高中英语人教版必修二学案：Unit 4 Writing

Writing

如何写建议信

建议信一般采取三段式结构：

(1)首段：针对对方对自己的信任简单地表示感谢，也可以表明自己的意图。

(2)主体段：围绕对方的困惑、烦恼等问题，用委婉的语气提出自己的建议或看法。注意要充分考虑对方的实际问题，选择适当的语言，切忌措词生硬呆板，也不要泛泛而谈。

(3)末段：表达希望自己的建议能被采纳及对方的问题能够得到解决的愿望。

[典型句式]

★首段常用的表达：

I am writing to share some advice with you．

I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble in...

You have asked me for my advice on...

I am writing to express my views on/concerning...

You have asked for some advice concerning...and I will try to give you my suggestions．★提出建议时常用的表达：

In my opinion, it would be beneficial if...

In my view, it would be wise to...

I suggest that you (should)...

I am afraid you'd better...

I would like to suggest/recommend that...

If I were you, I would...

★末段常用的表达：

I hope you will find these proposals(suggestions/tips) practical/useful/helpful．

I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in detail if necessary．

I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions．

In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful．

假定你是一名中学生，名叫王林，打算写信给21st Century的编辑，反映目前滥养宠物的问题。你认为宠物过多噪音扰民，污染环境；你周围许多人尤其是小孩都曾经被吓到或被咬伤过；宠物甚至会导致某些疾病的传播。所以你希望得到媒体的关注和支持。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：居民resident；污染环境pollute the environment

[写作要点]

第一段：提出要反映的问题，开门见山，直奔主题。

第二段：按照顺序，分析要反映的问题的原因。

第三段：结尾提出自己的要求以引起关注。

范文示例

Dear editor，

①I'm a middle school student, Wang Lin．②I'm writing to tell you something about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays．

③I consider the problem more and more serious for the following reasons．④First of all, as is known to all, pets make so much noise that they trouble residents a lot．⑤What's more, it's widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment which makes people quite uncomfortable．⑥Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even sometimes bite people．⑦The most important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention．

⑧Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for this．

Yours truly，

Wang Lin,

亮点点评

之间过渡自然，连接紧密，开头结尾描述全面。

亮点二：文中句④用了so...that状语从句；句⑤it's widely accepted that为主语从句；句⑦用了表语从句；这些复合句的恰当运用使文章上了一个层次，体现了作者的基本功。

亮点三：使用连接词first of all(句④)，what's more(句⑤)使文章更条理化、层次化。

假如你是李华，上周日去动物园，看到游客对动物乱扔石子甚至往一头熊的头上泼水，对此你感到非常气愤。现在请你用英语就此事给某报社编辑写封信，并提出你的建议，请求该报呼吁人们保护和爱护动物。

注意：词数100左右。

【参考范文】

Dear Editor，

Here I write to tell you about my experience in the zoo last Sunday．I feel terribly sorry and ashamed of what people did to the animals．