中考完成句子答题技巧及练习题 (5)

中考完成句子答题技巧及练习题

完成句子解题技巧

1. 先读一下汉语句子，了解这个句子所要表达的意思。

2. 跳过空格读一下给出的那一部分内容。

3. 观察下要求翻译的汉语，然后联想一下相关词汇和句型，再考虑语态、时态、词形变化、主语与谓语数的一致性等问题。

4. 试填空格，将已填好的句子再读一遍，从时态、语态、词形、数的一致等方面检查一下。

四川眉州

第二节完成句子（共5小题，10小空，每空1分，满分10分）

根据汉语提示完成句子，一空一词（包括缩写词）。

81. 我父母不允许我熬夜。

I am not allowed to late by my parents.

82. 当爸爸承诺给我买一个ipad的时候，我多么激动啊！

When my father to buy me an ipad, excited I was！

83. 当茶叶可采摘时，人们手工采摘后再送去加工。

When the leaves of the tea plant are ready, they are picked and then

are sent for processing .

84. 我弟弟有时会做奇怪的事情来获得妈妈的关注。

Sometimes, my brother would do to get my mother’s attention.

85. 你应该坚持锻炼，除非你不在乎你的健康。

You should stick to taking exercise you do not care about your .

参考答案：

81. stay up

82. promised; how

83. by hand

84. something strange

85. unless, health

甘肃兰州

根据所给汉语提示完成下列句子。(每空限填一词)

96. 当我长大后，我想成为一名工程师。

I want to be an engineer when I ____ ____.

97. 青少年应该学习如何照顾自己。

Teenagers should learn how to ____ ____ of themselves.

98. 首先将胡萝卜切碎，然后放入搅拌机内。

First cut up the carrot, and then ____ it ____ the blender.

99. 如果你在外面逗留得太晚，你的父母亲会为你担心。

If you stay out too late, your parents will ____ ____ you.

100. 许多次我都想放弃，但我奋力坚持了下来。

Many times I thought about ____ ____, but I fought on.

参考答案：

96. grow up

97. take care

98. put into

99. worry about

100. giving up

年广西柳州

根据句子意思及所给的中文提示完成单词，并将单词的正确形式填写在答题卡对应的横线上．每空只能填一词．

76．The post office is （在…的对面） the station．

77．Tony usually practises playing （音乐的） instruments after clas．

78．It's our duty to protect the （环境）．

79．Liu Yang is the first Chinese woman （宇航员） to enter the space．

80．You should （道歉） to her for your mistake．

答案：

76.opposite

77.musical

78.environment

79.astronaut

80.apologise/apologize

天津卷

根据所给的汉语内容，用英语完成下列句子。（每空限填一词，含缩略词）

1. 我们昨天四点半回家的。

We _________ _________ at half past four yesterday.

2. 别为我担心，我会没事的。

Don't _________ _________ me. I'll be all right.

3. 努力学习，你的梦想就会实现。

Work hard, and your dream will _________ _________.

4. 这种玩具汽车正在这个商店中出售。

This kind of toy car is _________ _________ in the shop.

5. 这本书讲述了坏人如何为自己的行为付出代价。

The book tells us how bad people _________ _________ their actions.参考答案

1. went home

2. worry about

3. come true

4. on sale

5. pay for

陕西卷

完成句子。根据所给中文意思完成句子。

1. 多么新鲜的橙子啊！

How fresh the _________ are!

2. 我经常在星期二打篮球。

I often play basketball __________________.

3. 把你的袜子洗了吧。

Go and __________________.

4. 我同意你的野餐计划。

I __________________ you about the plan for the picnic.

5. “一带一路”产生了巨大的社会影响。

The Belt & Road Initiative has had a great __________________.

参考答案

1. oranges

2. on Tuesday(s)

3. wash your socks

4. agree with

5. social influence

广州卷

根据所给的汉语内容，用英语完成下列句子。（每空限填一词，含缩略词）

1. 我去过海南岛两次了。

I _________ _________ _________ Hainan Island twice.

2. 我直到爸妈回家才睡觉。

Last night I _________ _________ to bed _________ my parents got home. 3. 小梅多么忙碌! 她总是第一个来最后一个走。

_________ ________ Xiao Mei is! She is always the first to come and the last to leave.

4. 在中国人民的帮助下，肯尼亚在几个月前建成了一条新的现代化铁路。

With the help of the Chinese people, a new and modern railway in K enya _________ _________ several months ago.

5. 我和朋友都喜爱诵读中国诗词。我们每周都分享感受。

_________ my friend _________ I enjoy reading Chinese poems. We share our feelings every week.

6. 我不明白为什么他们在这个时候踢足球。

I can't understand _________ _________ _________ _________ football at this moment.

7. 不要放弃，终有一天你会成功。

Don't _________ ________, and you'll succeed one day.

