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第一部分方法论讲解阅读在句子层面的障碍：含义语序➢简单句的障碍来源只有一套谓语的句子叫做简单句基本句型：主谓i come i saw i conquer主谓宾i love you 主谓双宾i bring a book to you 主谓宾补she makes me crazy 主系表i am a ugly man✧简单句的障碍识别及处理方法四大障碍：定语状语插入语同位语定语：在句子中修饰名词的成分叫做定语技能：高职，知识：本科，思维：研究生，思想：博士前置定语：形容词性的词+名词后置定语：前置形容词短语：形容词+介词+名词现在分词过去分词｛｝名词+. 不定式〔不定代词的定语置后〕介词短语：介词+名词表语形容词：alive a cat alive定语从句〔不属于简单句范畴〕人称代词who whom which that as +非完整句关系代词物主代词whose+完整句引导词关系连词where why when how + 完整句宾语+非完整句This is the expert to whom we are turning介词+关系代词充当状语+完整句There is something by the virtue of which the man is the man定语+完整句There are a lot of problems of which the fetching freshwater is the foremost by the virtue of=by the reason ofthat与as不能接到介词后面〔in that 引导的不是定语从句，而是状语从句表示的是because〕拆分：介词之前；找指代：关系代词指代的是前面哪一个单词；定成分：介词+关系代词在句中做什么成分同位语普通同位语：A ,B A or B A of B〔正式university of qinghua〕在句子中和名词处于相同位置的成分引导词that + 完整句；处理方法：删除插入语处理方法：删除状语：修饰动词〔谓语〕或形容词、定语副词介短现在分词其前面没有名词，有名词就是定语过去分词不定式独立主格处理方法：剥离〔隔离〕例1：Using techniques〔方法，技法〕first developed for the offshore oil and gas industry, the DSDP’s drill ship, the Glomar Challenger, was able to maintain a steady position on the ocean’s surface and drill in very deep waters, extracting samples of sediments〔沉淀物〕and rock from the ocean floor.例2：A few art collectors James Bowdoin Ⅲof Boston, William Byrd of Virginian, and the Aliens And Hamilton of Philadelphia introduced European art traditions to those colonists privileged to visit their galleries, especially aspiring 〔创造性的〕artists, and established in their respective 〔各自的〕communities社区the idea of the value art and the need for institutions〔制度〕devoted to its encouragement.➢非简单句的障碍来源：如何拆分与组合✧非简单句的障碍解决方案关联词和主句专一原则关联词：关系代词关系连词标点〔分号冒号破折号〕并列连词主句专一原则：英语主句中只有一个主句一套谓语，主句中没有关联词；n个分句就有n-1个关联词✧句子之间的关联方式：并列联词〔and , but , or , as well as ,与分号〕的用法：连接前后功能、性质、用法完全一致的成分〔对等的必须完全对等〕从后往前寻找并列成分2.嵌套：主从复合常见的复杂句形式That+完整句宾从/表从It +不及动+that+从句What+非完整句主语从句that what how why when who ……特殊的(形式主语句) It+be+形容词+that+从句主语+不及动+that+从句The sun rises that looks gorgeous 〔that引导的是非完整句则为定语从句)主语+be+形容词+that+从句The fact is true that i love you 〔that引导的是完整句则为同位语从句〕状语从句：where when because……+完整句〔要剥离，状语和状语从句在阅读时要剥离，否则要遭报应的，将同位语给删除掉，将插入语给删除掉，剩下的主谓宾是那么的可爱〕层次化句子阅读方法〔与电脑程序类似〕1.层次化结构的表示形式□□□□□□□□2.括号匹配法：保证在每个括号中都是完整的简单句〔适用于初级阶段使用〕●画左括号的条件：出现句间关联词的时候画右括号的条件：句子终结〔出现终结标点句号；后续内容与前边无关〕；出现句间并列连词Kvin is a good student 【who is studying in the BFSU 【which is a good university in china 】】Kvin ,【who is studying in the BFSU 【 which is a good university in china ,】】 is a good studentHowever , for many years , Physicists thought that 【 atoms and molecules always were much more likely to emit light spontaneously 】 and that 【stimulated emission thus always would be much weaker . 