浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要写作(37)含答案解析
浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要写作(32)含答案解析
浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要（32）含答案解析【题文】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
China's bike-sharing has exploded from nothing about a year ago into a transport phenomenon in major cities. Just by scanning the QR code（二维码）that appears behind the seat, one can unlock a shared bicycle. Once the service has finished, the user blocks the bike and the total is charged to his mobile account. The process lasts less than 30 seconds and costs no more than one penny. By the way, there are still no fixed places to find or leave a bike, although areas such as university campus, and metro or bus station are preferred.Many young people believe shared bicycles have many advantages. They are not expensive to rent, they do not have to be protected from thieves, and there is no need to repair them. You just have to change them for another one. They are also environment friendly and lower the use of cars, which also helps to relieve traffic. In fact, it is considered an awesome combination of technology and tradition.Since they appeared, shared bicycles have raised a lot of dust. There is no doubt of the benefits but the disadvantages cannot be ignored. Many problems related to shared bicycles have emerged. It is due to bad behavior from some users who always want to seize the bicycles, but also because of the mess that has been created since one can leave the bicycle anywhere, which is against public urban order management. There are so many poorly parked bikes that sometimes they end up blocking streets.In Xi Luoyuan, Beijing, the "Civilized Use of Bicycles" campaign has been launched. In addition to having 40 officially permitted stops, there are also clear signals to lead users to these stops. A team of supervisors keep order in the area. This is the first area that is part of an official system to manage bicycles. The purpose of this campaign is to solve the mess that the popularity of shared bicycles is causing in Beijing, both with the participation of companies and the users. If the pilot plan works out well in Xi Luoyuan, it will be extended to all of the cities in China.【答案】China's shared bicycles are gaining popularity with the public as a cheap and convenient transport option.（要点1）Bike share helps people enjoy an environment-friendly life by relieving traffic and reducing pollution（要点2,3）However,the bad behavior of some users and the mess they cause also lead to some problems.（要点4,5）Beijing has launched a campaign to regulate bike-parking,which will hopefully set a good example to the rest of China.（要点6,7）【解析】【标题】浙江省绍兴市2017年9月选考科目诊断性考试英语试题【结束】。
浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要写作(43)含答案解析
浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要写作（43）含答案解析【题文】阅读下面短文，根据内容写一篇60 词左右的内容概要。
Nowadays the business of fast food is developing at a rapid speed. Have you ever thought twice before deciding to eat fast food? Even if it is easy to buy and cheap, the risks outweigh(胜过) the five minutes of satisfaction that fast food brings. There are many risks when it comes to eating food that’s made in just a few of seconds.What you eat can affect your health. People who are addicted to fast food are more likely to suffer from various life-threatening diseases. Obesity(肥胖) can come when fast food is bought often. Fast food is made from a lot of fats and high calories. If it isn’t removed, then you can grow to become obese. Even a small quantity of fast food contains many calories. People are fooled by its appearance and they tend to eat more. Thus, without knowing, they consume a lot of calories. What’s worse, obesity isn’t the only risk. Heart disease is also a danger. The more fats, sugar and salt you eat, t he weaker your heart can grow.Another concern for most consumers is that they can’t keep track of the sources of the food supplies in fast food restaurants. They never know about the living conditions of the animals killed for meat in those restaurants, like cows, pigs, and chicken.A recent study has suggested that bacteria have been found in about 38% fast food. Even some soft drinks are now infected by food-borne illnesses that usually come from meat.Although fast food is one of the easiest and cheapest ways of eating, the health r isks aren’t worth your life, and risking your life for something that isn’t good for you could cost thousands of dollars in hospital bills. It is important to eat healthil y and make good choices when deciding what to put in your body. Don’t be lazy and pic k up fast food on your way home from work.___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________【答案】Despite its popularity, fast food is the origin of various risks. Fast food has a negative influence on people’s health leading to serious illnesses, like obesity and heart disease. Besides, the sources of fast food can be another potential health threat for its consumers. Considering the risks, it is essential to keep a healthy diet and make careful choices before eating.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇60 词左右的内容概要。
高考高考英语真题分项详解 专题 书面表达 概要写作高三全册英语试题
定额市鞍钢阳光实验学校十年（2010~2020）高考英语真题分项详解34书面表达·概要写作1.（9月，浙江高考）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, “We’ve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict.” By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they’re building their children’s confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that’s insince re, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents’ praise has put them.Still, don’t go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like they’re not good enough or that you don’t care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward. “We should especially recognize our children’s efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal,” says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. “One thing to remember is that it’s the process not the end product that matters.”Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he’s out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的) to the amount of effort your child has put into it.____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________【答案】Parents tend to go to extremes when it comes to praising their kids. (要点一) Yet, both too much and too little praise can be equally damaging.(要点二) When giving praise, parents should be sincere and concentrate on the process instead of the result. (要点三) Similarly, they ought to give praise for how much effort their kids have invested in the work they’re involved in. (要点四)【解析】本次浙江高考书面表达采用了概要写作题型。
浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要写作(26)含答案解析
浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要（26）含答案解析【题文】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Nowadays, it is most probable that you have an electronic device loaded with hundreds or even thousands of your favourite songs. At any moment in time, you can f6ll your headphones with the sounds of a particular song that suits your mood at that exact time.Music is so common. But have you realized the power of it? Are you getting ready for a big soccer match or do you need to get excited? Maybe some hip hop with a strong beat will do the trick! Besides, you might be ready to study for a big exam the next day. To help you study better,a little bit of Mozart might make you remember things better.We may all have been moved by particular songs that spoke to us in some situations. But is there any scientific evidence showing that music really has such effect on people? of course,there is! Scientists have long recognized the power of music. Over the years, many studies have been done to examine in greater depth the nature and extent of the elects music has on people.For example, scientists at the University of Missouri have found that listening to music can have positive effects on your mood. Their research gives scientific credibility(可靠性) to the behavior that many people have already experienced on their own: listening to upbeat music can brighten your day and boost your mood.Other studies have shown that upbeat music isn't the only type of music that can be helpful,however. When people are sad or have suffered a personal loss, sad music can be helpful because the tone and lyrics of the music can resonate (引起共鸣) with the listeners. Likewise,people under a lot of stress or experiencing upsetting situations can benefit from listening to angry music. Although angry music might not help you if you're in a normal mood, its tone can benefit you when you are dealing with stressful and upsetting situations.___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays, with modern devices, music to your taste is easily accessible. (要点一) Yet, is power, which might benefit you, is not fully realized. (要点二) Scientists have researched into the nature and extent of music's effects on humans. (要点三) For instance, scientists at the University of Missouri have proven upbeat music can cheer you up. (要点四) Besides, sad music and angry music have also been found to be helpful. (要点五)【解析】【分析】根据下面短文内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要写作(31)含答案解析
浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要（31）含答案解析【题文】阅读下列短文，根据其内容写一篇60 词左右的内容概要。
Yours, Li Hua“Stop the world, I want to get off!” This popular expression refers to a feeling of panic, or stress, that makes people want to stop whatever they are doing, try to relax, and become calm again. Stress is one of the most common causes of health problems in modern life. Too much stress results in physical, emotional, and mental health problems.There are numerous physical effects of stress. Stress can affect the heart. It can increase the pulse rate, make the heart miss beats, and can cause high blood pressure. Stress can affect the respiratory(呼吸的) system. It can lead to asthma and cause a person to breathe too fast, resulting in a loss of important carbon dioxide. Stress can affect the stomach. It can cause stomachaches and problems of digesting food. These are only a few examples of the wide range of illnesses and symptoms resulting from stress.Emotions are also easily affected by stress. People suffering from stress often feel anxious. They may have panic attacks and feel tired all the time. When people are under stress, they often overreact to little problems. For example, a normally gentle parent under a lot of stress at work may yell at a child for dropping a glass of juice. Stress can make people angry, moody, or nervous.Long-term stress can lead to a variety of serious mental illnesses. Depression, an extreme feeling of sadness and hopelessness, can be the result of continued and increasing stress. Alcoholism and other addictions often develop as a result of overuse of alcohol or drugs to try to relieve stress. If stress is allowed to continue, then one's mental health is put at risk.It is obvious that stress is a serious problem. It attacks the body. It affects the emotions. Untreated, it may eventually result in mental illness. Stress has a great influence on the health, our feelings, and our minds. So, reduce stress: stop the world and rest for a while.___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays, the stress people suffer contributes to many health problems. Primarily, too much stress destroys the well-being of our bodies, causing problems of our heart, respiratory system and stomach. Emotionally, with stress people may feel anxious and can’t control their temper. What’s worse, mental diseases like depression owe to untreated stress. Therefore, only by reducing stress can we keep ourselves physically, emotionally and mentally healthy.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇书信形式的议论文。
2022年(有答案)浙江省高三(下)同步英语试卷(读后续写与概要写作)(51-60)
