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8.28雅思大作文高分范文及解析毕业后GAP的利弊

8.28雅思大作文高分范文及解析毕业后GAP的利弊

8.28雅思大作文高分范文及解析:毕业后GAP的利弊8.28雅思大作文Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for their studies?一些学生高中毕业后选择出去旅游或工作一段时间而不是直接上大学。

这样做对他们的学业有什么好处和坏处?思路解析这是一道利弊类的大作文,讨论的是高中毕业后gap一段时间对学生学业的利弊影响。

这个话题2020年8月曾考过一道同类型的题目,因此同学们一定要认真准备。

审题的时候要注意限定对象:高中毕业即将升入大学的学生,讨论的点可以分别围绕旅游和工作来展开,利弊一定要针对学业来说。

同学们在回应写作任务的时候利弊都要展开写,然后阐述自己的立场。

我们一起来归纳下GAP的好处和坏处。

我们先来看坏处:出去旅游或工作延缓了大学的学习时间,这样会在学业上给学生带来一定的挑战,比如被同龄人超过,重新熟悉知识点有困难等。

刚毕业的高中生出去工作或旅游很容易分散精力,对他们之后的大学学习是有不利影响的。

最后我们再来看下好处:出去工作对一个高中毕业生来说是一个好机会,可以学习到课本以外的知识,有助于开阔学生的眼界,进而更好地理解这个世界。

高中毕业出去旅游可以趁机放松心情,在放松的同时思考未来的学业方向,为之后更好地学习做足准备。

高分范文It is true these days that many high school leavers choose to start their work or take a trip before going to university. While a gap year can bring some immediate drawbacks, I am convinced that it is more likely to have long-term benefits for their lives.On the one hand, young students are very likely to encounter several difficulties when delaying their university study. One of these problems is the delay in academic progress caused by spending one year off school. It is understandably almost impossible for young people to enjoy their experiences in doing a job or travelling to a new place but still arrange a certain amount of time for revision. As a result, gap-year takers may have to face the challenge of becoming familiar with the knowledge at school again, receiving more pressure of catching up with their peers. Besides, the life outside the university campus may prove to be mentally and physically overwhelming for inexperienced school leavers. They, for instance, may be at risk of being exploited in an exhausting job or face potential dangers on their trips to a new country. If not well prepared for such possible obstacles, young high school graduates can suffer from unintended consequences.On the other hand, I would argue that these disadvantages are outweighed by the positive effects. A gap year is an ideal opportunity for students to learn about what is not taught at university. Working with other people who are experts in a particular field can give these newcomers not only an understanding of the job but also valuable practical lessons to help thembecome more mature. When it comes to applying for a position in a company, employers tend to favourably consider applicants who possess extensive experience in life and the occupation. Furthermore, in terms of recreation, having a year to relax can be advantageous as students can have a chance to relieve stress in study. With a comfortable and willing attitude, undergraduates can acquire knowledge more effectively in comparison with those who go to university right away.In conclusion, despite some negative aspects, it seems to me that the benefits of a gap year are more significant for the reasons mentioned.相关词汇high school leavers 高中毕业生start their work 开始工作take a trip 旅游long-term benefits 长期益处encounter several difficulties 遇到一些困难academic progress 学术进步become familiar with 对……熟悉catch up with 赶上;追上overwhelming adj. 势不可挡的, 压倒一切的; 巨大的inexperienced adj. 经验不足的,不熟练的potential dangers 潜在的危险outweighed vt. 比…重(在重量上);比…重要;比…有价值applying for a position 申请职位extensive experience 丰富的经验advantageous adj. 有利的。

英语考试作文-雅思写作真题范文之:大城市生活影响人们健康

英语考试作文-雅思写作真题范文之:大城市生活影响人们健康

英语考试作文雅思写作真题范文之:大城市生活影响人们健康考鸭们都知道,2018年的雅思作文真题都来自于历史题库。

本文就为大家梳理历年雅思写作真题范文——教育类话题:Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2014年3月1日)题目讲解题型类别:议论文审题要点:大城市的生活是否会对人们的健康造成破坏思路分析:文章架构可以选择单边倒,倾向一边或中立,城市发展和健康类的很多素材稍作改动都可以很好地支持论点。

