2016-2017中考英语作文指导及范文

2016-2017中考英语作文指导

如何写好一个句子？

--如何写好复合句。

复合句是由一个主句和一个或一个以上的从句构成的句子，我们在写作时，要学会使用宾语从句，状语从句和定语从句等。下面就谈谈有关这方面的一些句型。

句型 1 主+谓+that从句-- We’re sure that we’ll win the first prize.我们肯定能得头奖。He found that his English was too poor.他发现他的英语太差了。She decides that she is going to be a nurse.他决定要当个护士.I don’t believe that he has finished his work.我相信他还没有做完他的工作.

句型点评：在动词say，think，hope，believe，expect，explain，hear，know，find，regret，remember，decide后可接that引导的宾语从句，that常可省略。

句型2 主句+whether/if+从句-- I wonder he will come （or not ）.我不知道他会不会来。I asked her if she had a dictionary。我问他是否有字典。I don’t know whether he will be here on time.我不知道他是否能按时到这里。

句型点评：if和whether可引导一个表示疑问的宾语从句，二者一般情况下可通用。

句型3 主句+疑问词+从句--No one knows what he is doing.没有人知道他在干什么。Take back what I said just now.我收回刚才说的话。Could you tell me where the booking office is？你能不能告诉我售票处在什么地方？I must thank you for what you have done for me.我一定要谢谢你为我所做的事。

句型点评：连接代词who，whom，whose，what，which等和连接副词when，where，why，how等都可以用来引导特殊疑问句充当宾语从句。注意：从句中要用陈述语气。

句型4 主句+when/while/as/before/after+从句（时间状语从句)

We took notes as/while/when we were listening to the teacher.我们一边听老师讲课一边做笔记。Please keep silent while/when she’s writing.她在写作，请保持安静.I was speaking when a policeman came in.我正在说话，这时，突然进来一个警察.You must finish the work before I go home.你们必须在我回家以前把工作做完。

句型点评：时间状语从句通常由从属连词when，while，as，after，before等引导，使用时必须注意他们之间的词义和用法区别。

句型5 主句+until/till-从句--Last night,his parents waited for him till/until it was 12.昨晚他父母一直等他到12点。

We practised singing till/untill class was over.我们练唱一直练到下课。The child didn’t begin t o do his lessons till/until he finished watching the TV play.这个小孩看完电视剧后才开始做功课。He did not go home until/till he finished his work.他一直把工作做完之后才回家。

句型点评：在使用本句型时要注意until/till的用法，若主句中的谓语动词是“keep，remain，stay，wait..”等延续性动词，则用动词的肯定式，until/till的含义是“一直到....为止”；若主句中的谓语动词是“arrive，come，finish，go，reach，start”等瞬间性动词，则用动词的否定式，这时的until/till的含义是“直到....才....”

句型6 主句+since-从句/It is+.....since.....

We have lived here since we came to the city.自从我们来到这个城市，就一直住在这儿。She has never ill since he left the hospital.他出院以来一直没病过。We have been good friends since we were at school.我们自上学起就是好朋友了。It is four years since we met last time.自从上次见面以来已经四年过去了。

句型点评：since是从属连词，连接时间状语从句表示“自从....以来”。从句中的谓语动词通常用过去时，主句中的谓语动词通常用现在完成时，以表示从过去某一时刻开始，一直延续到现在的动作或状态。

句型7 主句+as soon as/the moment.... ---Please call us as soon as you arrive at the airport.请你一到机场就给我们打电话。I’ll tell your mother the news as soon as I see her.我一见到你母亲就把这个消息告诉她。As soon as the students got to the farm，they began to help the farmers with their work.学生们一到农场，他们就开始帮农民干活了。The moment （that）the teacher came in，the children stopped talking.老师一进来，孩子们立即停止谈话。

句型点评：as soon as表示“一...就...”的意思，它引导的从句所表示的动词几乎跟主句的动作同时发生，相当于the moment that引导的从句。

句型8 主句+where/wherever(no matter where)从句--Get up where you fall.哪里跌倒就在哪里站起来。She phoned to ask me to stay where I was.她打电话给我，叫我留在原地。Wherever you go，I always follow you.不论你到哪里，我总是跟着你。Wherever you go，you may find friends.不论你走到哪儿，你可能找到朋友。

