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《外贸英语函电》 课程教学整体设计

《外贸英语函电》 课程教学整体设计

(4)实物教学法。外贸英语函电课程中涉及 很多票据、单证等,在教学中可以向学生展示 销售合同、提单、汇票、保险单等单据的原件 或复印件,让学生有个具体的认识,更易于理 解接受。 (5)案例教学法。学生通过案例能深刻记住 知识点,并能从案例中汲取经验,为今后的就 业打下基础。
八、 学习方法
1.首先明确本课程所用教材的宗旨、特点、要求、 内容提要及考核重点,才能有目的、有计划地进 行学习,收到较好的学习效果。 2.每单元学习的核心和重点在函电范文,学生应认 真研读课文,总结归纳范文中的关键词、重点句, 记诵掌握。 3.结合课文,认真学习每单元的商务英语函电表达, 理解掌握商务信函的语气、措词、层次、架构。
三、理论教学内容 (见附件1) 四、学时分配表 (见附件1) 五、考核方式和标准 本课程为非独立设立(既含理论也含实践)课程。平时成 绩占总成绩的40%,合计为平时成绩,期末成绩占总成绩 的60%。 成绩考核标准:根据学生课堂表现、出勤情况、技能测试 等加以评定,期末成绩主要通过闭卷考试形式进行评定。 六、说明 《外贸函电》是一门实践性很强的综合性应用课程。教师教 学中应注意对学生实际操作能力的培养,学习国际贸易的 具体运用,使学生边学边实践,为将来从事实际工作打下 好基础。
(2)课程目标: 本课程是为培养学生商务运作能力,特别是 书面交际、沟通能力而设置的课程,完成该课程学 生将熟练掌握国际贸易过程中往来函电的基本写作 技巧,熟悉外贸业务惯用语汇的正确表达,能在写 作中恰当运用,能够根据不同的情形处理并撰写格 式内容正确、符合商务信函要求,体现商务信函特 点的外贸业务信函,为将来从事外贸工作,运用函 电有效地进行业务联络、沟通、磋商、交易,提高 工作效率奠定坚实基础。
三、课程内容
《外贸函电》课程教学内容以国际贸易流程为主 线构建,涵盖建立业务关系、询价、报盘、还盘、 订货、支付、包装、装运、保险、索赔等磋商环 节,主要讲授信函的行文结构、外贸专业词汇及 语言文体等特点,让学生系统地学习、掌握外贸 英文函电写作及处理技能。该课程大量采用外贸 业务真实材料,着重介绍电子商务时代函电的写 作特点,强调翻译技能、商务谈判技能、国际பைடு நூலகம் 易知识在函电写作中的恰当运用。

17.《外贸函电》课程整体设计2013

17.《外贸函电》课程整体设计2013

《外贸函电》课程整体教学设计一、课程信息课程名称:《外贸函电》课程代码:G02015所属专业:国际商务学分:3学时:57授课对象:国际商务专业学生先修课程:国际贸易实务、大学英语后续课程:国际商务综合实训课程类型:职业能力必修课制定人:制定时间:2013-2-19所属系部:工商管理系二、课程设计1.课程目标设计作为国际贸易商务、商务英语专业的专业核心课程,本课程是为培养学生涉外商务运作能力,特别是书面交际、沟通能力而设置的课程,完成该课程学生将熟练掌握国际商务领域外贸交易过程中往来函电的基本写作技巧,能够根据不同的情形处理并撰写格式、内容正确,符合商务信函要求的主要往来信函,熟练处理外贸业务中的英语沟通,为将来从事外贸工作,运用函电有效地进行业务联络、沟通、磋商、交易,完成工作任务,提高外贸业绩水平奠定坚实基础。

(1)能力目标设计1)熟练的商务英语书面表达能力;2)使用英语与客户沟通,处理进出口业务;3)懂得并且掌握商务函电的正确写作;4)寻找客户能够与客户建立商务关系,推销产品;5)能完成客户的询盘与答复;6)能给客户拟定完整和有效发盘与还盘;7)能与客户协商签订合同、合同履行及订单操作;8)能与客户沟通处理合同执行过程中的支付、运输、保险等事宜;9)能妥善与客户交流处理业务投诉与索赔的相关事宜。

