年高考英语二轮复习 第三部分 写作训练篇 专题5 短文改错 第2讲 句法类错误课件.pptx
高考英语二轮复习 专题五 短文改错 第2讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误课件.pptx
【真题例析 1】(2016·全国卷Ⅰ) My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. 答案：that→where 解析：考查宾语从句。此处表达的是“靠近我所住 的地方”，故需将 that 改为 where。where 在此引导宾 语从句，并在从句中作地点状语。
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【真题例析 1】(2016·全国卷Ⅰ) Though not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our area. 答案：去掉 but 解析：考查行文逻辑错误。从属连词 though(虽然) 不能与并列连词 but 一起使用，故去掉 but。
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句法类错误设置重点考察基本句法知识，包括句子 成分的划分，句子结构分析及连词的用法，特殊句式的 基本结构及其用法等，要求考生有一定的复合句结构分 析能力和辨别能力。行文逻辑错误设置重点考察对短文 前后逻辑语义的把握能力。
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技巧 1 短文改错题涉及时态的考查点通常为： (1)一般现在时和一般过去时的混用； (2)短文中时态的使用前后不一致； (3)在特定语境条件下时态的误用(含有状语从句的 复合句，主句用将来时态，而从句中则用一般现在时态)； (4)有时也涉及对其他时态的考查。
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专题五 短文改错
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第 讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误
高考英语短文改错常见的句法错误有动词的时态、 语态错误，非谓语动词使用错误，主谓一致错误，名词 性从句、定语从句和状语从句等三大从句出现的错误以 及句子成分的赘余等。还有语气的误用，主要体现在虚 拟语气的误用、主从句语气不一致等。这些错误通常与 句子成分的分析紧密相关，所以难度较大。行文逻辑错 误主要设置连词、代词和否定词。
高考英语二轮专题复习短文改错题库(精选75篇)
绝密★启用前2014-2015学年度学校3月月考卷试卷副标题注意事项：1．答题前填写好自己的姓名、班级、考号等信息 2．请将答案正确填写在答题卡上第I 卷（选择题）请点击修改第I 卷的文字说明 一、单项选择（题型注释）二、完形填空（题型注释）三、阅读理解（题型注释）试卷第2页，总81页第II 卷（非选择题）请点击修改第II 卷的文字说明 四、单词拼写（题型注释）五、短文改错（题型注释）1．请修改下面的短文。
短文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2 只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。
In China, people and giant pandas had been living together for thousands of years. But China ’s human population has been great growing. More population means more land is needed for farming. It also mean more forests are cut for wood to build and heat houses. Loss of habitat in lowland areas has forced pandas live only in the mountains. The most damaged result of development has been that it has divided the panda ’s habitat into little islands of forest. Today, many panda are isolated in these small sections of forest, because of they will cross into areas which people live. The result is that the giant pandas can connect with one another to mate and have babies.Besides, to our relief, there is still some good news that people are trying to help the giant pandas by creating protected areas. 【答案】【小题1】had-- have【小题2】great-- greatly 【小题3】mean--means 【小题4】live 前加to【小题5】damaged --damaging 【小题6】panda-- pandas 【小题7】of 划掉【小题8】which--- where / in which/ live 后加in 【小题9】can--can ’t /cannot 【小题10】Besides --However 【解析】【小题1】一个动作表示持续到现在，还会持续下去用现在完成进行时，had-- have 。
高考英语二轮复习专题五短文改错(含解析)
专题五 短文改错训练1AAt present ，I am extreme happy because I am doing what I like.As a senior three student ，I study hard every day and live it at the full.It feels like good to study hard with my determining classmates to fulfill our dreams.When I recalled the happy things happened to me ，the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped it all.It was a time when my family is going through financial difficulties.So I made up my mind to win the scholarship ，hoped to lighten my parents' financial burden.After making tons of painstaking effort ，I succeeded.At the ceremony ，my mum was the most poorly －dressed woman ，and with the brightest smile on her face.答案：At present ，I am extreme extremelyhappy because I am doing what I like.As a senior three student ，I study hard every day and live it at to the full.It feels good to studyhard with my determining determinedclassmates to fulfill our dreams.When I recalled the happy things happened to me ，the experience of my receiving the scholarshipin middle school topped it them all.It was a time when my family is wasgoing through financial difficulties.So I made up my mind to win the scholarship ，hoped hopingto lighten my parents' financial burden.After making tons of painstaking effort efforts，I succeeded.At the ceremony ，my mum was the most poorly －dressed woman ，and yet/butwith the brightest smile on her face.BOn September 29，the students in our class paid visit to China Science and Technology Museum.At 8：00，we leave for China Science and Technology Museum by school bus.At 8：30，a guide introduced them to us briefly and told us how we should pay attention to during our visit.Ten minutes later ，we were divided into five groups but began our separate visit.Some students took notes carefully as if they visited.All the students were amazing at the rapid achievements in science andtechnology.Three hours had gone by after we knew it.At 11：30，we returned to our school.This visit not only broadened my outlook but also aroused my greatly interest in science and technology.