(名师整理)最新英语中考写作《安全防范》专题精讲精练

主题训练10----安全防范

【名师点拨】

安全问题是大家关注的话题之一。人们常说，身边无小事。而安全问题就是要从身边的每一件小事开始注意。所以,这个主题训练也是中考命题的重要素材之一，应该得到广大学生的足够重视。

【主题词汇】

chase each other in the corridor(在走廊里互相追逐), fight each other, obey the school rules, break their hands or legs, much traffic, use the computers properly, as well, keep ourselves sale. take place in different places, all over the world, such as, in our daily life, walk across the road, tell strangers the real information, protect ourselves from..., for the time being(目前), pay attention to

【常用句型】

1.I think everyone knows “Safety First”.

2. Safety is the most important thing in our lives.

3. Since we have some thing dangerous around us, we should keep ourselves safe.

4. There are some potential risks(安全隐) an the Internet if we can’t use the computers properly.

5. If everyone pays attention to life, there w/ill be fewer accidents.

6. We must follow the traffic lights carefully while crossing the road.

7. When we ride b cycles, we nave to look around lo make sure there are no cars across the road, and then we can cross the street.

8. When in a plane, you should taser your sect belts. During the trip, you’d better not

talk too much with a stranger.

【模拟试题】

How to make our life safe?

Nowadays, a lot of accidents take place in different places all over the world. It said that there are about 200 accidents in one month. Safety is the priority(要务) in such a situation. How to make our life safe? Let's discuss the topic. Here are some suggested questions.

a. Can you think of any potential risk around us?

b. How can we stay safe in our daily lite

c. What do you think about safety in the future

【要点分析】

1.仔细审题,针对第二或第三问可适当展开(详写)。

2.陈述周围存在的危险因素。

3.时态：一般现在时(在陈述过去发生的事情时用一般过去时)。

4.切记：不要片面(如：只写交通事故)。

【写作思路】

Ⅰ）列举一些安全隐患

1.A lot of students chase each other in the corridor. And others fight each other. It’s not safe. They may break their hands or legs. Some students don’t walk on the pavement. It is very dangerous. They may be hit by bicycles or cars.

2.There is much traffic on the roads, so we may be hurt by some cars if the drivers aren’t careful enough. There are some potential risks on the Internet if we can’t use the computers properly as well.

3. Nowadays, a lot of accidents take place in different places all over the world such as fire accidents, traffic accidents, earthquakes and so on. We must stay safe.

4. As we know, there are more and more bicycles, motorbikes, cars and buses. The traffic is becoming worse and worse.

5. Teenage safety has become a serious problem recently. According to a recent survey, about 16,000 teenagers die in accidents in China every year. An average of 40 students die every day from drowning, food poisoning and traffic accidents.

6. Internet safety has become a big problem of society. There is a lot of unsafe information on the Internet. Children may not be able to tell good information from bad information.

Ⅱ）提出“安全防范”的具体措施

1.At school

●We must follow the school rules.

●We should always notice our surroundings.

2. At home

●When you are alone, don’t open the door for strangers.

●Don’t play with matches or candles, because they may cause fire

●We should always use gas with our parents and check our pipes.

3. On the road

●We must look around carefully to make sure there are no cars through the road

when we ride bicycles or cross the road.

●If you are followed by a stronger, please cross the street and go in the other

direction.

4. So students should learn to teach themselves skills so that they can protect and save themselves in emergencies.

5. Internet safety skills are asked to be taught to students. This is the first time that Internet safety skills will be a compulsory part for students.

Ⅲ）对“安全防范”意识的再认识

1. Since our lives should not be played as a joke, let,'s take measures to make our lives safer.

2. In short, small things often cause big accidents. So everyone should start with small things.

3. The Internet provides our children with a world of entertainment, chances and knowledge. But we must make sure that the Internet world is as safe for them as the real one.

【范文评讲】

原文稿

Safe is essential for out lives. Without safe, every thing may disappear easily. There are lots of potential risks around us, For example, one of the basic electricity, the gas for cooking, the traffic are all potential risks, To stay safe, we must be careful at any time. We should always use gas with our parents and check the pipes, We must follow the traffic lights carefully while crossing the road. These can help us stay safe in our daily life.

In the future, our safe maybe guaranteed(确保). Electricity maybe less harmful than it is now, and cars on the roads maybe controlled by computers.

So, safe is a very important thing in our lives. Since our lives should not be

played as a trick, we must be more careful in order to make our lives safer.

【点评与评分】

本篇文章段落清晰，层次分明。安全的重要性一现代“安全防范”的具体措施防范于未来的安全隐患一呼吁大家重视“安全”。按中考作文20分计算，属于第二档~第一档的文章，可得16分左右。需改进之处：

1.安全”的名词用safety。

2.maybe应改为may be，在句子中充当谓语。

修改稿

Safety is essential for our lives. Without safety, every thing may disappear easily. There are lots of potential risks around us, For example, one of the basic energy一electricity, the gas for cooking, the traffic are all potential risks. To stay safe, we must be careful at any time. We should always use gas with our parents and check the pipes. We must follow the traffic lights carefully while crossing the road. These can help us stay

In the future, our safety may be guaranteed. Electricity may be less harmful than it is now, and cars on the roads may be controlled by computers.

