20120313_085845_影评或书评的写作

The Runaway Bunny----- by徐露曼After reading this book, there is a kindly mother bonny appearing in my mind together with a willful bunny. The bunny is so willful that it wants to flee far away, while the mother bunny wants to follow it no matter where it goes. As far as I’m concerned, it is all because of the love which every mother would give to her children.It makes me think a lot. In our daily life, our mother is always selfless to us. She gives the best to us and never asks us for anything in return. She loves us more than herself. She almost contributes herself to bringing up us.Therefore, mothers are so great that we can never forget them. Nowadays, they are turning older and weaker, and it’s our necessary duty to l ook after them well, in return of their great love to us. (145 words)Preparing for Success----- by吕淑敏In childhood, every girl might have a dream that they wanted to fall in love with prince, just like Cinderella. Up to now, we still keep this dream in heart deeply. If by some miracle, we are granted a pair of glass slippers, can we seize the opportunity?In my view, Cinderella’s success is due to her kindness and warm heart. In daily life, she always tries her best to take care of these poor animals. Finally, her quality contributes to her success. Therefore, if you want to be Cinderella, you should start to develop yourselves rather than wait. Opportunity is ready for everyone with good preparation. If you are ready, success will wait for you in the corner of the street. Hence, please have a dream and try to make it. (133 words)Be Y ourself---- by王倩Today, I read a story. It is about a pig which doesn’t want to be pigs. So he changes himself into other animals. But at last, he likes to be a pig, a happy pig.This story lets we know that being yourself makes you happy. When I was a child, my mother always told me how good the little sister was. So I did things like the pig. But as it for me, to be a well-behaved child is very hard. I was active and did wrong things all the time. But I was happy. Now my mother is proud of me.Many people won’t be satisfied with themselves and want to be the person who is really good in their eyes. But it doesn’t make any sense. Like Temple Grandin, as we know, an autistic person who looked things in different ways. At first, all people laughed at her which made her nervous. But she never changed and succeeded finally. Her mother believed that she was different.With many examples, I know the truth: just be yourself, everyone is different. (182 words)Xiao W ei Go Go Go---- by阮海滨Today, we read a story of “Xiao Wei Go Go Go”. Xiao Wei is good at swimming, but the Math is his big headache. However, he didn’t lose heart and won the swimming match.It can be learned from the story that when God close one door, he will open another door for you. For instance, Ma Yun, the chairman of the A Li Wang Wang, is weak at studying. He was a headache for the teachers when he was young. However, he is good at computer, and he works hard to be a chairman finally; Stephen William Hawking is a scientist. As we know, he is a handicapped, but he is confident and never stops studying. He becomes a famous scientist in the end.So, if we meet failure, we shouldn’t lose heart. Work hard and we will succeed in other field. (143 words)After Reading the City Mouse and the Country Rat---- by洪亚妮As we all know, curiosity is part of people’s nature. Everyone lives in his own world and has his own living style. So the curiosity drives people to explore other people’s world.In our opinion, the unknown world may attract us more deeply than the world which we live in as usual, like the country rat and the city mouse which are curios about each other’s lives at first in the story.However, after we set foot in the unknown world actually, we will get to know that the unknown world is different from the world we imagined before. Finally, we will find the old saying—“The foreign moon is more bright. ”is wrong totally, and the world which we live in is better.In my eyes, we should pay more attention to the things we have owned and treasure them, because they maybe are more suitable for you than the new things. (154 words)A Ghost Grandpa---- by 俞莉莉I read the book called my grandpa turns to a ghost. In this story, the hero is Asben, whose grandpa died of heart disease. To his surprise, his grandpa turned to a ghost and came back home. The reason why he came back home is because he had forgotten an important thing.In the process of recalling the past, some moving and funny scenes appeared in my mind, which touches me most. As the Asben did, I also want to see my grandpa, who died when I was very young. I don’t have so many memories with my grandpa as the hero has, which is really a pity.After reading the story, I understand the love is so important. If the story is true, Ireally hope the dead people can come back to finish their past things because of love. (141 words)Wishing Tree---- by周源Why can the tree grant little bear’s wishes? Is it really a wishing tree? Obviously not, that’s because there is mother bear behind little bear. Mother bear knows whatever his baby needs.No one knows you more than your mother and she also care for you more than anyone else in the world. Mothers always remember the expectations of their children. So you can get the present you dreamed on the New Y ear morning while your mother is standing behind you with a smile on her face.As with time past, our mothers are getting old. They may forget where they put the coats or whether the rice is stiffing. However they never forget the time you go back home and what you need.The people who always put us before themselves are our mother. So never fail to live up to your mother’s expectations. (145 words)影评或书评的写作问题1．问题：多数同学写作时过于关注整个情节的平铺直叙，使得导入（introduction）部分老生常谈，毫无新意，而且篇幅冗长，累赘不堪，最重要的是作者评论的中心何在？是故事的主旨？是某个人物的命运？还是当时的时代背景？而整个情节的详细介绍包含太多可以展开的思想，以至于作者突然大谈自己的某个观点时，读者觉得和刚才的故事介绍没什么紧密联系，从而质疑作者的观点缺乏有力论据。