答案：On September 29，the students in our class paid visit to China Science andTechnology Museum.At 8：00，we leave left for China Science and Technology Museum by school bus.At 8：30，a guide introduced them it to us briefly and told us how whatwe should pay attention to during our visit.Ten minutes later ，we were divided into five groups but and began our separate visit visits.Some students took notes carefully as they visited.All the students were amazing amazedat the rapid achievements in science and technology.Three hours had gone by after beforewe knew it.At 11：30，we returned to our school.This visit not only broadened my outlook but also aroused my greatly great interest in science and technology.CThis morning ，I was jogging in the park when I caught the sight of a wallet on a bench.I picked up and checked the contents.Inside it ，I found some money or a card with a phone number.Believe that the owner would be worried ，I immediately tried the number.A man answered it in an amazing voice.Hearing that I had his wallet ，he sighs with relief and told me he would return right away.Ten minutes late ，the man arrived.After confirming he was an owner ，I handed the wallet back to him.With his thumb up ，he expressed his gratitude to me repeated.Seeing the smile on her face ，I felt happy that I was able to help.答案：This morning ，I was jogging in the park when I caught sight of a wallet on a bench.I picked up and checked the contents.Inside it ，I found some money or anda card with a phone number.Believe Believingthat the owner would be worried ，I immediatelytried the number.A man answered it in an amazing amazed voice.Hearing that I had his wallet ，he sighs sighed with relief and told me he would return right away.Ten minutes late later ，the man arrived.After confirming he was an theowner ，I handed the wallet back to him.With his thumb up ，he expressed his gratitude to me repeated repeatedly.Seeing the smile on her hisface ，I felt happy that I was able to help. DWhen it comes to the TV ，there will be different word in different people's minds.Some people think that watch TV is a good way to relax.Firstly ，we can broaden our horizons or know more about the world by watching latest news and reports.Secondly ，watching TV is a good way to kill our spare time.Finally ，we can predict that may happen in the future and be prepared.Therefore ，every coin has its two sides.There is also disadvantages of watching TV.Not only do it do harm to our eyesight ，but it also has a bad affect on our studies and everyday life.Definitely ，TV plays a big role in our life.We should treat to it in a right way.答案：When it comes to the TV ，there will be different word wordsin different people's minds.Some people think that watch watchingTV is a good way to relax.Firstly ，we can broaden our horizons or and know more about the world by watching latest news andreports.Secondly ，watching TV is a good way to kill our spare time.Finally ，we canpredict that whatmay happen in the future and be prepared. Therefore However ，every coin has its two sides.There is arealso disadvantages of watching TV.Not only do does it do harm to our eyesight ，but it also has a bad affect effecton our studies and everyday life.Definitely ，TV plays a big role in our life.We should treat it in a right way.训练2AMy name is Li Hua.I was born in Qingdao ，Shandong Province on February 1995.I started the school in 2001 when I was six.I studied happy in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007.After that I went to No 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate last summer.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese ，maths ，English ，physics ，chemistry and computer.I like English and computer best but I am very good at st year I winned first prize in the school computer competition.In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stamp.My favourite sports is swimming in summer and skating in winter.答案：My name is Li Hua.I was born in Qingdao ，Shandong Province on in February 1995.I started school in 2001 when I was six.I studied happy happily in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007.After that I went to No 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate graduatedlast summer.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese ，maths ，English ，physics ，chemistry and computer.I like English and computer best but andI am very good at it them .Last year I winned wonfirst prize in the school computer competition.In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stamp stamps .My favourite sports is areswimming in summer and skating in winter. BOne day ，I was walking home after school when an old man fell heavy onto the snow －covering road.Many people passed by ，and no one took action.Some of them said it was none of their business ；others worried that if they helped him ，they might got into a difficult situation.Seeing what had happened ，I called 120 immediately.While waiting the ambulance ，I took down my coat to keep the old man warm.In no time did the ambulance came.Having helped the doctors carry him into an ambulance ，I felt relieved.In my opinion ，this is our duty to help those who are in troubles.