雅思大作文之教育类话题 课件
2024雅思写作IELTSWriting课件
雅思写作是雅思考试中的一部分，主要评估考生的英语写作能力。
Task 1通常要求考生根据所给图表或数据写一篇报告，主要考察考生的数据分析和描述能力；Task 2则要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法，主要考察考生的议论和表达能力。
雅思写作考试要求考生在限定时间内完成两篇作文，分别是Task 1和Task 2。
雅思写作考试简介0102雅思写作评分标准主要包…任务完成情况、语法和拼写、词汇使用、句子结构和连贯性。
任务完成情况评估考生是否按照题目要求完成了写作任务，是否清晰地回答了题目中的问题。
语法和拼写评估考生的语法和拼写是否正确、准确，是否影响了读者的理解。
词汇使用评估考生使用的词汇是否丰富、准确，是否能够恰当地表达自己的意思。
句子结构和连贯性评估考生的句子结构是否多样、复杂，是否使用了恰当的连接词和过渡语，使文章更加连贯和流畅。
030405雅思写作评分标准03要求考生根据所给的图表或数据写一篇报告，分析数据并得出结论。
常见的图表类型包括柱状图、折线图、饼图等。
图表作文要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法，并给出理由和证据支持自己的观点。
常见的话题包括教育、环境、科技、社会等。
议论文要求考生在一篇文章中同时完成图表分析和议论两种任务，既需要描述数据又需要发表自己的观点。
这种题型对考生的综合能力要求较高。
混合类型作文雅思写作题型介绍审题与立意仔细阅读题目，理解题意在写作前，务必认真阅读题目，确保完全理解题目的要求和限制。
确定文章主题和观点根据题目要求，明确文章的主题和要表达的观点，确保立意明确、不跑题。
列出要点和论据在审题和立意的基础上，列出文章的主要要点和支持观点的论据，为写作做好准备。
03注意段落内部的逻辑关系在每个段落内部，要注意句子之间的逻辑关系，确保段落内部的连贯性和一致性。
01合理安排段落根据文章的主题和要点，合理安排段落，确保文章结构清晰、层次分明。
02使用合适的转折词和连接词在段落之间和句子之间使用合适的转折词和连接词，使文章更加连贯、流畅。
雅思大作文课件
举例子（exemplification）
• For example, for instance, to illustrate, … Eg. Most parents tend to overuse
punishment in their education of the kids.
For example, only because of the bad performance in primary school, the child of my neighbour was inflicted corporal punishment. In this case, it does nothing but harm to the child’s physical and mental development.
有很扎实的语言功底的考生，写作目标7分或 以上成绩
挑选各种题型的范文简单阅读即可。完 全没必要去研读范文，否则只会误导自己。
• 建议：注重同一话题不同角度的出题 方式，确保自己的展开角度紧扣题目指令。 可精读雅思阅读书籍及国外报刊的议论文， 多积累地道语言和英语国家的文化背景和 实例。考前可尝试实战模拟。
Computer technology：on-line, PC, laptop,broadband Working from home: Fashion designer; freelancer; translator;
journalist;writer; music composer, artists Studying from home on-line course, the disable who are difficult to move;
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雅思写作(二)教育类语料库及范文讲解
语料库一 Education
aptitude (for)/talent (for) n. 天资，禀赋 develop/cultivate/foster/nurture v. 培养 (nature先天 vs. nurture后天) promote the development of 促进……的发展 all-rounded/well-rounded/versatile adj. 全面的
语料库一 Education
aptitude (for)/talent (for) n. 天资，禀赋 develop/cultivate/foster/nurture v. 培养 (nature先天 vs. nurture后天) promote the development of 促进……的发展 all-rounded/well-rounded/versatile adj. 全面的 the awareness/sense of …… 的意识 a (or the) the sense of responsibility (or duty/ obligation) 责任感
课前回顾
二级重点话题：
• 职业发展与生活方式类话题 • 时尚与购物类话题 • 饮食与健康话题 • 艺术与体育类话题 • 抽象类话题
语料库一 Education
the approach/method/fashion of education 教育的方式 1. parenting/upbringing n. 家庭教育
语料库一 Education
aptitude (for)/talent (for) n. 天资，禀赋 develop/cultivate/foster/nurture v. 培养 (nature先天 vs. nurture后天) promote the development of 促进……的发展
雅思写作 教育类.ppt
专业选择类--分析思路
平等 分配
优点：各科均有涉猎（个人） 平衡行业（社会）
缺点：既非通才也非专才（个人） 不符合市场需求（社会）
专业选择类--分析思路
专长 学习
优点：精通知识（个人） 专才培养（社会）
缺点：知识面窄（个人） 行业不平衡（社会）
专业选择类—积累素材
Specialization:Biblioteka 专业选择类真题回顾
Some people think that all students should learn a foreign language . Others think students should not be required to learn a foreign language if they don’t have talent for it.