同意:1.整个自然环境遭到严重破坏,如空气污染,导致人们的健康遭到威胁;2.生活节奏快,在大城市生活的人们往往精神压力大,心理不健康不同意(让步段):城市健身设施完备,很多人也积极参加锻炼,但尽管如此,只要人们生活的自然环境没有得到改善,生活节奏过快,人们还是很难维持健康。

雅思写作大作文范文In many countries today, big cities seem to be stubbornly appealing to the mass population, along with which there arises the question as for whether living in a city will damage people’s health. For me, the answer is definitely yes.在今天的许多国家,大城市似乎一直在顽固地吸引着大量人口,同时也出现了一个问题,那就是居住在城市是否会损害人们的健康。

对我来说,答案是肯定的。

On one hand, the environment of most major cities, especially those in developing and underdeveloped countries, has been severely destroyed due to the overly quick industrialization. Take air pollution as an example, the speed of vehicles’s injecting tail gas and erect chimneys’ vomiting forth clouds of smoke is so fast and the volume so considerable that the atmosphere long before has failed to degrade the pollutants. Consequently, haze become a new natural hazard in many metropolises in the long run, with the PM 2.5 density insome reaching several times the national limit.一方面,大多数主要城市的环境,特别是发展中国家和欠发达国家的环境,由于过度的工业化而遭到严重破坏。

雅思大作文审题

雅思大作文审题

1.2014.11∙22Online shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?2.2015∙ll∙14The best way to teach children to cooperate with others is through team sports at school.To what extent do you agree or disagree?3.2015.11.07For schoolchildren, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than parents.To what extent do you agree or disagree?4.2009.05.16It has been believed that people who read for pleasure have developed imagination and languageskills better than people who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?5.2015.10.10Some people think that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and diseases. To what extent do you agree or disagree?6.2015.05.16Some people say that many schools encourage students to evaluate and criticize their teachers in order to improve the quality of education while others say that this will lead to the loss of respect for teachers and disrupt class.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.7.2009.01.10Some people think that the range of technology available to individuals makes the increasing gap between the rich and the poor.To what extent do you agree or disagree?8∙ 2009∙01.15Students in schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources (such as the Internet and television).To what extent do you agree or disagree?9.2009.04.25Some people think that computer and the Internet are important in children's study, but others think that students can learn effectively with teachers in schools.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.10.2009.02.07Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not solve the poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than the financial aid.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people think that the developing countries require financial aid from international organization, but others argue that they should need practical aid and advice.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.12.2009.02.21Today most of people understand the importance of protecting the environment, while some people think individuals are too weak to take actions and make a difference.Discuss why someone holds such an opinion.What should be done to deal with this problem?13.2009.07.11Some people think that companies and individuals, rather than governments, should pay to clean up pollution that they have caused.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?The environmental problem in the world cannot be solved by ordinary people, but governments and large companies should be responsible for this problem.To what extent do you agree or disagree?15∙ 2009∙02∙28Concerning the public health problems, some people think the government should increase the sport facilities; others think it should take other measures to help resolve this problem.Discuss and give your own opinion.16.2009∙04∙04Nowadays people live in the society where consumer goods aιe ιelatively cheaper to buy.Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?17.2009.10.10An increase in production of consumer goods results in the damage of the natural environment.What are the causes and possible solutions?18.2009.12.05Nowadays, people always throw old things away when they buy new things, whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again.What factors may cause this phenomenon?What effects could the phenomenon lead to?19.2009.04.18If a product is good or it meets people ,s needs, people will buy it. Thus, advertising is unnecessary and no more than entertainment.To what extent do you agree or disagree?20. 2009.05.21A hundred years ago, people think that human race was steadily improving in every area of life. Now it seems that this is not sure in that situation.In which areas do you think we have made important progress nowadays?In which areas do you think we still need to make progress?21.2009.07.23Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism?What changes would you like to see in the new century?22.2015.07.23Some people say that the government should give the healthcare the first priority, while others believe that there are more important priorities to spend the taxpayers, money.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.23.2009∙08∙29Nowadays a growing number of international tripsmake the maj ority of different regions of the world much more similar than ever before.What are the reasons for this? ______________Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?24.2009.11.19Some people think that introducing new technology can improve people,s quality of life in developing countries. However, others believe that free education should be offered.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.25.2009.07.04Money for postgraduate research is limited. Some people, therefore, think that financial support from government should be only provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?26.2009.11.14Some people say that professional workers suchas doctors, nurses and teachers make greater contributions should be paid more than those sportsmen and entertainers.To what extent do you agree?27.2009.09.05Some people think that a large proportion of people should go to university, while others think that they should work as car mechanics and builders, etc. to satisfy the national demand.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.28.2015.11.21Too much emphasis has been put on going to university for academic study. We should encourage people to have vocational education since there are not enough qualified tradespeople, electricians and plumbers.To what extent do you agree or disagree?29.2010.05.08Schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Subjects such as music and sports are not useful.To what extent do you agree or disagree?30.2010.01.14In today,s world, it is private companies rather than governments who pay for and carry out scientific research. ______________________________Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?31.2009.08.13The subjects and lesson contents are decided by the authorities such as the government. Some people argue that teachers should make the choice.To what extent do vou asree or disagree?32.2009.10.24Some people think the function of university education should be to prepare students for employment, but others believe university educationcan offer many other functions.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.33.2009.04.30Some people think that museums should be an enjoyable place, but others think that the purpose of museums should be to educate. ____________ Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.34.2009.05.09Some people think that teenagers should concentrate on all the school subjects, while others think that teenagers should learn the subjects they are best at or they are interested in. ___________________ Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.35∙ 2009.09.26In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people.36∙ 2009.11∙07The rate of crime committed by teenagers is increasing throughout the world.Discuss the possible reasons and give suggestions on how to solve the problem.37. 2009.06.13Research report suggests that the majority of35∙ 2009.09.26In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people.36∙ 2009.11∙07The rate of crime committed by teenagers is increasing throughout the world.Discuss the possible reasons and give suggestions on how to solve the problem.37. 2009.06.13Research report suggests that the majority of。