答案：One day ，I was walking home after school when an old man fell heavy heavily onto the snow －covering snow －covered road.Many people passed by ，and butno one took action.Some of them said it was none of their business ；others worried that if they helped him ，they might got getinto a difficult situation.Seeing what had happened ，I called 120 immediately.While waitingthe ambulance ，I took down off my coat to keep the old man warm.In no time the ambulance came.Having helped the doctors carry himinto an the ambulance ，I felt relieved.In my opinion ，this itis our duty to help those who are in troubles trouble. CI'm going to study in the senior middle school on September.I can live either at school and at home.But I can't decide because both has advantages and disadvantages.At home ，I have my own room ，but I can have a good sleep.However ，I have to share one room with 5－6 student at school.Maybe I can't sleep good.It's a problem.Although I can have better food at home ，I enjoy eat with my classmates.I think it's a great fun and I can make more friends.If I live at home ，I'll have ride to school.It's a waste of time and not safely.It's so hard to make a decision.答案：I'm going to study in the senior middle school on inSeptember.I can live either at school and or at home.But I can't decide because both has haveadvantages and disadvantages.At home ，I have my own room ，but so/andI can have a good sleep.However ，I have to share one room with 5－6 student students at school.Maybe I can't sleep good well.It's a problem.Although I can have better food at home ，I enjoyeat eating with my classmates.I think it's great fun and I can make more friends.If I live at home ，I'll have ride to school.It's a waste of time and not safely safe.It's so hard tomake a decision.DBeijing has lots of famous tourist attractions.Every year many tourist come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery and rich culture.But several years ago ，visitors behave badly.Some talked loudly in public and threw litter everywhere.Some picked flowers ，cutting down trees and hurt animals.And even better ，some painted on the walls and smoked in the woods.Luckily ，things has changed.Rubbish is always put into dustbins.People are friendly at animals.Everybody smokes in the woods.All these changes make us happily.As student ，I think we should know it's our duty to protect the environment.Let's to change our behaviour when we travel.答案： Beijing has lots of famous tourist attractions.Every year many tourist tourists come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery and rich culture.But several years ago ，visitors behave behavedbadly.Some talked loudly in public and threw litter everywhere.Some picked flowers ，cutting cut down trees and hurt animals.And even better worse，some painted on the walls and smoked in the woods.Luckily ，things has havechanged.Rubbish is always put into dustbins.People are friendly at to/towards animals.Everybody Nobodysmokes in the woods.All these changes make us happily happy .As student ，I think we should know it's our duty to protect theenvironment.Let'schange our behaviour when we travel.训练3A(导学号59430108) Dear Friend ，As you got up this morning ，I watched you and hoped you would talk to me ，asked my opinion or thanking me something good that happened in your life yesterday.But I noticed you were too busily.I waited again.When you ran around the house getting ready I knew it would be a few minutes for you to stop and say a hello ，but you were too busy.At one point you have to wait fifteen minutes with nothing to do exceptsitting in a chair.Then I saw you jump to your foot.I thought you wanted to talk to me and you ran to the phone and calling a friend.Love always.Your Friend ，Jesus答案：Dear Friend ，As you got up this morning ，I watched you and hoped you would talk to me ，asked asking my opinion or thanking me something good that happened in your lifeyesterday.But I noticed you were too busily busy.I waited again.When you ran around the house getting ready I knew it therewould be a few minutes for you to stop and say hello ，but you were too busy.At one point you have hadto wait fifteen minutes with nothing to do except sitting sit in a chair.Then I saw you jump to your foot feet.I thought you wanted to talk to meand but you ran to the phone and calling calleda friend. Love always.Your Friend ，JesusBRecently ，I got package notice from the post office.I was not expecting a package.I thought ，“Oh no ，it's probably a package from some companies that I will not want.But I will have to go to the trouble of send it back.” Late that day a good friend mentioned to me that I should be getting anything in the mail from him.Well ，my attitude on the package waiting for me at the post office change immediately.Because I now knew who had been sent it ！I went to the post office as soon as I could.I was delightful to get a set of stainless steel pots from my friend.答案： Recently ，I got package notice from the post office.I was not expecting apackage.I thought ，“Oh no ，it's probably a package from some companies company that I will not want.But So I will have to go to the trouble of send sending it back.” Late Laterthat day a good friend mentioned to me that I should be getting anything somethingin the mail from him.Well ，my attitude on towards/tothe package waiting for me at the post office change changedimmediately.Because I now knew who had sent it ！