(2)课程知识目标1)互联网及计算机知识;2)外贸业务处理中各类信函的结构、格式和写作原则;3)外贸业务处理的常用商务词汇、术语及句式;4)外贸磋商程序中常用的英语表达;5)外贸合同的格式、内容和订单处理流程;6)外贸中货款结算、运输、保险及争端解决中的英语表达;7)国际贸易中客户业态分类相关的业务知识,词汇,术语。

(3)素质目标1)自我学习能力;2)良好职业道德和职业素质;3)与人协作能力。

2.课程内容设计序号内容学时绪论商务英语函电的写作原则、组成和格式 3工作任务1 建立业务关系 3工作任务2 外贸询盘3工作任务3 外贸报盘及还盘9工作任务 4 外贸订单及其执行9工作任务 5 外贸货款支付9工作任务 6 国际贸易货物装运6工作任务 7 国际贸易运输保险6工作任务 8 国际贸易争端处理6工作任务 9 综合实训 3合计573.能力训练项目设计《外贸函电》课程设计方案在学校专业教师和企业一线的专家共同研讨下,按照外贸业务沟通的工作内容,按照任务驱动、项目导向设计教学进度。

《外贸函电》 课程设计指导书

《外贸函电》 课程设计指导书

《外贸函电》课程设计指导书本指导书旨在为教师提供一个完整的外贸函电课程设计指导。

本课程旨在培养学生熟练掌握外贸函电制作的基本知识和技能,以及培养学生的跨文化交际能力,准备他们参与国际贸易活动。

一、教学目标1.掌握外贸函电的相关知识和技能,包括信函的结构、外贸函电的内容及其逻辑和语言组织等;2.掌握外贸函电的跨文化交际策略和技巧;3.熟悉外贸函电的格式及其使用场合;4.掌握外贸函电的非语言表达。

二、教学内容1.外贸函电的结构与内容:(1)外贸函电的结构:标题、开头、正文、结尾;(2)外贸函电的内容:商业信函及其用途、商业信函的格式及内容组织、外贸函电的语言表达及语言组织;2.外贸函电的跨文化交际策略和技巧:(1)跨文化交际的概念、特点和规律;(2)外贸函电跨文化交际的特点和技巧:语言表达、文化内涵及其文化差异;3.外贸函电的格式及其使用场合:(1)外贸函电的格式:商务函电的有关格式及其要求;(2)外贸函电的使用场合:商贸函电在国际商务活动中的应用。

三、教学方法1.采用多媒体教学和课堂讲授相结合的方法,使学生深入了解外贸函电的内容;2.采用交流分析的方法,让学生学习分析外贸函电的结构、内容和跨文化交际策略;3.采用案例分析的方法,让学生通过分析实例,熟悉外贸函电的格式及其使用场合;4.采用实践操练的方法,让学生熟练掌握外贸函电制作的基本技能,完善他们的外贸函电能力。

四、课程考核1.考查学生对外贸函电结构、内容、跨文化交际策略及其格式及其使用场合的理解;2.考查学生对外贸函电制作的技能;3.考查学生在实践操练中的表现,包括功能表达能力、文化意识能力和跨文化交际能力;4.考查学生在实践操练中的表现,包括功能表达能力、文化意识能力和跨文化交际能力。

五、课程总结本课程旨在通过多种教学方法和多种考核方式,培养学生熟练掌握外贸函电制作的基本知识和技能,以及培养学生的跨文化交际能力,准备他们参与国际贸易活动。

外贸英语函电电子教案

外贸英语函电电子教案

一、课程简介二、教学目标1. 了解外贸英语函电的基本格式和写作技巧。

2. 掌握常用外贸术语和表达方式。

三、教学内容第一部分:外贸英语函电基本知识1. 外贸函电的格式与要素2. 外贸函电的写作技巧3. 外贸术语和表达方式1. 商业询盘2. 报盘3. 还盘4. 订单确认5. 付款方式四、教学方法1. 讲授:讲解外贸英语函电的基本知识、常用术语和表达方式。

