【新高一暑期课】【妙笔生花之建议信】第十讲-写作-建议信的写作
高中英语书面表达(应用文写作)——建议信
suggest 最简单的升级办法
第二句——写作目的
1. I am writing to suggest that… 2. I am writing to share my suggestions.
第二句——写作目的
1. I am writing to suggest that… 2. I am writing to share my suggestions. 3. I am writing to propose that…
建议信叫你的情商课
同学：我最近真的好累，总是想哭，学习也使不上劲。
同学：我已经好努力了，真的什么都做了，为什么还 不行。
同学：我就没怎么玩耍，还考的不如玩的同学，我真 傻。
“我已经三天没挨打了”模板
你：那就哭吧。 你：那就别学了。 你：那就喝热水。 你：那就好好吃一顿。
自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活收
众所周知，每次重要考试前，总有部分同学出现一 些焦虑症状。假如你是李华，请用英语写一封信， 向某学生英文报编辑反应该问题并提出你的建议。
要点如下：
1. 焦虑症状：头晕（dizzy adj.）、睡眠不好等； 2. 建议：制定合适的复习计划、保持正常休息等。
假设你是李华，进入高三后，学习压力大，月考频 繁，你的好友David感到无比的焦虑和紧张。请你 结合以下要点，给他写一封信，给出缓解压力的建 议并鼓励他。
第一句——照应来信
1. I am sorry to know that you are having such a bad time at the moment.
2. I am sorry to know that you had trouble in doing…
高中英语书面表达应用文写作指导——建议信
高中英语书面表达应用文写作指导：建议信【建议信写作思路】1.第一段：表明写信目的(包括信息来源、背景、现状和存在的问题)2.第二段：结合对方的问题，提出具体建议。
3.第三段：表达期盼，希望对方采纳自己的建议，能够解决相关问题。
【范例】为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。
假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。
信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。
请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下：1. 表示理解并给予安慰；2. 提出建议并说明理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3. 信的开头和结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪Hi Worried,I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________Yours,JamieHi Worried,I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your t emper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips.First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours,Jamie 文章亮点1.I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.我很抱歉知道你现在过得很不愉快。
高中英语应用文写作1 建议信
3. Hearing/Learning (that)..., I’m writing to make a suggestion on …
7. Another suggestion is to participate in some outdoor activities.
The end: 鼓励收信人接收建议
注意要有礼貌，使对方容易接受
1. I'm sure/I believe the experience will be a beautiful addition to your exploration of Chinese culture.
理由： ① because the scenery is more spectacular
and breathtaking
②considering/because of/owing to/due to
its spectacular and breathtaking scenery
③ as a consequence of/as a result of its
The body: 提出建议并阐明理由
1. It's a wise choice/idea to do … 2. It seems sensible/advisable to do…
3. It is fairly beneficial if you could… 4. It makes sense to do … 5. I would recommend that… 6. Having a heart-to-heart chat with someone you trust is an effective way, …
如何写建议信高一
中段：是重点段。围绕对方的困惑和烦恼，用 科学委婉的语言提出自己的建议、方法。注意 要充分考虑到对方的实际问题，表达时应选择 得体的语言，切忌用语生硬呆板，泛泛而谈。 末段：表达希望。希望自己的建议能对对方有 所帮助。 2．掌握建议信的语言特点 语气要诚恳，有礼貌，避免使用should ,must 建议内容要详尽具体，不能含糊其辞；可提的 建议通常是多个，因此要注意各个建议之间的 衔接过过渡。
Yours sincerely Li Hua
Connecting words
Addition （递进） Contrast （转折） Summary （总结） And then…Besides… In addition…，what’ more, But…However… On the other hand… In short…In a word…
Theref接词和过渡短语的使用使行文连贯
Read a letter to the editor
Dear Miss Wang, I’m a student from Huzhou Senior High school. I have a problem. I’m not very good at communicating with people. Although I try to talk to my classmates, I still find it hard to make good friends with them. So I feel quite lonely sometimes. I do want to change this situation. But I don’t know how. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.