2022年（有答案）浙江省高三（下）同步英语试卷（读后续写与概要写作）（51-60）一、书面表达1. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．She arrived in ________ not knowing what to expect．Her ________ knew the place，as he had made a number of business trips there over the years．"You'll be happy there，"he said．"I promise you．And the Thais are very friendly．You'll see．""But the ________，"she said．"And all that noise．The children…"He touched her arm softly．"There's traffic in ________ too，remember．And the children will be fine．Thefirm will provide us with a maid﹣two if you want．You'll have all the help you need withthe children．"He had been right．She liked living in Bangkok，and soon stopped missing Sydney，which they had come from．It was easy to keep in touch with ________，too，as they were often able to break their overseas journeys with a stop in Bangkok．"They stay the perfect length of time for ________，"she wrote in a letter．"Three days to catch up on things and then they move on．Guests are like fish，aren't they？After three days they begin to go off．"Her husband enjoyed his job．He had reached the highest class of an international firm of accountants，and had been put in charge of the Bangkok ________．They were popular in the society of the capital，and，she being photogenic，her picture often appeared in the pages of The Bangkok Tatler．She went to charity auctions（拍卖）and fashion launches at the silk houses．And he liked this．"It's good for business for you to be seen，"he said．"Consider it work．Enjoy yourself．"However，on a Friday afternoon in the monsoon（季风）season，just as a heavy purple cloud was building up over the northern edge of Bangkok and the air was becoming heavyand wet，a woman from the office knocked at the door．She let the woman in and could tell immediately that something had happened．The Thais smiled in a particular way when they were distressed，and this was such a ________．Something very serious had happened．注意：（1）．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；（2）．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1："He's had an accident，"she thought immediately．Paragraph 2：As time went by，the wife…2. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．A year ago Dave Fuss lost his job driving a truck for a small company in west Michigan．His wife，Gerrie，was still working in the local school cafeteria，but work for Dave was scarce，and the price of everything was rising．The Fusses were at risk of joining the millions of Americans who have lost their homes in recent years．Then Dave and Gerrie received atimely gift﹣﹩7，000，a legacy（遗产）from their neighbors Ish and Arlene Hatch，who died in an accident．"It really made a difference when we were going under financially，"says Dave．But the Fusses weren't the only folks in Palo Alto and the neighboring town of Lowell to receive the unexpected legacy from the Hatches．Dozens of other families were touched by the Hatches' generosity．In some cases，it was a few thousand dollars；in others，it was more than ﹩100，000．It surprised nearly everyone that the Hatches had so much money，more than ﹩3 million﹣they were an elderly couple who lived in an old house on what was left of the family farm．Children of the Great Depression，Ish and Arlene were known for their habit of saving．They thrived on（喜欢）comparison shopping and would routinely go from store to store，checking prices before making a new purchase．Through the years，the Hatches paid for local children to attend summer camp when their parents couldn't afford it．"Ish and Arlene never asked if you needed anything，"says their friend Sand Van Weelden．"They could see things they could do to make you happier，and they would do them．"Even more extraordinary was that the Hatches had their farmland distributed．It was the Hatches' wish that their legacy﹣a legacy of kindness as much as one of dollars and cents﹣should enrich the whole community and last for generations to come．Neighbors helping neighbors﹣that was Ish and Arlene Hatch's story．3. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．We don't want our kids to be hurt．We don't want our kids to be ________their daddy．But they are．He won't come back．It is not like a movie．We can't hit the rewind button．We can only ________ from here．Learning how to do that is a process．________ is a________．I have been very ________ since my husband's death．I am angry that my husband________ died so young．I am angry that my kids have to grow up without their father's company．I am angry that Edgar was no longer on the earth．He was such a good man，a good friend，a good worker，a good husband and a good father．When I see how his death has hurt my kids，I am angry！But I must learn how to not let my anger rule over me．It takes time．One thing I have discovered is that grief is never﹣ending．It will never go away．It will always be there in some form in our life．It is a hole that can never be filled．That brings me to my next point﹣the ________．It's the empty space that remains where Edgar used to be．Betty，my young daughter，is the one who came up with this picture．No matter what we are doing in life，Edgar will never again physically be there to be a part of us．That reality breaks my heart．When talking about her ________，now that her precious ________ had gone，Betty talked about there being sadness in everything．And then she said that there was a hole in everything without him．In her words，"We can go to Canobie Lake Park，but Daddy isn't there to have fun with us，and we can laugh，but he isn't there to laugh with us．"Those words broke my heart．I hate it that my kids must endure this pain in the rest of their life．Grief is a journey that is full of ups and downs and bumps（肿块）and bruises（瘀青）．It won't get easier；you just learn how to live with it．注意：（1）．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；（2）．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：The truth is that the hole will never go away．Paragraph 2：I will be honest and say that it has been a rough road for my kids．4. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．The Diet Zone：A dangerous placeDiet Coke，Diet Pepsi，diet pills，no﹣fat diet，vegetable diet…We are s urrounded by the word"diet"everywhere we look and listen．We have so easily been attracted by the promise and potential of diet products that we have stopped thinking about what diet products are doing to us．We are paying for products that harm us psychologically and physically（身体上）．