4. 作业与考核:布置相关作业,检验学生对所学知识的掌握程度。

五、教学资源1. 教材:外贸英语函电教材及相关参考书籍。

2. 网络资源:提供相关外贸英语函电的在线资料,以便学生自主学习。

六、教学安排本课程共分为10个章节,每个章节的教学时间为2课时,总计20课时。

具体教学安排如下:1. 章节一:外贸英语函电基本知识(第1-2课时)2. 章节二:商业询盘(第3-4课时)3. 章节三:报盘(第5-6课时)4. 章节四:还盘(第7-8课时)5. 章节五:订单确认(第9-10课时)6. 章节六:付款方式(第11-12课时)7. 章节七:包装与运输(第13-14课时)8. 章节八:保险(第15-16课时)9. 章节九:争议与解决(第17-18课时)10. 章节十:实战演练与总结(第19-20课时)七、教学评价1. 平时作业:占总评的30%,考察学生对所学知识的掌握程度。

2. 课堂参与度:占总评的20%,评价学生在课堂讨论、角色扮演等方面的表现。

3. 实战演练:占总评的30%,评价学生在模拟实际业务场景中的沟通能力。

4. 期末考试:占总评的20%,测试学生对整个课程内容的掌握情况。

八、教学注意事项1. 注重培养学生的实际操作能力,鼓励他们积极参与课堂讨论和实战演练。

2. 针对不同学生的英语水平,适当调整教学内容和难度。

3. 关注学生的学习进度,及时解答他们在学习过程中遇到的问题。

九、教学拓展1. 组织学生参加外贸英语函电的相关竞赛,提高他们的实战能力。

2. 邀请外贸行业专家进行讲座,分享实际工作经验和案例。

外贸函电教案(完整)

外贸函电教案(完整)

Chapter One Business Letter Writing第1章商务书信写作●Time AllotmentIntroduction (15 mins)Outline (10 mins)Main Points ( 45 mins)Supplements ( 15 mins)Afterclass Exercise ( 5 mins)●Outline:第1节商务书信的结构和格式Structure结构:1、The Heading 信头2、The Inside Address 封内地址3、The Salutation 称呼4、The Subject Heading or Caption 事由5、The Opening Sentences 开头语6、The Body of the Letter 信的正文7、The Closing Sentences 结束语8、The Complimentary Close 结尾礼词9、The Signature 签名10、The Enclosure 附件11、Postscripts 再启Layout格式:1、Indended Style 缩行式2、Block Style 齐头式/平头式3、Modified Block Style 改良的齐头式/平头式4、Semi-block Style with Indended Paragraphs 混合式Section Two Superscription第2节角标Section Three Dissimilarities in Letter Writing第3节英美书信的不同写法Supplyment 补充:Some Useful Sentences on Opening Sentences and Closing Sentences. 开头语和结束语常用例句。

●Main PointsSection One The Structure and Layout of a Business Letter第1节商务书信的结构和格式Structure 结构1.The Heading 信头2.The Inside Address 封内地址3.The Salutation 称呼4.The Subject Heading or Caption 事由5.The Opening Sentences 开头语6.The Body of the Letter 信的正文7.The Closing Sentences 结束语8.The Complimentary Close 结尾礼词9.The Signature 签名10.The Enclosure 附件11.Postscripts 再启Layout 格式1.Indended Style 缩行式2.Block Style 齐头式/平头式3.Modified Block Style 改良的齐头式/平头式4.emi-block Style with Indended Paragraphs 混合式Section Three Dissimilarities in Letter Writing第3节英美书信的不同写法1. 英式的书信格式是缩行式或混合式,而美式则是绝对平头式或改良平头。

《外贸英语函电》教案

《外贸英语函电》教案

《外贸英语函电》单元教学设计任课教师: $$$$单元教学设计基本框架第一部分:组织教学(时间:10分钟)因为本单元是该门课程的第一次课,因此本单元两节课中,第一节课我们安排是课程的概述。

通过同学都比较关心的国际贸易现状导出我们的课程教学。

第二部分:学习新内容【步骤一】说明课程教学目的(时间:15分钟)首先向学生呈现一份从网上截获的商机,要求大家仔细阅读后翻译,问学生在处理这样的信函时什么方面存在问题。