【新高二暑期课】行云流水之建议信第十讲-建议信的写作16张PPT
③
(so倒装句)
2. 你可能会认为花费在锻炼方面的时间被浪费了。
①The time
on exercise. You may think
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②You may think that time
．(过去分词作定语)
③You may think that time
．(定语从句)
【新高二暑期课】行云流水之建议信 第十讲- 建议信 的写作 16张PP T
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2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Chris,
【新高二暑期课】行云流水之建议信 第十讲- 建议信 的写作 16张PP T
Yours Li Hua
【新高二暑期课】行云流水之建议信 第十讲- 建议信 的写作 16张PP T
内容讲解
句式： 1．你学习如此投入以至于没有时间锻炼了。 ①You have been absorbed in study. You have had no time for exercise ． ②You have b_e_e_n_s_o_a_b_s_or_b_e_d_inst_u_d_y_t_ha_t_you have h_adn_o_ti_m_e_f_o_r_e_xe_r_ci_s_e_．(so...that) ③ So absorbed have you been in study that you have had no time for exercise. (so倒装句) 2．你可能会认为花费在锻炼方面的时间被浪费了。 ①The time is spent on exercise. You may thinkthe time is wasted ． ②You may think that time spent on exercise is wasted ．(过去分词作定语) ③You may think that time which/that is spent on exercise is wasted ．(定语从句)
高中语文作文模板建议信
高中语文作文模板建议信亲爱的同学：我是你们的语文老师，今天我想给你们写一封建议信，希望能够在学习语文的道路上给你们一些帮助和指导。
首先，我想说的是关于写作。
写作是语文学习中非常重要的一部分，它不仅可以帮助我们表达思想，还可以提高我们的语言表达能力。
在写作的过程中，我们要注意语言的规范和准确性，要避免使用口语化的词语和表达方式。
同时，我们还要注重文章结构的完整性和逻辑性，要合理安排文章的开头、中间和结尾，做到层次分明，条理清晰。
另外，我们还要注重细节的处理，要注意使用恰当的修辞手法和修辞语言，让文章更加生动有趣。
因此，我建议你们在写作时，可以多读一些优秀的作文，多积累一些写作经验，提高自己的写作水平。
其次，我想谈谈阅读。
阅读是提高语文素养的重要途径，通过阅读，我们不仅可以了解更多的知识，还可以提高自己的语言能力和思维能力。
因此，我建议你们要多读一些好书，多接触一些名家名作，从中学习优秀的语言表达和思维方式。
在阅读的过程中，我们要注重对文章的理解和把握，要注意分析文章的结构和语言特点，要善于发现文章的内在含义和深层意义。
另外，我们还要注重积累词汇和短语，要注意记忆一些常用的词语和表达方式，提高自己的语言能力。
最后，我想说的是关于语法和修辞。
语法是语文学习中的基础，它对于提高语言能力非常重要。
因此，我建议你们要认真学习语法知识，要掌握一些常见的语法规则和用法，提高自己的语法水平。
另外，修辞是语文学习中的一个重要内容，它可以提高文章的表达力和感染力。
因此，我建议你们要多学习一些修辞手法和修辞方法，要善于运用修辞手法，提高自己的写作水平。
总之，语文学习是一个长期的过程，需要我们不断地积累和提高。
我希望你们能够在语文学习中，认真学习，勤奋练习，不断提高自己的语文水平。
相信只要你们付出努力，一定能够取得优异的成绩。
最后，祝愿你们在语文学习中取得更大的进步！祝好！你们的语文老师。
XXX。
高考书信写作专练之建议信-文档资料
建议信建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题的一类信件。
建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。
2. 写作方法①首段：a. 简介自己，不要罗嗦；b. 说明目的，注意语气。
②主体：a. 提出具体建议；b. 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；c. 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文。
③尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，使对方易于接受。
常用语块1. 给某人提建议________________________2. 如下________________________3. 在做某事时遇到困难___________________4. 利用________________________5. 向某人征求意见________________________6. 制订计划_______________________7. 认为……有用_______________________ 8. 参加_______________________9. 听从某人的建议_______________________ 10. 把……考虑在内_____________________ 11. 得到改善________________________ 12. 有所好转________________________ 13. 依我看来____________________ 14. 我已收到你的来信，得知你… ____________________ 15. 我建议…… ________________________套用句式1. 你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。
__________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助。
高一高中英语作文--建议信(如何学英语)
写作假如你是李华，你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件，她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。
请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信。
1.上课认真听讲，做好笔记，课后及时复习；2.词汇是基础，每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词，朗读课文；3.课外多与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力；4.每天坚持写日记。
注意： 1.词数 120—150 词左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数； 2.内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。