】小结区规则描述：笔记区写作方法：例3：The history of clinical nutrition or(or 连接的同位语，后面直接删除不看，不用翻译, 直接看到谓语can be) the study of the relationship between health and how the body takes in and utilizes food substances, can be divided into four distinct eras:【1 the first began in the nineteenth century and extended into the early twentieth century when 〔when 前面有名词，所以when 引导的是定语从句，when 做连词〕【2 it was recognized for the first time that 【3 food contained constituents 【4 that were essential for human function 4】3】and that 〔此that 不做成分所以和第三个that 并列〕【 different foods provided different amounts of these essential agents 〔成分〕.5】2】1】 例4：The desperate plight(困境，保证) of the South has eclipsed 〔遮盖，日食〕the fact that【 reconstruction had to be undertaken also in the North, though less spectacularly.(壮观地，引人注目地)括号内的副词不可能修饰括号外的动词】例5：The technique 方法 〔technology 翻译为技术〕of direct carving was a break with the nineteen-century tradition in which the making of a clay 〔泥土，粘土〕 model was considered the creative act 【and the work was then turned over to studio assistants to be cast in plaster or bronze or carved in marble.】例1.The impressive gain in output stemmed primarily from t he way in which workers made goods, since the 1790's, and North American entrepreneurs —even without technological improvements —had broadened the scope of the outwork system that made manufacturing more efficient by distributing materials to a succession of workers who each performed a single step of the production process. 例2． Tracking whales is but 〔=only 〕 one example of an exciting new world just opening to civilian scientists after the cold war 〔冷战〕as the Navy starts to share and partly uncover its global network of underwater listening system built over the decades to track the ships of potential enemies.例3. The fact that artisans, who were looked on as mechanics or skilled workers in the eighteenth century, are frequently considered artists today is directly attributable to the Arts and Crafts Movement of the nineteenth century.〔泛读〕 ABCBA(有里向外面翻译：CBBAA)例4：Anyone who has handled a fossilized bone knows that it is usually not exactly like its modern counterpart , the most obvious differences being that it is often much heavier.〔词本无意，意由境生〕〔逗号不能连接句子，是独立主格，通常在独立主格前面可以加with ，也可以省掉〕1 两个句子主语相同，保留主语，将句号变逗号，动词作如下变化am /is/are being was/were having beendo/does doing did having donebe done done2两个句子主语不同，保留主语，将动词做一上变化完整信息链法：不完整情况：英语句子中主干部分被隔离〔主谓隔离：主谓之间加入定语、同位语、插入语。
考研英语写作 何凯文版
考研英语写作三段论：第一段---描述图画或图表第二段---解释寓意第三段---给出评论第一段：第一句1、As is shown above , 描述图画（倒装）.There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper.报纸上有一张图画引起人们广泛的关注。
描述图画注意：第一步：寻找图画的中心事物，并确定中心事物的位置。
第二部：描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述。
第三部; 寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述。
模式：在图画中央有------(倒装)，它-------（主谓一致、现在分词、非限定性定语从句），周围有-----（独立主格作状语）第二句----总结①The picture , at the fist glimpse , seems to be simple , butonly a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficialmeaning.这幅画初看好像很简单，但是只有具有洞察力的人才能看穿其肤浅的含义。
