托福TPO综合写作--写作分析
TPO--01习作：The professor argued against the passage from three points of view: the company, the country and the individual, which shows that the mandatory policy won't benefit them as the reading passage suggested.First of all, the professor acclaimed that hiring four-day workers would not increase company profits but would cost them more money. Hiring more employees means more training and medical insurances.And if the companies hire more four-day workers, the totally employee numbers will increase and they would have to provide more office spaces and personal computers, which would also cost lots of money.Secondly, the listening argued that this policy would not benefit the whole country with less unemployment rate. As hiring more employees is costly, the companies would probably force their employees work overtime in order to hire less people, which in the end will not decreased the unemployment rate. Even worse, the companies will expect the four-day workers work as much as the full time workers and this expectations of the four-day workers would lead to an unpleasant feels to the employees and increase their working accuracies. .Finally, the listening cast doubt on the benefits to the individual four-day worker by comparing to the full time workers. The shorter working time will lead to instability of the four-day workers. The professor explained that, the four-day workers would not only be firstly considered losing their job when something happened to the company, but will also lastly considered when there is any promotion opportunities, which different from the reading passage.(253)范文：The lecturer claims that the new policy, which allows people to work four days a week instead of five, will have negative effects for companies as well as society. This claim is not in agreement with that of the reading passage, which suggests that such a policy will be beneficial. According to the lecture, a company that allows employees to have fewer working hours is likely to hire more people to ensure that it meets normal levels of productivity. If this occurs, expenses for training and medical insurance will inevitably rise. The reading passage, by contrast, suggests that employees who enjoy more leisure time make fewer mistakes and work more efficiently, leading to increased profits for the enterprise.The second point of difference between the lecture and the reading passage concerns the impact of the policy on the unemployment rate. The lecturer asserts that for the sake of saving money, employers might raise their expectations of 4-day employees rather than recruit more people. Consequently, employees who work 4 days will be forced to finish what they did in 5 days previously, and no additional jobs will be created.Finally, the lecturer argues that under the new policy, employees will experience not only decreased quality of life (as shorter working hours will translate into less pay), but also fewer chances to be promoted to supervisory positions. However, the reading passage contends that more leisure hours can create opportunities to strengthen family ties and allow employees to develop private interests, making them feel more satisfied with their lives.TPO--02习作：The reading and the Listening are all talking about team work. In the reading passage, the author claims that teamwork is the best way for companies to approach certain new projects, while the listening cast doubt on the point from two sides.First of all, the passages presents that, as there are more people in the group than individual, the extra knowledge, expertise, and skills will lead to more quickly response and highly creative solutions. But the speaker consists that, the more people does not mean quicker and better. As there are more group members, it will take a long time to arrange meetings to reach consensus, which will eventually take longer time. And the most influential people in the group will kill different solutions and finally decrease the creativeness of the final solution.Secondly, in the reading part, the author states that, group process can be very rewarding because it will make members feel better when their voice is taken in to account and the greater group result will provide their members much better chance to “shine". The professor casts doubt on the point of view by giving the example of free ride. The members who contribute nothing to the group and members who contribute a lot will get equal reward with each other. This is neither fare nor good for the whole group. And it is not surprised that the real contributors will feel opposite of what the reading predicts.(242)范文：The lecturer talks about research conducted by a firm that used the group system to handle their work. He says that the theory stated in the passage was very different and somewhat inaccurate when compared to what happened in reality.First, some members got free rides. That is, some didn’t work hard but got recognition for the success nonetheless. This also indicates that people who worked hard were not given recognition they should have gotten. In other words, they weren’t given the opportunity to “shine”. This directly contradicts what the passage indicates.Second, groups were slow in progress. The passage says that groups are more responsive than individuals because of the number of people involved and their aggregated resources. However, the speaker talks about how the firm found out those groups were slower than individuals in decision making. Groups needed more time for meetings, which are necessary procedures in decision making. This was another place where experience contradicted theory.Third, influential people might emerge and lead the group towards glory or failure. If the influent people are going in the right direction there would be no problem. But in cases where they go in the wrong direction, there is nobody that has enough influence to counter the decision made. In other words, the group might turn into a dictatorship, with the influential party as the leader, and might become less flexible in its thinking. They might become one-sided, and thus fail to succeed.