高三英语一轮复习 高中英语建议信写作指导课件
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2018届高三英语一轮复习写作公开课----Suggestion Letter 建议信教学课件共23张PPT
He finds it difficult to talk to my parents. What should he do? Your suggestions:
A. Open your heart and tell them how you feel. B. Spend more time with parents. C. Try to understand each other.
第二段： Suggestions 过渡语：层次分明 First/ Firstly/ First of all... Second/ Secondly... Besides/ In addition/ What's more... Finally/ lastly ...
it would be a good idea if... 表达建议常用语： why don't you... ?
三段式：
写信的意图
建议信
提出建议，给出理由
表明希望
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Dear Li Hua, You have asked me for my advice on how to learn English well. Here are some suggestions. Firstly, don' t lose your heart. Secondly, you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Thirdly, you'd better speak English with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking abilities. What's more, it's good idea to read English books before the class and after the class. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Best wishes. Yours, xxx
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件《polish your writing》
衔接美：使用恰当的连接词
使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
作文例析
• 假定你是李华。你是学生会主席。你校将于5月25—30日 在广州举行龙舟赛 (Dragon Boat Race)。请根据以下内容 给姐妹学校剑桥中学（Cambridge High School)写一封邀 请信。
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
2. After his family were told that he hadn’t passed the exam, they were disappointed.
Having been told that he hadn’t passed the exam, his family were disappointed.
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
Some students agreed on it, because they thought that the senior 3 students worked hard, and they easily felt tired, but the tonic could help them overcome. Besides, they often have no time to do exercise.
Because of his not passing the exam, his family were disappointed.
Not having passed the exam, he made his family disappointed. With him not passing the exam , his family were disappointed
使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
作文例析
• 假定你是李华。你是学生会主席。你校将于5月25—30日 在广州举行龙舟赛 (Dragon Boat Race)。请根据以下内容 给姐妹学校剑桥中学（Cambridge High School)写一封邀 请信。
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
2. After his family were told that he hadn’t passed the exam, they were disappointed.
Having been told that he hadn’t passed the exam, his family were disappointed.
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
Some students agreed on it, because they thought that the senior 3 students worked hard, and they easily felt tired, but the tonic could help them overcome. Besides, they often have no time to do exercise.
Because of his not passing the exam, his family were disappointed.
Not having passed the exam, he made his family disappointed. With him not passing the exam , his family were disappointed
高考英语复习应用文写作专题建议信课件
我真诚地希望您能考虑我的建议。 3. I believe you will take my advice seriously. 我想您会
认真考虑我的建议。
4. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions useful. 我希望这些提议/建议对您有用。
• 建议信 (Letter of suggestion)
• 建议信通常是写给家人或朋友，对于对方在生活、 工作、求学等过程中遇到的实际问题或困惑提供看 法、指导或给予对方所需要的建议，或对于对方不 明智的举动进行劝勉、告诫或展开讨论。
• 1. 建议信写作注意事项
• 建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点 要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
• 参考范文1：
• Dear school administer,
• I have concerns about randomly pairing students for the oral training class with the foreign teacher.
• Random pairing may not be effective due to varying proficiency levels and learning styles. Instead, I suggest implementing a structured pairing system based on proficiency levels. This would ensure balanced practice sessions and meaningful conversations. By grouping students with similar language abilities, they can learn from and support each other. Additionally, providing guidelines or specific topics for discussion during practice sessions would enhance the learning experience. With a structured pairing system, students can make the most of the training program and improve their oral skills in a supportive environment.
认真考虑我的建议。
4. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions useful. 我希望这些提议/建议对您有用。
• 建议信 (Letter of suggestion)
• 建议信通常是写给家人或朋友，对于对方在生活、 工作、求学等过程中遇到的实际问题或困惑提供看 法、指导或给予对方所需要的建议，或对于对方不 明智的举动进行劝勉、告诫或展开讨论。
• 1. 建议信写作注意事项
• 建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点 要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
• 参考范文1：
• Dear school administer,
• I have concerns about randomly pairing students for the oral training class with the foreign teacher.
• Random pairing may not be effective due to varying proficiency levels and learning styles. Instead, I suggest implementing a structured pairing system based on proficiency levels. This would ensure balanced practice sessions and meaningful conversations. By grouping students with similar language abilities, they can learn from and support each other. Additionally, providing guidelines or specific topics for discussion during practice sessions would enhance the learning experience. With a structured pairing system, students can make the most of the training program and improve their oral skills in a supportive environment.
高中英语复习---英语应用文写作(建议信)(共33张PPT)
常用句： 1. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite common. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是 很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅 行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之 旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容 包括： 1.你建议的线路; 2.你的理由; 3.你的祝愿。 注意：1.词数100左右; 2（.开二头）和谋结篇尾列已纲给：出，不计入总词数。 (1)说明写信的原因；(2)引出自己的建议； (3)建议的理由一； (4)建议的理由二； (5) 总结建议理由； (6) 祝愿旅游愉快。
6.祝愿您中国之行愉快。
（三）翻译要点并造句 1.很高兴收到您来信，信上说你们要来中国旅游。
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5.I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further deal. 我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。
信件启首
(1)写信的原因
2019届高三英语一轮复习---Writing letter of advice教学课件共19张PPT
12. 有所好转 ________________________ change for the better
13. 依我看来 in my opinion/in my view/from
my point of view ————————————
14. 我已收到你的来信，得知你……
I have received ________ your letter ________ saying that you ...
