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《雅思写作》课件-2024鲜版
《雅思写作》课件CATALOGUE 目录•雅思写作概述•雅思写作任务类型与技巧•文章结构与段落展开方法•词汇、语法和句式运用指导•观点陈述、论证和批判性思维培养•模拟试题与范文欣赏01雅思写作概述CHAPTER雅思写作考试形式与要求考试形式雅思写作考试分为两部分，第一部分为图表作文（Task 1），第二部分为议论文（Task 2）。
字数要求Task 1要求考生写至少150字，Task2要求考生写至少250字。
时间限制Task 1的建议用时为20分钟，Task 2的建议用时为40分钟。
评分标准及考生常见问题评分标准考生常见问题如何备考雅思写作熟悉考试形式和评分标准积累词汇和句型练习写作请教老师或专业人士02雅思写作任务类型与技巧CHAPTER1 2 3理解图表信息选择重要信息使用适当的语言和结构图表作文写作技巧明确观点提供充分的论据逻辑清晰030201议论文写作技巧混合题型应对策略分别应对识别题型针对不同类型的题目，采用不同的应对策略。
例如，对于包含图表和议论的题目，可以先描述图表，然后提出观点并进行论述。
整合信息03文章结构与段落展开方法CHAPTER引言段写作方法开门见山背景介绍提出疑问论证方法运用举例、对比、因果等论证方法，充分阐述主题句。
主题句每段开头明确主题句，概括该段主要内容。
过渡与衔接使用过渡词和衔接手段，确保段落间逻辑清晰、连贯。
正文段落展开策略结尾段总结技巧重申观点01展望未来02简洁明了0304词汇、语法和句式运用指导CHAPTER高级词汇选用及替换建议使用具体、生动的词汇01避免重复使用同一词汇02注意词汇的准确性和正式程度03复杂句式构造和变换技巧使用从句和复合句变换句子结构注意句子的流畅性和简洁性避免常见语法错误确保主语和谓语在人称和数上保持一致。
注意动词的时态和语态的正确使用，避免混淆。
正确使用标点符号，避免句子结构的混淆和歧义。
例如，避免使用双重否定、注意冠词的正确使用等。
雅思小作文写作教学全能版 ppt课件
图表作文的文章结构
一般分为三个部分 1. Introduction 引题 2.Describing the graph in details 主体
3. Concluding sentences 结尾
时态的使用（重要）
• 文章的起始句作为全文的介绍，说的是图表告诉（show, indicate, demonstrate, illustrate)我们什么，所以用现在时态；
表示变化程度很小、不明显
Adjectives Slight 轻微的 Slow 很慢的 Moderate 温和的
Steady 稳定的 Gradual 逐渐的
Adverbs Slightly Slowly Moderately
Steadily Gradually
• A decreasing trend in general
比例型(precentage)图表
• 百分比 • 除法、减法比较
• Bar chart, pie chart, table
表达比例常用句
The highest The greatest The lowest The most The smallest Sth. Is the
percentage of … Sth. +句子 proportion of… number of…
• 在文章的主体部分，时态的选择根据图表给出的时间信息 • 具体决定是一般现在时态、一般过去、还是一般将来。
表示趋势的常用表达
趋势变化 上升 下降
不变 波动
动词表达（过去） 名词表达
rose, increased, went up,
A rise, an increa ascended growth, an upward
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刘洪波雅思写作真经班 Grammatical Range and Accuracy
7 • uses a variety of complex structures • produces frequent error-free sentences • uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms • makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication • uses only a limited range of structures • attempts complex sentences but these tend to be less accurate than simple sentences • errors can cause some difficulty for the reader
• uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task • attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy • uses a limited range of vocabulary, but this is minimally adequate for the task • may make noticeable errors in spelling and/or word formation that may cause some difficulty for the reader
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刘洪波雅思写作真经班 Grammatical Range and Accuracy
7 • uses a variety of complex structures • produces frequent error-free sentences • uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms • makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication • uses only a limited range of structures • attempts complex sentences but these tend to be less accurate than simple sentences • errors can cause some difficulty for the reader
• uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task • attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy • uses a limited range of vocabulary, but this is minimally adequate for the task • may make noticeable errors in spelling and/or word formation that may cause some difficulty for the reader
雅思写作步骤PPT课件
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• 题目5： More and more people travel by car today, instead of using public transport. Why has this happened? How does it affect individuals and society ?