句型点评：where和wherever都可引导表示地点的状语从句，不过wherever的语气较强，相当于“no matter where”意思是“不论/无论......在/到哪里....”。

句型9. 主句+because从句；Since/As从句+主句

He didn’t pass the English examination last term because he hadn’t studied hard.因为他学习不努力，所以上学期英语考试不及格。As it is very cold today，you’d better put on a coat.今天天气很冷，你最好穿件外衣。Since everything is ready，you can begin your experiment.既然一切都准备好了，现在你们可以开始做实验了。

句型点评：表示原因的状语从句通常用从属连词because，since和as等引导。

句型10. 主句+so that/in order that-句型

He shouted at the top of his voice so that（in order that）he might be heard.他大声喊，为的是让别人听见。We had to go to the hall early so that（in order that）we might get good seats.我们不得不早去大厅，为的是能够得到好的座位。Mr green came to China in order that(so that)he might visit the Great Wall and other places of interest.格林先生来中国，为的是参观长城和其它名胜。

句型点评：so that/in order that意思是“以便；为的是”，引导表示目的状语从句，其从句中的谓语动词通常要与一些情态动词“may，might，can，could”等连用。另外，“so as to/in order to/to+do”也可引导目的状语。

句型11 主语+be/v+so+adj./adv.+that从句

She sang so beautifully that she was highly praised by the audience.她唱得很动听，所以受到了听众的高度赞扬。Jenny is so lovely a child that everybody loves her./Jenny is such a lovely child that everybody loves her.珍妮是这样一个可爱的孩子，所以每个人都喜欢她。She did so well in the office that she was praised by the manager。她在办公室里干得很出色，受到了经理的表扬。

句型点评：表示结果的状语从句，通常用“so/such....that”表示“如此...以致”来引导。

句型12 主句+as+adj./adv.+as+比较状语从句主句+not/so(as)+adj./adv.+as+比较状语从句

The Yellow River is not so(as) long as the Yangtze River.黄河不像长江那样长。He is not so clever as I thought.他不像我所想的那样聪明。I hope you will start as early as you can.我希望你们尽早动身。

句型点评：“as+adj./adv.+as”这个结构中，其中的形容词或副词要用原级；“not as（so）+adj./adv.+as”意为“不如....那样；不像....那样”，其中的形容词或副词也用原级。

句型13 主句+adj/adv比较级+than+..... 主句+（the）+adj./adv.最高级+......

A truck goes much faster than a bike.卡车比自行车跑得快多了。It’s the best novel that I have ever read.这是我读过的最好的一本小说。In autumn，the weather of Beijing is much cooler than that of Wuhan.秋天北京的天气比武汉凉爽得多。

句型点评：表示甲>乙（或甲< 乙），要用“形容词（或副词）的比较级+than”句型；表示最高级时，常用“（the）+adj/adv.最高级+.....”等句型。

句型14 Though/Although-从句+主句 Although you are very clever,you are unable to work out the problem.尽管你很聪明，你也不可能解出这道题。He made little progress although he studied very hard.尽管他学习很用功，但是他取得的进步很小。

句型点评：though和although引导的让步状语从句可以置于句首，也可以置于句末。注意“though/although”不与不but同时使用。

句型15.主句+if/unless-从句 We will go and visit the museum if it is fine tomorrow.如果明天天晴，我们将去参观博物馆。I won’t let you leave unless you promise to return tomorrow.=If you don’t promise to return tomorrow,I won’t let you leave.除非你答应明天赶回来，否则我就不让你离开。

句型点评：if/unless引导的条件状语从句可以放在句首，也可放在主句后面，其从句常用一般现在时表示将来。（即主从句要遵从：主将从现的原则）

句型16 先行词+关系代词who(that)/whom/whose+从句-- The child who is reading is my daughter.在那儿读书的那个孩子是我的女儿。The man(whom)you met at the gate is my teacher.在门口你碰到的那个人是我的老师。The boy whose mother died in the accident works hard.其母亲在事故中死去的那个孩子学习努力。

