2021届新高考高中英语写作优质课件：议论文的summary
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高考英语写作辅导-议论文的概要写作精品ppt课件
What is the claim?
What position or opinion does “The Meatrix” want us to accept?
What is the claim?
The claim of “The Meatrix” is “Don’t support the factory farm machine.” (It is stated near the end of the film.)
What are the reasons?
Why does “The Meatrix” say we should not support factory farming?
What are the reasons?
Because factory farms are …are cruel to animals.
View a short film Identify the argument the film makes Write a summary of the film’s argument
View the film
Click on the link below to view the film “The Meatrix.” Watch the film once, then move on to the next slide.
What are the reasons?
Because factory farms …are cruel to animals. …create antibiotic resistant germs …cause massive pollution …destroy communities
高中英语概要写作课summary优质课PPT课件
Change part of speech
With his great efforts, the outcome is quite successful.
With his great efforts, the result i_s_o_f_g_r_e_a_t_s_u_c_ce_s_s__.
be + adj. be of + N.
Though he is famous all over the world for_t_h_e_s_ig_n_i_fi_c_a_n_c_e_o_f_ his achievement, he doesn’t care about _fa__m_e___.
Change part of speech
v./ adj. n.
Tip: Not only should you convey the
original meaning, but you should also make your sentence beautiful.
When she first started her work, she could hardly get any help.
Help could not be got when she first started her work.
Little help was available at first.
Skills to restate the author’s ideas:
A. Change part of speech (词性): v./adj. → abstract noun(抽象名词)
B. Words and phrases that have the same/similar meanings
浙江新高考之概要写作summarywriting省公开课金奖全国赛课一等奖微课获奖PPT课件
To research whether such a “sixth sense” really exists, Robert Baker, …
there is really a sixth sense
Only if you ask many different questions will you acquire all the information.
20/40
• … there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
have, exist, S+V+P
changing
opinions， viewpoints
✓People have changing opinions toward dirt over time.
10/40
2.把短语变为单词 Cleaning away day dirt benefits health.
3.使用广义词(general words)代替详细词 (specific words)
She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek, and some textbooks.
描写某事物性质功用。即“对
√ 说明文
象+性质功用+利好”； 针对某个问题提出处理方法或
exposition 方法。即“问题+处理方法”；
介绍某现象及其原因和结果。
√ 议论文
即“现象+原因+结果”
论点+论据(+结论)
argumentation
7/40
there is really a sixth sense
Only if you ask many different questions will you acquire all the information.
20/40
• … there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
have, exist, S+V+P
changing
opinions， viewpoints
✓People have changing opinions toward dirt over time.
10/40
2.把短语变为单词 Cleaning away day dirt benefits health.
3.使用广义词(general words)代替详细词 (specific words)
She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek, and some textbooks.
描写某事物性质功用。即“对
√ 说明文
象+性质功用+利好”； 针对某个问题提出处理方法或
exposition 方法。即“问题+处理方法”；
介绍某现象及其原因和结果。
√ 议论文
即“现象+原因+结果”
论点+论据(+结论)
argumentation
7/40
高中英语Summary-Writing概要写作公开课精品课件
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4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
4.As a matter of fact how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology. Actually, it is not technology but people’s attitude towards it that influences family relations.
the negative effect the reason
5
Para.3: However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships.
3
Read for structure
What is the phenomenon?
What are the effects?
What really matters?
…
negative & positive our attitude to technology
4
Read for topic sentences
Technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members. 47% said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their interests.
议论文概要写作课件-高三英语一轮复习课件
Para1 why we give up the rest sentences?
Underline the key points
quotation 引言
Parents everywhere praise their kids. Too much praise can backfire.Still, don't go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.
Let‘s summarize
Rules & Steps for writing a summary
Rules Steps
40~80 words
Step 1 Extracted 提取
Key points
Q1: What ‘s the advice of expert?Q2:What is the character of good praise?
Para3
It should be sincere and focused on effort
quotation 引言
Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he's out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的) to the amount of effort your child has put into it.
Underline the key points
quotation 引言
Parents everywhere praise their kids. Too much praise can backfire.Still, don't go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.
Let‘s summarize
Rules & Steps for writing a summary
Rules Steps
40~80 words
Step 1 Extracted 提取
Key points
Q1: What ‘s the advice of expert?Q2:What is the character of good praise?
Para3
It should be sincere and focused on effort
quotation 引言
Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he's out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的) to the amount of effort your child has put into it.
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In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don't secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody's duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.
Parenting without Fear:Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters.“One thing to remember is that it’s the process not the end product
that matters.” Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team.But if he's out
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In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don't secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody's duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.