参考答案

1. have been to

2. didn’t go；until

3. How busy

4. was built

5. Both；and

6. why they are playing

7. give up

2016 黄冈卷

完成句子。根据所给中文意思完成句子。

1. 有些父母认为孩子们的爱好会妨碍他们的学业。

Some parents think that children′s hobbies can __________________ of their schoolwork. (get)

2. 即使有时候你的妈妈误会了你，你不应该顶撞她。

Although your mother mistakes you sometimes, you aren’t supposed to

__________________ her. (talk)

3. Jack很喜欢上网，但是他从不浏览不健康的网页。

Jack likes surfing the Internet but he never __________________ unhealthy web pages. (look)

4. 中国正在努力为孩子们提供更好的教育。

Nowadays China is __________________ to offer children better education. (make) 5. 上周我们学校举行了经典名著阅读比赛。

Last week the classic reading competition __________________ in our school. (take)

6. Li Ping经常通过听英文歌曲学习英语。

Li Ping usually studies English by __________________ English songs. (listen) 7. 遗爱湖公园被认为是湖北最美的公园之一。

Yiai lake Park __________________ one of the most beautiful park in Hubei.

8. 这个女孩太小不能清理她书包里的物品。

The girl is too young __________________ the things in her schoolbag. (clear)参考答案

1. get in the way

2. talk back to

3. looks through

4. making an effort / efforts

5. took place

6. listening to

7. is regarded as

8. to clear out

2016 兰州卷

根据所给的汉语内容，用英语完成下列句子。（每空限填一词，含缩略词）

1. 离开房间时记得关灯。

Remember to _________ the lights _________ when you leave the room.

2. Tina不可能在教室里，她去图书馆了。

Tina _________ be in the classroom. She has _________ to the libra ry.

3. 欧文过去常常在拼写“发音”这个单词时出错。

Owen _________ _________ make the mistakes in spellingthe word “pron unciation”.

4. 你记忆的单词越多，你的英语就越好。

The _________ words you have in your minds, the _________ your Engl ish will be.

5. 我们的未来多么光明！

_________ _________ our future is!

参考答案

1. turn / shut；off

2. can’t；gone

3. used to

4. more；better

5. How；bright / nice / wonderful / great / excellent

2016 福州卷

根据所给的汉语内容，用英语完成下列句子。（每空限填一词，含缩略词）

1. 瞧！有一些女孩正在树下跳舞。

Look! There _______ some girls _______ under the tree.

2. 别吃太多垃圾食品，这对我们的健康有害。

Don’t _______ too much junk food. It is _______ for our health.

3. 除非我拿到驾照，否则我不能开我父亲的车。

I can’t drive my _______ car _______ I get my driving license.

4. 这个男孩很聪明，他能很快解出这道数学题。

The boy is _______ enough to work out the math problem _______.

5. 屠呦呦成为第一位获得诺贝尔奖的中国女性。

Tu Youyou became the first _______ woman that _______ the Nobel Prize.

参考答案

1. are；dancing

2. eat；bad

3. father’s；unless

4. clever；quickly

5. Chinese；won

2016 广州卷

根据所给的汉语内容，用英语完成下列句子。（每空限填一词，含缩略词）

1. 从广州飞到悉尼需要多长时间？

________ ________ does ________ ________ to fly from Guangzhou to Sydney?

2. 如果你想知道这个单词的意思，查一下字典吧。

If you want to know the meaning of this word, just ________ it ________ in the dictionary.

3. 你讲得太快了，我听不懂。能再说一次吗？

You spoke ________ fast ________ I couldn’t understand you. Would you say i t again?

4. 旅途愉快！请与我们保持联系。

Enjoy your trip, and please ________ in touch _______ us.

5. 这项工程很快就会完成。

The project ________ ________ ________ soon.

6. 我不知道他是否能准时到校。

I wonder ________ ________ ________ ________ to school on time.

7. 这本书真有用啊！我看了很多遍。

________ ________ ________ book it is! I have read it many times.

参考答案

1. How long；it take

2. look；up

3. so；that

4. keep；with

5. will be finished / completed

6. whether / if he can get

7. What a useful

2016 天津卷

根据所给的汉语内容，用英语完成下列句子。（每空限填一词，含缩略词）

1. 明天请把作业交上来。

Please _________ __________ your homework tomorrow.

2. 他说的话不合情理。

His words didn’t ________ _________.

3. 他旁边的那位女士是我的姑姑莉兹。

The woman _________ _________ him is my aunt Liz.

4. 电视开着，但是玛丽没注意看。

The TV was on, but Mary wasn’t _______ _________ to it.

5. 我想大家都需要帮助动物，使它们在宁静中生存。

I think we all need to help animals live ________ __________.

参考答案

1. hand in

2. make sense

3. next to

4. paying attention

5. in peace

二、英语书面表达专项训练

2．安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下信息内容提示，写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。

提示：1. 体育锻炼

2. 上下楼梯

3. 交朋结友

4. 食品卫生

要求： 1. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯；

2．短文可以适当发挥；但要包含以上要点。

3．词数：80—100词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.___________ _____________________________________________

【答案】Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.