习作：The professor states her point that the painting is indeed painted by Rembrandt by showing a further examination by some researchers.First of all, the result of the examination shows that the reason why the fur collar seems inconsistent on the painting is that the collar was painted by someone else, who might want to increase the value the painting. The research result shows the collar was painted on the top of the original painting and was painted hundred years after Rembrandt finished this piece. Secondly, as the evident points that the fur collar was painted by other painter, the problem of the failure of fitting of light and shadow is solved, too. The professor claims that, if we remove the collar from the painting, we will see the woman wearing a light colored coat and her face will be illuminated by light, which will make this painting seem very realistic.Finally, Followed by the same logic, the professor explains that the glued panel was made by some else, who wanted to make the painting appeared with grand valuable. There is evident shows that, the original painting was painted on one single panel as Rembrandt usually did, and the research test result also shows that the original panel was made from the same tree used to paint another famous painting of Rembrandt, which is his self portrait with a hat.范文：The lecture revises the idea presented in the text, that Rembrandt was not the artist who painted the famous painting "Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet”.The inconsistency between the white cap, which identifies the woman as a servant, and the expensive fur collar she wears dissolves as the Professor explains that the fur collar was apparently painted over the original painting to increase its worth by displaying an aristocratic woman.In addition, the assumption that light and shadow in the painting do not fit together is refuted by the fact that in the original painting, the woman wears a light cloth that illuminated her face. Thus the presentation of light and shadow was indeed very realistic and accurate, as it is characteristic of Rembrandt’s paintings.Finally, the mystery of the panel consisting of patches glued together is also solved in the lecture. Actually, the wood panel was later enlarged to make it more grand and valuable, but the original painting was painted on a single panel, as Rembrandt would have done it. Furthermore, the wood is of the same tree used in other Rembrandt paintings, like the "Self-Portrait with a Hat”.All this information points to Rembrandt as the painter of the controversial painting.习作：The lecturer cast doubt on the topic made by the reading passage that the dinosaurs were endotherm.First of all, the professor claims that polar dinosaur fossils cannot be an evident for the dinosaurs being endotherms by referencing some science evidence that the polar area was not that cold at the dinosaurs' period. On the dinosaurs' period, the polar area was warm enough for not endotherm lives to live and even during its cold time of the year, these dinosaurs could migrate to some warmer area or hibernate.Secondly, the lecturer argued against the reading about whether the evidence of the leg position of the dinosaurs could support the endotherm theory. The lecturer indicates that, the underneath legs of the dinosaurs may be not using for efficient running. The reason why they need their leg underneath their bodies is to support their weight, which may allow them growing larger. And as they could grow larger, they do not need running.Third, the lecturer agrees that the dinosaurs do have Haversian canals, but they do not constantly grow rapidly, which differ from endotherms. The dinosaurs also have growth rings which make them grow periodically. If the dinosaurs were endotherms which could constant temperature all the time would grow rapidly even it's cool while there are evident shows that dinosaurs grew slower during cold times, which contradict with what the reading predicts.范文：The professor actually contradicts the statements made in the passage. She is of the view that dinosaurs are not endotherms i.e. they were not able to keep their body temperature at a constant rate.The professor contradicts the issue of dinosaurs being endotherms based on the availability of fossils being available in the polar regions, she say that the polar regions in those days were not as cold as they are today i.e at least warm enough for dinosaurs to live. During harsh winters she says that there is a possibility of the dinosaurs actually migrating to warmer regions.The issue of leg position and movement being used as a reason to classify the dinosaurs as endotherms does not please the professor either. She says that dinosaurs had legs under their bodies to support their huge bodies i.e the legs under the body of the dinosaur were actually to support the huge weight of the dinosaur and not to provide it with a body structure like endotherms (which is actually suited for running).The professor acknowledges the presence of haversian canals but also points out that that the fossils show t he presence of growth rings. These rings occur due to the thickening of the bone. The thickening indicates that the dinosaurs weren’t actually growing continuously but were experiencing periods of rapid growth and periods of no growth in succession. This pattern she says is characteristic of non-endothermic animals.Thus it can be inferred that the professor challenges the passage by giving reasons as to why she thinks that the dinosaur is not an endotherm.习作：The lecture raises it point of view that none of the trree theories mentioned in the artical is convincing about the use of the Chaco Canyon Great Houses, which is different from the reading. First of all, the professor argues that, the out side of the great house may look like to be residential, however , the inside of the house cast grat doubt on this theory. If the great houses are used for resident, they must contain fire places for people to cook and heat. Actually, there are only few fire places inside the great houses. Therefore, the lecture goes againest the main idea stated in the first theory.Secondly, the professor claims that the second thery is not supported by evidence, which make it only sound plausible. There excavation results do not provide much evidents about grain maize and maize contaners. There are only few pieces of maize and maize conteners found in the great house, which conflict with what was maintained in the second theory.Thirdly, the lecture opposes the thirs theory stsed in the reading by disscussing the excavations of mound. The professor presents that, if the great houses are used for special ceremonials, there must be other materials found in the mound despite the broken pots, such as building instruments, cosntruction tools. However the excavation did not reveal relevent evidents, whish suggests that the broken pots are only some regular treash, not special ceremonial materials. that is to say , the third theory is also lack of good evidents.