1.Specialization makes life easier: It allows you to focus on only one new skill rather than two. 2.Specialization can also help you build a reputation as an "expert" in a particular field. 3.Concentration on certain subjects allows students to gain specialized knowledge and skills more efficiently.
教育功能
Nation: 1.Inculcation of social responsibility 2.National integration 3.National development 4.Real education is an essential ingredient for all ages and stages of the life of an individual, society as well as the nation. 5. Education can be a real panacea for all social evils.
雅思写作讲座(新航道)lesson 4.ppt
claim/state champion/welcome
2不同意
A
virtually misleading.
This argument is actually destructive.
In fact
harmful.
negative.
I tend to disagree / I am against this view / I am an opponent of the claim that…
Some employers focus on academic qualifications, paying less attention to life experiences and personal qualities. What are causes of this phenomenon? Is this development positive or negative?
Some people think that university students should specialize in one subject, while others think universities should encourage students to learn a range of subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
(2)2007.01.06（新题）
The world of work is changing rapidly, so people cannot always depend on their jobs. What are the reasons of such phenomenon and offer some measures to solve it.
雅思写作大作文话题及模板及范文 精品 PPT课件
simpler way of life will protect the environment, while
others believe that science and technology can solve
environmental problems. Discuss both views and give
也就是说，从平均值看，名校毕业生的 收入就 已经遥 遥领先 好几倍 ，更不 用说那 些高薪 行业的 实际收 入差距 了。 好的大学，不一定保证每一个人都会有 高收入 ，但他 的确能 够为你 提供通 向高收 入的第 一块敲 门砖。 2 开学季前几天，老家的一个远房表兄传 来消息 ，刚满 17岁的 表侄小 立不愿 意再继 续读高 三，准 备辍学 去打工 。 表兄很是着急，把家族里学历比较高的 我也搬 了出来 ，希望 我能劝 劝小立 。 “我虽然这些年到处打工也挣了一些钱 ，但这 样挣钱 太辛苦 了，我 不希望 他重走 我的老 路，” 堂兄苦 口婆心 ，一再 强调， “你一 定要好 好劝劝 他：不 上学以 后没有 出路。 ” 刚开始我和这位00后表侄在微信上聊的 时候， 非常话 不投机 。 我问他：不想读书是不是觉得功课太难 了？ 他答道：也没有多难，就是不想太累了 ，高考 复习很 无聊。 我劝他：再坚持几个月，苦一阵子熬一 熬就过 去了。 他回答得很干脆：太没劲！考上又能怎 么样？ 现在我 家邻居x x大学 毕业上 班了， 挣的还 没我爸 高呢！ 我再问他：你爸爸现在一身伤病常年要 吃药， 你不是 不知道 吧，还 有，你 爸爸为 了多挣 点钱， 一年到 头在外 面跑， 只有过 年才能 回家一 趟，这 些你也 很清楚 吧？ 他无话可说了。 最后，我实在忍不住，不得不扎他一句 ： “如果现在你连高考都比不过别人，凭 什么以 后你能 比别人 成功？ ” 微信那头
雅思大作文教育
In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today's world?立场：比起全才，培养专业人才应该是大趋势学科数量多1. 有助于学生发现自己的潜力、潜在兴趣学科数量少1. 提高专注度，避免浪费时间在无关学科上In some countries, secondary schools provide a general education across a wide range of subjects. Other countries offer a much narrower range of subjects which are related to a particular career. I think the trends is most students would spend more time on fewer areas to increase the chances of having a successful career.With the more liberal approach in which students are exposed to a wide range of subjects, students often acquire other areas of interest than those they might have had originally. For example, a student who may have originally been interested to study to become a doctor might find that he is more interested in becoming a writer when he is exposed to those subjects in a secondary school that provides a general education. So, those who argue for schools to offer a wider range of subjects will maintain that young students should be exposed to a larger range of subjects before making life decisions regarding the pursuit of a career.On the other hand, the schools offering a narrower and more specific range of subjects will maintain that all of those non-related classes are non-essential, maybe even a waste of time. For example, if a person wants to study to be an accountant, there are fewer benefits of requiring him to take a biology course.Today's world is a specialized world and it is understandable why many secondary schools are now focusing on a narrower path of subjects in training students for future careers and professions. Although some students will benefit from a wider selection of subjects in determining a career path, most students will opt for the fastest and most direct path available.Some people say that art subjects such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?