高三短文改错

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College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.
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I am angry about the act of dishonesty in the exams. I’m not saying that I’m a good student and that I’ve never cheated. I once write the answer on my hand for a history test but, unluckily, caught by my teacher. Because she was one of my most favorites, there were no words to describe how sorry I felt at once. I thought cheat would help me keep my straight A’s. Little I know that I was hurting not only herself but also my teachers. From this lesson I know teachers want students to succeed by learning with their own and do the best they can, not by cheating.
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Friendship is very importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all our lives we can’t live without friendship just as we can’t live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties in the front of us. But real friendship is no easy to come by. True friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand each other but not on benefits of each other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us. By his advices we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore more friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves.
（4）
My secret of staying young is simple: keeping your mind awake and you will stay
young all over. Take an interest in world around you, and learn at least one old thing
every day. Don’t think that you are ever very old to go back to school. I know a man
who entered medical college in 70. He got his degree with honors and became a famous
doctor. Other man went to law school at 71 and is now a active lawyer. You may say
that staying young is easy only for those live in the future. In fact, you can do it whether
you care enough to try to keep your mind awake and active, and which is the only way
to be always young.
（5）
My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was a time when I swim like a
rock. This went on till one day when I was fishing with a friend of mine at nearby pond.
I slipped into one. Had my friend not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned.
Ever since then, I had come to know the importance of learning to swim. I didn’t attend
at any training class but learned it all by myself. Strange to say, I have difficult
swimming at all now. Though the way I swim look awkward (笨拙的), at least it can
keep me from floating. Thinking of this, I feel quiet satisfied.
（6）
In a summer night in Taiwan, Xiao Hong was going on her way to school happily then
suddenly she felt the street was strong shaking. The trees were torn up and many
buildings were leaned down to the ground. Even a car was destroyed by the fallen buildings. She was knocked down by a tree before she knew. Two doctors carried him to
safety and she was settled down in a tent for treatment. After some time, she had got
over. Seeing such many goods from the mainland of China and other countries, she
believed all the destroyed houses would be built.。