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Unit 1 Book 4 Women of achievment
Betty Friedan — a powerful activist for rights of women
Listen to the material and finish the following exercises
1.What do we know about women in the United States fifty years ago? A. Many parents urged their daughters to become lawyers or doctors. B. Female workers earned the same money as men when doing the same jobs. C. Women often lost their jobs when they had a baby.
Listen to the material and finish the following exercises
1.What do we know about women in the United States fifty years ago? A. Many parents urged their daughters to become lawyers or doctors. B. Female workers earned the same money as men when doing the same jobs. C. Women often lost their jobs when they had a baby.
4.In Friedan’s book, what did she believe in? A. Women wanted more from life. B. Women wanted to please their husbands
Betty Friedan — a powerful activist for rights of women
Listen to the material and finish the following exercises
1.What do we know about women in the United States fifty years ago? A. Many parents urged their daughters to become lawyers or doctors. B. Female workers earned the same money as men when doing the same jobs. C. Women often lost their jobs when they had a baby.
Listen to the material and finish the following exercises
1.What do we know about women in the United States fifty years ago? A. Many parents urged their daughters to become lawyers or doctors. B. Female workers earned the same money as men when doing the same jobs. C. Women often lost their jobs when they had a baby.
4.In Friedan’s book, what did she believe in? A. Women wanted more from life. B. Women wanted to please their husbands
人教高中英语必修4Unit1 Writing (共22张PPT)
近视眼的 near- sighted
高的
tall
矮的 short
漂亮的 pretty
淘气的 naughty
可爱的 lovely 温和宽容的 easy - going
精明的 smart
明智的 wise
聪明的 clever
勤奋的 diligent
健康的 healthy
幽默的 humorous
滑稽的 funny
I suggest that you visit the Great Wall which has a history of more than two thousand years.
五、美文赏析 文章介绍了: 恰当使用同位语结构，使文章简洁通顺 钟南山１９４１年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一
Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.
2.总结: 巧用with做定语或状语
Welcome to our class
Writing
人物介绍
人物介绍
一、介绍内容 1.概况age, sex, birthday, birthplace 2.外貌性格appearance and character 3.教育 education 4.生平big events in his or her time (in order of time) 5.成就评价achievement and evaluation
李红是个漂亮的女孩，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发
Li Hong is a beautiful girl with two big eyes and long hair.
人教高中英语必修4Unit1Writing(共19张PPT)
through being married.
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Listen to the material and finish the following exercises
5.Which of the following subject did more women begin to study after reading “ The Feminine Mystique” Except? A. Law B. Nursing C. engineering
Listen to the material and finish the following exercises
2.What decision did Betty make after her boyfriend didn’t want her to get an advanced degree? A. She left her boyfriend. B. She married her boyfriend. C. She moved to New York City with her boyfriend.
in the world D. How to be a successful woman
Reading Exercises
4.Which of the following is NOT suitable for Emma Waston? A.She is a hard-working girl. B.She thinks that men should control
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Emma waston —the perfect Role Model
Reading Exercises
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Listen to the material and finish the following exercises
5.Which of the following subject did more women begin to study after reading “ The Feminine Mystique” Except? A. Law B. Nursing C. engineering
Listen to the material and finish the following exercises
2.What decision did Betty make after her boyfriend didn’t want her to get an advanced degree? A. She left her boyfriend. B. She married her boyfriend. C. She moved to New York City with her boyfriend.
in the world D. How to be a successful woman
Reading Exercises
4.Which of the following is NOT suitable for Emma Waston? A.She is a hard-working girl. B.She thinks that men should control
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2020/7/7
Emma waston —the perfect Role Model
Reading Exercises
人教高中英语必修4unit1writing(共18张ppt)
困难的, 艰难的：hard, difficult, challenging, tough…
C. 教育经历 (注意使用多种年龄、年份或时间的 表达法，尽量运用非谓语动词，使文章精炼)
1. In 1984, he was given a chance to learn at the Department of Literature in the PLA Academy of Art and Literature, where he published his first novel, A Transparent Radish. In 1991, he got a Master’s degree in Literature from Beijing Normal University. (Passage A)
整合单句的技巧运用
写作技巧：
根据各单句中要点之间的逻辑关系， 巧用非谓语动词短语、定语从句、并列句 等将各单句进行整合，形成一篇含有6-8 个句子的逻辑连贯、内容完整、表达准确 的短文。
(1)Born in Poland on November 7, 1867, Madam Curie, who first discovered Radium, is a great woman scientist.