• Step4：转化成英文。
Private car use can cause air pollution. It involves fuel consumption and creates exhaust fumes.
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• Step5：使用并列句、3大从句（名词性从句、 定语从句、状语从句）进行拓展。 Private car use is a major environmental issue around the world, because it can cause air pollution. It is a habit that involves fuel consumption and creates exhaust fumes.
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Task2 作文第2步 思考观点
• 雅思作文大致可分为两种题材： 非教育类和教育类
非教育类：经济（效率；收益和成本） 科技（进步；缺陷） 社会（价值和传统观念；环境；社会关系） 个人（生活方式；基本权利；健康快乐； 行为）
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教育类： 身体健康 学习能力 社会能力和实践经验（与人相处、调节情绪等） 工作能力（动手能力、价值观和道德观、 遵守法律等）
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• e.g. Today, children appear to spend most of their free time watching TV and playing computer games. The focus of this essay is on the causes of and solutions to this problem.
雅思写作课程task1新精品PPT课件
• By 2000, nuclear power had developed into the main source.
• Nuclear power produced almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units.
范文例句
• By 2000, nuclear power had developed into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units.
line:描述数值变化的两个基本句型
hit a historic high/top the previous peak
levelled off/flattened out
a peak/plateau
reached The number of X
the highest point
the bottom reached the lowest point
范文例句 • Between these years, electricity
production almost doubled, rising from 100 units to 170 in Australia.
in December
at 200.
bottomed out/bounced back
表示超过的单词补充
1．exceed/surpass/overtake (后面直接跟数字)： The final cost should not exceed 5 million
dollars.
2．outnumber/outscore (指一种事物的数字超过另 一种数字，后面不直接跟数字)： In our office the females outnumber the males: 5 to 3.
• Nuclear power produced almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units.
范文例句
• By 2000, nuclear power had developed into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units.
line:描述数值变化的两个基本句型
hit a historic high/top the previous peak
levelled off/flattened out
a peak/plateau
reached The number of X
the highest point
the bottom reached the lowest point
范文例句 • Between these years, electricity
production almost doubled, rising from 100 units to 170 in Australia.
in December
at 200.
bottomed out/bounced back
表示超过的单词补充
1．exceed/surpass/overtake (后面直接跟数字)： The final cost should not exceed 5 million
dollars.
2．outnumber/outscore (指一种事物的数字超过另 一种数字，后面不直接跟数字)： In our office the females outnumber the males: 5 to 3.
雅思写作全解析(最全) PPT
2.8 小作文主体段顺序
2.9 小作文结尾段写法
Ending 轻松写
Ending 轻松写
• The line chart illustrates the data about people at a London subway station from 6 am to 10pm.
2.10 派图介绍
2. 小作文透析及派图解析
2.1 小作文总体审题特点
2.1.1 审题
2.1.2 构思
2.2 小作文写作必备能力
2.3 小作文考点热点
数据类图表为主导 派图：占有 线图：趋势，速度 柱图：比对 表格：数据分析
2.4 小作文综合预测
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2.5 小作文注意事项
2.6 小作文开头段写法
1.8 书写格式
1.9 评分标准说明
• Task Response • 是否涵盖要点；是否切题、合理 • Coherence and Cohesion • 句语句、段与段的衔接 • Lexical Resources • 用词的准确性和灵活性 • Grammatical Range and Accuracy • 语法多样性和准确性
1.4.1 非数据类图表题
• 9/48 19% • Map • Diagram • Flow
1.5 大作文基本情况
• 1.5.1 议论类 • 1.5.2 说明类
1.5.1 议论类
• Discuss both views and give your own opinion
• Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages • 怎样的观点“正确”？ • 怎样写顺手？
1.1.1 官方信息来源
基础雅思写作.(课堂PPT)
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➢回应写作任务过程 中始终呈现一个清晰
晰的行文推进发 展贯穿全文
的观点
➢恰当地使用一
➢呈现、发展主要论 点并就其进行论证， 但有时出现过于一概
系列衔接手段， 尽管有时使用不 足或过多
及准确性
➢多数句子准确无误
➢对一使语定用体认不及识常搭见配词有汇，➢握少对较许语好错法，误及但标有点时符出号现掌
➢在选择用词、拼
1. 雅思写作Task 2 评分标准（7,6,5）
Band Task Response
Coherence and Cohesion
Lexical Resource
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
➢addresses all
➢logically organises ➢uses a sufficient ➢uses a variety of
写及/或构词方面
而论的倾向及/或论 ➢每个段落均有 可能偶尔出现错
点缺乏重点的倾向 一个清晰的中心 误
主题
Band Task Response
Coherence and Cohesion
Lexical Resource
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