I went to the post office as soon as I could.I was delightful delightedto get a set of stainless steel pots from my friend.CIt was an unusual cold day.Spring had arrived and everything was alive with colour.So a cold front had brought winter's cold back.I sit with two friends by the window of restaurant just off the corner of the town square.The food were especially good that day.As we talked ，my attention was drawn outside ，across the street.There ，walking into town ，was a man which appeared to be carrying all his goods on his back.She was carrying a well －worn sign ，reads “I will work for food.” My heart was sank.We continued with our meals ，but his image lasted in my mind.答案：It was an unusual unusuallycold day.Spring had arrived and everything was alive with colour.So But a cold front had brought winter's cold back.I sit satwith two friends by the window ofrestaurant just off the corner of the town square.The food were was especially good that day.As we talked ，my attention was drawn outside ，across thestreet.There ，walking into town ，was a man which whoappeared to be carrying all his goods on his back.She He was carrying a well －worn sign ，reads reading“I will work for food.” My heartsank.We continued with our meals meal，but his image lasted in my mind.DWhen I was seven years old and my sister were only four ，our father was killed in an automobile accident just two week after his twenty －seventh birthday.Mum was disappointing.Although we were really so young to understand what was going on ，but I knew life would never be quite the same.We had a nice home ，plenty of that we needed ，but we miss our father.About every evening we would go to our grandparent's house for visit.My grandmother had begun working part time at Kentucky Fried Chicken.His boss was a nice young man named Charles which got to know my mother and fell in love with her later.答案：When I was seven years old and my sister were was only four ，our father was killed in an automobile accident just two week weeksafter his twenty －seventh birthday.Mum was disappointing disappointed .Although we were really so tooyoung to understand what was going on ， I knew life would never be quite the same.We had a nice home ，plenty of that whatwe needed ，but we miss missedour father.About every evening we would go to our grandparent's house for visit.My grandmother had begun working part time atKentucky Fried Chicken.His Her boss was a nice young man named Charles which whogot to know my mother and fell in love with her later.训练4A(导学号59430109)Dear John ，I heard you were injured in a accident and stay in hospital now.I feel so sorry for you.The classmates and me plan to see you next week.Don't hesitate to turning to us if there is everything we can do for you.In addition ，don't worry at your school work.We will help you make it up when you return back to school.During recovery in hospital ，try to keep a good mood ，which help improve your health.What's more ，eat more fruits or drink more water than usually.Always follow the doctors' advices.It's very important. Looking forward to your coming back.Yours ，Li Hua答案：Dear John ，I heard you were injured in a an accident and stay in hospital now.I feel so sorry for you.The classmates and me I plan to see you next week.Don't hesitate to turning turnto us if there is everything something we can do for you.In addition ，don't worry at aboutyour school work.We will help you make it up when you returnto school.During recovery in hospital ，try to keep a good mood ，which help helpsimprove your health.What's more ，eat more fruits or and drink more water than usually usual.Always follow the doctors' advices advice.It's very important. Looking forward to your coming back. Yours ，Li HuaB(导学号59430110)In our life ，everyone is surely to have difficulties.It is the same with me.I still remember how worried I am about my English learning three years ago.I found it difficult to following my teacher in the English class.Beside ，my classmates often laughed at me because my poor English.So I was determined to do something about it.Firstly ，I took a part in the English Corner that I met many friends.They willing shared their methods of learning English with me.I also found it useful to keep English diaries.What's more ，you talked with friends on the Internet and exchanged emails in English.As a result ，I made great progresses in learning English.答案：In our life ，everyone is surely sureto have difficulties.It is the same with me.I still remember how worried I am wasabout my English learning three years ago.I found it difficult to following follow my teacher in the English class.Beside Besides ，my classmates often laughed at me becausemy poor English.So I was determined to do something about it.Firstly ，I took part in the English Corner that whereI metmany friends.They willing willingly shared their methods of learning English with me.I also found it useful to keep English diaries.What's more ，you Italked with friends on the Internet and exchanged emails in English.As a result ，I made great progresses progressin learning English.CThe trip of Shanghai with my family left a deep impression on me.I remember I was so excited to fall asleep the day before we set off.Boarding the train ，I found it crowded with people but we didn't get a seat.Therefore we keep standing all the way.Eventually we reached Shanghai.The first thing I did was lie in bed to have a rest because we were all tired out.But early the next day ，I jumped out of bed excited.My aunt took my family around Shanghai and we visit many places of interests.I deeply attracted by the beauty of the city.I made up my own mind to study in Shanghai University after graduating from high school.