So, safety is a very important thing in our lives. Since our lives should not be played as a trick, we must be more careful in order to make our lives safer.

【范文选登】

1.I think everyone knows “Safety First”. Safety is the most important thing in our lives. However, there are still some potential risks around us.For example, a lot of students chase each other in the corridor. And others light each other. It’s not sale They may break their hands or legs. Some students don't walk on the pave very

dangerous. They may be hit by cars or bicycles. Since we have something dangerous around us. we should keep our selves safe. First, we must obey the school rules. We can’t run in the corridor. Besides, we can’t cross the road when the traffic light is red. In addition, we should be more careful. We have to find the danger around us and not let it harm others. It everyone tries to do these, our lives will be safer. In the future. safety will be more important. I think everyone should keep their safety in the first place. We should stop doing the things that are not safe. There will be fewer and fewer accidents and we will create a safe life. But it is not easy. Everyone must do his best, and safety will not be far.

2. I think that there are a lot of potential risks around us. For example, there are more traffic jams on the roads, so we may be hurt by some cars if the drivers careful enough, There are some potential risks on the Internet if we can’t use the computers properly as well. But how can we stay safe in our daily life？I will tell you some methods. First, we shouldn’t walk across the road when the light is red. Second, we mustn’t tell strangers the real information about ourselves. Finally, also the most important one, we can’t I believe anyone else who we haven’t ever seen.

Safety will be more and more important in the future. But it we protect ourselves more carefully, nothing can hurt us.

3.I think there are a lot of potential risks around us. Nowadays, a lot of

accidents take place in different places all over the world such as fire accidents, traffic accidents, earthquakes and so on. We must stay safe.

First, we should keep ourselves safe. When the accidents happen, don’t worry. Try to stay in the safe place and look for help. Next. if our friends or parents don’t

know about safety rules, we must tell them. That's important knowledge. Finally, we must pay attention to everything around us. Small things often cause big accidents. So we must protect ourselves. We should not be afraid of accidents.

In the future.I think there will be fewer and fewer accidents, Our world will be safer than now, If everyone pays attention to lite, there will be fewer accidents.

4. For the time being, there ore a lot of accidents around us. Students usually ride bicycles fast and that is dangerous.I have had an accident and I hurt my left arm.I was so frightened because it was too dangerous. But how can we keep safe in our daily life? As we know. there are more and more bicycles, motorbikes, cars and buses. The traffic is becoming worse and worse. So we should be careful. When we ride bicycles, we have to look around to make sure there are no cars nearby, and then we can cross the street, We can take buses, taxis and underground instead because

they’re safer. I think that safety in the future will be more important. People will be more careful when they go out.

5. With the development of technology, nowadays more and more families have their own cars. But more accidents come with it. Car accidents are usually happen around us. We can usually watch TV reporting accidents between cars and citizens. To keep ourselves safe, we should do some things. First, when we cross a road, we should make sure the traffic light is green. Second, we should notice there are no cars driving fast or turning left or right. Next, drivers should drive slowly when there are people crossing the road, or wait and let them go first. Finally, never drive after drinking. I believe if everyone can do like this, there will be less accidents so that we we may be safer in the future.

6.

Should drivers speed?

As the number of cars is getting larger and larger every year. it brings a lot convenience to people’s lives.

It seems usual for the driver to speed. But every day, accidents happen and many people ore losing their lives because of speeding. Some say they have many urgent things, so they have to drive fast. Others say they con speed because tho roads are smooth.

I disagree with them. Speeding is very dangerous for both drivers and pedestrians. If you drive very fast, you will not control your cars well and accidents may happen. What’s more, the police will catch you it you do.

In a word, speeding should never be allowed.

【范文链接】

1.

How to prevent HINI?

To protect ourselves from catching the HINI flu. here are some suggestions for you. First of all, you should cover with a napkin when you cough or sneeze. Next you’d better stay away from the public place if possible. Wash your hands carefully before meals and always keep your windows open so that the air is refreshed. Last but not at least, try to do more exercise to make your body strong so that you can stay in good health.

2.

How to make yourself safe?

It is important to make yourself sale. Being safe in your everyday life need knowledge, Here are three tips.

First, you must always notice the environment around you.

Next, if you go out, you should carry your bag in front of your body.

Finally, if a stranger follows you, cross the street, go to other ways and let the person understand that you have known he or she is after you.

3.

Keep safe on travelling

Most of students like going for a trip during the holidays. But how can we keep ourselves safe during the trip? Here are some good suggestions.

First, remember to take a map and a watch when you leave. When walking and biking, you must obey the traffic rules. When in a plane, you should fasten your seat belts. During the trip, you'd better not talk too much with a stranger. It you go to the natural scenic spots, don’t touch animals it there are any, and stay away dangerous cliffs. Be sure to wear colourful clothes. In times of danger, the rescuers can easily find you.

