高二英语短文改错练习题 含答案
高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)

高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)短文改错(每篇文章共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(1)Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burst into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.(2)Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine(3)Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now wheneverI am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.(4)Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.(5)Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua(6)Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll meet you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours,John(7)Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class Six, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are notsatisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with some effectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance.Thank you.Yours,Wang Min(8)Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.(9)Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may also get others confusing.(10)Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.(11)I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.(12)We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set about doing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!(13)My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.(14)Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua(15)You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on,"Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first.I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time,I woke up and found me still in bed!(16)It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. It isso a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly,I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.(17)I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner(执业者). One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course”I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they offered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.(18)Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.(19)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.(20)I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.(21)When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had studied atall at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test.I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.(22)I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class.Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.(23)Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told the artist he didn’t want to any shadows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.(24)I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..(25)I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.(26)This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy,the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.”(27)Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death.As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures.Nor do they care about which happens to consumers.They shall be charged by law.Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua(28)Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua(29)Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best.Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping(30)Dear Lucy,I am very excited to learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet(31)Abby,How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you.I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes,Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold towards me. Many time, I wanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone!I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family.But when my cousin was born,everyone pays more attention to her.So I disliked her and couldn’t get along well with her. With time went on,I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time.I tried to find a proper time to apologize.When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago,I took my cousin to play outside.In the way to the playground.I bought much snacks for her.Then we began chat.When we talked about their childhood,suddenly,I said“sorry”gently.She was silently,so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly.But after while she said:“Don’t say that.In my memory,you are always friendly.”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popular, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)V olunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday,the Students’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas.Some choose to write a letter saying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should be responsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好,常见类型要记牢。
高考英语短文改错训练3,共5篇,含答案

2020届高二英语专题:短文改错(三)1.短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
)划掉。
修改:修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
后的词。
Good morning, everyone. It’s great honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li Xiaojun, born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teachers. Influenced by them, I read widely during my early age, but I’ve developed a great interest in arts and sports. I’m easy-going, get along well with my classmates.It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also help me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your university has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream constantly that I, along with mine classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors. I dream that I will swim freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.1.Good morning, everyone. It’s ∧ great honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li Xiaojun,a born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teachers. Influencedboth 或去掉all by them, I read widely during my early age, but by them, I read widely during my early age, but I’ve developed a great interest in arts and I’ve developed a great interest in arts andand sports. I’m easy sports. I’m easy-going, -going, ∧get along well with my classmates.and 或get 改为getting It is this personality which It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also helpthathelps me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your to university has always been a beautiful dream for me.university has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream I dream constantly that I, along with minemy classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors. I dream that I will swimhappily freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.dreams2.短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
高二英语短文改错试题答案及解析

高二英语短文改错试题答案及解析1.第一节:短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。
文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加大词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写处修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
In recent years many flowers shops have been appeared in our small town. It is common for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering, visiting a sick friend, or attend a wedding or birthday party. I still remember clear one day last year when Tom, a disabled student, presented some flowers to his mother to express his gratitude for her. He owing his entire life to his mother’s kind and care. With her he would not have had the confidence or the courage to fight his disability. As a result the great effort he has made, he was finally admitted to a key university.【解析】文章介绍现在有很多花店,人们也相互送花表达关心和感谢。
2023年高二英语短文改错练习题及答案

2023年高二英语短文改错练习题及答案下面是一篇关于2023年高二英语短文改错练习题及答案的文章。
题目1:阅读下面短文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
改正每处错误,并将正确的答案写在答题纸上。