引导学生了解《外贸英语函电》课程教学的学习目的。

【步骤二】说明课程教学内容(时间:15分钟)引导学生一起回顾上学期国际贸易实务当中学到的知识,回答问题:一宗出口业务一般可以分成哪几个主要的阶段。

第一阶段:寻找贸易伙伴,建立销售渠道第二阶段:对外进行洽谈第三阶段:合同的履行结合书本的目录介绍本课程授课的内容。

【步骤三】学习新知识1、新知识导入(时间:20分钟)向学生呈现两份不同格式的英语信函,请同学结合书上的内容回答问题,从而导出我们接下来要介绍的内容:信函的格式。

2、新知识的介绍(时间:25分钟)分别介绍书信常见的几种格式和每种格式的特点。

通过范文,分别介绍一封商务信函的结构。

【步骤四】总结(时间:5分钟)我们回顾前面所学的重要知识点:信函的格式、信函的组成部分等。

单元教学设计基本框架第一部分:组织教学和复习上次课主要内容(时间:10分钟)回顾了上堂课的内容,在我们上堂课讲的例文中设计几个典型的错误让学生找出并修改,从而复习上堂课讲到的信函的构成等内容。

第二部分:学习新内容2、写信的原则【步骤一】提出问题(时间:20分钟)向学生展示两份信函:信函1:Dear John,Very many thanks to you, my dear friend, of the splendid present that you have sent me, and I feel deeply moved by this token of your affection. It is a great consolation for me, in my confinement to hospital by illness.I am glad to tell you, I am making rapid progress toward health every day.Looking forward to joining you at school as soon as possible.Yours affectionately,信函2:Dear Mr. Hunter,We hope that everything at your end is fine. We haven’t heard from you for a long time since the war broke out. We hope we could renew the business cooperation as quickly as possible.We confirm with thanks receipt of your first enquiry and look forward to your first order.Best regards,Yours faithfully,Henry让学生通过比较,发现外贸英语信函与一般信函不同点。

外贸英语函电教案

外贸英语函电教案

外贸英语函电教案一、教学目标1. 知识目标:(1)掌握外贸英语函电的基本格式和常用表达。

(2)了解外贸业务流程中的各个环节及其对应的函电写作技巧。

(3)熟悉国际贸易术语和支付方式。

2. 技能目标:(2)具备一定的听力、口语交流能力,能顺利进行商务谈判。

(3)提高跨文化交际能力,了解不同国家的商业习惯和礼仪。

3. 情感目标:(1)培养学生的团队合作精神和沟通协调能力。

(2)激发学生对外贸英语函电学习的兴趣,提高自主学习能力。

二、教学内容1. 外贸英语函电的基本格式和常用表达。

2. 外贸业务流程及其对应的函电写作技巧。

3. 国际贸易术语和支付方式。

三、教学方法1. 讲授法:讲解外贸英语函电的基本格式、常用表达、业务流程等。

2. 案例分析法:分析实际外贸业务中的函电案例,提高学生的应用能力。

3. 角色扮演法:模拟外贸业务场景,进行函电交流,提高学生的实际操作能力。

4. 小组讨论法:分组讨论,培养学生的团队协作能力和沟通协调能力。

四、教学资源1. 教材:外贸英语函电教材。

2. 课件:制作精美的PPT课件。

3. 案例资料:实际外贸业务中的函电案例。

4. 网络资源:国际贸易网站、外贸论坛等。

五、教学评价1. 平时成绩:考察学生的课堂表现、作业完成情况、团队协作等。

2. 实践作业:让学生独立完成一份外贸英语函电,检验其掌握程度。

3. 期末考试:设置有关外贸英语函电的试题,测试学生的综合运用能力。

六、教学安排1. 课时:共计32课时,每课时45分钟。

2. 教学计划:课时1-4:介绍外贸英语函电的基本格式和常用表达。

课时5-8:讲解外贸业务流程及其对应的函电写作技巧。

课时9-12:深入学习国际贸易术语和支付方式。

课时13-16:通过案例分析,提高函电写作能力。

课时17-20:进行角色扮演和小组讨论,增强实际操作能力。

课时21-24:复习巩固所学知识,进行实践作业的指导。

课时25-28:进行期末考试的复习和模拟测试。

外贸函电课程教案

外贸函电课程教案

外贸函电课程教案外贸英语函电课教案学期:2008-2009学年学时:40系(部):外国语学院教研室:专业英语教研室授课教师:安然教学⽬的:本课程是英语(⽔产贸易英语)专业的核⼼课程。