范文：TPO--06习作：The lecture admits that the communal online encyclopedias are never perfect, but what the reading's opinions on them is raises on prejudice and bias, which challenges the main idea of the reading passage.First of all, the lecturer argues that, the errors do exist on communal online encyclopedias as well as traditional encyclopedias. And people will never find the perfect comprehensive encyclopedias on or off line. However, the communal online encyclopedias are much more easier for people to correct the error comparing to the traditional encyclopedias. In regard to the reading, the author claims that the traditional encyclopedias which are written by the trained experts are accurate and adhere to standards of academic rigor. Therefore, the lecture goes against the what is maintained in the reading.Secondly, the lecture states that there are two solutions have already done to protect the communal encyclopedias from hackers and corrupt changes. on one hand, there is a technique to protect the online encyclopedia from hackers or vandals. and on the other hand, there are reliable editors who will make sure that the every change on the online encyclopedias are friendly.Thirdly, the professor also opposes the reading by discussing that the spaces issue of the traditional encyclopedia make them have to judge whether or not some information have to be printed and they do not care about the interests o their users. However, this will never be a problem for the communal online encyclopedias, which enable the online encyclopedias contain a more variety of information and care more about the users' interests.范文：习作：范文：习作：Contradicted with the reading passage, the lecturer deeply believes that the Chevalier's memoir is accurate and reliable. She cast doubt on the reading from three points of views.First of all, different from the reading, the lecture claims that the load Chevalier borrowed from the Swiss merchant doesn't mean he was poor at that time. It is because of his property which makes it possible to borrow money from the merchant. As the reading shows Chevalier spent a great deal of money on parties and gambling, he has to borrow some money when he was out of cash before he could convert his own.Secondly, the professor claims that she believe the conservation in Chevalier’s memoir with V oltaire is real because there are evidence show that Chevalier used to wrote down everything he could remember each night after he convert with Voltaire. And he kept these notes several years which made it possible for him to refer when he was writing his memoir. At the same time there are also evidences show that some of his close friends said Chevalier did keep lots of his notes. These all explain why there are many details in the memoir and suggest that the doubt made by the passage is wrong.Third, the lecturer disagrees with the hypothesis made by the reading that Chevalier used his relationship to get out of the jail. Because there are some other people who were kept inside the jail had more powerful friends than Chevalier, and Chevalier was the only one escaped. On the other hand, there was old government documents recorded that they repaired the ceiling of the jail where Chevalier lived, which suggested that the story in Chevalier's memoir is true.范文：范文模版The reading passage raises several doubts about_________, whereas the professor defends ________by clarifying the seeming contradictions in__________.The professor argues tha________. According to the professor, _________. The reading, however, holds that________.Moreover, the professor challenges the skepticism expressed in the reading regarding the __________. She explains that________________.Finally, the professor rejects the claim in the reading that_________________. She says that the fact that __________shows that__________. Furthermore, she pointsto__________, citing this as strong evidence that__________.TPO--09习作：In the lecture, the professor admits that the problems of the oiled based car do exist, such as air pollution and the relying on finite resource. However, she casts doubt on the proposal that using hydrogen fuel-cell as a solution to these problems.First of all, the resources to make hydrogen-based fuel-cell power are not that easily available as the reading states. Hydrogen cannot be derived from normal water but from pure liquid state of it, which means that we need to produce pure water at first place and store them under -253 degree. In other words, this producing requirement makes it even harder to get hydrogen fuel-cell power. Secondly, the professor claims that hydrogen fuel-cell cannot solve the pollution problem, either. Even the hydrogen- fuel-cell engine would not pollute, the factory need to burning oil to purification and keep cold temperature, which will eventually cause pollution.In addition, the professor claims that the fuel-cell will not save money for people because the manufacture requires special material to produce. This special expensive material has no cheaper alternatives, and is the most important material needed in the chemical reaction. consequently, the hydrogen fuel-cell powered car would be very expensive for people to buy compare with the internal-combustion powered car which differ from what the reading passage indicate.范文：范文模板The lecturer points out several problems with ________________ in support of her claim that _________________________.First, the lecturer states that________________________________. However, the reading argues that __________________.Second, the lecturer refutes the claim in the reading that _______________. She argues that _________________________.Third, although the reading suggests that____________________, the professor argues that ___________________________.TPO--10习作：The lecture states against the passage by supporting the predator hypothesis of the declining of otter population.First of all, the professor claims that there are not any dead otters found on the beach of California or Alaska. And if the pollution hypothesis is right, there must be plenty of death otters founded on the beach. While there is not any, it clearly consists with the predator hypothesis because all the disappeared otters were eaten by the predators.Secondly, the lecturer also informed that even if orcas prefer hunt whales, they will not hunt whale only. And there is evidence shows that the whale at that area have already disappeared because of human hunting, which could force orcas to predate for smaller sea mammals, such as otters. On the other hand, this hypothesis could also explain why other sea mammals mentioned in the reading are also declining, such as seals and sea lions.In addition, the listening also claims that the predator hypothesis could also better explain the uneven pattern of otter decline. The uneven decline is because of the different accessible situation for predators, to say orcas. The locations where otter population declined greatly is easily accessible to orcas, while the locations, such as shallow water and rocky area, where otter population are stable is difficult for orcas to live. So these observations strongly suggested that the predator hypothesis are more likely than the pollution hypothesis.