高考英语作文写作公开课课件
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公开课_高中英语写作PPT教学课件
a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
2020/12/12
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
Writing-高三英语写作课(新授课)-一节优秀的英语公开课【优质PPT】
7. (Much)To our (great) surprise, Xiao Ming knows everything.
8. Xiao Ming's knowing everything surprises us.
to simplify
9. Everything known by Xiao Ming, we are surprised.
1. Xiao Ming knows everything and we are very surprised.
2. We are very surprised that Xiao Ming knows everything.
3. That Xiao Ming knows everything surprises us/makes us
Varied sentence structures.
u All simple sentences, and the readers will feel bored. u All long and complex sentences, and the readers will feel tired. u Combination of long sentences and short ones, and the readers will feel
Step II: 点拨质疑 导学提升
To simplify
uHe decided that he would buy a digital camera online.
→He decided to buy a digital camera online.
uThe man who is talking with Mary is my brother.
高中英语公开课课件高三概要写作课(共11张PPT)
But too much sugar can cause health Para2 problems like obesity and tooth disease.
The American and British governments are taking measures to reduce the intake of Para3 sugar by taxing sugary products. It is based on a successful study of taxing Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
I didn’t know the answer.
I looked in reference books.
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
My
I gave him the answer. More answers came and I grew up
Story
Her best-seller grammar book was born.
taking measures to reduceEtfhfeecitnstoafkethoef
Para3 sugar by taxing sugary prmodeuacstusr.es
Para4
It is based on a successful study of taxing
Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
Understanding and Using English Grammar
(10 million book sales)
Summary !
Interconnection between paragraphs
The American and British governments are taking measures to reduce the intake of Para3 sugar by taxing sugary products. It is based on a successful study of taxing Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
I didn’t know the answer.
I looked in reference books.
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
My
I gave him the answer. More answers came and I grew up
Story
Her best-seller grammar book was born.
taking measures to reduceEtfhfeecitnstoafkethoef
Para3 sugar by taxing sugary prmodeuacstusr.es
Para4
It is based on a successful study of taxing
Para4 sugary drinks carried out in Mexico.
Understanding and Using English Grammar
(10 million book sales)
Summary !
Interconnection between paragraphs
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件(34张)
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year.
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world.
√
• difficult people？ X • the people who suffered from a disaster √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公 园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面 的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。 注意：词数 80-100 。开头语已为你写好。(’95) Dear Peter,
We’re so glad that you are coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you 一“抓”为抓主题。
• Type: 说明文 （书信） • Person: 第一人称 • Tense: 一般现在时，一般将来时 • What: 通过看示意图来野餐 • When: 星期天 • Where: 人民公园
二“列”为列要点。
the key points to be included
英语写作训练
• 英语看图类作文： • 1.记叙文 • 2.议论文 • 3.说明文（含图表）
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world.
√
• difficult people？ X • the people who suffered from a disaster √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公 园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面 的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。 注意：词数 80-100 。开头语已为你写好。(’95) Dear Peter,
We’re so glad that you are coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you 一“抓”为抓主题。
• Type: 说明文 （书信） • Person: 第一人称 • Tense: 一般现在时，一般将来时 • What: 通过看示意图来野餐 • When: 星期天 • Where: 人民公园
二“列”为列要点。
the key points to be included
英语写作训练
• 英语看图类作文： • 1.记叙文 • 2.议论文 • 3.说明文（含图表）
高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件
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句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
1
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
2
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
20
句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
1
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
2
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
20
句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.3
表达感谢和期待回复
如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。
I would appreciate it if …; take my application into consideration/ account/ take account of/ seriously
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.2
总结
具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的 说，我就是你要找的合适人选。
As is mentioned above；with；qualities
With all these qualities mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好
Dear sir or madam, __________________________________________ _______________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely , Li Hua
⑵递进关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺并列关系
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least; at first; first of all; in the first place; at last; last of all; for one thing; for another thing; on the one hand; on the other hand; finally what’s more; besides; furthermore; in addition; additionally; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; for example; for instance; like; such as; as follows; take… as an example
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.3
表达感谢和期待回复
如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。
I would appreciate it if …; take my application into consideration/ account/ take account of/ seriously
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.2
总结
具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的 说，我就是你要找的合适人选。
As is mentioned above；with；qualities
With all these qualities mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好
Dear sir or madam, __________________________________________ _______________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely , Li Hua
⑵递进关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺并列关系
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least; at first; first of all; in the first place; at last; last of all; for one thing; for another thing; on the one hand; on the other hand; finally what’s more; besides; furthermore; in addition; additionally; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; for example; for instance; like; such as; as follows; take… as an example
高考英语-概要写作--公开课课件
Concise !!! 60-70 words
phrases or sentences in each paragraph
Underline or circle the key inPfoarrma.a1tio: nFeeding the world’s population is a big challenge, and it is about to get bigger. Right now, a little more than 7.3 billion people share the planet. By 2050, some scientists estimate, the world’s population may reach 9 billion. However, the changing climate will probably make feeding this far greater number a very frightening task. That is the conclusion reached by some
Para. 2: Just three crops—wheat, rice and corn—provide more than two-thirds of the calories that people consume. Such crops, and a small number of other important crops, come from farming regions sometimes referred to as “breadbaskets”. However, these areas often occupy a relatively small portion(部分) of the globe. Worse still, the breadbaskets are easily affected by bad weather. Events such as widespread flooding or extended heat wave can kill crops. That’s especially true if the bad weather occurs when a crop is young, fruiting or approaching harvest.