答案：The trip of toShanghai with my family left a deep impression on me.I remember I was so tooexcited to fall asleep the day before we set off.Boarding the train ，I found it crowded with people but and we didn't get a seat.Therefore we keep keptstanding all the way.Eventually we reached Shanghai.The first thing I did was lie lyingin bed to have a rest because we were all tired out.But early the next day ，I jumped out of bed excited excitedly .My aunt took my family around Shanghai and we visit visitedmany places of interests interest .I deeply attracted by the beauty of the city.I made up my mind to study in Shanghai University after graduating from high school.DI want to share one of the things that I'm proud here.It dated back to the summer three years ago.I was preparing for the new life in high school.I put that I needed in a big box.The big day had arrived.I said goodbye to my parents and then got on the bus by me.I felt proud and excited.I thought there would be something interestedwaiting for me.On arrival I found many student accompanied by their parents.I feel sad at first but soon threw this feeling away.I managed to carrying my luggage to my dorm on my own.Though tired ，I felt very proud.I became more dependent through it.答案： I want to share one of the things that I'm proud here.It dated dates back to the summer three years ago.I was preparing for the new life in high school.I put that whatI needed in a big box.The big day arrived.I said goodbye to my parents and thengot on the bus by me myself.I felt proud and excited.I thought there would be something interested interesting waiting for me.On arrival I found many student studentsaccompanied by their parents.I feel felt sad at first but soon threw this feeling away.I managed to carrying carrymy luggage to my dorm on my own.Though tired ，I felt very proud.I became more dependent independentthrough it. 训练5AI still remember the day which I learned the importance of following the traffic rules.It was warm Saturday afternoon.I went shopping with some of my best friends.We bought what we were needed and had a good time.But when we went home ，we had a narrowly escape.The street was crowded and the zebra crossing was about 50 metres ahead.So we were too tiring and decided to cross the street directly.Hardly have we reached the middle of the street when we heard a sharp noise.A car stopped just two foot away from me.What dangerous it was! From then on I really got to know the importance of obey the traffic rules.答案：I still remember the day which whenI learned the importance of following the traffic rules.It was warm Saturday afternoon.I went shopping with some of my bestfriends.We bought what weneeded and had a good time.But when we went home ，we had a narrowly narrow escape.The street was crowded and the zebra crossing was about 50 metres ahead.So But we were too tiring tired and decided to cross the street directly.Hardly have hadwe reached the middle of the street when we heard a sharp noise.A car stopped just two foot feet away from me.What Howdangerous it was! From then on I really got to know the importance of obey obeyingthe traffic rules. BHow often should you pay a visit the dentist ，then? A medical magazine ，that provides guidance ，say that the frequency of dental visits all depends on the individual.It recommends that children go at least once a year because their teeth can become bad fast ，while adults without problem can wait as long as two years.That they even go longer than two years are OK for people who have been caring for his teeth.Similar advice is giving elsewhere.An expert group review the evidence in Finland back in 2001 had recommended that under －18s who are at low risk visit between every 18 months and two years.答案：How often should you pay a visit the dentist ，then? A medical magazine ，that which provides guidance ，say saysthat the frequency of dental visits all depends on the individual.It recommends that children go at least once a year because theirteeth can become bad fast faster ，while adults without problem problemscan wait as long as two years.That they even go longer than two years are isOK for people who have been caring for his their teeth.Similar advice is giving given elsewhere.An expert group review reviewingthe evidence in Finland back in 2001 recommended that under －18s who are at low risk visit between every 18 months and two years.CHi Thomas ，How is everything with you recently? I'm very exciting because I have appliedfor a holiday job ，taught English conversation in a teacher training college near Shanghai.I'm a bit of worried because I don't know if I should bring some present for the teachers I'll meet.Should I shake hands when I meet people ，or just smiling? What topics will my students want to talk then? Might I say or do something that will seem rudely? This may seem unimportant with you ，but I want to plan everything in advance ，or I'd love to know what you think.You had been to China before.Looking forward to your reply.All the best ，Bruno答案：Hi Thomas ， How is everything with you recently? I'm very exciting excited because I have applied for a holiday job ，taught teachingEnglish conversation in a teacher training college near Shanghai.I'm a bit worried because I don't know if I should bring some present presentsfor the teachers I'll meet.Should I shake hands when I meet people ，or justsmiling smile ？ What topics will my students want to talk then? Might I say or do somethingthat will seem rudely rude ？ This may seem unimportant with to/foryou ，but I want to plan everything in advance ，or so I'd love to know what you think.You had havebeen to China before.Looking forward to your reply.All the best ，BrunoDDear Mum ，This afternoon ，our teacher asked us list what our parents had done for us.I write down a lot of good sides.Time passes quickly ，isn't it? It is three years when I became a high school student.Looking back on the progresses that I have made so far ，I really appreciate for your support.I know that without your properly guidance ，I would not have doneso well.However ，what still makes me puzzling is how to make my dream to go to the top university come true.Please continue to lend I a hand.I really need your help.Kate答案：Dear Mum ，This afternoon ，our teacher asked uslist what our parents had done for us.I write wrote down a lot of good sides. Time passes quickly ，isn't doesn't it? It is three years when sinceI became a high school student.Looking back on the progresses progressthat I have made so far ，I really appreciate your support.I know that without your properly properguidance ，I would not have done so well.However ，what still makes me puzzling puzzled is how to make my dream to go to the atop university come true.Please continue to lend I mea hand.I really need your help. Kate训练6ADear manager ，I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised positions as a secretary of English.Here I would like to introduce me briefly.I am a 25－year －old young man graduated from the Foreign Languages Department of Jilin University.I have been a English guide for two years after graduation.As a result ，my oral English is pretty well.I have great interest the job.I had much confidence in myself.If I am given to the job ，I can assure you I will do my best to do it well.I'd like to meet you at your convenient to discuss the possibility of working in your company.An early reply to my application will be high appreciated.Yours respectfully ，Wang Yong答案：Dear manager ，I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised positions position as a secretary of English.Here I would like to introduce me myselfbriefly. I am a 25－year －old young man /graduated graduating from the Foreign Languages Department of Jilin University.I have been a anEnglish guide for two years after graduation.As a result ，my oral English is pretty well good.I have great interest the job.I had have much confidence in myself.If I am given the job ，I can assureyou I will do my best to do it well.I'd like to meet you at your convenient convenienceto discuss the possibility of working in your company.An early reply to my application willbe high highlyappreciated. Yours respectfully ，Wang YongBDear Mandy ，I'm not doing well in my lessons at school ，especial in maths.My dad says I must try hard because he wants me go to university.He thinks I'm lazy ，but it's not true.I work really hard ，often study late into the night ！I've tried to talk to my mother ，but she always said I have to work as hard like my brother does.My brother doesn't study very hard ，and he always gets excellent grades.It's not fair!The only thing I like it is art.My teacher says I'm the best student she's had for year.When I told my dad ，all he said was ，“You mustn't waste your time in art.You must focus your mind on your lessons ！”I'm feeling quite puzzling about what to do now.Would you please help me out?Thanks a lot!Yours sincerely ，Lisa答案：Dear Mandy ，。
高考英语二轮复习五 短文改错 第2讲 句法错
语鹅市安置阳光实验学校专题五短文改错第2讲句法错误和行文逻辑错误[真题演练]Passage 1(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)When I look at this picture of myself，I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically，and also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.答案：When I look at this picture of myself，I realize how fast timeflies.I hadhave grown not only physically，andbutalso mentally in the pastfew years.About one month after this photo wastooktaken，I entered my secondyear of high school andbecomebecamea new member of the school musicclub.Around me in picture are the thingstheythat/whichwere veryimportant in my life at that time：car magazines and musical instruments.Ienjoyed studyingdifferencedifferentkinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting thelatelatestmusic albums.This picture often brings backto me many happy memories ofyourmyhigh school days.【语篇解读】本文是一篇记叙文。
高考英语短文改错 2 第二讲 句法类错误