范文：习作：The professor admits that people are reading far less literature nowadays than few years before, but she disagrees with what the reading unfortunate effects it brings.First of all, the professor claims that reading less literature does not mean less intellectual stimulation. Science researches, history and political books are all high quality of reading materials which could provide intellectual stimulation as well as novels, plays and poems. That is to say, the readers do not miss out on important benefits as the reading concluded.Secondly, the lecturer indicates that reading decline in literature does not lead to cultural decline, either. Nowadays, there are numerous excellent music and movies showing on TV and the internet. In other words, it is neither a waste of time nor lower the level of culture in general that spending time on these trivial forms of entertainments; on the contrary, it could also benefit the public. Third, the lecturer also states that reason which leads publishers to invest less in literature and support fewer writers is not all about the readers. She claims that the author has responsibility, too. Lots of literatures today are too difficult for readers to understand, and maybe even the public in the old time who read a lot would not like to read the literature today either.习作：范文习作：The professor in the lecture admits that there may be negative influence of commercial fossil collection, while the advantages are far more than its disadvantages.First of all, the professor claims that, the private collectors do not make it harder for the public to see fossils. On the contrary, as the development of selling and buying fossils, lots of low level of collectors, such as community museum and library, could own pieces of fossils and make the public even easier to get access to fossils, which different from what the reading indicates. Secondly, the lecturer states that it is not realistic that the commercial fossil collection makes scientists lose access to some of the most important fossils. As the all the fossils need to be identified before they could appear on the commercial market, all the commercial fossils have to pass through the hands of scientists, which provide the science opportunities to discover them with fewer payments.In addition, the lecturer also states that the number of the destroyed commercial fossils could not compare to the fossil which is undiscovered. The fever of commercial fossils collection would only increase the discovery of fossils, and would not infect the discovery process of the fossils, which differs from what the passage indicates.范文：TPO--14 习作：范文：TPO--15习作：The lecture raises it point of view that the measures suggested in the reading will not successfully control the population of cane toad, which challenges the main idea stated in the passages.First of all, the professor argues that the national fence will not stop the cane toad from moving into other parts of Australia. Because cane toad laid eggs in streams, and there are always waterways such as rivers and streams running through different parts. And whenever young cane toads pass through the fence by these waterways, they will colonize new habitats. As regard to the reading passage, however, the author present that the national fence will be a useful protection as same as the fence built for rabbits before. Therefore, the lecture goes against the reading passage. Secondly, the professor claims that volunteers may help capture and destroy the cane toads, but they will also destroy some native frog, which is conflicts to what is presented in the reading. There are lots of other species living in the river, and it is hard for volunteers to distinguish the eggs and young of cane toads with other native frogs. So it is possible that the volunteers may threaten the native ecosystems themselves.Finally, the lecturer opposes to the reading passages by discussing the threat of disease-causing virus to other ecosystem in Central and South American. Even though the virus will not harm most other reptile and amphibian, the infect ones may transport to other countries, especially American. That is to say, the virus will then infect the local cane toad there and lead to decrease of their population and threaten the ecosystem of American. Therefore the virus will be a disaster to the whole ecosystem, which is differed from the reading.范文：2122TPO--16习作：The lecture raises it point of view by stating about a guideline enacted in United Kingdom in 1990 which solved all the three problems proposed in the reading article.First of all, the lecturer refers from the guideline that, before any construction projects, the sits has to be examined by archaeologists. And if the sites have valuable artifacts, the builder has to stop and make a preserving plan with the government, such as build around the sites or excavate before further proceed. In regard with the reading, the author argues that, the construction projects will destroy most valuable artifacts. Therefore the lecture goes against the main idea maintained in the reading.Secondly, the lecturer also refers from the guideline that, all the archaeologist working in the examination, further preservation and excavation is paid by the construction projects instead of the government. With this solution, the archaeologists could focus on their excavation, which also conflicts with the reading that lots of interesting projects were left without support.Thirdly, the professor opposes the reading by stating the raising of payment on archaeology by the government. She explains that the government has paid the archaeologists in all stages of their process, such as the examination, the excavation and the data analyzing and paper writing. These action increasing the population on professional archaeology on a historical highest, this strongly contrasts to what was presented in the reading.