phrases or sentences in each paragraph
Underline or circle the key inPfoarrma.a1tio: nFeeding the world’s population is a big challenge, and it is about to get bigger. Right now, a little more than 7.3 billion people share the planet. By 2050, some scientists estimate, the world’s population may reach 9 billion. However, the changing climate will probably make feeding this far greater number a very frightening task. That is the conclusion reached by some
Para. 2: Just three crops—wheat, rice and corn—provide more than two-thirds of the calories that people consume. Such crops, and a small number of other important crops, come from farming regions sometimes referred to as “breadbaskets”. However, these areas often occupy a relatively small portion(部分) of the globe. Worse still, the breadbaskets are easily affected by bad weather. Events such as widespread flooding or extended heat wave can kill crops. That’s especially true if the bad weather occurs when a crop is young, fruiting or approaching harvest.
高三英语作文公开课 PPT课件(共23张)
一个好的段落要有丰富的句式
1.感叹句 2.倒装句 3.强调句 4.省略句 5.With 结构 6.定语从句 7.各种名词性从句 8.各种状语从句
利用不同的句式来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采
1.感叹句 e.g. How disappointed he was! 2.强调句 e.g. It was the young boy that helped the old man. 3.倒装句 e.g. Only in this way can we solve the problem. 4.省略句 e.g. Come to me if necessary 5.定语从句 e.g. The book which was borrowed from the library has been returned. 6.名词性从句 e.g. That’s what I should do.
3.If you work hard, you will make rapid progress.(祈使句+and） Work hard and you will make a rapid progress. 4.I won’t believe what he says. (no matter what状语从句） No matter what he says, I won’t believe. 5.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(使用V-ing 形式） Singing and laughing, they went back to school
Ladies and gentlemen,
Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our village! ①This village Is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people .It used to be poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 1978③ and has been developing very fast. People here ④live a much better life than before. Now It is taking on a new look.
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disabled to stand/walk
• 二氧化碳： carbon dioxide • 一氧化碳： carbon oxide • poisonous gases
没有不会写的，只有不会想的！
残疾人： the disabled • the people who can not move/speak/think
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year.
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world.
a bridge over the stream.
cross stream
• Cross the stream. Go over the bridge.
turn right • Turn right.
to the other side of hill
• Walk round to the other side of the hill. Climb the hill.
1. 在人民公园野餐
1. have a picnic, in People’s Park
2. 从公园正门进
2. enter park, by main gate
3. 进门后朝前走
3. walk straight
4. 到小河过桥
4. cross stream
5. 向右拐后朝前走
5. turn right
normally 大众媒体 mass media 大众媒体的具体表现形式是TV，radio, newspaper, internet
• 北京很迷人 。 • Beijing is so beautiful that many people come
here.
• Beijing is so beautiful that many people come here every year.