句型点评：在定语从句中，如果先行词是人，要用关系代词“who，whose，whom，that”等引导，其中who在定语从句中作主语或宾语；whose在定语从句中做定语，whom在定语从句中作宾语。

句型17 先行词+关系代词that/which+从句

The book(that/which)you lent me yesterday is very interesting.你昨天借给我的书非常有趣。The film which/that is about animal is wonderful.关于动物的那部电影好看极了。

句型点评：在定语从句中，如果先行词是物，要用关系代词“that，which”等引导。在定语从句中that，which

作主语时，不能省略；若作宾语时则常省略。

附2015年各省中考满分作文---

1.上周五，你们班举行了《我们的梦想》的主题班会，在班上同学们踊跃发言；有的想成为老师，有的想成为一名警察，有的想当医生.....请你根据下面的表格的提示以“Our Dreams”为题，写一篇英语论文，报告这次班会的情况，并谈谈你自己的梦想。

Our Dreams

Last Friday,our class held a class meeting about

our dreams.Here is my report.Liu Wei’s dream is

to be a teacher,so he decides to study

education.Li Ming,he does sports every

day,wants to become a policeman,for he thinks

that without physical exercise,he can not make

his dream come true.Susan wants to be a movie

dreams one day.

2.某校开展“我是课堂小主人”建议征集活动，各班就此展开讨论，同学们纷纷发言：“我希望能有足够的自主学习时间....”“我喜欢的课堂是每个人都有一台笔记本电脑，方便网上查询.....”“课堂上我们能自由的讨论，充分展示我们的学习成果.....”等等。请你结合同学们讨论的结果，给以电子邮件的形式写一封信，建议什么样的课堂形式更为同学们喜爱，也更有利于同学们未来的发展。内容包括以下要点：

1)What is your favorite class like? 2)Please tell us an unfotgettable experence you’ve had in your class.

3)Please give at least two suggestions.

Dear Mr. Li,

My favorite class is an open and free class where we can learn by myself and discuss in groups,it is good for my development,I think.

I still remember an unforgettable experiencein my math class.Several days ago,I spent a long time working on three maths problems in class,but they were too hard for me to work them out.So I had to ask my classmate for help.After a considerable discussion,we solved the problems in our group.How excited I was.

Having such a grea t experience,I want to give two suggestions.Firstly,please don’t teach us too much in class.We need about 30 minutes to learn by ourselves and work in groups every class.Secondly,please provide us with some laptops if possible,so we can surf the Internet easily.No doubt,we need an open and free class,you see.

That’s all.Thank you.

Best wishes,

Zhang Hua.

3.请根据提示内容，以“A visit to________home”为题，为学校英文报写一篇短文，叙述你“走亲访友”的一次经历。提示：When？Whose home？How？What？Your feelings.....

A visit to my friend’s home

Last Sunday afternoon,I went to my friend’s home.It was not far.So I went there by bike.

In her home,we watched an English movie and listened to music.We also made some toys with some old clothes.It was not easy but we tried.We cut clothes into pieces.Then we put the pieces and other things together.At last,these pieces were made into different toys.How lovely they were!We had fun when we did it.We were very proud!What a pleasant day!

4.某中学正在招收赴英夏令营领队，应聘的条件是用英文给你的队友写一封e-mail，提醒相关注意事项。假如你是王涵，请根据要点提示，写一封e-mail，参加应聘。

要点提示：1.出行前（了解相关信息，提高英语口语）。。。2.旅行中（注意言谈举止，人身安全等）

Dear friends,

I’m glad to be your leader,and I’m writing to tell you about something important.

You will soon leave for England for a camp.Before you start,you should get to know the imformation and improve your oral English.While traveling,you should try to keep yourself safe and at the same time pay attention to your behavior.As a Chinese,it’s your traditional to be polite and behave well.Besides,wherever you go,be sure not to litter.

