《夜莺与玫瑰》两个中文版本对比

（2013）届本科生毕业设计（论文）题目 The Comparison Between Two Chinese Version of the Nightingale and the Rose In Translation Approaches《夜莺与玫瑰》两个中文版本翻译技巧之比较专业英语院系外国语学院学号姓名指导教师2014年5月《夜莺与玫瑰》两个中文版本翻译技巧之比较学生姓名：指导教师：摘要：英国著名诗人、作家Oscar Wilde的童话一向辞藻丰丽、主题深刻，给人们以极大的震撼。

《夜莺与玫瑰》因其唯美的风格和凄美的故事本身赢得了全球广大读者的青睐。

由于译者的翻译观、翻译方法等总要受到一定的社会经济、文化条件的影响，对于同一篇文章难免会有不同的理解与表达。

本文着重从翻译技巧的角度，简要比较了林徽因和王林的两个版本。

全文分两章，分别对词汇和句子结构两方面的翻译技巧作了比较，旨在分享一些个人观点并争取更多的学者参与进来以期更全面、客观而又深刻的认识。

关键词：比较、夜莺与玫瑰、词汇、句子结构The Comparison between Two Chinese Version of the Nightingale and the Rose In the TranslationApproaches of the TextUndergraduate:Supervisor:Abstract:The famous English poet and writer Oscar Wilde's fairy tales always give people great shocks for profound theme .Owing to its beautiful style and poignant story ,The nightingale and the rose wons the global readers of all ages.Translator's translation methods always influenced by certain social economic and cultural conditions, for the same article different translators have different understanding and expressions.The thesis briefly compared the two versions of Phyllis Lin and wang Lin from the perspective of translation approaches . It consists of two chapters.The first chapter focuses on the comparison of vocabulary , The second chapter focuses on the comparison of sentence structure . The purpose is to share some personal views and strive for more scholars to participate in the study to make it a more comprehensive, objective and profound understanding.Key words: comparison;the Nightingale and Rose; vocabulary; sentence componentsContents1. Introduction (4)2. Chapter One:The comparison on vocabulary ......................................... 错误！未定义书签。

2.1 The choice and conversion of word meaning ....................................... 错误！未定义书签。

2.2 The conversion of parts of speech ........................................................ 错误！未定义书签。

2.3 Addition and Omission ......................................................................... 错误！未定义书签。

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3.1.2 preposition and Postposition ........................................................ 错误！未定义书签。

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3.3.1 Transformation of parts of the sentence ....................................... 错误！未定义书签。

3.3.2 The change of the passive voice .............................................. 错误！未定义书签。

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6.Acknowledgment (13)1. IntroductionFairy tale is a narrative style based on fantasy and assisted with exaggeration, personification, etc. to express universal human desire.The famous English poet andwriter Oscar Wilde is an aestheticism advocates, the beautiful characters and delicate feelings in his fairy tale often give a person with a sweet touch and a kind of light sadness. "The nightingale and the rose" won the global readers of all ages because of its beautiful style and poignant story itself . “The nightingale and the rose"is a story beautiful but sad : a young man wanted to dance with his beloved girl very much, and the girl agreed him that as long as he bring her a red rose, she would be his dancing partner. He did not find even one red rose after searching all his garden,and his heart was almost broken.In order to realize his dream ,the little nightingale sacrificed his life to exchange a red rose. But the young man and the red rose were cruel refused by the girl as She had accepted many beautiful jewelries that minister's nephew send to her. Finally , the young student cast the red rose on the road, let the wheel roll on it.However, different translators have different understanding on things, which leads to different expressions on same things. S ince it being translated into Chinese by Hu Yuzhi in 1920 ,The nightingale and the rose has been translated by other scholars many times.This article mainly focuses on the analysis and contrast of two different versions from Phyllis Lin,an outstanding women living in Republican period and Wang Lin,an associate professor teaching in Foshan University.Generally speaking, both Lin and Wang’s translation are full of characteristics of beautiful tone.They all strive to make their translation faithfully on meaning and smooth on expression .It's a time with collision between old culture and new culture when Phyllis Lin translated the nightingale and the rose "after colloquialism emerged . As a result ,her translation is influenced strongly by classical Chinese translation.While when Mr Wang Lin translated the nightingale and the rose, classical Chinese has been away for a long time .With the development of Times, Wang's expression is more inclined to today's style.The main purpose of this thesis is to compare the approaches of these two versions on the similarities and differences, and to share some personal views .2.Chapter One:The comparison on vocabularyIn E-C translation, different translators have different ways to express vocabularies .Influenced by their times and the society they live ,they often have different understanding on meanings ,which makes a different output .2.1 The choice and conversion of word meaning2.1.1 The choice of word meaningMost English vocabularies are multivocal, we need to choose the right meaning when we translate. As a result of living in different times, Phyllis Lin and Wang Lin have different social environment and language background, which leads to adifferent choose on words .And this is an outstanding difference between the two versions .Overall , Lin chooses more classical Chinese than Wang when they translate the Nightingale and the Rose.While Wang chooses more colloquialism, Which makes an easier understanding as it is closer to our modern life.Here are some examples:Eg.1 “his beautiful eyes filled with tears”.(in Para.3)According to Lin:他秀眼里含满着泪珠。