英语写作课件(写过去的事)
八年级英语下册Unit5Whatwereyoudoing习题课件 (7)
易错点三：rise与raise的辨析) 【精析】rise为不及物动词，着重指“升起；增加；提高”，主语通常 是升高的物体本身；raise为及物动词，着重指“抬起；举起；提起”， 强调把某物从较低处抬(举、提)到较高处，也可以指提高价值、声誉、 地位、工资等。此外，raise还有“筹集；筹募”的意思。
Yours， Wang Fang
【名师点评】本篇习作要求给Helen回一封邮件。文章内容全面，紧扣 要求提示；层次清晰，按照时间顺序依次描写；and, while, when, next 的使用，使文章衔接自然、流畅。
热点作文练习
假如你是张强，上星期日晚上8 点钟，你们一家人都在做什么呢？ 请根 据下表提示写一篇短文进行描述。
Family Members Grandparents Father Mother Sister Brother Zhang Qiang
What They Were Doing Watch TV
Draw a picture Wash clothes Play the piano Chat with friends on the Internet Listen to music
A．had risen B．has risen
C．rose D．rises
12．Our school is ready to __ra_i_s_e_ (募集) money for the people in the poor
mountains area.
易错点四：when与while的辨析) 【精析】when既可以指某一时间点，也可以指某一时间段，其从句 谓语动词表示的动作既可以是瞬间性的、非延续性的，又可以是延 续性的，可与主句中的谓语动词同时发生，也可在其后发生；while 指一段时间，从句中的谓语动词必须是延续性的，而且也只能与主 句中的谓语动词同时发生或存在。即：指一段时间时，when可用 while来代替；指某一瞬间时，when不能用while来代替。while从句 多用进行时态。
英文故事过去式作文
英文故事过去式作文英文：I have a story to share with you that happened to me last year. It was a beautiful summer day and I decided to take a hike in the mountains. I packed my backpack with some snacks, water, and my camera. As I was walking, I saw a group of people ahead of me. They were all wearing bright colors and carrying musical instruments. I was curious, so I decided to catch up with them.As I got closer, I realized they were a band. They were playing music and singing as they walked. I asked them where they were going and they told me they were on their way to a festival in the next town. They invited me to join them and I accepted.We walked for hours and the band played music the whole time. We talked and laughed and had a great time. When we finally arrived at the festival, we were all tired buthappy. We danced and sang and ate delicious food. It was an amazing experience that I will never forget.中文：我有一个故事要和你分享，发生在去年。
人教目标版七年级上册英语课件：Unit 8单元主题写作(共10张PPT)
•8、is a admirable thing, but it is well to remember from time to time that nothing worth knowing can be taught.教育 是令人羡慕的东西，但是要不时地记住：凡是值得知道的，没有一个是能够教会的。2021/11/242021/11/242021/11/242021/11/24
同类话题写作积累
1. When is your/his/her birthday? 你的/他的/她的生日是什么时候？
2. ... birthday is on/in ... ……生日在…… 3. We have a/an ... on ... 我们有/举办……在…… 4. We have some interesting and fun things this term.
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Unit1单元话题写作指导课件人教版八年级英语上册
Today is the Dragon Boat Festival 。For the reason that Tony has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture.I invited him to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this morning When we arrived, it was crowded. There were 16 colorful dragon boats floating in the river.During the race,the dragon boat teams competed with each other, while people on each bank cheered up. Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere. At last, the Courage Team won.
7.I went to Guizhou with my family.我和我家人去了贵州。
8.We took quite a few photos there.我们在那里拍了不少照片。
9.It was my first time there，so everything was really
interesting.这是我第一次到那儿，所以一切都真的很有趣。 10.I bought something for my parents.我给我父母买了一些东西。 11.It was sunny and hot.天气晴朗并且炎热。 12.It was so wonderful/exciting.那太精彩了/太激动人心了。 13.The food there was delicious and the people there were very friendly. 那里的食物很美味，那里的人很友好。
描述过去的事情英语作文
描述过去的事情英语作文【中英文版】Title: Describing Past Events - An English EssayIntroduction:In this essay, we will delve into the realm of the past and explore events that have shaped our lives.We will discuss the significance of these events, the lessons learned, and how they have influenced our present.As we embark on this journey through memory lane, let us appreciate the beauty of reflection and the wisdom it brings.Body:The first event that comes to mind is my graduation from college.It was a day filled with mixed emotions - joy, sadness, and a sense of accomplishment.As I walked across the stage to receive my diploma, I couldn"t help but feel a sense of pride in my achievements.The years of hard work, late nights, and countless sacrifices had finally paid off.This event marked a significant milestone in my life, symbolizing the end of one chapter and the beginning of another.Another pivotal event in my past was my first job interview.I remember being incredibly nervous, my palms sweating, and my heart pounding.The interview process was rigorous, but it taught me valuable lessons about professionalism, confidence, and resilience.Although I did not secure the position, the experience shaped me into a more seasonedjob seeker.It instilled in me the importance of preparation, research, and effective communication.Furthermore, the passing of a loved one is an event that leaves a lasting impact on our lives.The loss of a family member or a close friend serves as a stark reminder of the fragility of life.It teaches us to cherish every moment spent with loved ones and to appreciate the time we have together.The grief and mourning that follow such an event can be overwhelming, but it also fosters a sense of unity and compassion within our communities.Conclusion:Reflecting on past events allows us to appreciate the journey we have embarked upon.Each event, whether momentous or trivial, has shaped us into who we are today.The lessons learned from these events enable us to grow, adapt, and navigate the challenges that lie ahead.As we continue to move forward, let us carry the wisdom of the past with us, embracing the uncertainties of the future with open hearts and minds.。
高中英语记叙文写作 教学课件(共40张PPT)