立场：不同意正方：艺术课程可能纯粹是浪费时间反方：1. 总是会有学生对艺术感兴趣2. 上艺术课程也会让学生接触到新领域的学习Some people say that compulsory subjects should not include the ones related to art such as painting or drawing for high school students. My opinion is that learning from art subjects willcertainly benefit students, so there is a need to make these subjects compulsory.Those people who say that art courses should not be compulsory contend that students should not be required to study a subject unless they have an interest in that subject. Those people often classify study of art as a waste of valuable time. They tend to question the benefit of studying a subject that a student never intends to use.The people who speak on behalf of requiring students to study art maintain that a student can benefit from being exposed to new subjects and new areas of study. All people have a practical side and a creative side. Even though a student intends to be an accountant, he might also find that he enjoys more creative activities such as painting, drawing, acting, singing, or dancing. So an effective way is that schools can introduce students to art activities that those students may enjoy, even if those activities are not related to their major course of study.Although some students may object to having to take art courses in which they are not interested, those courses will expose them to different areas of study. Even if the student continues to be less interested in the arts, perhaps they will acquire an appreciation for those who pursue those areas of study. It is important for young students to be well-rounded and well-versed, even if through a compulsory course.The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?立场：团队运动只是一种教授合作的重要性途径，还有其他活动可以起到同样的作用团队运动：1.让小孩认识到，团队的目标重于个人目标其他方式1. 应允许小孩根据自己的兴趣参与相关的活动2. 只要是涉及和别人合作的活动都能起到同等作用。
雅思写作强化PPT优秀课件
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❖ A museum is a good place where tourists can appreciate the local and better understand the local history.
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❖ Who is qualified to be the censor remains an issue of controversy.
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❖ 什么是分级制度 ❖ 分级制度指的是某一组织根据一定的原则把
片厂的产品按其内容划分成若干级，给每一 级规定好允许面对的群众群。它没有国家法 律支持，但在行业内部具有约束力。它只对 观众起提示的作用，而把选择权交给了观众， 由观众实行自我保护。
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❖ （三）连接代词who, whom, whose, what, which等wh-词既充当连接词，连接主句和从 句，又在从句中担当一定的语法成分，做主 语、宾语或者是补语。
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❖ 现阶段人们更加关心的是政府能否能够创造 更多的就业机会。
❖ 关心：be concerned with; care for;
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❖ 取得巨大成功的人，毫无例外，都是善于利 用零碎时间的人。
❖ 毫无例外：with no exception ❖ 利用：utilize ❖ 零碎时间：odd moments ❖ 善于：wisely; be good at; be wise in
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❖ 人口爆炸和淡水短缺是当今人们面临的两大 棘手问题。
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? certain values such as, obedience, discipline, perseverance, respect and punctuality. Schools also teach us conformity; it encourages us to be good and to be a law abiding citizen.