范文：The professor explained three aspects of the new guidelines adopted in the United Kingdom, each of which has successfully addressed the problems mentioned in the reading passage concerning the preservation of artifacts, the funding of archaeological research, and career opportunities in archaeology.First, the professor pointed out that according to the new guidelines, any construction project must undergo an evaluation process in order for the archaeological value of the site to be ascertained. If a site is determined to contain precious objects, a panel of experts is convened to draw up a preservation plan. This measure has proven very effective in addressing the first problem mentioned in the reading – careless and irresponsible construction projects being pursued without any regard for archaeological preservation.Second, the lecturer explained that the new guidelines shifted the responsibility for funding archaeological work, from initial examination to future preservation, from the government to construction companies. As a result of this shift, the second problem highlighted in the reading concerning insufficient government funds for archaeological research has been significantly addressed.The professor’s last point concerned the fin al problem raised in the reading material – a decline in archaeology-related job opportunities. She argued that thanks to the new guidelines, many skillful, full-time archaeological experts and professionals are now needed to handle work at various stages of archaeological investigation, research, and preservation.23。
新托福TPO综合写作详细解析汇总
新托福TPO综合写作详细解析汇总
在新托福综合写作中，有的同学语言使用的能力还有一定局限，还要刻意追求句式的复杂化，但这样的后果就是写出来的句子个个都有错，个个都有表达不清。
其实用最好的词表达最多的内容才是最厉害的写作方式，本文小编为大家整理了一篇新托福综合写作范文，来源于TPO 1—15。
新托福综合写作范文TPO2详细解析:团队的作用
新托福综合写作范文TPO3详细解析:伦勃朗
新托福综合写作范文TPO4详细解析:恒温动物
新托福综合写作范文TPO5详细解析:查科峡谷的巨屋
新托福综合写作范文TPO6详细解析:在线百科的利弊
新托福综合写作范文TPO7详细解析:环保认证在美国无用
新托福综合写作范文TPO8详细解析:塞恩加尔骑士
新托福综合写作范文TPO9详细解析:氢燃料
新托福综合写作范文TPO10详细解析:海獭数量减少的原因
新托福综合写作范文TPO11详细解析:人们不爱读书了
新托福综合写作范文TPO12详细解析:简·奥斯汀
新托福综合写作范文TPO13详细解析:私人化石买卖的坏处
新托福综合写作范文TPO14详细解析:回收性砍伐
新托福综合写作范文TPO15详细解析:控制蔗蜍数量的方法
新托福综合写作对语言的要求是清晰表达，准确转述即可(其实独立写作的要求也类似)。
没有必要一味地追求语言的华丽，把话说清楚最重要。
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tpo综合写作问题和解决方案
题目：TPo综合写作问题和解决方案一、问题描述TPo综合写作考试是很多考生备考托福时最头痛的部分之一。
这是因为综合写作要求考生在听力材料的基础上进行阅读材料的分析，并在规定时间内完成一篇有条理和逻辑性的文章。
由于综合写作考试要求考生不仅要对听力材料做出准确的理解和把握，还要对阅读材料进行深入的理解和分析，考生们常常感到无从下手，难以驾驭。
二、问题分析1. 需要快速阅读综合写作要求考生在规定时间内完成一篇文章，因此考生需要在有限的时间内快速阅读并理解阅读材料，这对考生的阅读速度和理解能力提出了较高的要求。
2. 需要精准理解考生不仅需要对听力材料做出准确的理解和把握，还需要对阅读材料进行深入的理解和分析。
这就要求考生具备较高的语言能力和分析能力，能够准确把握文章的要点和逻辑结构。
3. 需要组织合理综合写作考试要求考生在规定时间内完成一篇有条理和逻辑性的文章。
考生需要在短时间内准确把握文章的结构，合理安排文章的内容，做到观点清晰，论证有力，逻辑严谨。
三、解决方案1. 提高阅读速度和理解能力建议考生在平时多进行英语阅读练习，提高阅读速度和理解能力。
可以选择一些适合自己水平的英文原版书籍或文章，每天进行一定量的阅读练习，逐渐提高阅读速度和理解能力。
2. 增强语言能力和分析能力建议考生多听英语听力，提高听力水平，同时多进行英语口语练习，提高口语表达能力。
另外，可以通过参加一些英语写作培训班或课程，系统学习写作技巧，提高语言能力和分析能力。
3. 提高文章组织能力建议考生在平时多进行写作练习，锻炼文章组织能力。
可以选择一些热点话题或学术话题进行写作练习，逐渐提高文章组织能力。
可以参加一些写作指导班或讲座，学习写作技巧，提高文章组织能力。
四、总结综合写作考试虽然较为困难，但只要考生在平时认真练习，充分准备，提高阅读速度和理解能力，增强语言能力和分析能力，提高文章组织能力，就一定能够取得满意的成绩。
希望考生们能够充分利用各种资源，努力备考，取得优异的成绩。
TPO综合写作解析
新托福TPO1—24套之综合写作+详析TPO1综合写作阅读材料：In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay in order to do so. A mandatory policy requiring companies to offer their employees the option of working a four-day workweek for four-fifths (80 percent) of their normal pay would benefit the economy as a whole as well as the individual companies and the employees who decided to take the option.中文翻译：在美国，职员一般执行的一周五天，每天八小时工作制。
然而，很多职员希望能够改为四天工作制，如果能够满足需要可以接受薪水降低。
要求企业提供薪水八成工作四天的工作方式供员工选择对于国家整个经济都是有好处的，同时获益的还有个人，以及执行这个政策的公司。
The shortened workweek would increase company profits because employees would feel more rested and alert, and as a result, they would make fewer costly errors in their work. Hiring more staff to ensure that the same amount of work would be accomplished would not result in additional payroll costs because four-day employees would only be paid 80 percent of the normal rate. In the end, companies would have fewer overworked and error-prone employees for the same money, which would increase company profits.中文翻译：减少工作日会提高公司的利润，因为员工们会感到很轻松和精神，这样他们就会在工作中较少犯那些可能会带来损失的错误。
tpo53综合写作解析
tpo53综合写作解析（原创实用版）目录1.TPO53 概述2.综合写作的定义和要求3.TPO53 的综合写作解析4.综合写作的技巧和策略5.总结正文【1】TPO53 概述TPO53 是托福考试中的一套真题，它包括了听力、阅读和写作三个部分。
其中，写作部分是托福考试的重要组成部分，它主要考察考生的写作能力。
【2】综合写作的定义和要求综合写作是一种特殊的写作形式，它要求考生在阅读和听力材料的基础上，进行综合分析和整合，然后写出一篇完整的文章。
综合写作的主要目的是考察考生的信息整合能力和写作能力。
【3】TPO53 的综合写作解析在 TPO53 中，综合写作的主题是“大学生是否应该参加课外活动”。
阅读材料认为大学生应该参加课外活动，而听力材料则认为大学生不应该参加课外活动。
考生需要根据这两个观点，进行综合分析和整合，然后写出一篇完整的文章。
【4】综合写作的技巧和策略进行综合写作时，考生需要注意以下几点：（1）仔细阅读阅读材料和听力材料，理解其主要观点和论据。
（2）对阅读材料和听力材料进行综合分析和整合，找出它们的共同点和不同点。
（3）根据综合分析和整合的结果，确定文章的主题和结构。
（4）在文章中，既要表达阅读材料和听力材料的观点，也要表达自己的观点。
（5）注意语言的准确性和流畅性，确保文章能够清晰地表达自己的思想。
【5】总结综合写作是托福考试中的一个重要部分，它主要考察考生的信息整合能力和写作能力。
在 TPO53 中，综合写作的主题是“大学生是否应该参加课外活动”。
进行综合写作时，考生需要注意仔细阅读阅读材料和听力材料，进行综合分析和整合，然后写出一篇完整的文章。
【托福写作备考】TPO10综合写作文本与解析
【托福写作备考】TPO10综合写作文本与解析TPO 10The sea otter is a small mammal that lives in waters along the western coast of North America from California to Alaska. When some sea otter populations off the Alaskan coast started rapidly declining a few years ago, it caused much concern because sea otters play an important ecological role in the coastal ecosystem. Experts started investigating the cause of the decline and quickly realized that there were two possible explanations: environmental pollution or attacks by predators. Initially, the pollution hypothesis seemed the more likely of the two.中文：海獭是一种生活在北美西海岸从加州到阿拉斯加沿线的小型海洋哺乳动物。
几年前，阿拉斯加海岸的海獭数量急剧减少。
由于海獭对于维持海岸沿线生态平衡有非常重要的作用，所以其数量下降引起了广泛的关注。
专家开始研究海獭数量下降的原因，并且很快发现了两个可能的原因，分别是环境污染和天敌捕食。
最初，环境污染说看起来更为可信。
The first reason why pollution seemed the more likely cause was that there were known sources of it along the Alaskan coast, such as oil rings and other sources of industrial chemical pollution. Water samples from the area revealed increased levels of chemicals that could decrease the otters’resistance to life-threatening infections and thus could indirectly cause their deaths.中文：为什么污染说更为可信呢?这是因为阿拉斯加海岸确实有污染源，比如石油带或者其他的工业污染物。
托福TPO独立写作--写作分析