Dear Sarah,I'm so exciting to hear that you’ve got the scholarship to study abroad! Studying in a foreign country offers amazing opportunities to improve both the language skill and personal growth. I'd suggest that you should take fully advantage of this experience.First, remember living and studying aboard may bring out the challenges you've never encountered before. However, instead of get discouraged, stay positive and determined. Try to see these challenges as chances to learn and grow which will prepare you for future difficulties.Secondly, be open-minded to embrace different cultures. Communicate with local people and make friends with them. This will not only enhance your cultural understanding, and also help you to build a support network while you are far away from home.Finally, be actively involved in various campus activities. Participate in clubs, sports, and events. This will not just enrich your experience studying abroad, but also provide you the opportunity to make lifelong friends.I’m sure with a positive mindset and hard work, you will have an unforgettable experience abroad. Wishing you all the best in your new adventure!Yours sincerely,Emily答案:Dear Sarah,I'm so excited to hear that you've got the scholarship to study abroad! Studying in a foreign country offers amazing opportunities to improve both language skills and personal growth. I'd suggest that you take full advantage of this experience.First, remember living and studying abroad may bring out challenges you've never encountered before. However, instead of getting discouraged, stay positive and determined. Try to see these challenges as chances to learn and grow, which will prepare you for future difficulties.Secondly, be open-minded and embrace different cultures. Communicate with local people and make friends with them. This will not only enhance your cultural understanding, but also help you build a support network while you are far away from home.Finally, be actively involved in various campus activities. Participate in clubs, sports, and events. This will not just enrich your experience studying abroad, but also provide you with the opportunity to make lifelong friends.I'm sure that with a positive mindset and hard work, you will have an unforgettable experience abroad. Wishing you all the best in your new adventure!Yours sincerely,Emily题目2:阅读下面短文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处错误。
高二英语短文改错试题答案及解析

高二英语短文改错试题答案及解析1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写作文。
文中共有10处错误,每句中最多两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
It is easy to go downhill than to climb uphill. So it is also easier to fall into bad habits than into good one. Bad habits do not come sudden. It come little by little . School boys first picks up alittle in school and on the street. When they can’t writ e into their homework, they copy from their schoolmates. If they see bigger boys smoking, they also want learn to smoke. When they get bigger, the habits became stronger and stronger, so that they can not longer get rid ofthem. What necessary it is to get rid of the bad habits in the beginning!【解析】俗语说“上山容易下山难”。
同样道理,养成坏习惯要比养成好习惯容易。
但是坏习惯也是逐渐养成的。
比如,孩子先在学校或者街上沾染了坏毛病,然后慢慢带到生活,学习中。
高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)

高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)短文改错(每篇文章共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(1)Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burs t into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.(2)Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine(3)Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.(4)Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.(5)Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua(6)Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll me et you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours,John(7)Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class S ix, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are not satisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with someeffectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance. Thank you.Yours,Wang Min(8)Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighter s will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.(9)Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may al so get others confusing.(10)Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.(11)I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.(12)We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set about doing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!(13)My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.(14)Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua(15)You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on, "Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time,I woke up and found me still in bed!(16)It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. Itis so a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly,I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.(17)I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner(执业者). One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course” I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they of fered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.(18)Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.(19)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many home work. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.(20)I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.(21)When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I hadstudied at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.(22)I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.(23)Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told t he artist he didn’t want to any sha dows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.(24)I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..(25)I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.(26)This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for s everal month.”(27)Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death.As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures.Nor do they care about which happens to consumers.They shall be charged by law.Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua(28)Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua(29)Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping(30)Dear Lucy,I am very excited t o learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet(31)Abby,How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you.I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to stu dy in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes,Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold t owards me. Many time, Iwanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone!I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family.But when my cousin was born,everyone pays more attention to her.So I disliked her and could n’t get along well with her. With time went on,I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time.I tried to find a proper time to apologize.When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago,I took my cousin to play outside.In the way to the playground.I bought much snacks for her.Then we began chat.When we talked about their childhood,suddenly,I said“sorry”gently.She was silently,so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly.But after while she said:“Don’t say that.In my memory,you are always friendly.”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popu lar, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)Volunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday,the Students’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas.Some choose to write a letter saying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should beresponsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好,常见类型要记牢。
高考英语短文改错练习题及答案共10篇

(4) 第一行: write 后加 in 第二行:去掉第一个 in 第三行: anything 改为 everything 第四行: my 改为 a;去掉 should 第五行: talk 改为 talking 第六行: me 改为 myself 第七行: showed 后加 it 第八行: reads 改为 read;word 改为 words
When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties . The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English .One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much and reads it to the class .All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.