教育的功能 the functions of education
? Home education: what do parents teach us? ? School education: what do schools teach us?
Home education: what do parents teach us?
Report的结构
? 分四段。 ? 第一段：引出来题，只是report文章不需要有
什么观点存在，只要说明现象就可以。 ? 第二段，就要写引起这件事的reason. ? 第三段：effect了。就顺着题目的问法一段段
写。 ? 第四段：也就是how to solve it.
Argumentation 议论文的两种结构
of sth? 5.What are the benefits and drawbacks of sth? 6.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
一边倒
? 在一边倒结构中,建议分五段. 第一段:因为在题目中一定会有提出两方观点,所以在 第一段的时候也要亮出双方观点(万万不可抄写题目, 要把题目的意思换个句式说法) 同时亮出你是同意或 者不同意,或者是你的观点是怎样.通常第一段会有固 定的模式,这样看你自己的句套是怎样设计. 第二段:要讲你为什么支持你的这个观点.通常在这一 段中会有5句话.第1句就是你为什么同意你这个观点 的第一个理由(IDEA),第2句到第4句便是你这个IDEA 的说明句.第5句便为这一小段的小总结. 第三段:写你支持你这个观点的第二个IDEA,写法同第 二段. 第四段:写你支持你这个观点的第三个IDEA,写法同第 二段. 第五段:便是文章的结尾段.这一段中要再一次明确你 的观点.
? 一边倒结构PK对称结构 ? 辩论型题目的提问方式，一般有如下几种： 1.(To what extent) do you agree or disagree? 2.What is your opinion? 3.What do you think? 4.What are the advantages and disadvantages
? 提示：本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开（个人与社 会），准备好这篇文章，即可应付教育类话题中的最 大分支—教育的功能，做到以不变应万变。对于社会 角度，可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开，对于个 人，可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来 写。
教育应该包括哪些内容？
? 母题：It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions? (050312)
? organ transplant
? 雅思的文章，它绝对不是简单的语言的堆砌。 文章，它承载的是思路，承载的是思想。所以 在写文章之前，不要一味的去堆砌语言，应该 考虑一下你的想法，你的中心思想，你的逻辑 思维。
? If you do not think clearly, you can not write clearly.
and the consciousness of responsibility. ? parents' love is an incentive for us to study, work
and overcome the troubles in life.
School education: what do schools teach us?
? pass down both academic knowledge and practical experience
? passionate love and the feeling of a true family ? Everything they sacrifice is derived from affection
怎么复习
? 1.要了解雅思考题都会有怎样的问法,熟练掌握 各ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้问法所使用的结构。
? 2.要自己想许多的IDEA。由上述段落写法时, 大家可见通常一篇文章中都需要三个IDEA。 所以没有IDEA怎么才能支持你自己的观点呢? 文章会没有说服力的。
? 3.是要练好基本功,基本功怎么练？
? voluntary euthanasia
对称式结构
? 第一段:用你的句套啦.但是记住,这里不用写观 点了.只是对题目分析就OK了. 第二段:可以写你支持作者观点的IDEA.写法同 上. 第三段:便为反对观点段. 第四段便是一个总结了.
? “对称式结构”双方都说，“一边倒结构”只 说一方。
? “对称式结构”比“一边倒结构”可说的内容 多，更容易写够字数。
雅思大作文之教育类话题
PPT 课件
Lecture 7
教育话题
雅思大作文之教育类话题
PPT 课件
Report
? It is said that people's life now is becoming more and more stressful. What are the causes and how to solve it? 或者遇到这样的 字样what is the reason, what is the affect ,what should our government do?