Diet products significantly weaken us psychologically．On one level，we are not allowing our brain to admit that our weight problems lie not in actually losing the weight，but in controlling the consumption of fatty，high﹣calorie，and unhealthy foods．Diet products allow us to jump over the thinking stage and go straight to the scale（秤）instead．All we have to do is to swallow or recognize the word"diet" in food labels．On another level，diet products have greater psychological effects．Every time we have a zero﹣calorie drink，we are telling ourselves without our awareness that we don't have to work to get results．Diet products make people believe that gains come without pain，and that life can be without resistance and struggles．The danger of diet products lies not only in the psychological effects they have on us，but also in the physical harm that they cause．Diet foods can indirectly harm our bodies because consuming them instead of healthy foods means we are preventing our bodies from having basic nutrients（营养成分）．Diet foods and diet pills contain zero calorie only because the diet industry has created chemicals to produce these products．Diet products may not be nutritional，and the chemicals that go into diet products are potentially dangerous．Now that we are aware of the effects that diet products have on us，it is time to seriously think about buying them．Losing weight lies in the power of minds，not in the power of chemicals．Once we realize this，we will be much better able to resist diet products，and therefore prevent the psychological harm that comes from using them．5. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．I'm ________，but English is not my first language．Today I am an English teacher．I would like to say that failures are not disastrous．Have faith，keep ________，and never________，and you will see your hard work pay off．I was a slow learner when I was little．Before five，I couldn't even speak in full sentences．Unlike most other children，I seldom interacted with others；I neither cried nor threw tantrums．My extreme quietness made my parents wonder if I was mentally slow，but they were not sure．Actually，I have to confess that my memories of my early childhood are quite unclear．My learning problems were the result of my mother taking some medicine ________ she became pregnant with me．Although I was born without any physical defects（缺陷），the medicine did affect my early intellectual development．When I was in elementary school，I learned very slowly and was as quiet as a doll．While my teacher was teaching，my mind often wandered outside the classroom to the playground．As a fifth grader，I finally startedinteracting with my classmates．That was the first time in my memory that I had some friends．After heading at full speed for my junior high education，my learning situation got stuck in the mud again．In my country，students entering junior high school had to take an________ test．It was a test for schools to evaluate students' learning abilities so that they could arrange them into different levels of classes based on their IQ test scores．I was placed in the "________" as a result of my below﹣average IQ score．Most of my teachers taughtus using easy and slow methods because they considered us incapable of learning much．However，I never wanted to ________ that I might one day succeed．To prove that when God closes a door，He will definitely open up a big window，a miracle occurred．That's when I discovered a strong ________ for English．注意：（1）．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；（2）．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：At the age of 13，I found myself deeply interested in English．Paragraph 2：My story proves everyone has the ability to learn．6. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．Most people agree that honesty is a good thing．But does Mother Nature agree？Animalscan't talk，but can they lie in other ways？Can they lie with their bodies or behavior？Animal experts may not call it lying，but they do agree that many animals，from birds to chimpanzees，behave dishonestly to fool other animals．Many kinds of birds are very successful at fooling other animals．For example，a plover，a kind of bird，sometimes pretends to be hurt in order to protect its young．When a predator （猎食动物）gets close to its nest，the plover leads the predator away from the nest．How？It pretends to have a broken wing．The predator follows the "hurt"adult，leaving the baby birds safe in the nest．Another kind of bird，the scrub jay，buries its food so it always has something to eat．Scrub jays are also thieves．They watch where others bury their food and steal it．But clever scrub jays seem to know when a thief is watching them．So they go back later，unbury the food，and bury it again somewhere else．Birds called cuckoos have found a way to have babies without doing much work．How？They don't make nests．Instead，they get into other birds' nests secretly．Then they laytheir eggs and fly away．When the baby birds come out，their adoptive parents feed them．Chimpanzees，or chimps，can also be sneaky．After a fight，the losing chimp will give its hand to the other．When the winning chimp puts out its hand，too，the chimps are friendly again．But an animal expert once saw a losing chimp take the winner's hand and startfighting again．Chimps are sneaky in other ways，too．When chimps find food that they love，such as bananas，it is natural for them to cry out．Then other chimps come running．But some clever chimps learn to cry very softly when they find food．That way，other chimps don't hear them，and they don't need to share their food．As children，many of us learn the saying"You can't fool Mother Nature"．But maybe you can't trust her，either．7. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．Ryan Jay is 27 and lives in London．He has been ________ from acute lymphoblastic leukaemia for the past four years，and finished his maintenance treatment________ago．Ryan hopes to join in________ for acute lymphoblastic leukaemia sufferers．It was just after Christmas in 2010 when Ryan，then aged 23 and a student at Sheffield University，started to notice symptoms．