托福TPO独立写作--写作分析1）2）be as extensive or well-equipped as libraries. 3）2）pay every year to keep its collection well organized and up-to-date. New facilities areexpensive to buy and maintain. well-trained staff and working extra during exam period in lib than sports.4）3）students are happy to organize their own sporting events and exercise routines quite independently of the school.习作：As universities and colleges are more than schools which provide knowledge and research devices for students, they may also put sports and social activities at the same important position as classes and libraries and should provide equal financial support. By doing this, the students can gain better health condition, meet more friends and will absolutely be better adapted in the society in the future.To begin with, it is no doubt that the students will learn better if they have a better physical condition. While Health is nowadays a critical problem around campus: Eye problems, vertebrate diseases and over weighting are three serious health problems all because of less of exercises and staying inside. Most students prefer to stay in their dormitory to play computer rather than go out to take exercise, since they complain there is not enough gym orsports playground for them. And the result of this habit is that most of the students are wearing thick glasses, suffering from cervical problems, overweighting and their bodies are more vulnerable to diseases. So in my opinion, it is the universities’ responsibility to make sure their students spend enough time outside their dormitories, classrooms and the libraries. As long as a good healthy body is the prerequisite to taking classes, gyms and sports playground are needed in all universities and colleges which deserves equal financial support.In addition, to my point of view universities and colleges are the best place to make friends with the same value and dream. And the best way to make friends in the universities is to take part in sports and social activities. If you like playing football, the team members may be the one with the same habits and life goals; If you love dancing, you may find the one with the same value and characteristics in the ball. As we all cannot success without the help of other people, it is important for any of the students to find the one or ones during their college time. And at this point of view sports and social activities need to get the equal financial support.Moreover, since most of the university students will finally find jobs and be members of the society, it is very necessary for them to get trained about social skills. These will benefit thestudents on their future career as same as their professional skills. The abilities of communication, organization, cooperation and creation should be trained in universities and colleges. Sports and social activities are the best place for all of these to be learned and practiced. During helping organizing a sports game, all the volunteers get chance to practice their ability to solve urgent problems, communicate with others, and fulfill their responsibilities and so on. Since all these activities need monetary support, as the expenditure will be as large as the classes and libraries, they should be equal treated.All in all, sports and social activities are as important as classes and libraries at universities and colleges, and they should also receive equal financial support.(507)T147 The best way the school spends a gift of moneyyour school to spend this money? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.or建体育设备）T167 Should school buy computers or books?books for the library. Which should your school choose to buy — computers or books? Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendation.（买书）2. 人品问题2.1诚实TPO2 Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in anyrelationship between people.范文提纲：反对，主题句is increasingly doubted，telling the truth is not always the best policy1)1)the truth is offending and may not be a very nice thing to both hear and say. White lie, Advertising，Dressing2)2)Unarguably, hiding (entirely or particularly) the truth in some situations can be quite handy indeed. Spy. Confrontations and disputes can seemingly be avoided. politician, historian支持，Honest is most important virtue.Lie will sooner or later be unfolded. And the truth will hurt both sides. Dishonesty will leave bad influence among others.【范文1】There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in a relationship. People may look for honesty, altruism, understanding, loyalty, being thoughtful etc! Everyone would more or less wish that the person s/he is dealing with, has some of these virtues above. Putting them in an order according to their importance, however can be very subjective and relative.When someone asks him/herself the question “What do I consider to be the most imp ortant thing in my relationship?” the answer depends on a lot of factors such as how his/her earlierrelationships were.After stating that everyone’s opinion can be different about this, for me honesty, in other words, always telling the truth is the most important consideration in a relationship. Opposite of this is inarguably lying and if someone needs to lie, either s/he is hiding something or is afraid of telling me something.In any relationship of mine, I would wish that first of all, the person I’m dealing with is honest. Even though s/he thinks that s/he did something wrong that I wouldn’t like, s/he’d better tell me the truth and not lie about it. Later on if I find out about a lie or hear the truth from someone else, that’d be much more unpleasa nt. In that case how can I ever believe or trust that person again? How can I ever believe that this person has enough confidence in me to forgive him/her and carry on with the relationship from there. So if I cannot trust a person anymore, if the person d oesn’t think I can handle the truth, there’s no point to continuing that relationship. Although I would like to see altruistic, understanding, thoughtful and loyal behavior from people, an instance of the opposite of these behaviors would not upset me as much as dishonesty would. Among all the possible behaviors, dishonesty is the only one for me that terminates how I feel about a person’s reliability. Therefore honesty would be my first concernand the most important consideration in a relationship.【范文2】The traditional virtue of telling the truth in all situations is increasingly doubted by many in today’s world. Many believe that telling the truth is not always the best policy when dealing with people. Moreover, the line of a “truth” is becoming vaguer. This essay will explore the importance of telling the truth in relationships between people.We all understand that often the truth is offending and may not be a very nice thing to both hear and say. Lies or white lies often have their advantages. The manipulation of white lies is the most obvious the business world. How many times have we heard that some product is “the finest” or “the cheapest”? how many times have we heard that products have such and such “magical functions”? advertising is about persuasion, and many would agree that if a company is to tell the absolute truth about it’s products, no one would be interested in even having a look at the products.The same logic applies to human relationships. If your friend had worn a newly purchased dress on her birthday and energetically asked you if it was a worthy buy, would you freely express your opinion that you had never seen a dress as the one she’s currently wearing? Andspoil