②The author’s real purpose is not the fact itself , but tolead us to find what hides behind the ice burg.作者的真实目的不是图画本身，而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐藏着什么。
第二段第一句----观点的提出(1) The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with the重要主题 . In no country , other than china ,it has been said ,is this phenomenon more obvious .(2) The picture does revel certain disturbing socialphenomenon , that is , people tend to overlook the fact that有害主题 . ( 或 The picture does reveal that 有害主题 is notonly harmful , but also damaging .) The past decade haswitnessed a huge development in economy owing to the reform andopening-up policy carried out , bringing some problems at thesame time , with the above one being the foremost .在过去的十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国的经济有了巨大的发展，但同时带来了一些问题，上面的问题是最严重的。
考研作文何凯文
考研作文何凯文何凯文，这个名字对于中国考研界来说，无疑是一个响当当的名字。
他是一位备受尊敬的考研辅导老师，也是许多考研学子的良师益友。
在考研作文方面，何凯文也有着独特的见解和深厚的经验。
何凯文老师是一位资深的考研英语辅导老师，他对于考研英语的命题规律和写作技巧有着深入的研究。
他独创的“黄金模板”写作法，就是一种非常有效的考研英语写作备考方法。
这种方法旨在帮助考生在短时间内掌握考研英语写作的技巧，提高写作水平。
本文黄金模板”是一种具有高度概括性的写作模板，它能够帮助考生在写作时快速构思出文章的结构和内容。
考生只需要根据模板填充具体的观点和论据，就可以完成一篇高质量的作文。
这种方法不仅节省了考生的时间，还提高了作文的质量。
除了“黄金模板”法，何凯文老师还提倡考生在备考期间多读、多写、多练。
考生可以通过阅读英文文章、写作练习等方式来提高自己的英语写作水平。
同时，何凯文老师还强调考生在写作时要注重语言的准确性和表达的地道性，这样才能真正提高自己的英语写作能力。
在考研作文方面，何凯文老师的辅导书籍也是非常值得推荐的。
他的《考研英语写作突破》一书，详细讲解了考研英语写作的技巧和策略，同时还提供了大量的写作练习题和参考范文。
考生可以通过这本书的学习，全面了解考研英语写作的要点和难点，从而更好地备考。
何凯文老师是中国考研界的一位杰出人物，他的考研作文辅导方法和书籍都非常值得考生借鉴和学习。
无论大家是即将参加考研的考生，还是想要提高英语写作水平的英语爱好者，都可以从何凯文老师的教学中获得收获和启示。
在考研英语学习中，词汇的学习是必不可少的部分。
而何凯文老师作为考研英语辅导的知名人物，他的词汇教学对于考生来说具有重要的意义。
本文将从何凯文老师的词汇教学特点、方法、技巧等方面进行探讨，以期为考生提供一些参考。
一、词汇教学特点何凯文老师的词汇教学注重实用性和针对性。
他主张考生在备考过程中应该将重点放在高频词汇上，而对于低频词汇则可以简单了解即可。
何凯文基础写作课知识点整理
何凯文考研英语写作基础课程知识点整理主讲：何凯文整理：心理守夜人一、作文构成：（一）应用文10分，分为书信和告示两大类，考生平均分6分，我们的目标是8分。
（二）议论文20分，分为图画作文（一般是英语1）和图表作文（一般是英语2），考生平均分8分，我们的目标是14+分。
议论文的分值包括奖励分（3分）基准分（17分）。
奖励分要求：正确、正规、可读；基准分要求：内容、形式、语言（最重要）。
二、奖励分书写要求（一）书写工整（很重要）（二）标点规范1.句号为一点2.逗号不能连接两个句子3.不能写书名号，可用the book of+书名（首字母大写）代替4.引号””5.括号( )6.破折号—7.如&等标记不建议使用（三）修改正确1.如需修改可使用/划掉错误的词，在正上方写上正确的词即可。
2.如需添加，可用两单词空格下方加”^”，并在上方加相加的词即可。
三、基准分（一）内容1.有话说：万能角度（见2017写作高分攻略P55），万能例子。
2.别跑题：内容趋同，先字后图（二）形式：分三段（三）语言1.句式：正确、复杂、多变2.用词：正确、多样3.如何做到句式正确？(1).句子主干正确(2).五大基本句型：动词的用法(3).写作时态：现在时为主，偶尔用将来时，不主张过去时。
4.如何做到句式复杂(1).加adj或adv：n+adj；v+adv(2).加同位语：n或者句子(3).加介词短语做状语：时间状语，地点状语(4).加定语从句(5).将两个句子写成一个句子Note：万能状语(1).The spirit of creation is indispensably(=very) important in the times of knowledge explosion,when the news,facts,opinions and even rumors have been bombarding us from every corner of the world.(2).The environmental preservation really matters,especially in China,a nation with the huge population undergoing the remarkable rapid economic growth.5.如何做到句式多变(1).虚拟语气=观点的表达方式而不是事实句式一：It is high time that+主语+动词过去式+其他It is high time that we took effective initiatives to put the situation on hold. 句式二：It is imperative that +主语+(should)+动词+其他.意为必须做...It is imperative that our media undertake more research before they set pen to paper.It is imperative that corresponding laws and regulations be introduced and enforced to curb and harness this urgent problem.句式三：虚拟条件句If there were no sth,sb would not do sth.If there were no reform and opening-up policy,we would not taste KFC orMcDonald’s.（如果能完整无误地拼写专有词汇比如人名、书名、商标名等，会给阅卷老师留下好印象。
