概要答案

议论文：主题概括 Author’s opinion (Topic sentence): Supporting reasons (Supporting sentences): 1. 2. 3. Conclusion
The article gives the view that…should/shouldn’t…（主题）.…..（补充论据）. The passage highlights the importance of….. The author argues that…

完全使用自己的语言。

1加入了文中的细节。2不是用自己的语言写成的，而是原文中句 子的拼凑。
With global warming and melting ice, some scientists think that polar bears could die out by the end of the century. However, other scientists don’t think so. They have found polar bars have found alternative food sources and they can survive by hunting animals on land instead of young seals. The researchers expect all polar bears learn how to hunt on land to avoid starvation.
本文是一篇议论文，主要阐述了金钱并不能让我们一直快乐地生活， 真正的快乐来自于精神上的富有的观点。文中主要有三个要点：要 点一，一些人崇尚拜金主义，看重物质利益；要点二，人们并不感 到幸福是因为他们有不同的需求，真正的快乐是精神上的快乐；要 点三，享受生活的秘诀是要充实我们的精神世界。 People add more money and things to their happiness, but some of them are unsatisfied because they lack desires and additional interests. （要点1）Art, literature, music and sports are several necessary rooms in house of life which can lead to real riches. （要点2）No matter what rooms the house of life contains, the key to enjoy life is to maintain adding spiritual wealth to the house of life.（要点3）
阅卷时将主要考虑以下内容： 第五档（21-25分）要求 理解准确，涵盖全部要点 ; （ 1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况； 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 ; （ 2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性； 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要 （3）上下文的连贯性； 结构紧凑; （4）对各要点表达的独立性情况。
With global warming and melting ice, it isn't easy being a polar bear anymore. some studies have predicted that polar bears could die out by the end of the century. as it turns out, alternative food sources for the polar bears aren't comletely out of the question. biologist have also done experiences to study the survival of polar bears.
概要写作讲评
With global warming and melting ice, it isn’t easy being a polar bear anymore. Some studies have predicted that polar bears could die out by the end of the century. The good news is not all researchers think the bears are absolutely disappearing. Scientists at the American Museum of Natural History(AMNH) have published a new paper indicating that things might not be as bad for polar bears as some scientists expect. To understand the reason for the researchers’ cautious optimism, we must first understand the factors that are threatening the polar bear’s existence. Polar bears consume a diet of mainly young seals. In order to hunt these seals, polar bears need to rest at the top of sea ice--the same ice that is increasingly melting for most of the year thanks to climate change. In another 50 years, experts expect that the Arctic will be too warm for sea ice to form for half of the year, leaving polar bears without a reliable food source and in serious danger of starvation. As it turns out, alternative food sources for the polar bears aren’t completely out of the question. For as long as biologists have tailed after the animals, they’ve seen polar bears eating animals found on land like caribou(驯鹿) and snow geese---as well as the snow geese’s eggs. Can polar bears actually survive off these alternative food sources for long periods of time? To figure this out, researchers calculated the nutrients that a caribou and snow geese diet would provide. They found that even adult male polar bears would be able to obtain more calories than they would burn in hunting these meals. Moreover, the food would provide the food necessary to avoid starvation during the summer months. Unfortunately, not all polar bears have tended to seek food on land. That said, the researchers expect that necessity would push more polar bears to hunt on land to avoid starvation. They also expect that the bears could learn from their fellow bears how to hunt on land until the practice becomes second nature.
通过全文可知，本文就是否应该为了人类的发展而开 发荒野展开了讨论。JOHN 认为应该保护荒野，因为大 自然为人们开发荒野以满足人们日益增长的需要。作 者认为这两种观点都面临挑战，需要进一步的探讨。 因此，考生只需将各要点概括起来即可。写作过程中， 考生应注重各观点的对比，从而引出作者的看法。 People hold different views on the position of the wilderness in environmental protection.(要点1） John Sauven says that preserving wilderness outweighs exploitation as the nature provides useful services. .(要点 2） While Lee Lane holds the opposite view that the wilderness should be exploited to satisfy the growing need for raw materials. .(要点3） For the author, both opinions are still faced with challenges, so more serious thinking is needed. .(要点4）