There are eight things that have to be said about trip.

No.1:Eating more fruit and vegetables.

You needn’t change your eating habits. You should eat more fruit and vegetables. Eating warm food is good for your health.

No. 2: Know the weather

You must know the weather during these days. You should take an umbrella and some light-weight clothes, hats, scarves, masks, gloves, etc.

No.3: Carry medicine

You should carry a number of medicines. We shouldn’t be too tired. We should get up early and go to bed early. Especially, you should have a good rest at night No. 4: Change money at home

Carrying a large amount of cash makes you vulnerable(易受……的攻击）to thieves. It’s better to depend on your ATM and credit cards. In some hotels in Asia, credit cards are also not accepted, Unless you’re staying famous places. Never think that e-transactions will work. Do your research before leaving and prepare accordingly.

No 5: Trade on last-minute booking

Last minute trade is indeed becoming more and more important. Better to watch out tor sales and promotions to save on airfares and hotel bookings.

No 6: Locals are experts

Absolutely not. In fact, if you're visiting some places. locals can't even understand why, out of all the possible places in the world, you would be interested in their place.

No, 7: You get what you pay for

No, particularly in Asia. there is really good trade to be had, some worth far more than you have paid. And vice versa: Some expensive digs aren’t just worth the top dollar they ask for.

No 8: Buy extras ahead

When buying packages, you will always be lured into getting a “package”, agents telling you it will come out cheaper that way. But, sometimes it pays to be

careful and cross the bridge when you get there.

4.

Other safety tips for you

Dangers like stampede( 踩踏) and fires can happen anywhere at any time. When these things happen, what is the best way to survive?

You should keep two basic rules in mind: Stay calm and to follow instructions.

Whether you are rushing out of a school building, getting on a bus or leaving a dangerous place, move in o line, stay calm, take your time and be aware of your surroundings. Don't rush or push. If there are adults on the scene such as teach parents, or policemen, follow their instructions.

How to prevent a stampede

●After class or school, don’t rush out at the same time. Wait until there are fewer

people trying to leave.

●When you walk with o crowd of people, stay alert(警惕的) and watch your steps.

Don’t play around.

●Become familiar with your school and learn where the safety exits are.

●When there’s pushing and squeezing(挤), stand still(静止的) and try to hold on to

something, or stay in a corner until the crowd leaves.

●Hold your wrist(手腕) with a hand and put your elbows in front of your chest(胸)

to give yourself more room to breathe.

What to do when you fall down in a stampede

●Cover your head with both hands.

●Clean to one side, curl up(蜷缩) your body and bend(弯) your legs to protect your

organs(器官).

Food poisoning(食物中每)

●If you eat something that is not well cooked or isn,'t clean, you may develop an

upset stomach.

●When you eat fruits, make sure they are well washed.

●Wash your hands before a meal.

●Look at what you’re eating and smell it, too. If something looks or smells

different from normal, don’t eat it. Mold( 霉) is a sign that food has gone bad.

●If you eat leftovers（剩饭）, bacteria（细菌）may have grown on the food.

●Always check the expiration date(保质期) on packaged food and drinks.

Fires in the classroom

●Get out the room as soon as possible.

●It there is a lot of smoke in the classroom, keep your head and body close to the

floor.

●Use your sleeves(袖子) or handkerchiefs(手绢) to cover your mouth and nose to

avoid breathing in smoke.

●If your clothes catch fire, drop them to the ground and roll from side to side to put

out the fire.

●Call 119 if you have time and a cellphone.

Earthquakes

●Keep calm and follow your teacher’s instructions.

●Try to get out of the building as soon as possible, in a sate and orderly way.

●Try to be away from trees, signs, buildings and streetlights.

●If you can’t, hide under a desk in case something heavy falls.

●Use the stairs instead of o lift during an earthquake.

●Don’t get into a lift during an earthquake. Just hide under some strong cover near

you.

Internet safety

Many children use the Internet to get useful knowledge and information, and to relax in their tree time. But some of them are not using it in a good way. Here are some rules to make sure you are sate and have fun on the Internet.

●Make rules for Internet use with your parents, for example, when you can go

online, for how long and what activities you can do online.

●Don’t give your password to anyone else, and never give out the following

information, your real name, home address, age, school. phone number or other personal information.

●Check with your parents before giving out a credit card number

●Never send a photo of yourself to someone in e-mail unless your parents say it’s

OK.

●Check with your parents before going into a chat room. Different chat rooms have

different rules and attract different kinds of people. You should make sure it’s a right place for you.

●Never agree to meet someone you met on the Internet without your parents

permission. Never meet anyone you met online alone.

●Treat other people as you’d like to be treated.

●Never use body language.

Remember that not every thing you read on the Internet is true. 【相关主题】

1.Safety is the first

2. Watch out for dangers at school

3. Try to learn to protect your sell when you are in danger