➢addresses all parts ➢arranges
作任务，但某些部 点，总体来说，能清 词汇开展写作 与复杂句式
分的论证可能比其 他部分更为充分
晰地推进行文发展 任务 ➢有效地使用衔接手段，➢试图使用不
➢在语法及标点符号 方面有一些错误，但
➢提出了一个切题 但句内及/或句间的衔 常用词汇，但 这些错误很少影响交
的观点，尽管各种 接有时有误或过于机 有时使用不准 流
雅思写作1概括指导ppt课件
Table, map
Letter （complaint,
request, apology… )
客观描 述信息 和数据
1/3
Task 2
40mins/ 45mins
>250words
议论文
说理和 论证
2/3
IELTS WRITING
Task 2
1、275——300 Ws 2、先写 3、6-8段论 4、40分钟 5、分别提升4个评分标准的得分 6、背诵个人的各专题魔版
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十大论证
大师型格
中间段写作
高分模式：连接词+分论点+论证
Initially
• 分论点1 • 论证2、3句
Moreover
•分论点2 • 论证2、3句
Ultimately
• 分论点3 • 论证2、3句
举例 解释 因果 分类 比较对比 让步转折 机构数据 反面论证 历史人物 名人名言 (详情参见讲义）
• 个人倾向 （明确！！！鼓励背诵）
• Overall (Upon the whole, By and large, On the whole, As a whole, In the mass, In general), I firmly harbor the perspective that they well deserve the top salaries.(观点）In the following essay, viewpoints supporting both sides, those for and those against, are talked over respectively in order to further assert my position.
Letter （complaint,
request, apology… )
客观描 述信息 和数据
1/3
Task 2
40mins/ 45mins
>250words
议论文
说理和 论证
2/3
IELTS WRITING
Task 2
1、275——300 Ws 2、先写 3、6-8段论 4、40分钟 5、分别提升4个评分标准的得分 6、背诵个人的各专题魔版
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十大论证
大师型格
中间段写作
高分模式：连接词+分论点+论证
Initially
• 分论点1 • 论证2、3句
Moreover
•分论点2 • 论证2、3句
Ultimately
• 分论点3 • 论证2、3句
举例 解释 因果 分类 比较对比 让步转折 机构数据 反面论证 历史人物 名人名言 (详情参见讲义）
• 个人倾向 （明确！！！鼓励背诵）
• Overall (Upon the whole, By and large, On the whole, As a whole, In the mass, In general), I firmly harbor the perspective that they well deserve the top salaries.(观点）In the following essay, viewpoints supporting both sides, those for and those against, are talked over respectively in order to further assert my position.
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The examiner’s comment:
SCORE: 5
This answer is less than 250 words and it does not address all parts of the question, so it loses marks.
What, in your opinion, should be the man function of a university?
II. 还原雅思考官评分过程
What knowledge and skills should universities provide has been argued for many years. Some people think that the true function of universities provide knowledge for their own purpose, but nowadays, more and more people point out that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills according to the workplace.
II. 还原雅思考官评分过程
Moreover, providing knowledge and skills needed in the workplace maks a university progress. The new skills and information always are initiated in the workplace, so focusing on the needs of the workplace the university could get sound strategies to do research and make it more mordenization.
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II. 还原雅思考官评分过程
Lastly, providing these knowledge and sills could benefit our country which usually gives a financial support to universities. Having these knowledge and skills, students are more easy to get a job, and this can make our countries’ economy strong.
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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
In conclusion, it can be said that providing the
knowledge and skills which the workplace needs is every
universities’ basic function.
(232 words)
II. 还原雅思考官评分过程
雅思作文四大评分标准
Task Response （任务回应） Coherence and Cohesion（一致与连接） Lexical Resource（词汇资源） Grammatical Range and Accuracy（语法范围与正确性）
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The first reason for universities should provide these knowledge and skill is the students’ needs. Obviously, the most of the students go to university purpose of is to get some knowledge and skills which could make them have the ability to get a job. If a university does not provide these knowledge and skills, the students might not get a job and they would be very disappointed. As a result, the university would lose its students.