雅思大作文范文：话题动物

动物：
1. Some people hold that we should spend money and time on the protection
of wild animals while others suggest that the money should be spent on populations living in the poorest areas of the world. What is your opinion? [Sample]:
In these years, animal protection has become a subject of ongoing scientific research and an issue of concern.People take different views/attitudes toward the enormous spending （that is）required by wildlife conservation. It is suggested that the spending should be diverted to helping human populations, especially those living below poverty line, because human life is more valuable than animal life. In my opinion, the investment in animal conservation is worthwhile.
Poor adj needy poverty n.
Needy
rewarding。

has attracted the public’s attention
Protection /conservation/ preservation animal /wildlife
Animals, as a significant part of an ecosystem, have profound impacts on the sustainability of an ecosystem and on the well-being of humanity. All animals are connected in one way or another in food chains. For this reason,
It would disable vegetation from purifying water, recycling nutrient and pollinating crops.We humans are eventually affected.
Justified fair pure
Sustainable development
Another justification for animal protection is that animals play a significant role in the development of industries, as an important natural resource. People derive substances and materials from animals for different purposes. A typical example is that animals provide essential
that designers and
（防水的）clothing drew Draw upon/on 借鉴
Draw inspiration from =turn to sb/sth for inspiration
….is a case in point.
On account of those benefits, wildlife protection is a significant strategy that has far-reaching effects on the future of human. However, when (the strategy is)implemented/performed, this strategy should be adopted in different contexts. It should be noted that spending money simply on animals is not the approach that promises/guarantee the best outcomes in all circumstances. For example, in those regions where inhabitants struggle with weak economies and have few job sources, direct spending on any animal program would not stop people from hunting and trading animals for a living. An alternative strategy is creating jobs or providing subsidies,lift ing these regions out of poverty.
Improve their employability
Get rid of poverty 脱贫
Simply/solely / merely/ only
Subsidy /funding/investment /spending
Subsidise v. get rid of poverty
Have inborn/innate ability to make a living
Lack in job sources and are poor in academic backgrounds
From what has been discussed, animals are key components of the whole natural order and have relevance to the sustainability of an ecosystem and the interests of humanity. Animal protection is a strategy that applies to the whole world, and might vary in different circumstances.
The views towards this issue vary from person to person.
Be relevant to
The views towards this issue vary from person to person.。