2013何凯文写作强化班上课同步笔记
分段 段落安排合理 永恒的三段论 各段句子数量和字数推荐 2~4；4~9；3~4 30~60；100~120；30~60
三 语言是最高要求
语言需要一定的行文逻辑
考研写作题型深度剖析 第一段：Describe 第二段：Interpret 第三段：Comment/example(s)
虚拟语气法（强调结论和观点）
如果没有改革开放政策,我们可能根本吃不到麦当劳或者肯德鸡。 If there were no reform and opening-up policy, we would never taste McDonald's or KFC. 如果没有希望工程，那些孩子将永远接受不到宝贵的知识。 If there were no Project Hope, those would never taste the precious knowledge. 如果情况继续恶化下去,我们将付出更加昂贵的代价。 If the situation were to continue, as it is we would pay a high price. 好的主题 如果没有...，我们可能根本做不了... Were there no sth, never would we do sth. 不好的主题 如果情况继续恶化下去，我们将付出更加昂贵的代价。 Were the situation to continue as it is, we would pay the high price. Were the tendency to continue as it is,our future generation would not bother to think of excuse for us.
四级六级复习何凯文老师四六级冲刺讲座资料汇总版5篇
四级六级复习何凯文老师四六级冲刺讲座资料汇总版5篇第一篇：四级六级复习何凯文老师四六级冲刺讲座资料汇总版关键字：何凯文老师四六级考试冲刺汇总前话：相信很多人都看了何老师的视频，但是苦于手头没有那份资料。
下面的是我整理的何老师讲的内容要点，希望对你有所帮助。
听力短对话1主题思维一个提出主题，另一个人回答否定回答居多四个选项是非完整句时，答案肯定来自于第一个人四个句子是完整的句子，那么第二个人比较重要否定思维听到什么不选什么长对话预览选项边听边选考查抓信息要点原文重现同义替换抓住首尾句抓住一问一答，不关注对于同一问题的看法能直接选的直接选，不能直接选画x，不对的直接画×抓主题快速阅读考查的是定位能力，细节。
不考主题。
利用题干关键字定位。
今念考四选一主观题尽量原文重现，会同义替换写作控制型写作语言内容结构迎合老师内容趋同最保险最接近大众的想法三段论内容预测：考前一周看何凯文博客结构预测：正反对比社会热点语言预测：常见句型表达句式多变多样恰当多样：上下异法词比如写the computer 往上 machine invention 往下 PC 同义 my babyThe Internetnet inventiontechnologythis wonder多变：句式 my Lenovo倒装同位语插入语非谓语动词否定比较Ratherthan 除去万能开头句：in no country（单数）rather than china, it has been said, is the problem of environment more serious.WTO ,PC 什么的直接用会扣分。
第一次写的时候先把全名写出来，再（WTO）主谓隔离，敢于在主谓中放东西阅读主题定位句子理解主题句常常在文章出现柳暗花明开门见山主题词出现频率最高的次纠结选项的时候主题为主合理做题顺序：写作（25——）30看能不能拿到快速阅读试卷快速阅读15（——20）听力主观题能写多少算多少指示阅读 20翻译短文回答 5完形不考改错最后5个题的答案BCACD（大于两个是正确的）考研题英语不会选AEnergy conservation 环保有ABCD各一个基本第二篇：Abyoec2011英语四级六级冲刺生活需要游戏，但不能游戏人生；生活需要歌舞，但不需醉生梦死；生活需要艺术，但不能投机取巧；生活需要勇气，但不能鲁莽蛮干；生活需要重复，但不能重蹈覆辙。
2017何凯文词汇笔记整理
词汇精讲笔记整理2016.4.15 词汇学习的三个重点：（1）正确的方向；（2）多样的方法；（3）科学地计划。
一、正确的方向（一）必考词义1. impossibly=veryIt is an impossibly unpopular behavior. →这是一个非常不受欢迎的行为。
2.unseemly behaviorunseemly 不雅的=unethical 不道德的→ethical 有道德的unseemly →decent 优雅的（反义词）礼貌的：courtesy=decentEg. As a courtesy to the next passenger, may we suggest that you wipe off the wash basin.为了方便下一个乘客，我们建议你清洁洗手池。