雅思大作文审题(课堂PPT)

雅思大作文审题(课堂PPT)
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Let readers know what topic is under debate/discussed
• 观点陈述型: • There is a perception that …, while a counter-
argument is that… • One topic of discussion is concerned with whether
• There is a perception that parents are responsible for this severe problem due to their imappropriate way of fostering, while a counterargument is that the modern life styles are the foundamental reason of this disturbing situation.
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introduction
• 背景: • The issue of the impact of global environmental
problems has heated up in recent years. • 焦点: • There is a perception that higher prices at the
pump are a small sacrifice for a program that helps the environment , while a counterargument is that it provides no benefits . • 个人观点: • My personal view is that higher price is no benefits to solve the problem.

雅思作文审题(四):“在何种程度上同意”类

雅思作文审题(四):“在何种程度上同意”类

雅思作文审题(四):“在何种程度上同意”类作者:唐老雅来源:《英语世界》2019年第11期我们先来看看以下一组雅思考试真题:1. Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?;(2011/8/3)2. Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2015/12/12)3. Nowadays, there is a large amount of advertising aimed at children. Some people think they have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2016/2/20)4. New parents should attend parenting courses to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2016/5/28)5. Some people think that technology makes life complex, so we should make our life simpler without using the technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2017/2/18)6. Nowadays, many employers think that social skills are as important as good qualifications for employing people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?; (2018/11/10)以上这些题目的共同点是:命题人先给出一个观点,然后问考生“在何种程度上同意或者不同意”这个观点。

