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Unit4 写作课课件课件-高中英语人教版(2019)选择性必修第二册
第三步 句式升级 1.用非限制性定语从句改写句1 _O_n__J_u_l_y__7_，__m_y__p_a_r_e_n_t_s_a_n_d__I_t_o_o_k__a__b_u_s_t_o__L_e_s_h_a_n_，__S_ic_h_u__a_n_ _P_r_o_v_i_n_c_e，__w__h_i_ch__i_s _f_a_m_o_u_s__fo_r__th_e__G_i_a_n_t_S_t_o_n_e_B__u_d_d_h_a_._______ 2.用现在分词短语作状语改写句3 _L_o_o_k_i_n_g__u_p_a_t__th_e__la_r_g_e__h_e_a_d_a_n_d__d_o_w__n_a_t_t_h_e__la_r_g_e_f_e_e_t_，__I_f_el_t_ _I_w__a_s_s_o_s_m__a_ll_. __________________________________________
_G__iv_e_n___a_n_o_t_h_e_r__c_h_a_n_c_e_，___I__a_m___b_o_u_n__d__t_o__p_a_y___a__v_i_si_t__t_o_ _L_e_s_h_a_n__a_g_a_i_n_.__________________________________________
5.在黄昏时刻，我们返程。
_A_t__d_u_s_k_，__w__e_m__a_d_e__o_u_r_w__a_y__b_a_c_k_.__________________________
6.我们都非常累，但是我们去乐山的旅程真的既难忘又使人愉快。
_W__e__w_e_r_e_a_l_l_t_ir_e_d_，__b__u_t_o_u_r__tr_i_p__to__L_e_s_h_a_n__w_a_s__r_e_a_ll_y_u_n__fo_r_g_e_t_t_able _a_n_d__p_l_e_a_s_a_n_t_. ____________________________________________
公开课_高中英语写作PPT教学课件
a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
2020/12/12
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
高中英语记叙文写作 教学课件(共40张PPT)
meeting to discuss it.
8. It is reported that the river has been polluted (污染).
9. She tried to remind (提醒) us not to throw rubbish anywhere.
10. We can breathe fresh (新鲜的) air and enjoy ourselves.
Last Sunday, we had a picnic in a mountain near our school.
Spring is coming. let’s have a picnic.
What can we eat?
What are they cooking, fish or pork?
When our monitor suggested having a picnic , we were all pleased.
由词到句
4) 我们带了各种食品和饮料。 bring /bring…with… kinds of/all kinds of/various/a variety of/varieties of food and drinks We brought all kinds of food and drinks.
Li Hai told such a funny story that we couldn’t help laughing.
由词到句
6) 赵娟在跳舞时摔了一跤。 dance fall/have a fall Zhao Juan fell when she danced.
Zhao Juan had a fall when she danced.
8. It is reported that the river has been polluted (污染).
9. She tried to remind (提醒) us not to throw rubbish anywhere.
10. We can breathe fresh (新鲜的) air and enjoy ourselves.
Last Sunday, we had a picnic in a mountain near our school.
Spring is coming. let’s have a picnic.
What can we eat?
What are they cooking, fish or pork?
When our monitor suggested having a picnic , we were all pleased.
由词到句
4) 我们带了各种食品和饮料。 bring /bring…with… kinds of/all kinds of/various/a variety of/varieties of food and drinks We brought all kinds of food and drinks.
Li Hai told such a funny story that we couldn’t help laughing.
由词到句
6) 赵娟在跳舞时摔了一跤。 dance fall/have a fall Zhao Juan fell when she danced.
Zhao Juan had a fall when she danced.
高中英语写作课教学ppt课件
2) It may bring about severe unpredicted consequence.
3）It does us much harm// It is harmful to us．// It is bad for us.
4) It brings more harm than good to us.
they benefit people’s health greatly by giving them due physical exercise．
From what has been mentioned above, we have good
reason to believe that the bike will soon become people’s
English Writing
细化写作 化繁为简
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1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this can be listed as
follows:
3 ） The reason for this is obvious ．
练吧
近年来，人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的 变化。电脑在今天已经进入寻常百姓家，请 简单阐述其原因。
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Three reasons may account for the
changes that have taken place in our
life．First of all，people’s living
While I admit that it is sometimes inconvenient for one to go on a long trip by bike, bicycles still have more advantages than disadvantages, compared with cars. There are several reasons accounting for my opinion.