3.fashion v.推广fashion policy/laws4.exceptional优秀的 = brilliant, great, well accepted → mediocre 一般、平庸exceptional child 智障pare、contrast、comparison（1）compare v.比较（找出相同点）contrast v.比较（找出相同点）（2）词性：contrast、comparison为名词6.intelligence与intellectual（1）intelligence n.智力；智商；情报→指“智力、智商”时特指天生的/先天的智力Central Intelligence Agency （美国）中央情报局，简称 CIA （2）intellectual adj.有智力的n.知识分子→指后天从知识中获得的智力intellect n.知识分子；智力intellectualism n.知识主义→ anti-intellectualism反智主义（“智”指后天知识）☆：后缀“ism”表示“……主义；……论”7.push n.进取；向上passion（激情）, work（刻苦）, focus（专注）, push（强迫）, ideas（点子）, improve（精通）, serve（服务）,persist（坚持）——《Richard.St.John谈成功是趟持续的旅程》8.weather v.克服 eg. weather financial crisis 克服金融危机9. overlook忽视overrate 高估overestimate 评估词汇精讲笔记整理10.knowledge n.了解In the times of knowledge explosion…在知识爆炸的时代（写作词汇）eg. The habits of consumers have been recorded by the browsers without their knowledge.browser n.浏览器without one’s knowledge 在某人不知情的情况下11.profile high-profile = much-publicized adj.高调的（人）；引人注目的（事）low-profile adj.低调的12.approach n.研究方法（=method=way）v.接近approach study 方法论研究13.discipline n.教训；学科；纪律 v.惩罚14.game n.猎物15.spell①拼写；②导致（A has spelt B A导致了B)；③咒语；④一段时间Despite a spell of initial optimism in the 1970s …尽管在 1970 年代早期有过一段乐观的时间initial 早期optimism 乐观→ pessimism 悲观16.edge 优势eg. To gain competitive edge, in the times of knowledge explosion, we should have good command of … →在知识爆炸的时代，要想获得竞争优势，我们应该掌握……【写作万能句】command 掌握17.school n.学派Chicago School 芝加哥学派→“需了解经济学和法学的基础知识”18.cause n.事业great cause 伟大事业misguided cause 误导人的事业→ misguided误导人的（前缀“mis”意为错误；guided意为“…引导的”）19.content内容→ delivery表达方式20.contend主张 = believe = argue21.suspect与doubtsuspect = believe →doubt = don’t believe22.code规则 moral code道德准则词汇精讲笔记整理23.odd①古怪 = strange ；②临时→ odd staff 临时工= low-level staff；③几率→ eg. The odd has jumped eight folds.几率翻了8番24.blame（1）A blames B. A指责 B（2）A is to blame for B原因A负面导致了结果B【例句1】That is not to saythat sth alone is to blame for the sorry state of affairs.这并不是说某物是造成这一遗憾局面的唯一原因。
考研英语-何凯文写作笔记
考研英语-何凯文写作笔记1. Just as an old Chinese proverb says ：Aspire to inspire untilI expire! 正如中国一句古老的谚语：生命不息，奋斗不止！2. Simple as the picture is, the meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.尽管图画很简单，但寓意很深刻苦。
3. The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took effective measures to tackle this problem. 问题如此严重了，是时候采取有效的措施去解决这个问题了。
4. It is imperative that laws and regulations be introduced and enforced to curb and harness this urgent problem.我们必须制定（work out）并执行一些法律法规（laws and regulations）来解决这些问题。
5. In no country other than China, it has been said, is the problem of environment more serious. 在中国环境问题是最严重的。
6. There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper. 报纸上有一张图画引起了人们广泛的关注。
7. The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owning to the reform and opening-up policy being carried out, bringing some problems at the same time, with the following one being the foremost.在过去的十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国经济有了巨大的发展，同时也带来了很多问题，其中最重要的是…成功的品质、环保类、爱心和社会道德、文化交流、科技与传播、偶像崇拜、健康话题、学校话题作文三段要求：第一段：描述图画（describe）①万能开头句：There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper. 报纸上有一张图画引起了人们广泛的关注。
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何凯文考研英语写作基础课程知识点整理主讲：何凯文整理：心理守夜人一、作文构成：（一）应用文10分，分为书信和告示两大类，考生平均分6分，我们的目标是8分。