(6) 第一行:划掉 myself ;a 改为 the 第二行: visit 改为 visiting
高中英语改错题及答案

高中英语改错题及答案【篇一:高中英语短文改错(含答案)】ike riding my bike. though it is not very new, but it ismy best friend. i find very convenient to go anywhere with abike. ride gives me not only exercise but also pleasure. iuse my bike mostly on summer when the weather is warmand dry. it can very unpleasant in winter when it is cold andrain is pouring down. it can also be very danger. of coursei will be very careful on my bike. in facts, accidents are notthe only problem. one day i went to school and come backto find his front wheel was missing. it was a long walk tothe repairer’s shop. now i have two strong locks.【答案与解析】1. 去掉 but。
汉语可说“虽然……但是……”,但英语习惯上不能相应地说though…but…。
(注:不能去掉 though,因为这样还会涉及大小写的改动,而高考短文改错每行只允许改动一处。
)2. find 后加 it。
此 it 为形式宾语,真正的宾语是其后的不定式。
3. ride 改为 riding。
动词原形不能用作主语,要改为动名词。
4. on 改为 in。
表示在某个季节,用介词in。
5. can 后加 be。
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高二英语短文改错练习题含答案1. I was very exciting when I heard that I had won the lottery. I immediately called my family and friends to share the good news. But when I went to claim the prize, the lottery company told me that I had made a mistake and that I had not actually won anything. I was very embarrassed and disappointed. I learned an important lesson that day, which is to always double-check important information before getting too excited.Correction:I was very excited when I heard that I had won the lottery. I immediately called my family and friends to share the good news. But when I went to claim the prize, the lottery company told me that I had made a mistake and that I had not actually won anything. I was very embarrassed and disappointed. I learned an important lesson that day, which is to always double-check important information before getting too excited.2. My best friend and me have been friends since we were children. We went to the same school and had a lot of fun together. But as we grew older, we started to drift apart. I think it was because we had different interests and priorities. I became more interested in sports and she became more interested in music. We still talk occasionally, but we are no longer as close as we used to be.Correction:My best friend and I have been friends since we were children. We went to the same school and had a lot of fun together. But as we grew older, we started to drift apart. I think it was because we had different interests and priorities. I became more interested in sports and she became more interested in music. We still talk occasionally, but we are no longer as close as we used to be.3. Last summer, I went on vacation to Europe with my family. We visited many famous cities, such as Paris, Rome, and London. Although it was a lot of fun, it was also very tiring. We had to walk a lot and there were many crowds of tourists everywhere we went. In the end, we were all glad to be back home and to rest for a few days.Correction:Last summer, I went on vacation to Europe with my family. We visited many famous cities, such as Paris, Rome, and London. Although it was a lot of fun, it was also very tiring. We had to walk a lot and there were crowds of tourists everywhere we went. In the end, we were all glad to be back home and to rest for a few days.4. My mom always tells me that I should eat more vegetables, but I don't like them very much.I prefer to eat meat and potatoes. However, I know that vegetables are good for me and thatI should try to eat more of them. I have started to experiment with different ways of cooking them, such as roasting them in the oven or grilling them on the barbecue. I have found that I actually enjoy them more when they are prepared in these ways.Correction:My mom always tells me that I should eat more vegetables, but I don't like them very much.I prefer to eat meat and potatoes. However, I know that vegetables are good for me and that I should try to eat more of them. I have started to experiment with different ways of cooking them, such as roasting them in the oven or grilling them on the barbecue. I have found that I actually enjoy them more when they are prepared this way.5. Yesterday, I went to the mall to buy a new pair of shoes. I found a pair that I really liked, but they were too expensive. I decided to look for a cheaper pair, but I couldn't find anything that I liked as much. In the end, I decided to buy the more expensive pair, even though it meant that I would have to cut back on other expenses for the rest of the month.Correction:Yesterday, I went to the mall to buy a new pair of shoes. I found a pair that I really liked, but they were too expensive. I decided to look for a cheaper pair, but I couldn't find anything that I liked as much. In the end, I decided to buy the more expensive pair, even though it meant that I would have to cut back on other expenses for the rest of the month.1.原文:Last weekend, I went to a trip with my family to the countryside. We stayed at a small hotel near the river, which was very beautiful. The weather was perfect, so we went for a walk along the river and took some photos. After that, we went to a local restaurant and tried some traditional food. It was very delicious.改正:Last weekend, I went on a trip with my family to the countryside. We stayed at a small hotel near the river, which was very beautiful. The weather was perfect, so we went for a walk along the river and took some photos. After that, we went to a local restaurant and tried some traditional food. It was very delicious.2.原文:I usually have a lot of homework to do every day, but yesterday was very different. I only hada few homework to do, so I decided to watch a movie. The movie was very good and it made me feel relaxed. After the movie, I went to bed early and had a good sleep.