3. 我觉得如果……将会很有帮助的。 I feel that it would ________________ be beneficial if …
4. 个人而言，我认为你应该.../ 你需要.../ 你最好... you should/ you need ___________, Personally I think _______________________
内容包括：
1. 说明写信背景和写信目的。 2. 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。 3. 表达希望建议有效或祝福。
常用语块 1. 给某人提建议 give ________________________ sb. some advice (on) 2. 如下 ________________________ as follows 3. 在做某事时遇到困难 __________________________ have difficulty/trouble in doing sth. 4. 利用 ________________________ make use of 5. 向某人征求意见________________________ ask sb. for advice
15. 我建议……
I would like to suggest that…/ I would like to make a recommendation that…/ I am writing to advise you of…/ I would like to put forward the suggestion that…
13. 依我看来 in my opinion/in my view/from
my point of view ————————————
14. 我已收到你的来信，得知你……
I have received ________ your letter ________ saying that you ...
3. 我觉得如果……将会很有帮助的。 I feel that it would ________________ be beneficial if …
4. 个人而言，我认为你应该.../ 你需要.../ 你最好... you should/ you need ___________, Personally I think _______________________
内容包括：
1. 说明写信背景和写信目的。 2. 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。 3. 表达希望建议有效或祝福。
常用语块 1. 给某人提建议 give ________________________ sb. some advice (on) 2. 如下 ________________________ as follows 3. 在做某事时遇到困难 __________________________ have difficulty/trouble in doing sth. 4. 利用 ________________________ make use of 5. 向某人征求意见________________________ ask sb. for advice
15. 我建议……
I would like to suggest that…/ I would like to make a recommendation that…/ I am writing to advise you of…/ I would like to put forward the suggestion that…
高中英语建议信写作 PPT课件 图文
2. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn Chinese well.
3. I have received your letter saying that you hope to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you. / Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问Байду номын сангаас是 很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
【篇中句】介绍详情、提出具体建议。
（可参考课本P7, part 2写作指导）
1. I'd like to suggest that 我想要建议……
2. It would be a good idea to do sth. / Doing sth. will also help to... 做某事是不错的主意。/ 做某事也有 帮助于……
高一写作专题一： 建议信
一、文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让 对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有 关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要 合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建 议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合 理性和说服力。
建议信的写作步骤：
首段：表明写信意图。陈述事由，简 单介绍自己，注意语气。
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
高考英语总复习写作专题课件专题3应用文写作之建议信(共14张PPT)
I hope you will be happy soon.
Yours, Li Hua
2020版高考英语总复习写作专题课件 专题3应 用文写 作之建 议信( 共14张P PT)
2020版高考英语总复习写作专题课件 专题3应 用文写 作之建 议信( 共14张P PT)
【活学活用】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你班交换生Jim要参加面向外国友人的
2020版高考英语总复习写作专题课件 专题3应 用文写 作之建 议信( 共14张P PT)
Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
consideration of my suggestions will be highly appreciated.
Good luck with your
.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
2020版高考英语总复习写作专题课件 专题3应 用文写 作之建 议信( 共14张P PT)
【范文鉴赏】 假如你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim发邮件告诉你,最近他
,
I am
Yours, Li Hua
2020版高考英语总复习写作专题课件 专题3应 用文写 作之建 议信( 共14张P PT)
2020版高考英语总复习写作专题课件 专题3应 用文写 作之建 议信( 共14张P PT)
【活学活用】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你班交换生Jim要参加面向外国友人的
2020版高考英语总复习写作专题课件 专题3应 用文写 作之建 议信( 共14张P PT)
Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
consideration of my suggestions will be highly appreciated.
Good luck with your
.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
2020版高考英语总复习写作专题课件 专题3应 用文写 作之建 议信( 共14张P PT)
【范文鉴赏】 假如你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim发邮件告诉你,最近他
,
I am
高三英语一轮复习应用文写作讲解专项课件
2、语言水平欠缺导致语言本身的语用失误 This way have a big problem. I’m honored to write this letter.
3、模板套句影响，不知变通 I’m writing to tell you. You should
4、母语影响，无法进行符合英语礼节的交际导致社交语用失误。 It’s wrong to divide...
I would appreciate it if you could put me on the right track. Looking forward to your reply. (117w)
Yours sincerely Li Hua
（2023.6全国卷英语）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生 随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存 在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
应用文：书信体
2024届温州一模+2023.6英语高考
Shirley Hu
试题分析
培养学生解决问题的思维能力
（2023.11温州一模）假定你是李华，在外刊阅读中遇到了困难，尝试一 些方法后仍未达到预期效果，请你给外教 Marcus 写一封邮件寻求帮助， 内容包括:1. 尝试方法; 2. 请求指导。
缺乏动力： lack motivation
英语水平不均衡 unbalanced English levels/proficiency/ability
阻碍进步：prevent students from making progress/hinder the progress
3、模板套句影响，不知变通 I’m writing to tell you. You should
4、母语影响，无法进行符合英语礼节的交际导致社交语用失误。 It’s wrong to divide...