（二）议论文20分，分为图画作文（一般是英语1）和图表作文（一般是英语2），考生平均分8分，我们的目标是14+分。
议论文的分值包括奖励分（3分）基准分（17分）。
奖励分要求：正确、正规、可读；基准分要求：内容、形式、语言（最重要）。
二、奖励分书写要求（一）书写工整（很重要）（二）标点规范1.句号为一点2.逗号不能连接两个句子3.不能写书名号，可用the book of+书名（首字母大写）代替4.引号” ”5.括号( )6.破折号—7.如&等标记不建议使用（三）修改正确1.如需修改可使用/划掉错误的词，在正上方写上正确的词即可。
2.如需添加，可用两单词空格下方加”^”，并在上方加相加的词即可。
三、基准分（一）内容1.有话说：万能角度（见2017写作高分攻略P55），万能例子。
2.别跑题：内容趋同，先字后图（二）形式：分三段（三）语言1.句式：正确、复杂、多变2.用词：正确、多样3.如何做到句式正确？(1).句子主干正确(2).五大基本句型：动词的用法(3).写作时态：现在时为主，偶尔用将来时，不主张过去时。
4.如何做到句式复杂(1).加adj或adv：n+adj；v+adv(2).加同位语：n或者句子(3).加介词短语做状语：时间状语，地点状语(4).加定语从句(5).将两个句子写成一个句子Note：万能状语(1).The spirit of creation is indispensably(=very) important in the times of knowledge explosion,when the news,facts,opinions and even rumors have been bombarding us from every corner of the world.(2).The environmental preservation really matters,especially in China,a nation with the huge population undergoing the remarkable rapid economic growth.5.如何做到句式多变(1).虚拟语气=观点的表达方式而不是事实句式一：It is high time that+主语+动词过去式+其他It is high time that we took effective initiatives to put the situation on hold.句式二：It is imperative that +主语+(should)+动词+其他.意为必须做...It is imperative that our media undertake more research before they setpen to paper.It is imperative that corresponding laws and regulations be introduced andenforced to curb and harness this urgent problem.句式三：虚拟条件句If there were no sth,sb would not do sth.If there were no reform and opening-up policy,we would not taste KFC orMcDonald’s.（如果能完整无误地拼写专有词汇比如人名、书名、商标名等，会给阅卷老师留下好印象。
）If there were no Hope project,those children in remote area would nottaste the precious knowledge.Were there no the self-confidence,the youngster would not taste the realhappiness of the success.(2).倒装句式一：部分倒装：是指将谓语动词的一部分如助动或情态动词置于主语之前。
否定词或only或带有否定含义的状语被置于句首，会引起句子的部分倒装。
Only in this ways can we put the situation on hold.I think that...=No thinking man would refuse to accept the idea that...句式二：完全倒装：是指将句子中的谓语动词全部置于主语之前。
通常只用于一般现在时和过去时。
主系表倒装为表系主On the stage stands a man.In the sunshine stands a young tree.系动词：be,exist come,go,stand,sit,run,walk,lie,swim,fly.In the greenhouse stands a delicate flower.(3).As引导的从句As做代词时+定语从句As做连词时+状语从句As is shown above,...如上所示As we all know,...众所周知As you are old（状语从句）,...当你老了(4).省略句并列引起省略，省略相同的成分状语从句的省略：例1：When removed out of the shelter,the flower can not weather the storm.例2：We need more drastic/dramatic measure to stop the environment moving further to the sorry state that it already has in the past three decades.(5).other than和rather than之类的插入语例1:I am the best teacher.I,rather than any else,am the best teacher.No one,other I,is the best teacher.例2:否定+比较级=最高级The problem of environment is the most serious in China.The problem of environment is more serious in no country other than China.In no country other than China,it has been said that（据说）,is the problem of environment more serious.