1. He is regarded as one of the greatest writers in China. Many of his books have been translated into English, French and many other languages. (passage A)
A. 概况 (尽量用同位语、定语结构，使文章简洁， 通顺)
1. Moyan, meaning “not to speak”, is a pseudonym for Guan Moye(管谟业), the first Chinese to win the prize. (Passage A)
C. 教育经历 (注意使用多种年龄、年份或时间的 表达法，尽量运用非谓语动词，使文章精炼)
1. In 1984, he was given a chance to learn at the Department of Literature in the PLA Academy of Art and Literature, where he published his first novel, A Transparent Radish. In 1991, he got a Master’s degree in Literature from Beijing Normal University. (Passage A)
整合单句的技巧运用
写作技巧：
根据各单句中要点之间的逻辑关系， 巧用非谓语动词短语、定语从句、并列句 等将各单句进行整合，形成一篇含有6-8 个句子的逻辑连贯、内容完整、表达准确 的短文。
(1)Born in Poland on November 7, 1867, Madam Curie, who first discovered Radium, is a great woman scientist.
1. He is regarded as one of the greatest writers in China. Many of his books have been translated into English, French and many other languages. (passage A)
A. 概况 (尽量用同位语、定语结构，使文章简洁， 通顺)
1. Moyan, meaning “not to speak”, is a pseudonym for Guan Moye(管谟业), the first Chinese to win the prize. (Passage A)
人教高中英语必修4Unit1 Writing(共27张PPT)
4.成就&评价（achievements & evaluation）
Group-work:
Find out the expressions related to the following Chinese.
▪ Marie Curie, who made great contributions(贡 献) to the world of science, was regarded as one of the greatest women scientists in the world.
3.教育（education）
她大学毕业后,去了国外深造。 After she graduated from university, she went abroad for further education .
__A_f_te_r__g_r_a_d_u_a_t_i_n_g__fr_o_m___u_n_i_v_e_r_s_it_y__, she went abroad for further education
Tips:介绍概况，一个句型轻松搞定
Born in+ 地点+ on/ in +时间 , sb, 同位语（job），谓语+ …
Born in+ 地点+ on/ in +时间, sb, 同位语，谓语+ …
纳尔逊·曼德拉（Nelson Mandela）1918年出生,南 非总统于2013年12月6日 去世，享年95岁.
▪ 凭借优秀的表现 _w__it_h_e_x_c_e_ll_e_n_t _p_e_rf_o_r_m_a_n_ce ▪ 被认为__b_e_c_o_n_s_i_d_e_re_d__a_s_/b_e__re_g_a_r_d_e_d_a_s_ ▪ 高度评价____th_i_n_k_h_i_g_h_ly__o_f________ ▪ 做出巨大贡献_m_a_k_e__g_re_a_t_c_o_n_t_r_ib_u_t_io_n_s__to_ ▪ 致力于,把…奉献____d_e_v_o_te__…__to________ ▪ 被授予诺贝尔…奖 _b_e_a_w__a_rd_e_d__th_e__N_o_b_le__P_rize for…
人教高中英语必修4Unit1writing 教学ppt课件(16张)
who is she/he?
1. he was born in 1983 in Shanghai. 2. he is an athlete.
3. he broke the world record of the 110 metres hurdles in 2008
who is she/he?
1. she was born in 1901 in Fujian provence. 2. she devoted all her life to medical work.
who is she/he? 他的成就鼓舞了很多人从事科学研究。 他为农业的发展献出了一切，对国家做出了巨大的贡献。 创办了按摩诊所，服务热情，受到欢迎 他为农业的发展献出了一切，对国家做出了巨大的贡献。
she made sure that 50,000 babies were safely delivered he is an athlete. He is considered to be one of the greatest scientist in China. 确定文体：以人物描写为主，可辅以叙述和评论。 他为农业的发展献出了一切，对国家做出了巨大的贡献。
1997年
下岗
2001年
创办了按摩诊所，服务热情，受到欢迎
2008年
当选为北京残奥会火炬手
同伴互评
1. 主谓一致问题 2. 时态问题 3. 词性错用 4. 句子结构是否完整 5. Chinglish 现象
he broke the world record of the 110 metres hurdles in 2008
仿句实战
1. 他1930年出生于北京，1953年 毕业于西南农业大学 Born in Beijing in 1930, he gratuated from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953.