He was working a winter job in a bookshop back home in London，but he was finding just walking the shop floor exhausting，despite sleeping well，and he had noticed angry rashes（皮疹）appearing in random places________．After a month of experiencing extreme tiredness and rashes，along with an increasingly bad complexion and eventually，heart palpitations（心悸），Ryan went to visit his GP．However，having a runny nose，which doctors later released was ________his damaged immune system，he was told he simply had a cold．With his symptoms worsening，Ryan visited four different walk﹣in（无需预约的）centres in a day，only to be told the same thing each time that he had a cold．Unsatisfied with the response，he resolutely walked back into one walk﹣in centre and showed a different doctor his rashes．This time he was immediately booked in for a ________ test at Royal Hallamshire Hospital，with the GP paying for his cab to get there．It was only then that he was finally d________ with acute lymphoblastic leukaemia．For the five weeks that followed，Ryan lived in a haematology（血液学）ward，regularly being pumped with intense chemotherapy and ________（类固醇治疗）．It was during this time that he was told that he ________ remission，but it was going to be a long，arduous treatment plan．The treatment plan was，in fact，three and a half years，with the first nine months involving intense，weekly doses of chemotherapy．In mid﹣February of 2011，he was discharged from hospital．He remained in Sheffield fora further four weeks，receiving intense chemotherapy ________（药物），before relocating back home with his family and being admitted to Churchill Hospital，Oxford．注意：（1）．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；（2）．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：Over the next three years， as a result of his treatment， Ryan lost most of his hair， missed his graduation and missed out on travelling．Paragraph 2：Ryan's biggest challenge， however， has been coping mentally．8. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．When ________ was diagnosed with the Attention Obstacle Disorder，my first reaction was relief﹣I finally knew the reason for ________．However，I was also overwhelmed with sadness，fear and anger．I felt sorry for ________ and for myself．Like many others in similar circumstances，my question to God was"Why me？"Through the grace of God，I am now able to ________ my gratitude．I believe God chose me to raise my son because He knew that I would give him the best I have ________．Hewill teach me to love and understand him for who he is．I am ________ that I have my son，and grateful that God chose me to be his mother．There is power and healing in gratitude．How can gratitude help us in our everyday lives as mothers？________ around you，and think about the difference you can make in your family's life just by being thankful for all the great things they do．When life is good，gratitude is easy．That's to say，when you express gratitude，you show your love and ________．Everyone needs to feel these things every day．Sometimes as mothers we feel that no one appreciates us﹣it is true that mothers are usually last on the list to be thanked．One way you can teach gratitude is by example．________ when it seems your children or husband are doing everything wrong，find a reason to thank them．Take the time and energy to look for the good．Think about the things that your family does that deserve a"Thank you"．You might say to your husband，"Thank you for working so hard for our family，"or，to your child，"I really ________your sense of humor﹣it feels good to laugh．"Expressing your gratitude helps family members to understand how it feels to be appreciated．And if they still don't catch on，let them know when you feel unappreciated．You can also tell them how great it makes you feel when they do express gratitude．注意：（1）．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；（2）．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：Gratitude is a wonderful motivator when you need cooperation．Paragraph 2：Sometimes we get so busy and caught up in daily life that we forget to be grateful．9. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．I was born in Mexico．I don't remember much about my first few years growing up there﹣________never had money，and there weren't any jobs．It was ________ for my brother and me．Mother's only choice was to take us to a homeless ________﹣I was ________ being homeless．That afternoon when we arrived at the Bible Tabernacle shelter，I was so scared．The shelter was dark and crowded with families，but we had nowhere else to go．Everyone who wanted to live in the shelter had to keep their ________ outside in large storage lockers．All we brought from Mexico were two bags of clothes and a doll for me．But while in the shelter，we had to have head lice（虱子）removed and were forced to throw out all our clothes and replace them with used stuff．We had to throw away these beautiful hand﹣made dresses from Mexico．I always felt like a Cinderella when I wore them．Each day at 6 a．m．，everyone was required to go to Bible reading．Then we went to our lockers and gathered what we needed for the day﹣clothes，books．Next，we'd waiti________ to take a shower，which was timed．Once，my mom accidentally went over the time limit and was humiliated（使丢脸）when the staff came in to tell her she had to get out．It made me ________．And I really hated the ladies' room，but I couldn't say anything to ________ her．It had one mirror，a sink and two doorless fences，so in fact there was no privacy！At 8 a．m，we ate breakfast．I felt like a beggar，standing in that long line．When it got too noisy，the director flashed the lights in the dining room and said，"Stop serving！"Then everyone quieted down．It made me feel so low，like we were nothing．________，I came straight home because dinner was at 4 p．m．If you missed it，you wouldn't eat．So I couldn't ________ with friends or do after﹣school activities．注意：（1）．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；（2）．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：After dinner，we had to attend the church service．Paragraph 2：My friends had no idea that I lived in a shelter．10. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．An apprenticeship（学徒制）is a form of on﹣the﹣job training that combines workplace experience and classroom learning．It can last anywhere from one to six years，but four years is typical for most．An apprentice spends the majority of the time in a workplace environment learning the practical skills of a career from a journeyman（熟练工）﹣someone who has done the job for many years．The rest of the apprentice's time is spent in a classroom environment learning the theoretical skills the career requires．Being an apprentice is a full﹣time undertaking．One of the advantages of apprenticeship is that it does not cost apprentices anything．The companies that hire them pay for their schooling．What's more，it offers apprentices an"earn while you learn"opportunity．They usually start out at half the pay of a journeyman，and the pay increases gradually as they move further along in the job and studies．Near the end of the apprenticeship，their wages are usually 90 percent of what a journeyman would receive．Apprenticeship also pays off for employers．It can offer employers a pool of well﹣trained workers to draw from．Despite the advantages，apprentices are usually required to work during the day and attend classes at night，which leaves little time for anything else．Sometimes，they might be laid off（下岗）if business for the employers is slow．Once they have completed the apprenticeship and become journeymen，they receive a nationally recognized and portable certification and their pay also increases again．Some journeymen continue employment with the companies where they are apprenticed；others go onto different companies or become self﹣employed contractors．参考答案与试题解析2022年（有答案）浙江省高三（下）同步英语试卷（读后续写与概要写作）（51-60）一、书面表达1.【答案】Bangkok,husband,traffic,Sydney,Australianfriends,guests,office,smile【考点】读后续写【解析】高分句型一：She usually missed her husband whenever the woman visited her．译文：每当这个女人来看望她，她总想念她的丈夫．分析：whenever引导的让步状语从句．高分句型二：Therefore she went to charity auctions as usual， did what she liked and enjoyed herself．译文：所以她像往常一样去了慈善拍卖会，做她喜欢做的事情，享受自己的生活．分析：what引导的宾语从句．【解答】Paragraph 1："He's had an accident，"she thought immediately．The woman told her why her husbandhad a traffic accident． On the way to the office， when he and his driver turned a corner onto a narrow street， suddenly there was a small elephant and its keeper coming towards them． The car hit the elephant． As a result， the car turned over， and they were underthe car． The passers﹣by called the police at once． Soon the ambulance came， taking them to the hospital as fast as possible． However， her husband was hurt badly， so hedidn't come backe to life．（女人回忆和丈夫的车祸过程）Paragraph 2：As time went by，the wife still stayed at Bangkok， but her children returned to Sydney． She usually missed her husband whenever the woman visited her．【高分句型一】They talked about the past， children and husband． Though she was sad sometimes， the Thai woman's smile never happened． Therefore she went to charity auctions as usual， did what she liked and enjoyed herself．【高分句型二】 Little by little， she loved Bangkok than before． At last， she picked up from the sorrow．（随着时间的推移，女人慢慢从悲痛中恢复过来）2.【答案】The Fusses were in financial difficulty．（Fusses遇到经济困难） Fortunately，unexpected help came to the couple and their problem was finally solved．【高分句型一】（人们来帮忙）It turned out that the Hatches， the Fusses' thrifty but generous neighbors，wanted to give away their possessions．（邻居捐赠）Born into the Great Depression， the Hatches developed the habit of saving， and accumulated much money．【高分句型二】（累积财富）They'd like the neighbors to follow their example and spread their kindness．（传播善良）【考点】概要写作【解析】高分句型一：Fortunately，unexpected help came to the couple and their problem wasfinally solved．译文：幸运的是，这对夫妇得到了意外的帮助，他们的问题终于解决了．分析：and连接并列句．高分句型二：Born into the Great Depression， the Hatches developed the habit of saving，and accumulated much money．译文：哈奇出生于大萧条时期，养成了储蓄的习惯，积累了很多钱．分析：过去分词作状语．【解答】The Fusses were in financial difficulty．（Fusses遇到经济困难） Fortunately，unexpected help came to the couple and their problem was finally solved．【高分句型一】（人们来帮忙）It turned out that the Hatches， the Fusses' thrifty but generous neighbors，wanted to give away their possessions．（邻居捐赠）Born into the Great Depression， the Hatches developed the habit of saving， and accumulated much money．【高分句型二】（累积财富）They'd like the neighbors to follow their example and spread their kindness．（传播善良）3.【答案】without ,go forward,Grief,journey,angry,Edgar,hole,new life,daddy【考点】读后续写【解析】高分句型一：I lost him but he will be with me forever， for we used to have so many good memories．译文：我失去了他，但是他永远和我在一起，因为我们曾经有过如此多美好的回忆．分析：but连接两个表转折的句子，for引导原因状语从句．高分句型二：It's also so sad to know he isn't there when I take care of my children．译文：当我照顾孩子们的时候，意识到他再也没在身边，这也是非常难过的．分析：it充当形式主语，句子的真正主语是动词不定式，know后面接宾语从句，when引导时间状语从句．【解答】Paragraph 1：The truth is that the hole will never go away．I will always love and miss Edgar． But griefis a journey． He is with God now． His death is a painful hole to my new life． I lost him but he will be with me forever， for we used to have so many good memories．【高分句型一】 I miss him﹣ my children's daddy． I wish to meet him again because he is the best father．（作者对Edgar的思念之情）Paragraph 2：I will be honest and say that it has been a rough road for my kids．It's never been the same since then， and they think of him all the time． It's also so sad to know he isn't there when I take care of my children．【高分句型二】It's so difficult to sleep at times and all they are thinking of is him． He is their world and he means everything to them．Without him here，they do not feel free． They miss him every day． Nothing here will be the same．（失去Edgar对孩子们而言是艰难的）4.【答案】Diet products are misleading people psychologically and physically．（节食产品误导人们）One psychological effect of diet products is that people tend to watch their weight rather than their diet．【高分句型一】（人们看重体重）Besides， diet products make people believe losing weight is effortless． On the other hand， diet products lack basic nutrients，harming people physically in an indirect way．【高分句型二】（节食产品的害处）Therefore， we should take diet products seriously and work to lose weight．