第二讲句法类错误考点1主谓一致误用[典例1](2018·全国卷Ⅲ)The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistakes as well.[考场思维](1)根据and之前的is，可判断include的时态。
(2)找出include的主语：that。
(3)尝试解答：include→includes[典例2](浙江卷)He would ask who we was and pretend not to know us.[考场思维](1)主谓判断：主语是we；谓语动词应该使用复数。
(2)尝试解答：was→were[过关检测]1．She took the lift to the eleventh floor, and the secretary showed her where her desk and her computer was.was→were 2．(2019·长春外国语学校第二次质量检测)You are the most considerate person who know exactly what I need in our class.know→knows 3．(2019·甘肃兰州一中高三月考)Each student learn a foreign language, mostly English, from Day One of their compulsory education.learn→learns 4．My village lie in the mountains in southwest China.lie→lies 5．I, together with him, were going to do just what we had discussed.were→was 6．Selling newspapers not only makes some money but also give us some working experience during the summer vacation.give→gives [技法点金]1．判断主谓语是关键①可数名词单数或不可数名词作主语时谓语动词用单数。
2023届高考二轮总复习试题英语(适用于老高考旧教材)专题五短文改错题组练(二)
题组练(二)Passage1(2022黑龙江齐齐哈尔一模)My schedule is tight than ever because I’m in a final year of high school.However,I still manage to do what I can help my parents with the housework.I’ve gotten into the habit of washing dishes after dinner when I turned ninth.I also do thing like washing and folding clothes.I even begin to cook for my family last month.I find that doing housework with my parents is extreme fun and rewarding.We can chat with and sometimes even sing together!Doing housework with them also let me learn to take responsibility at home and,in the long term,in society.Passage2(2022安徽安庆二模)I love doing handwork.Three days ago,I visit my uncle’s small factory what produced Chinese traditional carpets.I found it hard and more dangerous than I had thought.Workers used knives,scissors and other tool.With my uncle’s permission,I gave it try.When I did it,the knife was very much close to my hand,so I had to be carefully.I did the same thing again and again.But it took me a lot of patience.It’s easier said than did.I think my uncle is great and she is my good example.Passage3(2022四川绵阳三模)My mother is always my role st Sunday,I find that she put some food into the bag and went out with it.I followed her and saw her gave the food to the street children.One of my neighbor told me that my mother was very kind to these children,but they even regarded her as their own mother.When we returned to home,I talked to my mother about it.She shared me some sad stories about those poor children.For much years,she helped those children by giving their food and care.I was deep moved and was proud of my mother.Passage4(2022广西南宁二模)Last week,I chosen to compete in an English-speaking contest by my school.I worked very hard and unfortunately I was beaten in the final.I felt discouraging and even lost confidence in my English study.But my English teachers always cheers me up and encourages her.She helps me where I am in trouble.Now,I know,there is no reason to feel guilty.In fact,I should feel really proud of represent my school.In addition to,I shouldn’t attach so much importance to winning.As the saying goes,“It is not the winning,but the taking part that count.” It’s impossible to win all the time and everyone must learn to accept failure peaceful.Passage5(2022陕西榆林三模)Dear Peter,I’m gladly to receive your letter where you asked me about my school rules.Here I’ll tell you something about it.There are several rules to obey there,including wearing school uniforms daily,attending and leaving school on times,and not carrying cellphones.These rules are so important we are extremely careful to follow them.Who breaks them will be have punished to do extra cleaning for a week.We all knew these rules are set up to help us forming good habits and improve our self-awareness.How do you find the rules?Looking forward to hear from you.Yours,Li Hua题组练(二)Passage1第一句:tight→tighter解析考查比较级。
高三英语二轮复习第部分专题5短文改错考法句法错误
考法2| 句法错误错误1——连接词有误1．(2021·全国乙卷)Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are used for cooking.or→and[fresh vegetables与high quality oil 是并列关系而非选择关系，故将or改为and。
]2．(2021·四川高考)Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day.or→and[both ...and ...表示“……与……都〞。
]3．(2021 ·四川高考)In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship.so→but[前后句为转折关系而非因果关系，应用but。
]4．(2021 ·全国卷Ⅰ)There the air is clean or the mountains are green.or→and[前后句为并列关系而非转折关系，应用and。
]5．(2021·全国卷Ⅰ)Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.去掉but[although与but不能连用，应去掉but。
]6．(2021·陕西高考)We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.but→and[前后为并列关系而非转折关系，故把but改为and。
2018-2022年五年高考短文改错考点分析课件-2023届高三英语二轮复习
1. 名词
⑦Luckily I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. (2020课标 全国II卷) 解析：考查名词单复数，vacations 改为vacation，summer vacation 书 剑。 ⑧ Last winter when I went there again， they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. (2018课标全国I卷） 解析：考查名词的数，chicken意为“小鸡”， 可数名词，应把chicken 改为chickens。 ⑨ Besides, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. (2017 课标全国II卷） 解析：information是不可数名词，应把informations改为information。
most
③ I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground.