(6).综合运用：The education is very important now.The stakes involving education have been the highest now.The stakes involving education have never been higher in any era of our nation than now.Never/in any era of our nation/ have/ the stakes involving education beenhigher/ than now.In no country other than China,according to a survey,is the phenomenon ofcultural exchange more obvious.In no domain other than family education,according to a survey,is the effect of role model more evident.（四）用词如何做到多样(1).替换very：同源修饰indispensably importantSignificantly importantGracefully beautiful(2).and the like：意为等等，替换陌生词。
(3)adj转折修饰使文章更加有思辨色彩，见写作高分攻略P127。
(4).反复取非P127。
(5)重视积累P121(6)重复和押韵Survival and successIntroduce and enforceBeauty and BeastAspire to inspire until I expire.四、考研英语写作逐段展开第一段：描述图画第二段：阐释寓意第三段：给出评论/例子（一）第一段的逐句展开（2~3句）第一句：图画描述句第二句：图画影响句（引起了关注）第三句：图画意义句（意义很深刻）第一句的写法：如上所示：As is shown above,用完全倒装描述中心对象的位置，用非谓语动词或定语从句描述中心对象的动作或状态，用独立主格结构描述周围事物或中心对象的某一部分。
(1).As is shown above,on the stage stands a handsome and gentle but reasonable man,holding the microphone and giving the impressive lecture,with his excellent students taking notes and involving in the interaction positively.(2).As is shown above,in the sunshine stands a pretty American girl,who is in the traditional Chinese costume wearing the ear-rings and the like,with sweet smile on her delicate face.P47Note:配图文字的处理1.不处理2.处理(1).用独立主格+直接翻译...,with a line going like this:......,with the caption reading that:...(2).用谚语的方式另写一句P182、185Just as an old proverb says,...第二句的写法：1.The great concern among the public has been aroused by this picture.2.The picture captures the great attention and abundant imagination on weibo,a popular social media in our country.3.The picture has stimulated a heated discussion on the wechat,a popular social network these days.4.The topic illustrated in the picture will make good copy in the newspaper.5.People are drawn by the truth disclosed by this picture.6.The public is astonished by the bitter truth revealed by this picture.第三句的写法：（意义句）深刻1.Simple as the picture is,the symbolic meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.2.Simple as the picture is,the author intends to convey (much more) complicated and profound meaning (than what we may sense at the first glance.)3.The drawing truly displays a status quo（现状）that is worthy of our attention.4.This carries a profound message that demands our devoted attention and instant action.5.We cannot afford to turn a blind eye to the problem highlighted by this picture.（二）第二段的逐句展开平行展开法因果展开法举例法科学论据法（三）第三段的逐句展开1.你的评论负面话题：解决方案正面话题：展望(1).Finally,a youngster who aspires to embrace the glorious future must commit thetime and energy without any hesitation.(2).He must be a person who is positive and brave enough to make short term sacrifice for long term success.(3).The future has arrived.(4).It commences now.。