四级培训基础班写作2--我的讲义汇总

四级培训基础班作文2

结构意识的培养和行文思路的提炼

1. 应试作文仍然应该保持三段式的作文模式,即开头段、中间段和结尾段。(注:详略得当,开头段和结尾段2-3句。展开段4-5句。

2. 每段话都可以遵循这样的模式,即主题句+展开句。

3.针对不同类型的作文,展开作文的思路也略有不同,有可能是从现象描述展开,有可能是观点阐述展开。(七类四级常考作文类型

4.在审题完毕之后就应该整理好作文思路,然后列出提纲,有的放矢。

开头段(opening paragraph

开头段虽短,但却是文章成败的关键,举足轻重。该段目的在于引出文章要探讨的核心问题和现象,从而起到统领全文的作用。因此,开头段,主要用于引入文章主题、介绍相关背景(原因、影响、结果等并引导正文内容。一般情况下不对内容进行深入的探讨和总结,两三句点题即可。

开头段之句式参考

一、描述现象

1. Nowadays, it has already become a common phenomenon /Currently it is not a rare phenomenon/occurrence that college students apply for a credit card. 现在,大学生办信用卡已经非常常见。

现如今,在新生入学时好几个家长打包小包簇拥着一个孩子已经变得非常常见。Nowadays,it has been a common occurrence that on the enrolling day of a college, almost every freshman is crowded around by several relatives who are holding all kinds of packages, big and small.

2. The popularity of taking civil service exams has boomed in China with increasing number of graduates leaving university.随着越来越多的毕业生离开大学校园,公务员考试在中国成为了大热门。

在如今的大学校园,大学生在宿舍里做小生意已经成为了大热门。

The popularity of doing business in the dormitory has boomed in today’s campus

数字化产品在中国尤其是在年轻人群众成为了大热门。

The popularity of digital products has been boomed in China, especially among the youngsters.

随着环保意识的不断增强,低碳生活在中国正在成为大热门。

The popularity of the so-called low-carbon life has boomed in China with the continuous inc rease in people’s environmental awareness.

3. It is known to all that trash disposal is very crucial to our daily life, especially in big cities.众所周知,垃圾处理对我们的日常生活非常重要,尤其是在大城市中。

众所周知,春节是中国一年中最重要的节日,而年夜饭则是欢庆春节最重要的一个环节/节目。It is known to all that the Spring Festival is the most important day of the year for all the Chinese people, while the dinner on the eve of the Spring Festival is in the same way the most significant activity/segment to celebrate the special occasion.

4. In recent years, there has been a dramatic increase in the number of school dropouts in the countryside. 近年来,农村辍学人数急剧上升。

最近几年,明星代言虚假广告的数量急剧上升。

Recently, there has been a considerable increase/rise in the number of stars making false advertisement.

近来,在家里吃年夜饭的家庭数量急剧下降,尤其是在大城市。

Lately, there has been a sharp decrease in the number of families taking dinner on New Year’s Eve at home, especially in big cites.

5. Thanks to the development of China’s economy and its opening up to the world, Chinese students are confronted with multiple choices when it comes to selecting schools.由于中国经济的发展和改

革开放的政策,中国学生现在在选择学校时可以有很多选择。

由于生活水平的不断提升,中国人民现在在选择年夜饭的地点时可以有很多选择。

Thanks to the continuous/sustained improvement in people’s living conditions, Chinese people are faced with numerous choices in selecting the place to have family reunion dinner.

由于互联网的普及,人们在购物时可以有很多选择。

With the popularization of the Internet, people now are confronted with a variety of choices when it comes to selecting the way of shopping.

二、引出问题

1. Recently, China has banned all supermarkets, department stores and shops offering plastic bags for free, which has caused wide attention. 最近,中国已经禁止了所有超市、商场和商店提供免费的塑料袋,这引起了广泛的关注。

2. When it comes to what is the better way to get the daily news, there is no complete agreement among people. Some people take it for granted that the Internet is the best source of daily news. However, others maintain that newspaper should be regarded as a better source. 提起获取日常新闻更好的方式,大家还没能达成一致。有