大学英语作文.ppt
College English Writing 《大学英语写作》.ppt
2. Practice more and write more （勤写多练）
Writing is always profitable. 各种形式的写作实践：写英文日记diary、 书
信letters、 做汉译英练习translation、 写文 章摘要abstracts、 写读后感、 缩写短篇名著、 写各种命题作文compositions、 写观后感等 等。 多读胸中有本， 勤写笔下生花
6. Acronym(首字母缩略词):
WTO — World Trade Organization UNESCO; OPEC; NBA
不及物动词汇 + 介词：
depend on, rely on, insist on, concentrate on, focus on
believe in, persist in, participate in, succeed in, specialize in
and some few to be chewed and digested…（有些 书可以一尝， 有些书可以吞下， 有不多的几部书 则应当咀嚼消化， ….. 对于少数好书， 则要精读、 细读、 反复地读。）
阅读时要注意下面四点：
1）语篇结构 2）句法结构 3）词汇惯用法和固定搭配 4）英汉两种语言在表达方面的异同
do me a favor, do one’s job
acquire knowledge 获得知识
get a job
Hale Waihona Puke 获得工作 achieve success 获得成功
gain reputation 获得声誉
attain one’s end 达到目的
实用大学英语写作PPT
该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分的给低分，包括零分。
第一章节
三．评分标准
满分15分。 阅卷标准共分五档次：2分、5 分、8分、11分及14分，依作文水平可在本档次内上下浮动1分。
3.细化评分标准：
2分 --- 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
连贯性的处理
添加副标题
原因 for; as; since; now that; on account of; given that; owing to; due to; thanks to; because; because of; in that…; considering that…; seeing that…
4.字数不足酌情扣分
累计字数
110-119
100-109
90-99
80-89
70-79
60-69
50-59
低于49
扣分
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
9
四．题型把握
学习与校园生活
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社会发展变化
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常识、格言
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社会热点
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命题范围
2.命题体裁
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论说文
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记叙文
03
图表作文
04
应用文
3.作文类型模块化
对立观点型
遣词
干涩、枯燥文句的处理
are obliged to effective efficient and immediately serious / water
We should take measures against pollution. We take measures against pollution.
大学英语写作PPT课件
was out of order. I had them -all.
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2.Concluding Paragraph:
2.1 Symptoms
I followed the directions, with the happy result---speaking for myself---that my life was preserved. And is still going on.
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2.Concluding Paragraph:
2.4 The Wisdom of Socrates
–By reason of examination, Anthenians, I have made enemies of a very bitter and fierce kind, who have spread a great number of slanders about me. People say that I am a “wise man”, thinking that I am wise myself in any matter in which I believe that only God is really wise, and that by this Oracle he meant that man’s wisdom is worth little or nothing. I do not think he meant that Socrates was wise. He only took me as an example as though he would say to me. “He among you is the wisest who, like Socrates, knows that his wisdom is worth little at all.”
大学英语作文写作技巧ppt课件
• Model Presently, one phenomenon calls for people’ s attention that ____. In general, ______. For one thing, _____. (For example, _____.) For another, _____. As far as I am concerned, _____. To sum up, _____.
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Writing task
• Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below：
Recreational activities
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• P3 As college students, we should strike a balance between work and rest. Recreation is of great importance to our life, but study is our primary task. If we want to play, we need to know clearly which activities are good and which are bad. At the same time, we should exercise self-control so that we won't get addicted to some bad activities.
大学英语观点类作文模板ppt课件
句子模板英汉对照表
• 4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能 • 1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient，
possible）for sb．to do sth． • 2）We think it necessary to do sth． • 3）It plays an important role in our life．
Para.1： When it comes to…, some people think that… Para.2： Others argue that the opposite is true. Para.3： There is probably some truth to both arguments, but…
• 7）Whether we examine the ***above, such things can happens anywhere anytime to anyone.
• 8）In my point of view, I like/prefer A much more than B.
• 9）I still prefer A, however, for they teach me not only to be ***but also to
meaningful. • 15）So clear/evident/obvious it is that there are quite different
opinions on it. • 16）Now, which one do you prefer-----the one***or the
one***? Were it left to me to select, I should not hesitated a moment to choose the former/latter.
(本科)新编大学英语写作课件(全)
Handwrite
• See Rule 1,2,3,9,11,12, and 30. • Questions? • Exercise:
Try to find what is wrong in the following handwriting.
• 2. King George walked and talked an hour after his head was cut off.
Contract and number
• See Rule 13,14,15 and 16. • Questions? • Exercise:
Try to find what is wrong in the following sentences.
Eats, Shoots, and Leaves A panda walks into a bar and orders lunch….
Supplementary Reading
• In order to have a better knowledge of the basic rules for writing , please read the passages after class. supplementary Reading for basic rules.doc mainly adapted from An Intermediate Course in Writing, Li Mei, Higher Education Press, 2006
• 2.Different Views On Jane Eyre
• 3. Interpretations of Robert Frost’s Fire and Ice
大学英语作文ppt课件
School o完f整L最aw新p&ptHumanities
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@通病
structure
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@英语作文·结构
三段论
凤头（3-4）： introducing the topic/state your choice 猪肚（8-10）： analyzing the phenomenon/support your choice 豹尾（4-5）： summarizing/emphasizing/recommending
taken place, has the overall condition of humanity become better than it has been expected? (3)Technology
in essence fails to improve our lives.