改正:I usually have a lot of homework to do every day, but yesterday was very different. I only hada few assignments to do, so I decided to watch a movie. The movie was very good and it made me feel relaxed. After the movie, I went to bed early and had a good sleep.3.原文:I have been learning English since five years ago. At first, it was very difficult for me, but now I can speak English very well. I think the key to learning a language is practice. If you practice every day, you will improve your language skills quickly.改正:I have been learning English for five years. At first, it was very difficult for me, but now I can speak English very well. I think the key to learning a language is practice. If you practice every day, you will improve your language skills quickly.4.原文:Last week, I went to the park with my friends. We played basketball, had a picnic, and went on a boat ride. It was a very fun day. After we left the park, we went to a shopping center and bought some clothes.改正:Last week, I went to the park with my friends. We played basketball, had a picnic, and went on a boat ride. It was a very fun day. After we left the park, we went to a shopping center and bought some clothes.5.原文:I love to listen music when I am studying. It helps me to concentrate and focus. My favoritetype of music is classical music. I find it very calming and relaxing.改正:I love to listen to music when I am studying. It helps me to concentrate and focus. My favorite type of music is classical music. I find it very calming and relaxing.6.原文:My sister and I are very different. She is very outgoing and enjoys spending time with friends, while I prefer to stay at home and read. However, we both love to travel and explore new places.改正:My sister and I are very different. She is very outgoing and enjoys spending time with friends, while I prefer to stay at home and read. However, we both love to travel and explore new places.7.原文:I am very interested in history, especially ancient history. I think it is fascinating to learn about how people lived in the past and how they shaped the world we live in today.改正:I am very interested in history, especially ancient history. I think it is fascinating to learn about how people lived in the past and how they shaped the world we live in today.8.原文:My favorite season is summer. I love to go swimming and spend time at the beach. I also enjoy eating ice cream and having barbecues with my family.改正:My favorite season is summer. I love to go swimming and spend time at the beach. I also enjoy eating ice cream and having barbecues with my family.9.原文:I have been studying for my exams for weeks. I have been working very hard, but I am still very nervous about the exams.改正:I have been studying for my exams for weeks. I have been working very hard, but I am still very nervous about the exams.10.原文:I have a lot of hobbies, but my favorite one is playing the guitar. I have been playing for three years, and I have improved a lot. I enjoy playing different types of music, such as rock, pop, and classical.改正:I have a lot of hobbies, but my favorite one is playing the guitar. I have been playing for three years, and I have improved a lot. I enjoy playing different types of music, such as rock, pop, and classical.第一套原文:Dear Mr. Li,I am writing to apply for the position that you advertised on your company’s website. I graduated from a famous university last year, majoring in accounting. During my college years,I have taken a lot of courses on accounting, finance and economics, which provided me witha solid foundation for my future career.I have had two internships during my college years, one in a small accounting firm and the other in a large multinational corporation. These experiences have allowed me to learn a lot about the accounting industry and to develop my communication and teamwork skills.I believe that I would be a good fit for your company and I am very interested in joining yourteam. I look forward to the opportunity to discuss my application further with you.Sincerely,Li Ming改正后:Dear Mr. Li,I am writing to apply for the position that you advertised on your company's website. I graduated from a famous university last year, majoring in accounting. During my college years, I took a lot of courses on accounting, finance, and economics, which provided me with a solid foundation for my future career.I had two internships during my college years, one in a small accounting firm and the other in a large multinational corporation. These experiences allowed me to learn a lot about the accounting industry and to develop my communication and teamwork skills.I believe that I would be a good fit for your company, and I am very interested in joining your team. I look forward to discussing my application further with you.Sincerely,Li Ming第二套原文:Last weekend, I went to a camping trip with my friends. We had a great time there, but there were also some problems. First, we forgot to bring enough food and water, so we had to ration our supplies. Second, we didn't bring enough warm clothes, and it got very cold at night. Third, we didn't set up the tent properly, and it collapsed in the middle of the night.Despite these problems, we still had a lot of fun. We went hiking and fishing during the day, and we sat around the campfire at night, telling stories and singing songs. We also made some new friends with the other campers.Overall, it was a great experience, and I would love to do it again. Next time, though, I will make sure to bring more supplies and to set up the tent properly.