(2019课标全国I卷)
hard
④ I want to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much.
(2019课标全国II卷)
so/very
归纳总结：注意区分形近的副词，掌握诸如many和much，hard 和hardly, late和later, before 和ago, so 和such等副词的区别。
3.代词
代词一致
①When you ride a bicycle, you don’t use petrol. So they are not
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• 1．确定从句类型、搞清句子结构是关键 • 定语从句中关系代词(副词)的选择和名词性从句中引导词
的选择取决于句子缺少何种成分和意义是否完整。此时需 要从分析句子结构入手，同时掌握关系代词(副词)和引导 词在句中的句法功能。which可引导非限制性定语从句， 代表主句的内容；where在定语从句中充当(抽象)地点状语； what在名词性从句中可充当主语、宾语等。
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• 2．(2017·临川一中一模)I hope I will find a job in an advertisement company which I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues.
• [解题思路] • ①分析句子结构→company后是定语从句 • ②定语从句中缺少地点状语→定语从句补全为：I will enjoy my
• ___ha_v_e→__ha_s_____
• 解析：分析句子结构可知 the early morning barking为主语，意为 “清晨吠叫”，且表示单数含义。运用主谓一致的原则可确定谓语动 词应用单数形式。
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• ③(2014·四川高考)I am going to talk about what you should do when a fire alarm go off.
• [解题思路] • ①分析句子结构→if引导条件状语从句→tell your teacher
immediately是主句→从句中notice后的someone is missing or hurt为 宾语从句 • ②分析宾语从句的缺失成分，选择恰当的引导词→宾语从句中不 缺成分，应用that引导，when多余 • 尝试解答：__w_he_n_去_掉_____
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• 2．掌握主谓一致的常考点 • ①主语与谓语动词之间插入along with，with，as well as，
together with，except，but，including时，谓语动词不受这 些插入语的干扰，依然和主语保持一致。
• ②从句、不定式、动名词等作主语时谓语动词一律视作一 个整体，谓语动词用单数；两个以上的名词组成一个整体 概念作主语时，谓语动词须用单数。
• ③表示时间、距离、金额、度量等词语作主语时，通常被 视作一个整体，谓语动词用单数。
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• ①(2014·全国卷)All of us need friendship.The understanding between two friends mean both of them have similar ideas and trust each other.
work and get along well with my colleagues in the advertisement company.→确定恰当的关系副词 • 尝试解答：__w_h_ic_h_→_w_h_e_re____
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• 3．(2016·四川高考)The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favorite. • [解题思路] • ①分析句子结构→确定本句为定语从句 • ②定语从句中缺少宾语，定语从句补全为：I cooked the
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专题五 短文改错
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• 考点1 主谓一致误用
• (2014·全国卷Ⅱ)My dream school look like a big garden. • [解题思路] • ①分析句子结构→my dream school为句子的主语，look为谓语动词 • ③根据主谓一致的原则→谓语动词需用第三人称单数形式→确定
最终答案 look→looks • 尝试解答：______________
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• 1．判定主语和谓语是解题的关键 • 要解决主谓一致问题，判定主语是先决条件。either...or，
neither...nor，not...but，not only...but also，or等连接的并列 主语，谓语动词与靠近的那个名词或代词保持一致；倒装 句和there be句型中，谓语动词与后面的第一个主语保持一 致；定语从句中，关系代词作主语，谓语动词与它所指代 的先行词保持一致；强调句中，连接代词在句中作主语， 这时它应与被强调的主语保持一致。
• 解析：分析句子结构可知，句中that引导的为定语从句。that指代 前面的名词raw meat“生肉”，为不可数名词，故谓语动词也应该用 单数形式，且需要注意运用过去时。
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• 考点2 定语从句和名词性从句误用
• 1．(2014·四川高考)If you notice that when someone is missing or hurt， tell your teacher immediately.___ • 解析：此句的主语是understanding不是friends，所以谓语动词用单
数形式。
• ②(2014·辽宁高考)The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.
• ___g_o→__g_oe_s__ • 解析：分析句子结构可知，本句主语为a fire alarm，故谓语动词用
goes。 • ④(2017·衡阳一模)The original hamburger can be traced back to the
middle ages，when Russians ate raw meat that were cut into small pieces and formed into a small round flat shape. • ___w_e_re_→_w_a_s___