雅思写作书信写作格式和审题解说

雅思写作书信写作格式和审题解说

雅思写作书信写作格式和审题解说雅思培训类写作之书信写作格式和审题解说一文告知我们雅思G类考试的书信作文的写作格式和审题的方法。

今日我给大家带来了雅思培训类写作之书信写作格式和审题解说,盼望能够关心到大家,一起来学习吧。

雅思培训类写作之书信写作格式和审题解说一般说来雅思G类小作文task1要求烤鸭们写一封不少于150词的信件。

信件的类型共有9类,下面为大家一一分析。

9大类信件:投诉信、赔礼信、感谢信、求职信、询问信、建议信、求助信、邀请信、挂失信。

建议写作时间20分钟。

雅思书信备考三大方面:熟识书信格式、辨别书信类别、熟记书信常用表达。

一、雅思书信写作4大块雅思书信写作可分为4部分:salutation 称呼、body主体、closing结束语、signature署名。

二、G类task1的评分标准在答题纸的下方考官阅卷栏可以看到四个符号:TA, CC, LR, GRA,分别代表四大评分标准。

Task Achievement 考生是否清楚表达了信件的目的,全部要点是否全部涵盖。

Coherence and cohesion考生对信息和观点是否进行了很好地组织、表达和连接。

Lexical Resource 使用词汇的范围、精确性以及恰当性。

Grammatical Range and Accuracy 所用语法结构的范围、精确性和恰当性。

是否可以精确恰当使用多种语法结构和句式,使表达多样化。

写作留意事项:1、审题把握把握好G类书信语气的第一步,就是要弄清写信的要求和背景。

雅思书信写作题目就是由背景信息和写作任务两个部分构成的,我们可以将其分成私人信件和事务性信件两种类型。

写给亲朋好友的信可以归为前者,如友情信,由于对方是挚友,写信的语气可以比较轻松和随便,在说明具体内容时,措辞不必讲究但要礼貌。

2、信头称呼所谓称呼是指写信人对收信人的称呼用语,一般用“dear”开头,在称呼后可以用逗号(英式)或是冒号“美式”。

雅思写作第一部分满分攻略

雅思写作第一部分满分攻略

雅思写作第一部分满分攻略雅思写作第一部分满分攻略TASK 1写作三大步骤(1)审题:找出主要信息点,具体为两个任务:A: 辨别所要写图表的类型,是线状(line ),柱状(bar ),还是饼状(pie)等B: 找图表的主要内容,是人口变化,交通工具,受教育水平,或者是一项工艺的制作流程。

(2)构思:审题是对文章主要内容的一个大概认识,而构思就是对自己认识的进一步深化。

构思的主要任务为:分析图表的主要特征,弄清写作重点并选用适当的分析方法。

图表的主要特征是指其所描述现象或者问题的规律,并找出描述重点,不是图表上所出现的所有信息都要写出来,之后就是分析方法的选择,主要的分析方法有:数据分类,数据比较,平铺直叙法等,具体选哪种,需要根据图表的内容来确定。

(3)写作:写作是对前两个步骤的确认。

考生把自己的想法准确而详细的落实下来。

一般来说,这个部分的写作可以采用三或四段式:1)引言段(用简短的语言来描述图表的主要内容)。

一把来说,写作命题会给出的主要信息,如,The line chart below shows thegrowth of households with personal computers in the U.S.通过这句话,我们可以了解图表的主要信息,“美国每个家庭所拥有计算机量的增长变化。

”在这种情况下,考生可以重现组织一下这个具体,在中间加入一些具体的数字和变化年限等,使得阅卷老师一下就明白图表的主要内容。

引言段通用句式如下:This is a table / chart / (line线状 bar柱状pie饼状)graph whichdemonstrate / illustrate / reveal /depict/privide informationabout.............2)图表具体信息描述段:这个段落主要描写体现图表主要特征或总体变化规律的数据或信息,并用恰当的连接词语,如,on contrast , on theotherhand, however, like wise 等,把文章内容紧密的衔接起来。

雅思真题大作文高分范文

雅思真题大作文高分范文

雅思真题大作文高分范文雅思大作文高分范文,今日我就给大家带来了雅思大作文高分范文,盼望能够关心到大家,下面我就和大家共享,来观赏一下吧。

2021年4月21日雅思大作文高分范文原题:People today can shop, work and communicate with others via the Internet. They do not need to do these face-to-face. Is it a positive or negative development?雅思写作思路解析:A 使用网络(而不是面对面) 去沟通和做其他事情B 增加效率C 给生活带来便利A 使用网络(而不是面对面) 去沟通和做其他事情B 削减公司运营成本C 利润增加A 使用网络(而不是面对面) 去沟通和做其他事情B 人的社会技能下降C 人觉得疏远,家庭和社区不再有团结的感觉这个题目确定A。