通过本课程的学习,熟悉翻译和写作外贸业务中各类书信,掌握外贸业务中英语术语、缩略语、惯⽤句型和表达⽅法。

教学⼿段:教师授课和互动式教学结合,教学⽅法:复习,导⼊,教师讲解,学⽣练习English Business Correspondence教案章节:Preface 2课时教学⽬的:掌握商务沟通的基本原则及英⽂书信的写作格式教学任务:Part One: Principles of Good Communication The Structure of Business LettersThe forms of business letters Addressing an envelope 重点、难点:1.The Three Features f Business Communication 2.The Basic Principles of Business Letter Writing 3.The three forms 4.The principles of addressing envelopes教学内容提要:The Three Features:1.It has its own special language style and words.2.It is full of business termination, abbreviations and abbreviated phrases.3.It has close connections with international business practice.The 7 c’s: consideration courtesy clarity conciseness concreteness correctness completenessThe Standard Parts: The Optional Parts:复习思考题、作业:What is the relations between EBC and foreign trade Page Ex. I课后⼩结:the unique characteristics of EBC2.The difference between social communications and EBC 3.Grasp the Standard Parts and the Optional Parts of EBC English Business Correspondence教案章节:Preface 2课时教学任务:Skill Training重点、难点:1.Arrange a letter in proper form as they should be set out in a letter2.How to write self-introduction letters教学内容提要:The Structure of Business Letters1-1T he full blocked style1-2T he modified blocked style1-3The indented style1-4The Semi-blocked style with indented-paragraphs▲open punctuation▲close punctuationAddressing envelopes : three requirements:1.accuracy2.clearness3.appearance4.Explain C/O复习思考题、作业:Page Ex. II课后⼩结:Grasp the three forms of EBCHow to fill in an envelopeWrite a letter to an exporter and address an envelopeEnglish Business Correspondence教案章节:Chapter One Establishing business relations 教学任务:Letter 6 Letter 7重点、难点:1.Self-introduction letters2.transferring business relations3.Credit inquiries教学内容提要:1.owe one’s name and address to sb/doc/fd7174a6df88d0d233d4b14e852458fb770b389d.html mercial Counsellor;s Office/doc/fd7174a6df88d0d233d4b14e852458fb770b389d.html rm sb. of sth./ inform sb. that/ be informed that4.be in a market for sth.5.textiles6.avail7.approach = get in touch with8.establish business relations with sb.9. a state-operated corporation10.h andle11.acquaint sb with sth12. be well acquainted with sth复习思考题、作业:Page课后⼩结:熟练掌握⾃荐信的写作及其惯⽤表达法。