改正后:Last weekend, I went on a camping trip with my friends. We had a great time there, but there were also some problems. First, we forgot to bring enough food and water, so we had to ration our supplies. Second, we didn't bring enough warm clothes, and it got very cold at night. Third, we didn't set up the tent properly, and it collapsed in the middle of the night.Despite these problems, we still had a lot of fun. We went hiking and fishing during the day, and we sat around the campfire at night, telling stories and singing songs. We also made some new friends with the other campers.Overall, it was a great experience, and I would love to do it again. Next time, though, I will make sure to bring more supplies and to set up the tent properly.第三套原文:Yesterday, I watched a movie called "The Shawshank Redemption". It was a very moving story about a man who was wrongly accused of murder and sent to prison. He made friends with some of the other prisoners and used his intelligence and determination to help them and to improve his own situation.The acting in the movie was excellent, and the cinematography was beautiful. The soundtrack was also very good, with a mix of classic rock and orchestral music.Overall, I would highly recommend this movie to anyone who enjoys drama and suspense. It is a powerful story about the human spirit and the triumph of hope over adversity.改正后:Yesterday, I watched a movie called "The Shawshank Redemption." It was a very moving story about a man who was wrongly accused of murder and sent to prison. He made friends with some of the other prisoners and used his intelligence and determination to help them and to improve his own situation.The acting in the movie was excellent, and the cinematography was beautiful. The soundtrack was also very good, with a mix of classic rock and orchestral music.Overall, I would highly recommend this movie to anyone who enjoys drama and suspense. It is a powerful story about the human spirit and the triumph of hope over adversity.第四套原文:Last weekend, I went to a concert with my friends. The concert was held in an outdoor stadium, and there were thousands of people there. We had a great time dancing and singing along to the music.However, there were also some problems. The sound system was not very good, and it was hard to hear the singers sometimes. Also, there were not enough toilets, and the lines were very long.Despite these problems, we still had a lot of fun. We met some new people and made some new friends. We also got some great photos and videos of the concert.Overall, it was a great experience, and I would love to go to another concert soon. Next time, though, I will make sure to bring some earplugs and to use the toilet before I go.改正后:Last weekend, I went to a concert with my friends. The concert was held in an outdoor stadium, and there were thousands of people there. We had a great time dancing and singing along to the music.However, there were also some problems. The sound system was not very good, and it was hard to hear the singers sometimes. Also, there were not enough toilets, and the lines were very long.Despite these problems, we still had a lot of fun. We met some new people and made some new friends. We also got some great photos and videos of the concert.Overall, it was a great experience, and I would love to go to another concert soon. Next time, though, I will make sure to bring some earplugs and to use the toilet before I go.第五套原文:Yesterday, I went to the mall with my friends. We did some shopping and had lunch at a restaurant. The food was delicious, and the service was excellent.After lunch, we went to see a movie. The movie was a comedy, and we all laughed a lot. The acting was good, and the story was funny and entertaining.After the movie, we walked around the mall some more and did some window shopping. We also had some ice cream and talked about our plans for the weekend.Overall, it was a great day, and I had a lot of fun with my friends. I can't wait to do it again!改正后:Yesterday, I went to the mall with my friends. We did some shopping and had lunch at a restaurant. The food was delicious, and the service was excellent.After lunch, we went to see a comedy movie, and we all laughed a lot. The acting was good, and the story was funny and entertaining.After the movie, we walked around the mall some more and did some window shopping. We also had some ice cream and talked about our plans for the weekend.Overall, it was a great day, and I had a lot of fun with my friends. I can't wait to do it again!第六套原文:Last week, I went on a trip to Beijing with my family. We visited many famous tourist attractions, such as the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, and the Summer Palace. We also tried a lot of delicious local food, such as Peking duck and dumplings.One of the highlights of the trip was watching a traditional Chinese opera. The costumes and makeup were very colorful and intricate, and the music and singing were beautiful. It was a great way to learn more about Chinese culture and history.Another highlight was visiting a local market and bargaining with the vendors. We bought some souvenirs and gifts for our friends and family back home. It was a fun and exciting experience, and we got some good deals.Overall, it was a great trip, and I learned a lot about Chinese culture and history. I would love to go back and explore more of this fascinating country.