高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件
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句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
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基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
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基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
人教高中英语必修3Unit5写作课件(共26张PPT)
famous for
population
climate
resources
Located in the North America, Canada is the second largest country in the world，larger than the United States. It covers a total area of 9.98 million square kilometers with a population of about 35 million in 2013. It is mainly a cold country in winter, where temperature falls below freezing point throughout most of the area with only the south western coast having a relatively mild climate. Its capital is Ottawa and Toronto is one of the largest cities. Much of the country is covered by forests, so this country is rich in forestry . Also well known for its fishing and wildlife, Canada attracts the tourists from all over the world to enjoy its charming scenery. 划出介绍地点时常用的词句
高分作文要求：（1）书写美观，卷面整洁； （2）信息内容完整，句子结构; （3）篇章结构连贯。
高中英语作文 PPT课件 图文
• Reason 1:高考临近，没有心情玩
• Sentence pattern: • They say/believe/hold the opinion… that…. • Eg: They say that with college entrance
examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere.
that…,since it tends to…,which is unfavorable to … Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.
Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空 气，有利健康
英语写作讲解
影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面
漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
影响给分的因素之二： 文中所采用的语言材料
人靠衣装，文靠词装
A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜； B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;
Practice
Conclusion: 小段总结，进一步亮 明观点，前后呼应。
• Eg: They think it will do good to their students.
• Point 2:３５％的学生认为不应该 春游（亮明观点）
• 注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落 （承上启下）
• Sentence pattern:
表示观点对比类写作套语
A.总起: Opinions are divided on this question. Different people hold different / opposite opinions. People have taken/adopted different attitudes
新教材2023年高中英语Unit2 SectionⅣWriting课件新人教版选择性必修第二册
[常用表达] 1．话题词汇 (1)consider考虑 (2)regret后悔；遗憾 (3)determine决定 (4)intend意图 (5)prepare准备 (6)I am convinc best尽某人最大努力 (8)you are supposed to你应当…… (9)inform sb. of sth.通知某人某事 (10)in my opinion依我看
⑧Why not do...为什么不…… ⑨I'd like to suggest that...我想要建议…… ⑩If I were you，I would...如果我是你，我会…… ⑪As is known to all...众所周知…… ⑫What's more，try to...更重要的是，试一试…… ⑬Last but not least，you should...最后但同样重要的是，你应当……
[佳作展示] Dear Tom，
I'm glad to know you want to study abroad to experience a different
culture. Generally speaking，it is beneficial. On the one hand，you can walk out of the comfort zone，forcing
think is also my advantage.I'll appreciate it if you can consider me.
Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
精品展示 假定你是李华，你的朋友Tom计划出国留学，写信询问你的意见， 请你给他写封回信。内容包括： ①写信目的； ②分析利弊； ③表达自己的观点。 注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 __________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________
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Finally ;
To make matters worse ; In addition
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As far as I’m concerned, all the children including girls should be educated. _B_e_s_i_d_e_s, the whole society should put great emphasis on children’s education __b_e_c_a_u_s_e they’ll play an important part in the future of our country one day.
next to our natural resources. 4) I fleofrtgot my dictionary at home. 5) It will tcaokste us much money to buy one.
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改错
I∧t built in the 1980s. was
sentence patterns
(词语的准确运用和句式编the following paragraphs:
I'm very pleased to tell you the changes of my life
since the reduction of learning load was brought in.
children out of school. The reasons can be
listed as follow. T_o__b_e_g_in__w_i_th__, most families are too poor
to send their children to school. _A__s_a__re_s_u_lt_,
In our city ,the public order is better than∧other places.that of
Buy a cellphone is too expensive.
stay up; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 p.m.
In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.
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使用恰当的连接词 Use proper linking words
Now in the country areas, there are many
besides; However ; because ; Therefore
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Avoid Chinglish! 1) Traffic in Shanghai is tohoeacvryo.wded. 2) There hisas a highway connected with Beijing. 3) Though the transport is good ，but it fades
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DISCUSSION:
What is a good writing？
Content: everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整)
Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)
Since the program of reducing learning load was
introduced, my life, however, has become much more
interesting. I frequently pay a visit to museums, drop
* Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅)
Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误)
* With exactly used words and relatively changed
_F_i_n_a_ll_y_, some children are not interested in their studies. _T__o_m__a_k_e_m_a_t_te_r_s_w__o_rs_e___, some wouldn’t like to go to school.
In my opinion;
they have no choice but to stay at home and
make money.
as a result;
In addition ;
To begin with ; However
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_I_n_a_d_d_i_ti_o_n_, some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school. Therefore, they don’t let them go to school.
in at computer rooms and draw pictures in my leisure
time. After lunch, I watch TV, read stories and look
through newspapers to enrich myself. No longer do I
Before that, I was often exhausted at weekends. I
attended school and had classes the whole day. In the evening，I was often forced to do my boring
homework and I could not go to bed until 11:30.