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太原理工大学现代科技学院《外贸函电》课程设计目录方案1 全套商务信函练习(一) (1)方案2全套商务信函练习(二) (6)专业班级 国际经济与贸易10-3 学号 姓名 成绩 方案1 全套商务信函练习(一) Letter1 XIANGTAN IMPORT&EXPORT CORPORATION OVERSEA TRADING CO. 24PART STREET LONDON EC4, ENGLAND Dear Sirs, We are pleased to announce that we intend to intensify our activities in your country. We have got your name and address of Oversea Trading Co. (24Park Street,London EC4,England)from Bank of England and learned that you are in market of canned mushrooms. We avail ourselves of this opportunity to approach you for the establishment of trade relations with you. We manufacture the canned mushrooms of the kind illustrated in the enclosed catalogue. We hope they will be of interest to you.Also enclosed is our latest price list for your reference. We are confident that we shall be able to give you big orders if you would cooperate with us on delivery , price and quality . We look forward to establishing a friendly relationship with you soon . Yours faithfully , ……………………………………装………………………………………订…………………………………………线……………………………………………………………………装……………………………………订………………………………………线……………………………………………Letter2Dear Sirs,We are very please to receive your letter. We note with pleasure that you intend to develop business with us in the Canned Mushroom.We have gone through your catalogue and price list and found those goods are interested to us. We shall be pleased if your quotation also indicate the detailed information about the kind of canned mushroom available at the moment and the terms and conditions for promptdelivery and some samples as well.If your prices are reasonable and quality satisfactory, we shall conclude placing substantial orders.We will appreciate it if you reply us at early date.Yours sincerely, Letter3Dear Sirs,We have received your letter and thank your for your interest in our products. At your request, We provide the kind of Canned Mushroom details as follows:Unit price:each carton of 48 cans (US$15.00 CIF London for End Cuts, US$18.00 CIF London for Center Cuts, US$20.00 CIF London for Tips Cuts)Detail of payment: by irrevocable L/C opened in the Xiang Tan Co.'s favor with the Bank of EnglandQuantity: minimum order 1000 cartonsPacking: standard export cardboard cartonsDelivery : within 3 months of notification of receipt of sight L/CValidity of the quotations : before July, 1999Hope the offer will be satisfied with you and looking for your reply.Yours sincerely, Letter4Dear sirs,We acknowledge receipt of both your offer and the samples for the goods, and thank you for these.While appreciating the good quality of your commodities, we find your price is rather too high for the market we wish to supply. We have also to point out that the similar products are available from some other southern province in China, which are in a lower price.Such being the case, we have to ask you to consider if you can make a reduction in your price, say 5%.We hope you will see your way to granting our request.We are waiting for your early reply.Yours faithfully, Letter5Dear sirs,We confirm having received your letter that our price for the commodity is found to be on the high side and ask us to make a reduction in our price.Much to regret, we find it intolerable to comply with your request because ours is the best possible price if you take the quality into consideration. However, in order to develop our market in your place and build a long-standing relationships, we have decided to make a reduction in your price, say 5% and accept your counter-offer as an exceptional case.We hope we can conclude contract before long and await your prompt reply.Yours sincerely, Letter6Dear Sirs,We are pleased to learn form your letter that you have agreed to give a 5% discount.We have the pleasure of placing the following order with you on the terms and conditions as set forth.Unit price: each carton of 48 cans (US$15.00 CIF London for End Cuts, US$18.00 CIF London for Center Cuts, US$20.00 CIF London for Tips Cuts) Detail of payment: by irrevocable L/C in the Xiang Tan Co.'s favor withBank of England, ChinaQuantity: minimum order 1000 cartons, 800 cartons of Center Cuts and 200 cartons of End CutsPacking: standard export cardboard cartonsDelivery : within 3 months of notification of receipt of sight L/CInsurance: AAR for full invoice amount plus 10%We look forward to your prompt reply.Yours faithfully,Letter7Dear Sirs,We thank you for your letter of May 25 confirming your order for1000 cartons, 800 cartons of Center Cuts and 200 cartons of End Cuts.Unit price:each carton of 48 cans (US$15.00 CIF London for End Cuts, US$18.00 CIF London for Center Cuts, US$20.00 CIF London for Tips Cuts) We are glad you have acknowledged the order and we are very satisfied with your first order.Please execute the order in compliance with the offer immediately and confirm prompt shipment of the goods.Yours sincerely, Letter8Dear sirs,We are glad to advising you that we have instructed the Bank of England to open an irrevocable sight L/C for $1000000 in full amount of invoice value in favor of Xiang Tan Import&Exit Co. to cover the consignment of mushrooms. The credit is to be valid until June 30th. Please check our enclosed L/C to ensure that it agrees with your instructions.Your drafts must be accompanied by the following documents, which are to be delivered to us against our acceptance of the draft. Bill of Landing in triplicate, Commercial Invoice, Insurance Certificate and Certificate of Origin.Your early response is awaited .Yours faithfully , Letter9Dear Sirs,We have received your Sales Conformation and signed one of them that has been airmailed to you today.We hereby notify you that The credit is to be valid until June 30th and also authorizes you to draw at 60 days’on the bank in Xiang Tan for the amount of the invoice. We remindyou that you must present the full set of B/L, Commercial Invoice, Packing List, Certification of Insurance, Certificate of Origin and Certification of Inspectionfor