I hope you can do these well while you are enjoying the summer camp in England.

Best wishes?

Yours,

Wang Han

5.某中学生英文报正开辟专栏讨论中学生如何减压。假设你叫李华，请从以下几个方面，用英语写出你的具体做法，向该栏目投稿。1.与他人交流 2.参加体育运动 3.参与娱乐活动 4.其他减压方式

参考词汇：stressed adj.有压力的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear editor,

There are many wayus for us high school students to relax ourselves.When we feel stressed,I will communicate with my friends,parents and teachers,they can help me reduce stress.In addition,I also enjoy taking exercise with my friends,especially playing basketball.Sometimes,I will listen to light music in my free time or dance to music,too.Besides,walking with my pet dog in the evening is also a good way to relax myself.I think that as long as we are relaxed,we can have a good time and learn better. Nothing is too difficult,if you put your heart into it.

Yours,

Li hua

6.英文有句谚语“East，west，home’s best”。某英文报以此为标题，向广大中学生征文。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍你家的情况。内容包括：你家的居室及居住环境，家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系，并谈谈如何让你的家更美好。80词左右开头已给出，不计入总词数。

East，west，home’s best

There is an old saying,“East，west，home’s best”.I live in a house in the countryside.There’s a big living room,three bedrooms,a kitchen and a washroom in it.There’re some trees and flowers around my house.The air is really clean.And I often hear birds singing.

There’re four people in my family.They are my parents,my sister and I.We’re helpful and friendly.And we always get on well with each other.

I’m happy I have a good family.I will do what I can to help do more housework and farm work.I’ll study harder so t hat I can make more money in the future.With our effort,I’m sure my home will be better and better.

7.假设你是李杰,正通过e-mail和美国友好姐妹校的朋友Tom交流校纪班规,请你用英文向他介绍下面的“班级公约”.班级公约:

1.准时到校穿校服，见到老师问声好；

2.上课专心勤思考，作业认真按时交；

3.教室保洁常打扫，离班熄灯关门窗；

4.和谐相处应友爱，互相帮助共进步

参考词汇：school uniform；be active in thinking

Dear Tom,

I’d like to introduce my class rules made my by us all.First,we should come to school on time in school uniforms.It’s polite to greet our teachers when we meet them.Second,we must listen carfully in class and be active in thinking.Also,we should do our homework carfully and hand it in on time.Third,we need to clean the classroom often and always keep it clean.And we’re required to turn off lights and close windows and doors before we leave.Fourth,being friendly is importan t.We’re supposed to get along well and help each other to make progress together.It’s our duty to follow all the rules above. What about yours?Please write soon.

8.生活中每个人都有与他人沟通交流的体验，如：与家人，朋友等。请根据下面的要求写一篇不少于80词的短文。要求：1.表达你对沟通的理解 2.描述自身经历或社会现象中在沟通方面存在的问题3。提出至少一点更好地与人沟通的方法。

In our daily life,if we want to get on well with others,we should learn some skills about communication.

When friends are eating dinner,most of them just surf the Internet on the phone without any communication.They may feel bored so that they won’t get together any more.In addition,some students always get into trouble with others,so they have no friends and so on.All these problems are caused by lack of communication.

In my opinion,if they learn to talk with others more,share ideas and feelings with others or be a good listener sometimes,they will communicate better with each other.The better you communicate with others,the more friends you will have. 9.亲爱的同学们，中考过后将迎来愉快的暑假。你一定对旅行感兴趣吧？请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍一下你的旅行计划。可适当发挥。

1.与父母乘火车去北京

2.想游览哪些风景名胜

3.其他打算

4.将会有何收获

可能用到的词语：capital，symbol，the Great Wall，the Palace Museum，Tian’anmen Square,Beijing Duck

The summer vacation is coming.I’m so excited because I’m going on a trip to Beijing with my parents.

