two minutes later, I stopped a passed carpassingand took the old man to the nearest hospital．Passage 2I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV afterwithschool. She holds∧ view that senior three students have to make fully use ofthe fullevery minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I amherallowed to do that, I’ll∧ unable to control myself and forget all about mybestudy. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas.eyesIn my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works.watching work Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at\has 删除at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.Passage 3Dear sir,Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like∧shape of the bought the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it But∧turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matteris(或去it) becomesworse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to askdisappointedfor help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will ∧at home this weekend.Pleaseman/ person be/staycall me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you veryThankmuch.CustomerLi Ming Passage 4I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in myfriend’s to place. We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming’s listenedparents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summerme a weeksholiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill butbeautiful and had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming cam e ∧see me every day. Then his father hastochanged jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much. butseenwe’ve kept writing to each other.Passage 5I feel quite sure∧the chemistry test that we’re go ing to have tomorrow. The teacherabout/ofhas already told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has beenexactly havegood．In a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoyit most. Susan and I had already spent two hours review pages 115-140 tonight. Wehave reviewingare going to devote another hour to practise with some of the sample(实例) problem.practicing problemsThen I will ∧ready for the test.bePassage 6Dear Susan,I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able gladto meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find∧difficult to getbecause/as itto the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to theminutes rightFriendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take youandtogether to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner.aboutHaving a pleasant trip and see you Friday.Have Yours,Zhang Ming Passage 7Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English.One whereI tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some juniorsurprisestudents were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on was mineQQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day So practisingI learned f rom many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could evenAs或went – goingcommunicate∧some college students freely.withPassage 8If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve mychosenEnglish so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second,I will learn more about ∧history ofwith 或to thethe Olympics as much as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can well amhelp visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history or way and culture and show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making theour make Games a success.Passage 9Dear Mary,I receive ( received)your E-mail just now. Don’t worry about me.I’m getting on well with my research work in the laB．But to my greatly(great)surprise you say you will give up learn(learning) English. The reason is because (that)you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests( interest). I’m afraid I couldn’t(can’t)agree with you . I know it is difficulty(difficult) to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be（加an ）important tool in our future work. Beside( Besides), it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be (去be)succeed. Do remember that where there is a will there is a way. I’ am looking forward to hearing good news from you.Passage 10Dear Ralph,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent,abut now I ∧changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one haveto move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I findWe happilythey are not willing to be with me now. They d on’t talk with me, and they’vebecome cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I colder timesfelt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall thisleftsadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?can’t。
2009陕西高考短文改错
2009陕西高考短文改错My classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospital with a breaking leg. He was walking to school the other day when he let a bicycle ran right into him. He never watches where he is going, so he often gets into the trouble. But he is having a nice time there. He has a comfortable room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read. Some friends of his go to see him everyday, they take him lots of good book and fresh fruit.. He is not losing any time from school because he is busy study what he has missed in class. The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected and will be out of hospital /\a few weeks.2010陕西高考短文改错My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup,that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearl y as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny!2011陕西高考短文改错Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera wit h me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building. He was right there in front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I had my photo take with him, but he have signedhis name on my shirt!。
浙江英语高考改错 2009--2014
英语高考改错2009One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.(2010年)After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch. I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They are silently, and it was clearly that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. ―Excuse me, ‖she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman. ―You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug ‖( 拥抱) you? ”T he woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, “ That was very nice of you, Mother. So I didn’t ’ t think she looked like Grandma. ” “ Neither did me. ” said Mother cheerfully.2011）I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, e ven at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would a lways know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pu lled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever menti oned it again.2012年）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and 1 rented for a car. Unfortunate, 1 had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so 1 did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how 1 was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.2013年）Dear Diary, Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep. Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.2014年）I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.。
2009年中考英语复习策略(初三作文改错)
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5.What do you think about ? 6. We can play on the playground, play balls, talk each other and so on. 7. There are so many trees and so much glass in my school.
6.I think do exercise is very important. For our healthy. 7. Don't do the homework all day. And have some time, like playing football., basketball. And so on. 8. I think that we have a healthy body more important than others.