I would appreciate it if you could put me on the right track. Looking forward to your reply. (117w)
Yours sincerely Li Hua
（2023.6全国卷英语）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生 随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存 在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
应用文：书信体
2024届温州一模+2023.6英语高考
Shirley Hu
试题分析
培养学生解决问题的思维能力
（2023.11温州一模）假定你是李华，在外刊阅读中遇到了困难，尝试一 些方法后仍未达到预期效果，请你给外教 Marcus 写一封邮件寻求帮助， 内容包括:1. 尝试方法; 2. 请求指导。
缺乏动力： lack motivation
英语水平不均衡 unbalanced English levels/proficiency/ability
阻碍进步：prevent students from making progress/hinder the progress
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2.中段(婉转地提出建议) If I were you, I would ... As far as I am concerned ... / In my opinion ... It seems better that ... Why not ...? It would be a good idea if ..
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II.写作指导
首段：回顾背景并表明写作目的。 中段：婉转地提出建议。 尾段：希望自己的建议能帮助对方。 注意： ★ 时态应以一般现在时为主。 ★ 由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以 第二人称为主。
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eful expression
1.首段(回顾背景并表明写作目的)
I’m sorry to hear / learn that ... However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. I’m sorry (that) you are having trouble / difficulty / problems in ... I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.
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3.尾段(希望自己的建议能帮助对方)
These are only my personal suggestions / tips. I hope you will find them useful / helpful. I will highly appreciate your consideration of my advice / suggestions / tips.
人教版高中英语 How to Write a Letter Βιβλιοθήκη f Advice建议信写作指导
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I. 建议信的定义
• 建议信是书信的一种形式，属于应用文。建 议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出自己的建 议或忠告，有可能是写给个人，就收信人遇 到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可 能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务等 方面提出建议或忠告。
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III.小试牛刀
假设你是李华，最近你的英国笔友杰克刚刚转入一 所新学校。由于他性格内向，不擅长交朋友，所以 他感到非常孤独，写信向你求助。请你给他回一封 电子邮件。 注意: 1. 词数100左右（开头语已为你写好，但不 计入总词数）；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连 贯。
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参考范文
Dear Jack,
First of all, it is normal for you to feel lonely because you are living now in a new environment.(表示同情) Second, why not greet your teachers and classmates when meeting them on campus?（建 议一） Third, it will be a good idea if you often express your ideas in class and take an active part in class activities, which can help them learn more about you. I believe you are sure to make new friends soon if you show your friendliness to others.（建议二）
I’m sorry to hear that you are lonely in a new school because you find it hard to make friends because of your shyness.(回顾背景) Now I’d like to offer you some advice(表明写作目的).
I hope everything will be fine with you in the future. （希望自己的 建议能帮助对方）
Yo8 urs,
•THANK YOU!
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2.中段(婉转地提出建议) If I were you, I would ... As far as I am concerned ... / In my opinion ... It seems better that ... Why not ...? It would be a good idea if ..
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II.写作指导
首段：回顾背景并表明写作目的。 中段：婉转地提出建议。 尾段：希望自己的建议能帮助对方。 注意： ★ 时态应以一般现在时为主。 ★ 由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以 第二人称为主。
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eful expression
1.首段(回顾背景并表明写作目的)
I’m sorry to hear / learn that ... However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. I’m sorry (that) you are having trouble / difficulty / problems in ... I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.
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3.尾段(希望自己的建议能帮助对方)
These are only my personal suggestions / tips. I hope you will find them useful / helpful. I will highly appreciate your consideration of my advice / suggestions / tips.
人教版高中英语 How to Write a Letter Βιβλιοθήκη f Advice建议信写作指导
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I. 建议信的定义
• 建议信是书信的一种形式，属于应用文。建 议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出自己的建 议或忠告，有可能是写给个人，就收信人遇 到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可 能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务等 方面提出建议或忠告。
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III.小试牛刀
假设你是李华，最近你的英国笔友杰克刚刚转入一 所新学校。由于他性格内向，不擅长交朋友，所以 他感到非常孤独，写信向你求助。请你给他回一封 电子邮件。 注意: 1. 词数100左右（开头语已为你写好，但不 计入总词数）；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连 贯。
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参考范文
Dear Jack,
First of all, it is normal for you to feel lonely because you are living now in a new environment.(表示同情) Second, why not greet your teachers and classmates when meeting them on campus?（建 议一） Third, it will be a good idea if you often express your ideas in class and take an active part in class activities, which can help them learn more about you. I believe you are sure to make new friends soon if you show your friendliness to others.（建议二）
I’m sorry to hear that you are lonely in a new school because you find it hard to make friends because of your shyness.(回顾背景) Now I’d like to offer you some advice(表明写作目的).
I hope everything will be fine with you in the future. （希望自己的 建议能帮助对方）
Yo8 urs,
•THANK YOU!
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