We’ll go there by train.As we all know,Beijing is the capital of China and there are many places of interest there.We’ll first visit the Great Wall,a symbol of our country.Next,we’ll pay a visit to the Summer Palace and Tian’anmen Square.After that,we’ll enjoy Beijing Duck.Of course,we’ll take photos during our trip. I do believe we’ll have a wonderful time.

10.学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请根据以下提示，并结合自己的观点，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves?”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文，谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护（self-protection）。

提示：1.never swim 2.be careful to make friends 3.call the police when you are in danger 4.eat healthy food 5.Don’t crowd （go upstairs and downstairs）

How Can We Protect Ourselves?

Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers.But how we protect ousdelves?Here are some suggestions.

First,we should be careful when we make friends,especially on line.Second,if we are in danger,we must call the police in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.Also,we should eat heathily and safely.Besides,we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at https://www.360docs.net/doc/1c2657987.html,st,summer is coming,we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.

All in all,everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.

11.请你以My______为题，写篇英语短文。要求：1.在My后面加上适当的词补全标题。2、词数80左右。

My dream

I always dream of becoming a doctor in the future.

Doctors are nice and kind.They devote all their lives to helping patients.They are always dressed in white,so we regard them White Angels. It is said that doctors are always tired and busy working in the hospital,but it can’t obstruct me in realizing my dream.I’ll study harder and read more books about medical science.No matter how difficult,I will never give up my dream.

12.请你以“My Father”为题，写一篇短文。从性格，爱好等方面简略介绍一下你的父亲，重点写一个曾经发生在你们之间的令人感动的故事，并简要说明你将如何回报这如山的父爱。参考词汇：感动move（v.) 回报in return My father is an ordinary worker.He is a kind and generous man. He is always ready to help others.He likes playing chess and listening to music when he is free.In my heart,he is my hero.

Last year,I took part in the relay race held by my school.I got so tired during the race that I even wanted to give up.My father not only ran with me but also encouraged me all the time until I reached the finishing line,which made me very moved.

In return for his love,I’ve dec ided to work hard and make greater progress so that one day he can be proud of me!

13.你身边的每个人对你来说具有特殊的意义。请你以“My special_______”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友，老师，同学的等。要求：1.在题目空格中填入你要描述的对象，如grandma，teacher或friend 等。2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。3.80词左右。

My special grandma

My grandma is special to me because we’re like friends.She always helps me and whenever I am in trouble.There are no secrets between us. When I am with my grandma,we spend a lot of happy time together.I know my grandma is very smart because she seems to know everything.My grandma is good at many things.One thing she likes best is cooking.She often cooks delicious food for me.I know my grandma loves me and I love her as well.

14.假如你是李平，最近你学习上遇到困难。请用英语给你的英国朋友Nancy写一封电子邮件，讲述你的问题并寻求她的帮助。参考词汇：考试不及格fail the exam 熬夜stay up late 开头和结尾已给出。

Hi Nancy，

How are you？Hope you’re well.

Last week,I failed the physics exam again.My mother was very angry with me.She said I wasn’t hard-working.So I didn’t go to bed until I finished my homework every night.Since I stayed up late,I couldn’t pay attention to my lessons in class next day.My teacher asked me”What’s wrong with you?”But I didn’t know how to answer.I expect you to give me some advice on how to study well in an efficient way.

I’m really looking forward to receiving your reply soon.

Love,

Li Ping

15.假如你是李明。本周五早上你班同学将去格林农场参加实践活动。请你用英语草拟一则通知。内容要点如下：1.摘蔬菜，给植物浇水； 2.7点校门口集合，乘车前往3.体验农场生活，活动约2小时 4.互相关照，注意安全 5.补充一两点有关事项。词数80左右。参考词汇：experience v.体验pick摘activity n.活动

Follow students，

Our class are going to Green Farm this Friday morning.We’ll meet at the school gate at 7:00 am and take a bus to the farm.We will spend around two hours experiencing the lives of farmers and taking some meaning activities such as picking up vegetables,watering the plants.Of course,safety is the most important.Never walk along the river,and never leave our class.We are supposed to help each other.Besides,we will have a big lunch at the farmers’. I believe we will have a great time.

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