In a word, it's important to remember these for us all.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提示，可知本文主要从三个方面进行叙述，注意围绕要点组织材料，适当发挥。根据材料内容确定主要句子的时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

3．

假如你是Liu Bin，请用英语给笔友Bob回复邮件。

注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2.要点齐全，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3.词数100左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Bob,

I’m very glad to know that you will come to our school.

Yours,

Liu Bin

【答案】Dear Bob,

I'm very glad to know that you will come to our school. Let me tell you something about it. Our school is very big and our classroom is very tidy. We go to school five days a week and have six classes every day. There is also an activity class in the afternoon. Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends too.

My classmates are very nice. We often help each other. Everyone has his own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.

I'm looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Liu Bin

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to，listen to the music，five days a week，so that，prepare for，for a while，of course，at the weekends，help each other，look forward to等。而固定句型it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.和I'm very glad to know that you will come to our school./ Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better./ Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

4．书面表达

初中毕业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演......

请你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。

提示：(1)What was the event?

(2)How did you make it?

(3)What’s your feeling?

要求：(1)发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。

(2)发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数)。

Believe Myself, and I Will Win

Hello,

everyone!_______________________________________________________________________ ____

Thank you for your listening.

【答案】Believe Myself, and I will win

Hello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.

When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.

To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.

Thank you for your listening.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题，写一篇演讲稿。题目中用问题的形式给出了提示，审题可知，文章应包括以下内容：首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的事；然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难，最后取得成功的；最后说一下你自己的感受。写作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要，发挥自己的想象力，将这些内容补充完整，用正确的英语表达出来。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据表达需要适当发挥，但要与上下文意衔接起来。其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行表达。句式结构可以简单句为主，穿插并列句或复合句。为提升文章档次，应注意衔接词以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，写了一篇演讲稿。文章有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容安排合理，层次清晰。短文主要分成三段，每一段主题都很明确，叙述详细、清楚。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式，语法规范，用词准确。文章中句式变化丰富，有简单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章的表现力。短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。

5．书面表达

地球是我们的家园，我们作为地球的主人，就应该好好保护地球。现在正在倡导“低碳”生活，只要我们不污染地球的环境，不浪费地球的能源，就能够让我们的周围变得更绿，生活变得更美好。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？谈谈你的想法。内容应该包括以下几点：

1. 节约用水、用电；

2. 节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林；

3. 节约粮食，在更多的土地上种树；

4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；

要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；80词左右

提示词：the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式

How does our earth turn better?

The earth is our home. _______________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】How does our earth turn better?

The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?

I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won't be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don't throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.

If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。而固定结构But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

6．书面表达

在本周班会课上，同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在5点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。请你写一篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。

注意：（1）短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；

（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；

（3）词数：80-100；

（4）短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。

短文开头：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.

_______________________________________________________________________________ ____________

_______________________________________________________________________________ ____________

【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.

Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.

Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.

A few think 5 o 'clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.

I am in favor of leaving school at five o'clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。而复杂并列结构They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.和Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化；同时Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使叙述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总

结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

7．书面表达（本题15分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。为了使生活更美好，社会需要正能量（positive energy）。生活中，我们需要他人的帮助，也要学会帮助他人。请你在网上给What would you do?本期节目留言，内容包括：

1. 你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法；

2. 说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例；

3. 呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量。

作文要求：

1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。

2．语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词数。

In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop.

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【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.

The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.

In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于话题作文，描述对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法、发生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓励大家相互帮助，并让世界充满正能量。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如be for, adj enough to do, the other day, tr y one’s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one’s opinion, be supposed to, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

8．假如你是李华，你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。

要求：

1.80—120 词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考要点：

1.活动情况简介(时间、内容……);

2.遇到的困难(如：缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……)；

3.请求帮助的事项。

Dear Nick,

How’s everything going?

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Nick,

Ho w’s everything going?

Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I’m very interested in it. There are many different activation in the festival such as reading good English books. sharing good stories and so on. It’s a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don’t have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?

I expect to hear from you soon.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇书信作文。假如你是李华，你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。首先要注意书信的书写格式，文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。在写作时，要注意理顺要点，防止漏写；注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求。

参考要点：

1.活动情况简介(时间、内容……);

2.遇到的困难(如：缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……)；

3.请求帮助的事项。

9．假如你是李华，作为活动主持人，你打算邀请外教 Smith 先生来参加本周末学校开展的“英语戏剧展示”活动，请用英语给他写一封邀请函，告诉他本次活动的具体时间和地点，安排了哪些内容，以及需要他做哪些事情。

提示词语:wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos

提示问题:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show?

What are you going to do on the show?

What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show?

Dear Mr. Smith,

I'm glad to tell you there'll be an English drama show this weekend.

______________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________

We’re looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.

I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with your help.

We’re looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于话题作文，邀请外教史密斯先生参加英语戏剧展示活动。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。