（锻炼减肥）【考点】概要写作【解析】高分句型一：One psychological effect of diet products is that people tend to watch their weight rather than their diet译文：饮食产品的一个心理效应是人们倾向于关注自己的体重而不是饮食．分析：that引导表语从句．高分句型二：On the other hand， diet products lack basic nutrients， harming people physically in an indirect way．译文：另一方面，饮食产品缺乏基本的营养，间接地伤害了人们的身体．分析：现在分词作状语．【解答】Diet products are misleading people psychologically and physically．（节食产品误导人们）One psychological effect of diet products is that people tend to watch their weight rather than their diet．【高分句型一】（人们看重体重）Besides， diet products make people believe losing weight is effortless． On the other hand， diet products lack basic nutrients，harming people physically in an indirect way．【高分句型二】（节食产品的害处）Therefore， we should take diet products seriously and work to lose weight．（锻炼减肥）5.【答案】anEnglishself﹣learner,moving on,give up hope,when,IQ,bottom class,lose faith,passion【考点】读后续写【解析】高分句型一：I realized that no matter how hard or how unfair my situation was， I could choose to keep moving on rather than give up．译文：我意识到无论我的情况多么艰难和不公平，我能选择继续前进而不是放弃．分析：that引导的宾语从句，从句中含有no matter how引导的让步状语从句．高分句型二：No matter what you are interested in， you need to set a goal， and keep yourself working for that goal．译文：无论你对什么感兴趣，你需要设立一个目标，然后让你自己一直努力朝着目标前进．分析：no matter what引导的让步状语从句．【解答】Paragraph 1：At the age of 13，I found myself deeply interested in English．Aside from reading English textbooks， I developed a habit of reading English magazines， listening to English programs， and keeping an English diary． Moreover， I summarized almost every story inbooks or magazines to improve my writing skills． In order to strengthen my speaking ability，I often told myself those stories in English． I realized that no matter how hard or how unfair my situation was， I could choose to keep moving on rather than give up．【高分句型一】Where there is a will， there is a way． With over 10 years of self﹣study， I successfully pass the exams and became an English teacher．（作者从小对英语的激情，导致她后来成功成为英语老师）Paragraph 2：My story proves everyone has the ability to learn．Success has nothing to do with IQ． No matter what you are interested in， you need to set a goal， and keep yourself working for that goal．【高分句型二】Never lose faith or let go of your hope． Hope brings about passion． Passion makes you move forward， and once you learn with passion， your dreams will come true．（作者通过自己的例子告诉所有人大家都有学习的能力）6.【答案】Dishonesty often helps animals survive．（不诚实帮助动物生存）A plover protects its young from a predator by pretending to be injured ， clever scrub jays cheat others by changing their food's hiding places， and the cuckoo finds its baby adoptive parents secretly．【高分句型一】（举例说明）Some losing chimps pretend to be friendly for a further fight and some lower their cry to keep others away from the food they find．【高分句型二】（黑猩猩的例子）【考点】概要写作【解析】高分句型一：A plover protects its young from a predator by pretending to be injured ，clever scrub jays cheat others by changing their food's hiding places， and the cuckoo findsits baby adoptive parents secretly．译文：一只扑克鸟假装受伤来保护它的幼崽不受捕食者的伤害，聪明的松鸦通过改变食物的藏身之处来欺骗别人，而布谷鸟则秘密地发现它的养儿父母．分析：protect sb from doing sth保护某人免受．高分句型二：Some losing chimps pretend to be friendly for a further fight and some lower their cry to keep others away from the food they find．译文：一些输了的黑猩猩假装友好地继续战斗，一些则降低了他们的哭声，让其他黑猩猩远离他们找到的食物．分析： losing 是现在分词作定语，不定式作目的状语．【解答】Dishonesty often helps animals survive．（不诚实帮助动物生存）A plover protects its young from a predator by pretending to be injured ， clever scrub jays cheat others by changing their food's hiding places， and the cuckoo finds its baby adoptive parents secretly．【高分句型一】（举例说明）Some losing chimps pretend to be friendly for a further fight and some lower their cry to keep others away from the food they find．【高分句型二】（黑猩猩的例子）7.【答案】in remission,one year , any activity,across his body,as a result of ,blood,iagnosed,steroid treatment,had a good chance of,medication【考点】。
浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要写作(40)含答案解析
浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要写作（40）含答案解析【题文】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Work is a very important part of life in the United States. When the early immigrants came to this country, they brought the idea that work was the way to God and heaven. This attitude still influences America today. Work is not only important for the salary, but also for social and psychological working, being productive. For most Americans, they are what they do. What happens, then, when a person retires at the age of sixty-five or seventy? It’s easy to imagine that retirement is no easy thing. Retirees often feel they are unproductive and no longer needed by others.Once people retire, they may also get into financial trouble. Many people rely on Social Security checks every month. During their working years, employees contribute a certain percentage of their salaries to the government. When people retire, they receive this money as income. These checks do not provide enough money to live on, however, because prices are increasing very rapidly. After retirement, they have to change their lifestyles. They have to spend carefully to be sure that they can afford to buy food, fuel, and other necessities.Of course, not all senior citizens feel sad when they are in face of retirement. Working for so many years, they eventually have time to spend with their families or to enjoy their hobbies such as reading, traveling or joining some senior citizen clubs. Some continue to work part time; others choose to do volunteer work like helping young people to get started in new business.American government is taking steps to ease the problems of retired people. They are building new housing, offering discounts in stores and museums and on buses, and providing other services, such as free courses, food service, and help with housework. It is wise to do so. Retired citizens are an important part of the population and their special needs must be concerned about. After all, everyone will be a senior citizen someday.___________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________【答案】Work plays an extremely important role in American culture, so people find retirement difficult as they may feel useless without jobs. Retir ement can also bring financial problems as Social Security checks don’t provide enough money. However, some senior citizens feel happy about retirement as they finally get time to do what they really want. American government is solving retired citizens’ p roblems and concerning their special needs, which is wise and necessary, because everyone will get old.【解析】【分析】该文要求写一个内容概要，对所给材料的主要内容进行概括总结。
浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达续写(48)含答案解析
浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达续写（48）含答案解析【题文】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was Christmas Day. Pappy was working alone fixing an old lantern in the backroom when he heard the ringing of his bell on the shop door. The bell, which produced a uniquely pleasant sound, had been in Pappy’s family for over a hundred years. He valued it dearly and enjoyed sharing its song with all who came to his shop. Although the bell hung on the inside of the main door, Pappy had tied a wire to the screen door so that it would ring whether the inner door was open or not. Hearing the bell, he left the backroom to greet his customer.“And how can I help you, little lady?” Pappy’s voice was joyful.“Hello, sir.” The little girl spoke almost in a whisper. She looked at Pappy with her big brown eyes, and then slowly scanned the room in search of something special. Shyly she told him, “I’d like to buy a present, sir.”“Well, let’s see,” Pappy said, “who is this present for?”“My grandpa. It’s for my grandpa. But I don’t know what to get.”Pappy began to make suggestions. “How about a pocket watch? It’s in good condition.” The little girl didn’t answer. She had walked to the doorway and put her small hand on the door. She shook the door gently to ring the bell. Pappy’s face seemed to glow as he saw her smiling with excitement.“This is just right,” the little girl said. “Momma says grandpa loves music.”Just then, Pappy’s expression changed. Fearful of breaking the little girl’s heart, he told her, “I’m sorry, Missy. That’s not for sale. Maybe you r grandpa would like this little radio.”The girl looked at the radio, bowed her head, and sadly sighed, “No, I don’t think so.”In an effort to help her understand, Pappy told her that the bell had been his only companion, for the rest of his family were all gone now, except for his estranged (疏远的) daughter whom he had not seen for nearly a decade.注意：所续写短文的词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要（37）含答案解析
【题文】
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
For many high school students, giving an in-class presentation is an approach to their growth. Teachers will call up students, one by one, to present their work in front of the class, and, though it is often tense, many people say it has helped turn them into more confident public speakers. Some educators also credit it with building leadership skills and increasing students’ confidence and understanding of materials.
But in the past few years, students have started calling for an end to in-class presentations as they show discrimination against those with anxiety. This week, a tweet posted by a 15-year-old high school student declaring “Stop forcing students to present in front of the class and gi ve them a choice not to” received more than 130,000 retweets and nearly half a million likes.
In fact, being a high schooler nowadays is more stressful than ever. Students are burdened with extra hours of homework. They stay up every night till 1:00 a.m. finishing homework on their third Red Bull. Anxiety is increasing at a faster rate than depression (抑郁) as the leading mental-health issue affecting teenagers, a recent study in the Journal of Developmental and Behavioral Pediatrics found.
These students want more options. They say that every student has unique strengths and that they should be allowed to present their work in ways that speak to those strengths. This might mean presenting alone in front of the teacher, or choosing between several alternatives like producing a piece of art or an essay for private judgment instead of presenting their work orally.
Educators have begun to take it seriously. They agree teachers should listen to students and hear their voices and respond to that. If students’ feeli ngs are ignored, they might just walk away. However, not everyone is convinced. Some hold the view that pushing students out of comfort zones is a big part of what they should do as some students are deathly afraid to do it.
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Giving an in-class presentation is an approach to students’ growth. In the past few years, students have started calling for an end to in-class presentations as they show discrimination against those with anxiety. They say that every student has unique
strengths and they should be allowed to present their work in their ways. Educators have begun to take it seriously.
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【分析】
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是一篇概要写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇说明文；文章介绍了课堂展示作为学生成长的一种方式。
在过去的几年里，学生们开始呼吁停止在课堂上做报告，因为他们对那些有焦虑症的学生表现出歧视。
他们说每个学生都有自
己独特的优势，应该允许他们以自己的方式展示自己的作品。
教育工作者已经开始认真对待这个问题。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：an approach（一种方式），call for an end（呼吁停止），discrimination
（歧视），unique strengths（独特的优势）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
概要写作有明确的字数限制，因此在
完成此类写作时，一定要注意详略得当，避免造成超出字数限制而丢分的情况。
如本文中详细描写课堂展示的重要
作用的第一段应当总结概括为一句话；与第三段描写学生焦虑的具体表现应省略不做概述。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面
是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Giving an in-class
presentation is an approach to students’ growth. 运用了动名词短语做主语；In the past few years, students have started
calling for an end to in-class presentations as they show discrimination against those with anxiety. 运用了as引导的原因状
语从句。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句
转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
【标题】浙江省温州市2019届高三2月份适应性测试英语试题
【结束】。