改正后:Last week, I went on a trip to Beijing with my family. We visited many famous tourist attractions, such as the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, and the Summer Palace. We also tried a lot of delicious local food, such as Peking duck and dumplings.One of the highlights of the trip was watching a traditional Chinese opera. The costumes and makeup were very colorful and intricate, and the music and singing were beautiful. It was a great way to learn more about Chinese culture and history.Another highlight was visiting a local market and bargaining with the vendors. We boughtsome souvenirs and gifts for our friends and family back home. It was a fun and exciting experience, and we got some good deals.Overall, it was a great trip, and I learned a lot about Chinese culture and history. I would love to go back and explore more of this fascinating country.第七套原文:Yesterday, I went to the park with my friends. We played basketball and soccer, and we had a lot of fun. We also had a picnic and enjoyed some sandwiches and fruit.After the picnic, we went for a walk and saw some beautiful flowers and trees. We also saw some birds and squirrels, which was very exciting.Later, we went to the playground and played on the swings and slides. We also played a game of tag and laughed a lot.Overall, it was a great day, and I had a lot of fun with my friends. I can't wait to do it again!改正后:Yesterday, I went to the park with my friends. We played basketball and soccer, and we had a lot of fun. We also had a picnic and enjoyed some sandwiches and fruit.After the picnic, we went for a walk and saw some beautiful flowers and trees. We also saw some birds and squirrels, which was very exciting.Later, we went to the playground and played on the swings and slides. We also played a game of tag and laughed a lot.Overall, it was a great day, and I had a lot of fun with my friends. I can't wait to do it again!第八套原文:Last night, I went to a concert with my girlfriend. The concert was held in a small club, and there were only a few hundred people there. The music was loud and energetic, and we danced and sang along to the songs.The band was very talented, and they played a mix of rock and pop music. The lead singer had a great voice, and he interacted with the audience a lot. It was a very intimate andpersonal performance.After the concert, we met the band and got some autographs and photos. They were very friendly and down-to-earth, and we had a great time talking to them.Overall, it was a great night, and I had a lot of fun with my girlfriend. I would love to go to another concert like this soon.改正后:Last night, I went to a concert with my girlfriend. The concert was held in a small club, and there were only a few hundred people there. The music was loud and energetic, and we danced and sang along to the songs.The band was very talented, and they played a mix of rock and pop music. The lead singer had a great voice, and he interacted with the audience a lot. It was a very intimate and personal performance.After the concert, we met the band and got some autographs and photos. They were very friendly and down-to-earth, and we had a great time talking to them.Overall, it was a great night, and I had a lot of fun with my girlfriend. I would love to go to another concert like this soon.第九套原文:Yesterday, I went to the museum with my classmates. We saw a lot of interesting exhibits, such as ancient artifacts, paintings, and sculptures. We also learned a lot about the history and culture of our country.One of the highlights of the museum was a special exhibition on the life and works of a famous artist. We saw some of his most famous paintings and learned about his inspirations and techniques. It was a very inspiring and educational experience.After the museum, we went to a nearby park and had a picnic. We enjoyed some sandwiches and fruit, and we talked about what we had seen at the museum. We also played some games and had a lot of fun.Overall, it was a great day, and I learned a lot about art and history. I would love to go to the museum again and explore more of its exhibits.改正后:Yesterday, I went to the museum with my classmates. We saw a lot of interesting exhibits, such as ancient artifacts, paintings, and sculptures. We also learned a lot about the history and culture of our country.One of the highlights of the museum was a special exhibition on the life and works of a famous artist. We saw some of his most famous paintings and learned about his inspirations and techniques. It was a very inspiring and educational experience.After the museum, we went to a nearby park and had a picnic. We enjoyed some sandwiches and fruit, and we talked about what we had seen at the museum. We also played some games and had a lot of fun.Overall, it was a great day, and I learned a lot about art and history. I would love to go to the museum again and explore more of its exhibits.第十套原文:Yesterday, I went to the beach with my family. We had a great time swimming and playing in the sand. We also had a picnic and enjoyed some sandwiches and fruit.After the picnic, we went for a walk along the beach and saw some beautiful shells and rocks. We also saw some crabs and other sea creatures, which was very exciting.Later, we rented some bicycles and rode along the boardwalk. We saw some street performers and had some ice cream. We also took some photos and enjoyed the beautiful scenery.Overall, it was a great day, and I had a lot of fun with my family. I can't wait to go to the beach again!改正后:Yesterday, I went to the beach with my family. We had a great time swimming and playing in the sand. We also had a picnic and enjoyed some sandwiches and fruit.After the picnic, we went for a walk along the beach and saw some beautiful shells and rocks. We also saw some crabs and other sea creatures, which was very exciting.Later, we rented some bicycles and rode along the boardwalk. We saw some street performers and had some ice cream. We also took some photos and enjoyed the beautiful scenery.Overall, it was a great day, and I had a lot of fun with my family. I can't wait to go to the beachagain!。