Dear Wang Mei,I ’ m very glad to have received your-maile.Best wishes!Yours,Li HuaDear Wang Mei,I’m very glad to have received your e-mail.Now I ’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.First of all,you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can/regularly after class.As is known to all=As we all know ( 众所周知),vocabulary is of great importance / essential.You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.What’s more,try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class.In this way you can improve your listening and spoken English quickly. Last but not least,you should develop the habit of keeping a diary,which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that youhave learnt.I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.Remember:where there is a will,there is a way. 有志者事竟成 /The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”. 一个决心要成功的人是从来不会说“不可能的” 。
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内容讲解
3. 表示转折: but; however; yet; although; even if/ though; whatever...; however...; ... as...;
despite; in spite of; regardless of; while...; on the one hand, … but on the other hand, …; after all; some…, but others…; otherwise; for one thing..., but for another (thing)... 4. 表示原因的过渡词或短语: because, since, as, for, now that, because of, thanks to, due to（由于）, owing to, in view of, on account of, as a result/ consequence of
内容讲解
建议信正文常用句式--提出建议
1. Have you considered doing.../ So why not do...? 2. Don't you think it more beneficial if you could … 3. I would like to suggest that you (should)… 4. If I were you, I would… 5. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 6. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to make a suggestion that you (should)… 7. You'd better do.../ It is/ seems better for you to do... 8. The best way to do sth is to do …/ There is no better way to do sth than to do sth ...
内容讲解。 这类文章的基本时态多用现在时和一般将来时。 建议通常是多个，因此要注意各条建议之间的衔接。
内容讲解
建议信开头常用句式 --开门见山
1. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that … 2. I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3. I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter. 4. I am writing to you in reply to ... 5.You have asked me for my advice on how to…and I'll try to make some suggestions. 6. I am writing to express my views on/ concerning… 7. It's my pleasure to offer you some advice on...
新高一暑期课 第十讲写作——建议信
内容讲解
You are going to LEARN:
Letter of advice 1
课程引入
Warming up
Write a letter to the future，and what will you write？
内容讲解
建议信是写信人针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告。 建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观 点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。 建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由。
内容讲解
常用关联词
1. 表示总结: in a/ one word, altogether, all in all, on the whole, to sum up/ conclude/ summarize, in conclusion/ summary/ sum, in short 2. 表示递进： moreover ; what’s more; besides; in addition; also; what’s worse; worse still; even worse; to make matters/ it worse; even; again; as well (as); apart from; too/ either; further more; not
内容讲解
建议信结尾常用句式—希望有用 1. I believe you will take my advice into consideration. 2. I hope you will find these suggestions useful/ helpful. 3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 4. I do hope that my ideas will work. 5. In the end, I will be glad if you find these ideas useful. 6.I would be ready to further discuss this matter/ discuss this matter with you in further detail. 7. I am looking forward to your early reply. 8. Let’s keep in touch. I hope to hear good news from you. 9. I hope what's mentioned above might be helpful.