her birthday? Unarguably, hiding (entirely or particially) the truth in some situations can be quite handy indeed. Confrontations and disputes can seemingly be avoided.However, there is always the risk factor of the truth emerging sooner or later when telling an untruth. The basic trust in any relationships (businessman/customer, friends, parents/children) will be blotched, and would have an impact on the future relationship between both parties. The story of the “the boy who cried wolf” fully illustrates the consequences of telling untruths. No one will believe you when yo u’re telling the truth. Your word will have no weighting.In addition, another “bad factor” of telling untruths is that you have absolutely no control over when the truth (of previous untruths) will emerge. Untruths breed pain in both parties: tears when the truth is uncovered after a period of time; fear and the burden of sharing a “secret”. In the long run, it seems that hiding the truth is not beneficial to either party. Everyone hates betrayal. Even if it is the trend to occasionally hide the truth in relationships, it is strongly recommended that not to follow that trend as the risk and the consequences of the truth unfolded overwhelms the minimal advantages one can derive from not telling the truth After all, it is understood thatrelationships are f ounded on “trust” which goes hand in hand with “truth”. Indeed telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Always.习作：It is undoubted that, telling the truth is very important for interaction between people. However, it is not always good to say the truth under any circumstances. There are many situations when a lie is better. My point of view is stated below.To begin with, it is no good telling the terrible truth to people who are in bad emotion or ill. Imaging that, a friend of yours is having cancer and will not last for more than 3weeks. Is it better to tell him or her that it is only a little problem with his or her body and try to make him or her happy and fulfill his or her last wishes, or is it better to tell him or her that truth which will definitely make him or her suffer not only the disease. If your girlfriend has already dressed up for her birthday and asked you whether or not she looked good. Is this a good time for you to freely express your feelings and judgments about the dress which may ruined her birthday? The answer is definitely no. This is to say, there are some situations where white lies are better solutions than telling the truth. Moreover, keeping secrets is sometime a sense ofloyalty than telling the truth. It is an essential characteristic for employees to keep their company’s information away from other companies. If an engineer told the true key information to his or her best friends who are employed by another competitive company, the former company might lost a lot during commercial competition. And if the governors shared the true new bill about the government, such as improving the housing property tax, to his or her family, the spread of this information may lead to the failure of this new bill. Keeping secrets is not equaled as telling lies, so it is definitely understandable to keep secret or saying a lie when your friends or families asking about something you should not say. However, considering in lots of relationships, honest is a basic trait. Because no matter how perfect a lie is, people will finally find the truth. And that time, the truth would be far more hurtful than knowing it in the first place. The most important lesson I have learnt in my first relationship was telling the truth. My first boy friend cheated on me when he fell in love with my best friend. Even though they try not to hurt me at first, when I found the truth by myself, it is far more difficult to accept.All in all, there is no way saying that in any situation whether telling the truth or the lie is always better. As long as be honest is one of thebasic traits in a relationship, telling a right lie will help your relationship under certain situation.(476)3. 交友问题TPO3It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends范文提纲：支持，Firstly, you already know how they react to certain situations and therefore you know how to treat them to get along well. Secondly, I am of the conviction that it is certain that in a bit more peculiar and maybe a bit unpleasant situations it is a lot more likely that your old friends will help you out than that someone you have met barely a week ago would do the same.反对，a lot more entertaining; new topics to talk about, new activities to do together, new personality traits to discover; broaden your horizon because their beliefs may differ from your own.【范文1】In the following essay I would like to express my opinion in regard to the thesis “It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new fiends”On the one hand, you could always say that making new friends is a lot more entertaining than keeping in touch with the old ones. Thereare new topics to talk about, new activities to do together, new personality traits to discover... Additionally, you also get to meet the persons who are close to your new friends. And maybe you will even receive a whole group of new friends by making one new friend.However, you could also say that it makes much more sense to keep in touch with your old friends since they are your true friends. Firstly, you already know how they react to certain situations and therefore you know how to treat them to get along well. Secondly, I am of the conviction that it is certain that in a bit more peculiar and maybe a bit unpleasant situations it is a lot more likely that your old friends will help you out than that someone you have met barely a week ago would do the same.Though I have to admit that I personally came to the conclusion that I need my old friends as well as my new friends. For me they are both equally important. I adore keeping in touch with my old friends and knowing how they will react in most situations. Of course, over the years some sort of bond and a special kind of trust has developed with my long-time friends.However, I immensely enjoy making new friends as well. I enjoy trying out new activities and making new friends there. Furthermore, I like making friends from all kinds of different cultures and countries. And I am certain thatthis kind of attitude makes life much more interesting. Plus, I believe that new friends will also broaden your horizon because their beliefs may differ from your own.Personally, I am convinced that nobody has to decide between old friends and new friends since the possibility of keeping the old friends and making new ones