8. It is reported that the river has been polluted (污染).
9. She tried to remind (提醒) us not to throw rubbish anywhere.
10. We can breathe fresh (新鲜的) air and enjoy ourselves.
Last Sunday, we had a picnic in a mountain near our school.
Spring is coming. let’s have a picnic.
What can we eat?
What are they cooking, fish or pork?
When our monitor suggested having a picnic , we were all pleased.
由词到句
4) 我们带了各种食品和饮料。 bring /bring…with… kinds of/all kinds of/various/a variety of/varieties of food and drinks We brought all kinds of food and drinks.
Li Hai told such a funny story that we couldn’t help laughing.
由词到句
6) 赵娟在跳舞时摔了一跤。 dance fall/have a fall Zhao Juan fell when she danced.
Zhao Juan had a fall when she danced.
初中英语作文写作课(精编版)-PPT课件(共17张)
Compare (比较)
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
The beginning
三段式 The body ----用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。【注意使用 （总-分 支持句 连接词】 -总）
The ending
结论句----对全文的总结和概括。 【结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】
Writing skills—seven steps
审清题意 誊写规范
(复述)
Key sentence1
Topic
On the Internet
Body
正文
Most students…
Besides make…more convenient
Supporting sentences Key sentence2
外研版高中英语选择性必修第一册精品课件 Unit 2 写作指导 描写一次经历
④信心和决心确实有助于我们的成功。 Confidence and determination can really __c_o_n_t_r_ib_u_t_e_t_o_o_u_r_s_u_c_c_e_s_s ____. ⑤重要的是坚持不懈。 It is important ____to__p_e_rs_e_v_e_r_e_____.
妙笔成篇 I used to be a teaching assistant in a special education school.On the
whole,it is a delightful experience to help Jane restore her confidence in life. The first time we met,she was always upset,making me embarrassed.
针对训练 假定你是李华,你校英文报“My growing experiences”栏目正在征文。请结 合自身经历用英语写一篇短文并投稿,内容包括: 1.你曾经遇到过的困难; 2.你是如何克服困难的; 3.你的感受是什么。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.请在相应位置作答。
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③He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing.
④The car was so fast that the old man even didn’t have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.
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At 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000, I saw a woman driving a car hit the man in the street.
第二步 抓要点
一幅图，一要点 抓要点，配动词
时态直达 语态到位 介/副词紧随
第三步 扩展成句
⑤I thought the driver would have stopped to help, but she didn't. ⑥Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.
主要特点
记叙为主 稍加议论 旁带说明
能力要求
主要问题
要点不全 线索不清
原因：步骤不对
书面表达 六 步 法
书面表达六步法
审 抄 改
书面 表达
抓
扩
连
书面表达六步法
一、审题
确定基本要素:5W1H
何时何地何人为 何如何做了何事
书面表达六步法
二、抓要点
确定主要行为
What happened?
书面表达六步法
把要点变成完整 的句子。 注意使用介/副词
第四步 连句成文
词与词搭配 句与句相连 增加细节 呼应首尾
第五步 查错改错
主谓一致吗？ 时态正确吗？
时态正确吗？
有“半截话”吗？
第六步 誊写
卷面整洁不一定加分， 卷面潦草一定要扣分！
作业选评
要改进吗？ 为什么？
①At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. ②I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.
⑦Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of whichwas a young lady. ⑧After that, I went over to check out the old man.
About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua
年轻妇女
颜色：黄
AC864
小结
审题，抓点
造句，成文 改错，誉写
作业
复习本课要点 背诵精彩范文
书面表达经典示例
假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清 晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一 份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写 出报告。 1、目击者应该准确报告事实； 2、词数100左右； 3、结尾已为你写好。 ________________________________________ _ About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua
三、扩展成句 形成基本语义单位 Who did what?
书面表达六步法
四、连句成文 时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应
书面表达六步法
五、查错改错
要尽量剔除错误
书面表达六步法
六、誊写
卷面不工整扣5分
课堂练习
请用六步法 写一篇短文
第一步 审题
认真读题然后找出
五个 “W”一个 “H”
把答案写在题中相应的位置