1. he was born in 1983 in Shanghai. 2. he is an athlete.
3. he broke the world record of the 110 metres hurdles in 2008
who is she/he?
1. she was born in 1901 in Fujian provence. 2. she devoted all her life to medical work.
who is she/he? 他的成就鼓舞了很多人从事科学研究。 他为农业的发展献出了一切，对国家做出了巨大的贡献。 创办了按摩诊所，服务热情，受到欢迎 他为农业的发展献出了一切，对国家做出了巨大的贡献。
she made sure that 50,000 babies were safely delivered he is an athlete. He is considered to be one of the greatest scientist in China. 确定文体：以人物描写为主，可辅以叙述和评论。 他为农业的发展献出了一切，对国家做出了巨大的贡献。
1997年
下岗
2001年
创办了按摩诊所，服务热情，受到欢迎
2008年
当选为北京残奥会火炬手
同伴互评
1. 主谓一致问题 2. 时态问题 3. 词性错用 4. 句子结构是否完整 5. Chinglish 现象
he broke the world record of the 110 metres hurdles in 2008
仿句实战
1. 他1930年出生于北京，1953年 毕业于西南农业大学 Born in Beijing in 1930, he gratuated from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953.
人教高中英语必修4Unit1Writing (共19张PPT)
妈妈叫Nancy. 她是一个漂亮的女人. 她长发、大眼睛. 妈妈喜欢 运动和购物. 她是喜爱踢足球、练瑜伽. 她最喜欢的食物是冰淇 淋. 她也很喜欢狗和猫. My mother’s name is Nancy. She has long hair and two big eyes. My mother likes sports and shopping. Her favorite sports are football and yoga. And her favorite food is ice cream. She also likes dogs and cats.
2. 主题鲜明，重点突出。在人物描写 （characterization）中，具体生动的描 写能够“再现”人物的性格特点和思想 感情，使得读者印象深刻，甚至如见其 人。这就要求学生写作时精挑细选、合 理编排，围绕主线选取人物的典型事迹 和代表性话语等等，在有限的篇幅内进 行重点描写，实现效果的最大化。
评价: ( evaluation ) one of the best, most important, set a good example to, ... is the pride of ..., make great contributions to, be regarded as
1)她于1990年11月7日出生于广东湛江。 She was born in Zhanjiang, Guangdong Province on Nov.7,1990.
语言描写、动作描写、心理描写或神态 描写等等。
注意事项 此类短文虽属于描述性写作范畴，但
写作内容涉及描写、叙述和议论等多个方 面，对于中学生来说，在写此类英语短文 时应注意以下两点： 1. 介绍人物基本信息。正如本题题目所要
2. 主题鲜明，重点突出。在人物描写 （characterization）中，具体生动的描 写能够“再现”人物的性格特点和思想 感情，使得读者印象深刻，甚至如见其 人。这就要求学生写作时精挑细选、合 理编排，围绕主线选取人物的典型事迹 和代表性话语等等，在有限的篇幅内进 行重点描写，实现效果的最大化。
评价: ( evaluation ) one of the best, most important, set a good example to, ... is the pride of ..., make great contributions to, be regarded as
1)她于1990年11月7日出生于广东湛江。 She was born in Zhanjiang, Guangdong Province on Nov.7,1990.
语言描写、动作描写、心理描写或神态 描写等等。
注意事项 此类短文虽属于描述性写作范畴，但
写作内容涉及描写、叙述和议论等多个方 面，对于中学生来说，在写此类英语短文 时应注意以下两点： 1. 介绍人物基本信息。正如本题题目所要
人教高中英语必修4Unit1Writing(共31张PPT)
Discussion and Selection
look at some adjs printed on the learning sheet ,discuss and select some adjs that can be used to describe mother.