always exists. Therefore as a final statement I would like to say "Cherish you old fiends and enjoy making new ones as well" 习作：Keeping old friends is a very valuable and meaningful thing one should do, but in my personal opinion, I do not agree that it is important to keep old friends than it is to make new ones.There is no doubt that some time you have to make new friends. Nowadays people change their living environment a lot. It is far more important to adapt in new environment than to think about old time. In order to adapt in a new place, the best way is to make new friend. The local new friends can help you receiving more useful information and get used to your new life faster. I transferred to another school once during my middle school period. When I was in the new class, it is the new friends who helped me familiar with all the classrooms, library and teachers of the new school. And that is why Icould adapt to a new school life quickly.On the other hand, new friends can bring you more new experiences. As I like writing, I love to make new friends and talk to them. Everyone have a different life, and hearing new friends' life stories is an interesting and useful thing. As I was preparing TOEFL, I jointed a writing group and the new friends told me lots of useful way to enhance my writing skills and oral ability. However, keeping with old friends is also important. Your old friends are the ones who know you best and understand you better and may give you a better suggestion when you are facing with problems. Moreover, as you know each other for a long time, they are reliable and trustworthy who would like to share your happiness and your unhappiness. Nevertheless, these advantages would not make it more important than making new friends, because sometimes a new friend will capable of doing these too.All in all, I do not agree the statement that keeping old friends are more important than making new friends. These are both something we ought to do, and some time as important as each other.(351)类似题目T62 What do you want most in a friend - someone who is intelligent, or someone who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.1)一个可靠的朋友能够在最困难(through the hardest days)的时候帮助你2)一个可靠的朋友不会欺骗(deceive, betray)你，有时候欺骗你的人往往是你的朋友，而可靠的朋友不会欺骗你3)一个可靠的朋友不会浪费你的时间。
新托福TPO11综合写作详细解析
阅读材料： A recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature – novels, plays, and poems –than they used to. This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public, for culture in general, and for the future of literature itself. 最近的研究显⽰⼈们，尤其是年轻⼈不再像以前那样爱读想⼩说、喜剧或者诗歌这类⽂学作品了。
这个现象是令⼈担忧的。
这是因为这对⼴⼤读者受众、对⼴义⽂化以及对于⽂学本⾝未来的发展都是⾮常不幸的。
While there has been a decline in book reading generally, the decline has been especially sharp for literature. This is unfortunate because nothing else provides the intellectual stimulation that literature does. Literature encourages us to exercise our imaginations, empathize with others, and expand our understanding of language. So, by reading less literature, the reading public is missing out on important benefits. 在书籍阅读量下降的⼤⽓候下，⽂学类书籍阅读量下降更为明显。
tpo41托福综合写作范文
tpo41托福综合写作范文一、阅读文章要点。
阅读文章的观点是，人类可以在火星上建立永久性的居住点，并且给出了三个理由：1. 火星的大气含有二氧化碳：这一气体可以被利用来生产燃料和氧气。
通过一些技术手段，比如将二氧化碳分解成一氧化碳和氧气，氧气可供人类呼吸，一氧化碳可作为燃料的组成部分。
这样就能解决人类在火星上生存所需要的呼吸用气和能源问题。
2. 火星的重力较低：这对于人类来说是一个优势。
低重力环境使得从火星发射宇宙飞船返回地球更加容易。
相比在地球发射火箭，需要克服巨大的重力，在火星上发射火箭所需要的燃料会少很多，从而大大降低了太空探索任务的成本和难度。
3. 火星上有冰存在：火星上的冰可以融化成水。
水是生命之源，它可以用于人类饮用、灌溉农作物等。
而且，水还可以分解成氢气和氧气，进一步为人类提供能源。
这就使得人类在火星上建立永久性居住点有了最基本的资源保障。
二、听力文章要点。
听力文章对阅读中的观点进行了反驳，理由如下：1. 二氧化碳利用困难：虽然火星大气中有二氧化碳，但是这些二氧化碳大多以固体干冰的形式存在于火星的两极。
要将其收集并转化为有用的氧气和燃料，需要复杂的设备和大量的能量投入。
以目前人类的技术水平，要将这些设备运送到火星并且维持其运行是非常困难的，所以无法像阅读中所说的那样轻易地利用二氧化碳。
2. 低重力带来健康问题：火星的低重力环境对人类健康有严重的危害。
长时间处于低重力环境下，人类的肌肉和骨骼会萎缩。
例如，宇航员在国际空间站待一段时间后返回地球时，身体就会出现各种问题。
在火星上建立永久性居住点意味着人类要长期面对这种低重力环境，这会使人类的身体状况变得非常糟糕，甚至可能威胁到生命，所以低重力并不是一个像阅读中说的那样的优势。
3. 火星上的冰难以利用：火星上的冰并不是像阅读中所说的那样容易被利用。
因为这些冰里含有很多有害物质，像高氯酸盐。
如果要将这些冰融化成水供人类使用，首先需要去除这些有害物质，而目前我们还没有一种简单有效的方法来做到这一点。
托福综合写作例文解析TPO 02
智课网TOEFL备考资料托福综合写作例文解析TPO 02摘要：托福综合写作例文解析TPO 02，针对托福写作考试综合写作部分，掌握的不牢靠的托福考生，小编为各位归纳整理了托福综合写作例文解析，希望能够帮助各位考生提高托福综合写作部分的成绩。
托福综合写作例文解析主要是解读一篇篇典型的阅读材料，从背景材料中提取主要的观点，然后从观点中抽出方法，之后解析文章结构，从而找到综合写作的方法。
并且解构每篇阅读材料都会附上一篇范文。
非常的详细到位，希望各位考生认真浏览，仔细把握。
TPO 02阅读材料：In many organizations, perhaps the best way to approach certain new projects is to assemble a group of people into a team. Having a team of people attack a project offers several advantages.在很多机构里，恰当完成一个新项目的最好方法可能是把一组人组织成一个团队。
一个团队来完成一个项目有几个优势。
First of all, a group of people has a wider range of knowledge, expertise, and skills than any single individual is likely to possess. Also, because of the numbers of people involved and the greater resources they possess, a group can work more quickly in response to the task assigned to it and can come up with highly creative solutions to problems and issues.首先，一组人员意味着有比任何一个个体拥有更为广泛的知识、技能以及技巧。
新托福TPO综合写作详细解析：氢燃料(英汉对照)
新托福TPO综合写作详细解析：氢燃料（英汉对照）阅读材料：Car manufacturers and governments have been eagerly seeking a replacement for the automobiles main source of power, the internal-combustion engine. By far, the most promising alternative source of energy for cars is the hydrogen-based fuel-cell engine, which uses hydrogen to create electricity that, in turn, powers the car. Fuel-cell engines have several advantages over internal-combustion engines and will probably soon replace them.One of the main problems with the internal-combustion engine is that it relies on petroleum, either in the form of gasoline or diesel fuel. Petroleum is a finite resource, someday; we will run out of oil. The hydrogen needed for fuel-cell engines cannot easily be depleted. Hydrogen can be derived from various plentiful sources, including natural gas and even water. The fact that fuel-cell engines utilize easily available, renewable resources makes them particularly attractive.Second, hydrogen-based fuel cells are attractive because they willsolve many of the worlds pollution problems. An unavoidable by-product of burning oil is carbon dioxide, and carbon dioxide harms the environment. On the other hand, the only byproduct of fuel-cell engines is water.Third, fuel-cell engines will soon be economically competitive because people will spend less money to operate a fuel-cell engine than they will to operate an internal-combustion engine. This is true for one simple reason. A fuel-cell automobile is nearly twice as efficient in using its fuel as an automobile powered by an internal-combustion engine is. In other words, the fuel-cell powered car reqquires only half the fuel energy that the internal-combustion powered car does to go the same distance.汽车制造商和政府都在积极地寻找内燃机的代替品，而目前内燃机是汽车主要的动力源。