negotiation.We thank you for your cooperation.Yours faithfully, Letter11Dear Sirs,We have received your L/C by the Bank of England in our favor covering the consignment of mushrooms we ordered. On perusal, we find that transshipment and partial shipment are not allowed and the last shipment date is before April 15th.As no shipping container is available prior to April 30th, we cannot effect the shipment before the deadline. We suggest the letter of credit be amended as follows, to postpone the date of shipment, please extend the validity date of the L/C and delivery of the contract to June 1st and May 5th by cable.As direct steamers to your port are few and far between, we have to ship via Hong Kong more often than not. As to partial shipment, it would be to our mutual benefit because we could ship immediately whatever we have on hand instead of waiting for the whole lot to be completed.We, therefore, are cabling this afternoon this morning, asking you to amend the L/C to read:”TRANSHIPMENT AND PARTIAL SHIPMENT ALLOWED”We would appreciate it if you will see to it that amendment is cabledwithout delay, so that we can execute your order in question.We thank you for your understanding and cooperation.Yours sincerely,方案2 全套商务信函练习(二)Letter1MR.ANDY BURNSNEO GENERAL TRADING CO., LTD#362JALANSTREET, TORONTO, CANADATEL NO.: (+01)7708808FAX NO.: (+01)7701111E-MAIL:andy@Dear Andy Burns,We have obtained your name and address from the Internet that you are interest in Chinaware. We avail ourselves of this opportunity to approach for establishment of trade relations with you.Our company, established in 1987, is a foreign trade company which has the right to import and export trade. Having a large business scope, weestablished many fixed business relationships with lots of suppliers and are reputable in the industry of chinaware. Meanwhile, we put emphasis on the new products development. Our new products in 2010, DR series chinaware, are First-class Porcelain, beautifully packaged and have superior quality, which make the product very competitive.We manufacture the chinaware of the kind illustrated in the enclosed catalogue. We hope they will be of interest to you.Also enclosed is our latest price list for your reference. Should you be interested in any of our products, please let us know and we will provide you with a quotation. In the meantime, should you require any further information about either our products or our corporation, please do not hesitate to let us know.We look forward to hearing from you soon, and to the possibility of doing business with you in the future.Yours faithfully ,Letter2Dear Minghua Zhao,We have received your letter October 12 and we thank you for your introductions. We note with pleasure that you intend to develop business withus in the Chinaware goods.We have gone through your catalogue and price list and found the DR2010, DR2202, DR2211, DR2300, and DR2401 are interested to us. We shall be pleased if your quotation also indicate the detailed information about the kind of products of DR available at the moment and the terms and conditions for prompt delivery and some samples as well.We hope it will not bring you any trouble and waiting for your reply.Yours faithfully, Letter3Dear Andy Burns,We are in receipt of your letter dated October 14, and as requested, we airmail you detailed goods description and samples.We have the pleasure to submit to you the following offer under the terms and conditions set forth below:Quantity and Price: Article No.DR2010 USD25.00 CIFC5 Toronto per set, 1000 sets;Article No.DR2202 USD28.00 CIFC5 Toronto per set, 1000 sets;Article No.DR2211 USD35.00 CIFC5 Toronto per set, 1000 sets;Article No.DR2401 USD28.00 CIFC5 Toronto per set, 1000sets.Packing: In bales or in wooden cases, at seller’s optionDelivery: within 3 months of notification of receipt of sight L/C.And this offer is valid only before November 2010Payment: by confirmed, irrevocable L/C payable by draft at sight to opened 30 days before the time of shipmentWe are awaiting your immediate reply.Yours faithfully,Letter4Dear Minghua Zhao,We acknowledge receipt of both your offer of Oct. 16th and the samples for the goods, and thank you for these.While satisfied with the result of detect of the samples, we find your price is rather too high for the market we wish to supply.Such being the case, we have to ask you to consider if you can make reduction in your price to read as follows:Article No.DR2010 USD19.00 CIFC5 Toronto per setArticle No.DR2202 USD23.80 CIFC5 Toronto per setArticle No.DR2211 USD30.00 CIFC5 Toronto per setArticle No.DR2401 USD23.50 CIFC5 Toronto per setWaiting for your immediately reply.Yours faithfully, Letter5Dear Andy Burns,We have received your returned Sale Conformation No.DTC5210 covering 1320 cases which you have been signed.We wish to draw your attention to the fact that it was the date of Nov.25th while the contract stipulated that the L/C should arrived before that day. Please do your utmost to expedite the L/C in our company’s favor, so that we may execute the order smoothly.In order to avoid sending to a wrong place, please see to it that our advising bank is the Branch of Bank of China of ShangHai, not the bank of China.We hope to receive your L/C as soon as possible.Yours faithfully, Letter6Dear Andy Burns,We acknowledge receipt of your L/C No.BWO5823684 dated Nov.23rd and thank youfor this. While after checked our enclosed L/C we found some conditions were not agree with our contract, as follows:1.The name of the commodities should be “CANNED WHOLE MUSHROOMS”instead of “CANNED SLICED MUSHROOMS”.2.The sentence of “documents presented for negotiation should include cargo receipt issued by buyers”should be removed.3.The quantity of the goods should be 1320 boxes rather than 1230 boxes.Please correct the L/C as soon as possible, so that we can do the delivery smoothly.Waiting for your amended L/C.Yours faithfully,。

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