The following contents are printed on the learning sheet .
要求：1：第一段：描述妈妈的性格以及外貌特征。 2：第二段：写出一件能体现母爱的事情。 3：第三段：写出妈妈的言行对自己产生的影响。 4：可适当增加内容。 5：字数：100词左右；
作文互改及评讲
1：是否符合写作要求？
评 2：时态是否正确？
价 内
3: 文章中用了哪些描述人的形容词，用的是否准确？
容 4：文章中用了哪些高级句型，用的是否正确？
I:Different tenses that can be used to describe mother . II:Some learned grammar such as attributive clause ,
noun clause and so on .
WritingMy Gre Nhomakorabeat Mother
5：卷面以及字体如何？
6：与自己相比有哪些值得学习的地方？
While you are at home ,please accomany your mother as much as possible and tell her :"I love you ! "
居里夫人
宋庆龄
柴静
Writing Description of People
人教高中英语必修4Unit1 Writing(共18张PPT)
decide to do 下决心做…… 11.try one’s best/ do one’s best/ with all one’s
energy 尽某人最大的努力
12.be good at /be skilled in / do well in/ have a good knowledge of/ be expert in 精通，熟练，擅长
The woman I admire most
Check list
structure Does it have a good opening, body and
4
conclusion?
content Does the writer introduce the person clearly? 5
Does the writer explain why he/she admires 5
her?
language Are there any mistakes?
3
Does the writer use proper adjectives?
3
Does the writer use advanced expressions or 3
sentence patterns?
others Beautiful handwriting?
6.be intended to serve 旨在为……服务 7.what’s more 此外，而且 8.as far as I am concerned 就我而言 9.learn from 向……学习 10.make up one’s mind to do/ be determined to do/
What is the content oSf tthreubcotduyr?e
energy 尽某人最大的努力
12.be good at /be skilled in / do well in/ have a good knowledge of/ be expert in 精通，熟练，擅长
The woman I admire most
Check list
structure Does it have a good opening, body and
4
conclusion?
content Does the writer introduce the person clearly? 5
Does the writer explain why he/she admires 5
her?
language Are there any mistakes?
3
Does the writer use proper adjectives?
3
Does the writer use advanced expressions or 3
sentence patterns?
others Beautiful handwriting?
6.be intended to serve 旨在为……服务 7.what’s more 此外，而且 8.as far as I am concerned 就我而言 9.learn from 向……学习 10.make up one’s mind to do/ be determined to do/
What is the content oSf tthreubcotduyr?e
人教高中英语必修4Unit1 writing (共19张PPT)
Beautiful handwriting?
2
How to describe a great person
A great person
Background. Achievement.
Some useful words and expressions
Assessment.
Improve your passage after class and write it again as your homework.
A great woman—Lin Qiao zhi
Structure
Lin Qiao zhi, a specialist in women’s illness, was bo1r.nbinac1k9g01roinunFdu(Jbiaanspicroivminfcoer.mSahetiowna)s admitted to Peking Union Medical College in 1929.
Structure
1. background(basic imformation)
Her character, personalities, 2. body achievements, career,
life, …
3. conclusion(evaluation)
Writing:
Write a composition of Madame Curie.
Write a composition of Madame Curie.