只是A有点简单“使用网络,而不是面对面去沟通、购物和工作”。

假如你只写使用网络的好坏处(而没有不断消失面对面沟通的字眼),就是跑题。

雅思写作高分范文:Nowadays, many daily tasks can be accomplished without us meeting other face to face. Generally, I tend to believe it leads to many desirable resuits.It is evident that fulfilling some tasks over modern technologies such as the Internet and other computer networks is highly efficient. In the past, if people had the need to do shopping, they had to go to the shopping mall; but today, all can be done with the click of a mouse and the goods will be delivered home, even at a lower price. Also, we used to need to go to the bank and wait for a desperately long line if we wanted to make a transaction from one bank account to another: instead, now we may comfortably make use of the self-service banking at home. Actually, almost all banks and financial organizations are well-connected to the Internet, which promotes the development of international trade and world economy dramatically.Thus, obviously, the efficiency of life has been improved significantly due to the technological advances.However, that is not to say that lack of face-to-face communication brings about no problems. One of the biggest concerns is safety. With the increasing virus threats and well-trained hackers, online deals are well exposed to all kinds of risks and losses, for example, the wide-spread problem of identity theft. Therefore, when making the most of the desirable changes brought about by technology, we should be aware of its potential downsides and find a way to minimize the negative impacts.Overall, there are both favorable and unfavorable effects onindividuals and society if everyday tasks are performed without the need of seeing each other. But I am quite optimistic about its future, and I think people and countries alike will benefit from it on a new level soon.雅思真题作文7分范文:网络取代面对面沟通原题People today can shop, work and communicate with others via the Internet. They dont need to do these face to face. Is it a positive or negative development?雅思写作大作文解析与审题连续几周新题后,本周雅思作文回到了旧题模式,重现了2021年7月18日的作文题目。

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浅谈雅思大作文的审题很多考生在拿到雅思写作分数后都会很疑惑:明明我的观点陈述都已经达到了不错的水平,为什么最终结果还是没能达到自己的理想呢?今天文都国际教育老师将就如何审题,以及如何扣题讨论,帮助大家杜绝跑题偏题的现象。

一、大作文的题目结构以及注意点雅思大作文的题目通常由两部分构成:In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing.Does this trend have positive or negative effect on society?以上这道题目的句话首先给出了一个事实,接着是一个问句,问你觉得这是好事还是坏事;有的时候题目会假定一个观点,问你是否同意。

需注意这类题目问法较为多变,常见有以下几种形式:Is this a positive or negative development?Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?To what extent do you agree or disagree?/Do you agree or disagree?Does it have positive or negative effects?这里出现个注意点:当问题问我们是好还是坏,或问我们是否同意时,我们的立场可否为中立?答案是:可以!我们在说一个事物的好坏的时候可以说它全是坏处或全是好处;也可以说它有好有坏。

很多学生可能会顾虑,如果我采取中立是否会显得我立场不坚定呢?答案是:否。

这个世界上大多数的事物都不可能是非黑即白的。

中立并非立场不坚定,而是体现你思考的批判性和客观性。

而这两点也正是西方文化中非常器重的品质。

此外,我们也要求学生能尽可能写足事物的两面性,这样才能凑足观点,不至于无话可说。

但在一种情况下,我们的立场绝对无法中立。

如题:Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.To what extent do you agree or disagree?当题目中出现类似“best”、“only”、“never”这些词的时候我们的立场还能中立么?当然不能。

