初三写作指导postwriting

如何做到行文连贯: 恰当使用语句之间的连接成分
开始陈述:first of all，above all, at first 显示事件的先后顺序 firstly / secondly / thirdly；first / second / third, then, next, after this, after that, before this, before that 表示 “另外, 还有” what’s more, besides, also, in addition, still, as well as 结束陈述: finally，lastly，in the end 提供例子: like, such as, for example 换一种方法表述: in other words, That is to say 用于陈述事实: in fact , To tell you the truth 显示资料来源:according to 对一个话题进行总结:In short, All in all,In a word
5. He plays too much computer games so that he wear glasses, although it’s bad for his eyes, but he can’t give up it.
He plays computer games so much that he wears glasses, although it’s bad for his eyes, he can’t give it up .
表示时间关系： when,while,until,before,after,as soon as,since 表示并列关系：and, so,but,or,otherwise,both…and…, either…or…,neither…nor…, not only…but also… 表示目的：in order to…, so that 表示条件：if, unless
学生习作（一）： Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to introduce my
good friend Daming to you. Look at this photo first, Daming is a nice boy with black hair, small eyes, a pair of glasses and a lovely smile. He’s always very friendly. And as you can see, he’s holding a book about Shakespeare. That’s because he loves Shakespeare’s plays very much. To tell you the truth, Daming has really helped me a lot with my studies. Whenever I have problems with my math or English, I’ll just phone him and he’ll explain everything to me carefully. Day by day, I become better and better. And now I’ve achieved a lot with his help. In a word, I’m really lucky to have such a good friend.
1. 一“准确”：审题不偏不跑 2.二“美” 视觉美,（卷面整洁，书写工 整）. “语言美”: （ 词汇丰富和语法结构准确， 句式富于变化，句与句、段与段衔接过渡 要连贯）. 3.“三不要”: 不要漏掉内容, 不要用错人 称，不要用错时态.
学生习作（五）：
My close friend is Daming. I’m very proud of him because he has many advantages. First of all, he is good at English and win wins helps me with my lots of prize, he always help English. I get good grades throw through his help. He always advice English advics me reading To read newspaper and watching English films, he is a warm-hearted people. We has the same hobby, such as watching films and playing basketball. What’s more, he is very cool and tall with a pair of glasses. And many students say he iooks like a super star when I tell him he look always with a smile, In a word I’m proud and thanks thank him.
学生书面表达中存在的常见错误：
1.句子结构错误。不遵循英语句式要求， 按汉语思维或习惯拼凑“中国式”英语。 2.句子结构错误。不遵循英语句式要求， 按汉语思维或习惯拼凑“中国式”英语。 3. 时态语态错误 4. 词形变化错误（表现主谓一致，名词单 复数，单词拼写即大小写等方面） 5. 用词错误（表现在常用词语的区别，使 用场合，习惯用法，搭配等不熟悉）。
中考英语书面表达评分原则
1. 本题共20 分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评卷采用整体阅卷的方式，评分时，首先考虑短文内 容是否符合题目要求，根据其任务完成的情况初步确定 所属档次；然后按该档次的具体要求进行衡量，确定和 调整档次，最后给分。 3. 评分的主要参考指标为：内容要点全面，结构清晰， 上下文语意连贯，符合逻辑，字数80词左右，其中内容 要点可用不同方式表达，鼓励对紧扣的适当发挥。 4,若书写较差，影响理解，从所得分钟减去2分。 5. 评分时，对于拼写和标点符号错误，应视其对交际影 响的程度酌情扣分。 6. 英语，美语拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
书面表达中如何增强文章的逻辑性和 连贯性
1. 内容上的逻辑性 2.使用某种逻辑顺序 表示原因：because,because of, for, now that 表示让步：though, although, even though,whether…or…, No matterwhat/how…
请总结一篇优秀习作的特点
1. 一“准确”：审题不偏不跑 2.二“美” 视觉美,（卷面整洁，书写工 整）. “语言美”: （ 词汇丰富和语法结构准确， 句式富于变化，句与句、段与段衔接过渡 要连贯）. 3.“三不要”: 不要漏掉内容, 不要用错人 称，不要用错时态.
请总结一篇优秀习作的特点
典型错误例析
1.At first, I’m not understand it. . first, I couldn’t understand it At 2.He very like reading .
He likes reading very much.
3. We think listen classical can make us relaxing.
写作指导post writing
Dalian No.42 Middle School
SuRongmei
学生习作四： This is my best friend Lingling. In the picture, we can see she is a beautiful girl with short hair and glasses. This picture also show shows her at the airport during her trip to China. She Her andcarries wears a jeans put a T-shirt in her arms. hobby On the other hand, she wears a pair of nice shoes. At the same time, she is tall in her class and thin. What’s more , she is friendly, helps her friends and help helps too. She always help them solve problems. Last but not least is wins that she does well, in her study and win many prize. This is my friend Lingling. Can you recognize her on the street?
Maths is his favourite subject.
Hale Waihona Puke 9. My English is not very well. My English is not very good.
1o. He suggest me to listening more English music.
He advised me to listen to more English music
各档次评分参考标准：
一档（17-20分）出色完成了试题规定的任务， 有较强的能力用自己的话表述观点，有围绕主题 的合理发挥，内容符合逻辑，覆盖了所有要点， 组织结构清晰，表达意义得体，选词贴切，语言 准确无误或有少量拼写错误，标点，大小写正确。 二档（13-16分）较好地完成了试题规定的任务。 有能力用自己的话表述观点，有围绕主题的适当 发挥，内容比较符合逻辑，覆盖了所有要点，组 织结构比较清晰，表达意义的选词贴切，标点， 拼写大体上正确，语言较准确，不影响读者的理 解。