根据以下信息描写一篇关于居里夫人的 文章。字数100词左右。
Madame Curie
1. 波兰著名的科学家 Poland 2. 巴黎大学理学
Science Faculty of Paris University 3. 发现了放射性元素--镭
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品质和个性： kind, determined, gentle, considerate, optimistic, easygoing, warm-hearted, hard working, responsible, patient, helpful, friendly, generous，outspoken,humorous 爱好： be good at, have a gift for, be interested in, be fond of, be crazy about
傅园慧
information about her
1.傅园慧，1996年1月7日生于浙江杭州（21岁），中国女 子游泳队运动员。现就读于天津医科大学，2017年将正 式毕业。 2.尽管她学习游泳只是为增强体质，却能一直坚持训练， 从未放弃。 3.她的母亲是一名酒店员工，父亲是一家运输公司的职员。 4.成名于2011年的世界游泳锦标赛，在此次比赛中，她夺 得100米仰泳银牌. 5.2016年8月9日，在里约奥运会女子100米仰泳决赛中， 傅园慧以58秒95的成绩夺得铜牌。决赛后接受采访时， 傅园慧以招牌式的搞怪表情和逗趣表达，给大家留下了 深刻的印象 6.她说：人，都应该为自己而活。活出自己的风格与热度。
写作要点 1. 确定文体： 记叙文。以人物描写为主，
可辅以叙述和评论。
2. 主体时态： 文章以一般过去时或一般现
在时为主。
3. 主体人称： 第三人称。
4. 内容要点：（分段） ①人物简介； ②人物事迹或成就； ③人物评价及其他。
语言积累 背景： ... was born in / into a poor / rich family in ..., when ... was young, spent one’s childhood in ... 外貌： beautiful, pretty, good-looking, ordinary looking, handsome, strong, fat, thin
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2.从历史的长时段看，统一的趋势是 无法阻 遏的。 从根本 上说， 它是中 华民族 发展到 一定阶 段，文 明内部 各部分 长期交 往整合 的必然 结果。 问题只 在以何 种方式 统一
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3.可以设想，即使没有秦的武力，天 下也终 将归于 一体， 这也为 汉以后 的历史 实际所 一次次 证明。 无可否 认的是 ，秦王 的铁骑 确实使 这一过 程大大 简化了 。看上 去，历 史似乎 少走了 许多弯 路，细 想来却 又未必 。
评价： one of the best, most important, set a good example to, ... is the pride of ..., make great contributions to, be regarded as
related phrases: 1.仰泳运动员 backstroke swimmer 2. 里约奥运会the Rio Games. 3.赢得...奖牌win/ harvest a bronze/silver/gold medal 4.在100米仰泳比赛中in the 100-meter backstroke 5.增强体质build up one's body, 6.世届游泳锦标赛 world swimming championships 7.运输公司transport company 8.医科大学medical university 9.决赛finals 10. 以58秒95 with 58 seconds 95 11.招牌式的搞怪表情和逗趣表达trademark wacky
expressions and funny expressions 12.活出自己的风格与热度Live out their own style and
heat.inforFra bibliotekation about her
1.傅园慧，1996年1月7日生于浙江杭州（21岁），中国女 子游泳队运动员。现就读于天津医科大学，2017年将正 式毕业。 2.尽管她学习游泳只是为增强体质，却能一直坚持训练， 从未放弃。 3.她的母亲是一名酒店员工，父亲是一家运输公司的职员。 4.成名于2011年的世界游泳锦标赛，在此次比赛中，她夺 得100米仰泳银牌. 5.2016年8月9日，在里约奥运会女子100米仰泳决赛中， 傅园慧以58秒95的成绩夺得铜牌。决赛后接受采访时， 傅园慧以招牌式的搞怪表情和逗趣表达，给大家留下了 深刻的印象 6.她说：人，都应该为自己而活。活出自己的风格与热度。
教育背景： graduated from, got a ... degree, majored in, studied hard at, took an active part in class 经历和事迹： devote oneself to do sth., with great determination and perseverance, make up one’s mind to do sth., overcome many difficulties, try one’s best to do sth,leave a deep impression on sb..
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1.一个要将中国归于中央集权下的专 制一统 ，一个 要恢复 天下到 六国时 代诸侯 联盟的 松散政 制。这 看上去 好像只 是一个 是否认 同统一 的历史 趋势的 问题， 现代人 常常站 在统一 的立场 上去批 判项羽 ，仿佛 只有用 铁骑扫 平了六 国的秦 王才算 是一个 民族英 雄，其 实问题 并不这 么简单 。
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4.先不说铁骑下呻吟的民众，是否也 有追求 自己那 一点卑 微的生 活自由 的权力 ，就是 从文明 的发展 来说， 统一的 后果也 有许多 地方值 得怀疑 。
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5.中央集权确实加强了国家的权力， 使秦汉 帝国成 为当时 世界上 少有匹 敌的强 大力量 。但是 ，作为 代价， 从原始 社会时 代开始 积累起 来的那 一种有 限民主 （哪怕 是统治 阶级内 部民主 ），也 彻底丧 失了。