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@英语作文·结构·凤头
提问式（反问句最好）
E.g. (1) Changes, most of which refer to technological innovations, have obviously enhanced the overall standard of living and comfort level of people. (2) On the other hand, while technological innovations have
everyone in the society struggles to achieve for, no matter how it is defined according to different cultures
英语作文写作旅行大学ppt讲解
Travel University: An English EssayWriting WorkshopGood day, fellow travelers and aspiring writers! Today, we embark on a journey through the enchanting world of English essay writing, a journey that we shall refer to as "Travel University." At this university, our campus is vast and diverse, stretching across the pages of countless books and articles. Our courses are as diverse as they are challenging, and our professors are the words and phrases that guide us through the intricate maze of the language.Our first stop is the Foundation Stone of Essay Writing: The Introduction. Just as a traveler needs a map tonavigate through unknown territories, an essay requires an introduction to set the tone and direction for the journey ahead. Here, we learn to craft captivating openings that draw the reader into our world and prepare them for the adventure that lies ahead.Next, we delve into the Body of the Essay: The Paragraphs. Each paragraph is a new landscape, filled with ideas, evidence, and examples that support our main argument. We explore how to build coherent paragraphs thatflow smoothly from one idea to the next, creating a seamless narrative that keeps the reader engaged and informed.As we near the conclusion of our journey, we arrive at the Destination: The Conclusion. Here, we learn to tie up all the loose ends, restate our main points, and leave the reader with a lasting impression. Just as a traveler looks back fondly on their adventures, we want our readers to reflect on our essays with a sense of fulfillment and understanding.Throughout our travels at Travel University, we will encounter challenging obstacles and breathtaking vistas. We will learn to navigate through the language, using our knowledge and skills to craft essays that are both informative and engaging. And while the journey may be long and arduous, the rewards are immeasurable.So, fellow travelers, let us embark on this exciting adventure together. Let us explore the depths of English essay writing, and discover the power of words to inform, persuade, and inspire. At Travel University, we are notjust students; we are explorers,冒险家, and storytellers. Let's begin our journey today!**旅行大学：英语作文写作工作坊**各位旅行者和有志于写作的朋友们，大家好！今天，我们将踏上一段迷人的英语作文写作之旅，我们将这趟旅程称为“旅行大学”。
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health.
E.g. Smoking is harmful to people’s health. Medical science has now proved that smoking can cause lung cancer and other diseases such as emphysema. Your chances of having a heart attack also increase the more you smoke. Smoking is definitely a health hazard.
2.段落的连贯性
一个段落除了内容统一, 意思完整之外, 句 与句之间还必须按一个清晰, 合乎逻辑的顺 序安排内容, 转折自然,结构紧凑.
Since she lost her weight, Carole has changed her image. She no longer wears dark-colored clothes. In fact, she often wears red, pink, and even bright orange. In addition to wearing bright clothes, she has lighted the color of her hair. From mousy brown, she has progressed to sun-streaked blonde.
3. 结尾句
结尾句是用一句话对段落的主题进行重 述,评论,或总结,借以强化主题,加深读者的 印象.
English is favored on the following grounds. It is the official language of a number of countries. Of other countries, it is their second language. In still others, English is spoken as their major foreign language. That’s why English is so popular in our present world.
二. 段落的基本特征
要写好段落就要清楚段落应具有的基本特征，即
统一性(unity)， 连贯性(coherence)， 简洁性(conciseness)， 重点突出(emphasis)， 用词遣句有变换(variety)
1.段落的统一性
一个段落只有一个主题。组成该段落的所有 句子都应为这个主题服务。任何与主题无关 的内容，任何不能支持段落主题的内容都必 须舍弃。例如：
大学英语作文
一. 评分原则
1. 四级作文题采用总体评分方法。阅卷 人员就总的印象给出奖励分，而不是按 语言点的错误数目扣分。
2. 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综 合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作 文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要 通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题， 是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英 语清楚而适切的表达思想，也就是要考 虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。
2. 扩展句
扩展句是用来说明，解释，引申，或论证主题句 所表达的中心思想的句子。
It is not difficult to make a right choice between buying a house in the low-rise area and buying one in the high-rise area (主题句).If we want to economize and get more personal area, we can choose the low-rise; but if we want to live more comfortably, we will choose the high-rise (扩展句). In a word, the key lies in the alternative of economy and comfort (结尾句).
Autumn is a good season for picnic. The weather is fine and it is not as hot as it is in the summer. People feel cool and comfortable. The scenery is very beautiful with all kinds of flowers here and there. And there are various kinds of fruits. The peasants begin to gather in crops and fruits.
应试技巧
一. 审题 二．提纲 三．内容 四．检查
段落写作
一．段落的组成 段落大多由三个部分组成： 主题句(Topic sentence) 扩展句（Developing sentences） 结尾句(Ending sentence)
1. 主题句
主题句表示全段 要展开的中心点,四级短文写作中最好 是把主题句放在段首 。
修改后的段落为：
Autumn is a good season for picnic. It is easy for people to choose a fine day for an outing because the weather is always nice， neither too hot nor too cold. The scenery is beautiful， too. The red leaves covering the mountains， the wild flowers booming in the fields and colorful fruits hanging on the trees are all pleasant to look at. A picnic in the open air in autumn will certainly be enjoyed by everyone.