Parenting without Fear:Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters.“One thing to remember is that it’s the process not the end product
that matters.” Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team.But if he's out
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高中英语概要写作Summary writing公开课PPT课件
03 opinion + supporting details (evidences) +conclusion
1.Humankind has tried to improve its standard of living since the very beginning of civilization. Back then, as well as today, providing food and security was the basic task for a person. However, nowadays the range of required goods has expanded significantly. People feel the need for not only some primary things, such as a piece of bread and a roof over their heads, but also for various facilities and luxuries. Providing humanity with these things is connected to the use of natural resources, which requires energy. In turn, the common sources of energy we use today cause pollution, so economic growth is almost inevitably associated with environmental damage.
02 5w&1h (who+what+when+where+why+how) +moral
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(Para 3 )Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better. For example, taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane. However, taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends. Besides, it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way. On the contrary, being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives.
(Para 2 )The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of making mistakes in a rush. When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry, they can't make a sound decision and probably regret later. As the saying goes, “Haste makes waste.” We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quickly. We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly.
(Para 2 )The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of making mistakes in a rush. When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry, they can't make a sound decision and probably regret later. As the saying goes, “Haste makes waste.” We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quickly. We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly.
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out in the morning. Lastly, it paraphrased e n a b l e s u s t o m a k e g o o d supporting point 3
preparations for the day.
So we should do our utmost to keep transitional it, which is beneficial to us. words/phrases
Summary Writing
for Argumentation
概要写作之-议论文篇
What is argumentation?
Argumentation is logical arguments used to ssuuppoorrtt a theory, an action or an idea.
Read for the main point
and Discover the
supporting points
• MPasPsa:ge“1Getting up early is of great importance to us all.”
• Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and got up early, we would be energetic the
supporting point 1 whole day. Nowadays, people still hold the same view. So, getting up early is of great
importance to us all. In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and
They fear the uncertainty of the unknown and may associate change with negative outcomes.
Step 2.3 Discover the conclusion point .
I personally think change is necessary if someone wants to keep up with the fast pace of modern life.
Topic/main point and structure
D _d_is_c_o_v_er supporting sentences
P p_a_r_a_p_h_rase synonyms/sentence structures
P _p_o_li_sh__
connectives; transition words/phrases
Step 1 Read for the main point and structure.
Change is an unavoidable part of everyday life.
Some people are happy to live a life of routine; others accept change...
of
getting
up
“aGpeatrtainphgruaspedeamralyinipsooinf t great importance to us
early in the morning can never be aplla.r”aphrased
too overemphasized. In the first supporting point 1 place, our brain works faster and with necessary evidence
Ending: Getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it.
Elements of a summary
a paraphrased main point
Elements
several paraphrased ssu_p_p_o_rt_in_g___ points
supporting point 2 short walk in the morning, without doubt we can build our bodies and become much
healthier. That is why many people getting up early do physical exercise year after year.
Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it. Late risers may find it difficult to form the habit of getting up early. They have to make efforts to do so. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will certainly benefit a lot from it.
some specific e_e_v_id_e_n_c_e ___ （if necessary）
tratn_s_i_ti_o_n_a_l_ words/phrases
conclusion (if necessary)
Evaluate (评估) the sample summary with “☆” and “ ” .
supporting point 3 Also, we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the
day if we get up early. For example, if everyone in the family gets up early, wife will have enough time to prepare the breakfast for the whole family. Children will have enough time to catch the school bus, and husband will never forget to change his dirty shirt. Everything is in order. What a harmonious scene! However, if we get up late, we'll probably have to do everything in a great hurry, making it in a mess.
5 No details and personal viewpoints are included.
6 total words (40<words<80); spelling; handwriting
☆ :Good
:Need improving
Elements of a summary
The importance
Structure of an
argumentative essay
Compare your essay to a teddy bear...
head Topic (Main point)
body
to support the main point!!
Supporting points
end specific evidence conclusion sentences
people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than at any other time of the day. Additionally, if we get up early and do some morning exercise or only take a
P _p_o_li_sh__
connectives; transitional words/phrases
Read passage 2 and Underline the points.
Read passage 2 and Underline the points.
STEPS
TIPS
R _r_e_a_d__
Step 2.1 Discover the supporting point 1.
People who accept changes think that changes make their life meaningful.
Firstly,... making progress Secondly, ... getting experiences Finally, ... keeping healthy
Step 2.2 Discover the supporting point 2.
People who don’t want to step outside their comfort zone prefer following their daily habits.