试想一样东西要么就是最好,要么就是不是最好,有所谓的“中间状态”存在的可能么?所以碰到这类题目,我们一定要在一开始就明确立场表面自己的态度。

但请注意,虽然我们的立场是一边倒的,比如我支持手机是目前最好的通讯工具,但这并不影响我在论述中提到手机的缺点。

因为一样东西是best, 并不意味着它不存在缺点,而只是相较于其他东西它优势更大。

所以在具体论述中,我们依然要做到客观与批判性。

另外一类题目要求如下:Some people think children with different abilities should be taught together to benefit everyone, while others argue that talented children should be treated separately. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.这类题目要求我们讨论两方观点,并给出自己的看法。

在此我们需注意两点:1. 讨论不代表认同。

很多学生觉得既然题目要求讨论某一观点我们就要顺着这个观点的思路展开说下去,其实不然。

我们在具体讨论过程中可以同意这一观点,也可以反对这一观点。

2. 没有必要单独用一段来表达你自己的看法。

因为当你在讨论双方观点的时候,你必然会融入自己的看法进去,不然何为讨论呢?若你再另起一段罗列自己看法的时候,这段一般就是全文的conclusion了,不然就会出现观点的重复而使文章显得啰嗦。

二、大作文题目中的限定范围雅思大作文中存在很多类似的话题,如果我们不对其进行具体分析可能会觉得每道题目的写法都差不多,而事实上能否找出这些看上去大同小异的题目中的细微区别直接影响我们的写作是否扣题。

让我们来试着对比两题:题1:Some people believe children should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?题2:Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?如果不仔细看,肯定有些同学会觉得这两题都是在问看电视对孩子的好处跟坏处,但我们如果仔细分析会发现,第二题的论述范围是“learn effectively”, 所以要求我们所有的观点都要围绕是否对孩子的“学习有利”这一点去说,如果你在其中说了别的就有跑题的嫌疑。

比如有的同学会写“长期看电视会让孩子视力下降并影响身体健康”就不是一个特别切合的观点了,因为这与是否有利于学习无关。

就算你要写这一点也要提到视力跟身体健康跟学习有何关系,如你应该进一步提到“如果视力下降了就会影响正常学习”这才能把观点拉回题目的正轨上来。

再举个例子:题1:Nowadays, distance-learning programmes have gained in popularity, but some people argue that courses can never be taken as good as those by attending a college or university. To what extend do you agree or disagree?题2:Nowadays, distance-learning programmes have gained in popularity, but some people argue college and university has more advantages for students. To what extend do you agree or disagree?同样这两道题乍看之下都是在讨论远程教育和传统教育的优缺点,但事实上它们讨论的范围是不同的。

题强调的范围是”courses can never be taken as go od as those by attending a college or university.”, 也就是说它仅仅讨论在上课这点上两种方法谁优谁劣,所以如果你在论述中提到如“学生在大学中能交到更多朋友,有利于扩大交际圈,提升社交能力,为将来事业提供人脉”这类观点就不合适,真正扣题的观点应该是“学生在大学中会碰到同学间的合作及竞争,从而更有效地提高学习成绩”。

三、如何在行文中做到扣题那么我们如何能在遣词造句中时刻体现我们扣题的意识呢?一种常见的方法是不断出现与题目关键词相关的词或句。

来具体看两道题目:题1:Since science and technology are becoming more and more important in modern society,school should spend more time on teaching these subjects rather than on arts and humanities.To what extent do you agree or disagree?题2:Many people think that painting and music do not directly improve the quality of people;therefore, government should not spend too much money on artistic projects. Do you agree ordisagree with the statement?虽然两道题都是就是否需要艺术进行讨论,不同点在于一个是从政府角度而一个是从学校角度。

虽然这两道问题都可以采用某些通用的论点,比如:Arts can provide people with life-long skills, enhance people’s creativity and broaden their horizons.(艺术能够使人们受益终身,提升人们的创造力,开阔人们的眼界。

)虽然这样写未尝不可,但还是没有充分做到“扣题”。

所以我们要做的是在这个观点中加入题目中的元素。

比如个问题是在说学校,那我们则可以改写成School’s mission is to provide students with life-long skills, enhance creativity and broaden their horizons, and such qualities can be developed through subjects of arts and humanities.以上就是老师分享的浅谈雅思大作文的审题详细内容,希望对同学们的备考有帮助。

最后,预祝大家考出满意的成绩。

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