四喜丸子
four happy meatballs X
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
meatballs √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（2）上义词或下义词代替
上义词是对事物的概括性、抽象性说明 下义词是事物的具体表现形式。
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）铁锹、锄头、镐： spade, hoe, pick the tools which are used to plant trees 拐杖： stick • The tool which is used to help the
enter park, by main gate
• Enter the park by the main gate. •Go through the main gate of the park.
walk straight
• Walk straight on till you come to a stream. •Walk along the road until you get to
英语写作训练
• 英语看图类作文： • 1.记叙文 • 2.议论文 • 3.说明文（含图表）
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
2种方法：（1）同义替换
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
(1）这人很变态：
BT?
X
be different from normal people
√
strange/odd/peculiar （2）难民
in small woods, by the lake
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people, no matter young or old, men or women, come here every year from all around the world.
• 高考英语看图作文五步曲 • 一“抓”为抓主题。 • 二“列”为列要点。 • 三“变”为变要点为句子。 • 四“连”为连句成篇。 • 五“检”为文章检查。
√
• difficult people？ X • the people who suffered from a disaster √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
6. 绕/爬过小山
6. to the other side of hill
7. 我们在（湖畔）小树林里 7. in small woods, by lake
•三“变”为变要点为句子。
Expand the key points have a picnic, in People’s Park n We will have our picnic in the People’s Park. n We are going to the People’s park for a picnic. n We are going to the People’s park, where we will have a picnic.
Li Hua
一“抓”为抓主题。
• Type: 说明文 （书信） • Person: 第一人称 • Tense: 一般现在时，一般将来时 • What: 通过看示意图来野餐 • When: 星期天 • Where: 人民公园
二“列”为列要点。
the key points to be included
假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公 园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面 的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。 注意：词数 80-100 。开头语已为你写好。(’95) Dear Peter,
We’re so glad that you are coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you can find us.
• 二氧化碳： carbon dioxide • 一氧化碳： carbon oxide • poisonous gases
没有不会写的，只有不会想的！
残疾人： the disabled • the people who can not move/speak/think
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year.
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world.
a bridge over the stream.
cross stream
• Cross the stream. Go over the bridge.
turn right • Turn right.
to the other side of hill
• Walk round to the other side of the hill. Climb the hill.
1. 在人民公园野餐
1. have a picnic, in People’s Park
2. 从公园正门进
2. enter park, by main gate
3. 进门后朝前走
3. walk straight
4. 到小河过桥
4. cross stream
5. 向右拐后朝前走
5. turn right
normally 大众媒体 mass media 大众媒体的具体表现形式是TV，radio, newspaper, internet
• 北京很迷人 。 • Beijing is so beautiful that many people come
here.
• Beijing is so beautiful that many people come here every year.
四喜丸子
four happy meatballs X
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
meatballs √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（2）上义词或下义词代替
上义词是对事物的概括性、抽象性说明 下义词是事物的具体表现形式。
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）铁锹、锄头、镐： spade, hoe, pick the tools which are used to plant trees 拐杖： stick • The tool which is used to help the
enter park, by main gate
• Enter the park by the main gate. •Go through the main gate of the park.
walk straight
• Walk straight on till you come to a stream. •Walk along the road until you get to
英语写作训练
• 英语看图类作文： • 1.记叙文 • 2.议论文 • 3.说明文（含图表）
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
2种方法：（1）同义替换
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
(1）这人很变态：
BT?
X
be different from normal people
√
strange/odd/peculiar （2）难民
in small woods, by the lake
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people, no matter young or old, men or women, come here every year from all around the world.
• 高考英语看图作文五步曲 • 一“抓”为抓主题。 • 二“列”为列要点。 • 三“变”为变要点为句子。 • 四“连”为连句成篇。 • 五“检”为文章检查。
√
• difficult people？ X • the people who suffered from a disaster √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
6. 绕/爬过小山
6. to the other side of hill
7. 我们在（湖畔）小树林里 7. in small woods, by lake
•三“变”为变要点为句子。
Expand the key points have a picnic, in People’s Park n We will have our picnic in the People’s Park. n We are going to the People’s park for a picnic. n We are going to the People’s park, where we will have a picnic.
Li Hua
一“抓”为抓主题。
• Type: 说明文 （书信） • Person: 第一人称 • Tense: 一般现在时，一般将来时 • What: 通过看示意图来野餐 • When: 星期天 • Where: 人民公园
二“列”为列要点。
the key points to be included
假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公 园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面 的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。 注意：词数 80-100 。开头语已为你写好。(’95) Dear Peter,
We’re so glad that you are coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you can find us.